new FF...Love changes it all..UPDATED 07-MAY..pg 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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okie...guys...dis is my first ever time so any mistakes...plz forgiv.....

LOVE?.CHANGES IT ALL??.

Dis is da story of a love so enduring , so indestructible that it survived against all odds.......it's a story of three people who gave their lives away fr da one dey loved mor dan anything else in dis world.......dis is da story of a business tycoon who gave away all the luxuries and comforts of life in order to see his lady love happy and content....a lady who gave up her dreams to fulfill her lovers dreams....and a man who did everything to get da lady he loved only to give up his life for her....

PART 1 -------------pg 2
PART 2--------------pg 3
PART 3--------------pg 3
tell me ur opinions......it will be a short one.... lots of luv,
LAV
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved d concept.....plz cont it soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds good...do continue...can't wait to read more...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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pls.......continue...........i'm waiting........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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do continue soon sound great
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks a lot for da encouragement😉........will update soon.....hve seminar wrks to e completed.....

luv, LAV
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this story sounds great cant wait to read it
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PART 1

Dis is da story of a love so enduring , so indestructible that it survived against all odds………it's a story of three people who gave their lives away fr da one dey loved mor dan anything else in dis world………dis is da story of a business tycoon who gave away all the luxuries and comforts of live in order to see his lady love happy and content…..a lady who gave up her dreams to fulfill her lovers dreams……and a man who did everything to get da lady he loved only to give up his life for her…….

Its been 3 years already and Arjun feels like its been a lifetime since he has been in da jail………He was the reason for the disaster that happened in her life……..his love,his anger and his stubborn nature had all cost her…her father's life……..n he cd never forgive himself for that….he had decided that he wd punish himself for his rash behaviour and had taken up the blame for the crime done by her frnd…...

From the moment he met her…he experienced a feeling he had neva felt before fr any girl….Raj Malhothra was on head on heels in love wid her… She was blessed wid da kind of beauty dat left each and every man who saw her floored…..little did he noe den…..dat all dat he did to get her wd take her farther away frm him…he crossed all da lines for her….while she nursed the pain of a love she had lost coz of him – a love she wd neva give up......a love dat strengthened as time passed……..

Y was der love so indestructible??? he thought….

Now he realizes….dat all dis time his enemy was nt Arjun,nor Arohi…but the love they shared…he rests his head on the rope and closed his eyes……the black cloth covered his head and her face flashes in front of his eyes…..he thought "I loved you mor dan myself……and here im am giving my life fr da person u loved mor dan urself…. I love u n will alwaz love u…." the ropes were pulled…. n he welcomed death with a mind free of any guilt, agony , hatred and enemity……..

After months of constant trying he allowed her to fight his case….and Ganga Rai struck again….da real culprit was given a death sentence by da court and was hanged later dat evening…..and dis was another feather onto her cap…….Today was a big day for her….Arjun Punj is cuming bck to his world….away frm da dark and lonely walls of the cell………and dis meant a lot for her as it meant a lot for her love…Aman Mittal….

Arjun came out of the jail……to find his frnd Aman,Ganga his lawyer and to his surprise his parents and dat to together….

Savita : Arjun……mera beta…..u look so pale n weak….we have cum to take u back….lets go home beta……..

Arjun : No mom…..i cant cum bck to Shimla…….no…it will hurt her mor and I cant see her pain…I have hurt her a lot…bas ab aur nahi mom…aur nahi…

DK : Beta…u cum wid us…jst for a day…aftr dat we will nt force u…..u can leave…but jst for today….thum janthe ho naa…its her b'day…….

Aman : yeah Arjun…jst for today n den I'll take u where eva u want to go…but jst one day…cum on yaar…thumhare zindagi k eek din hume nahi de sakthe thum??

Arjun : magar…..no Aman I cant face her….she will be again upset..i cant see hatred in her eyes for me….no I wont b able to bear it…plzz…..dnt force me…….

Ganga : arre Arjun…dey r asking for a day…..cant u gv dem dat atleast….please for her sake………

Arjun : tek hai…….but jst fr a day aftr dat u wont stop me……is dat fine….

Aman : OK…..

.........................................................end of part 1........................................................
hope u liked till dis much.......ur comments r alwaz welcome.....
lots of luv,
LAV
Edited by jiya-walia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was great do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that is a great update, its good that he is out, i wonder what will be Arohi's reaction will be when she sees him

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