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Posted: 12 years ago

Shreyu I am in love with this story 😳

will give u long comments on weekend 😃
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

My return gift for u guys.

Love u all🤗

Part 7- Reaction

Party was awesome at last night na? asked shefali yawning and stretching her arms...

Yup now get up fast and drop me home miss lazy head.

Shefali slipped down her blanket and came near her, u know arohi I enjoyed a lot, Romit is so cute, Btw did u know Romi is not only arjun's friend but also cousin?

Really? I didn't know.

Yes He told me, I noticed u were not at party for long time, where were u?

I was outside, U knew this, so much loudness makes me lightheaded.

Oh ok, so u got bored... asked shefali sadly.

No not at all arjun was there with me, and we chat for the long time.

She jumped on her place, really? U both were together?

Yes, then looked at her super excited expression, but I don't think there is any reason of jumping like that shefali. U know I was thinking before that he is so arrogant and mean, but he is not that bad I liked his company, I mean nobody can feel boredom with him, but I must say these big city people are very much opened up about adult talk.

So u both having adult talk? shefali playfully hit her shoulder by hers.

She shrugged No no not that way, we were just talking normal things...

U r blushing arohi, ok tell me do u like him?

She gave her glare...No.

Come on arohi, don't deny, every girl here wants him and I know somewhere u also not unaffected by his charm.

Plz shefali, u know he is not my type and we are not similar in anything, we think different way, our background, thoughts, living way everything is different, just because of his some nice gestures we can't deny how is he? He and his friends are most spoilt guys in college, they involves in gang wars, blood shade, drinking, smoking and lots more, being rich is not everything, a person should have capabilities, he should be responsible and serious about life.

Shefali sighed and said holding her shoulders, u r thinking so far darling, I was just talking about liking.

We have to think far shefali, because I m like that, boyfriend then roaming around, had fun then breakup this is not my thing, for me love is life and one person is for forever, I m sure arjun is definitely not that person. U asking me I like him or not, I don't know, maybe I do but I know very well that we are not for each other. Now drop me home plz.

She let out a breath ok fine miss serious, leave it. Anyways what is so hurry? today is Sunday, stay some more time na. shefali wrapped her arms around her and leaned to her shoulder.

I know but I have some assignment along with arjun's.

Huhhh...Ok then let's go.

When after Sunday arohi reached college the whispering had already started about arjun arohi...when she passed from corridor some girls whispered oh she is the one right?... yes her name is arohi...lucky bitch, their attitude showing their uncontrollable jealousy... arohi said to herself no I m not.

she reached to her class, sat on the place but her mind was somewhere else, Diya took seat beside but she didn't notice, she tapped on her shoulder, where r u lost arohi?

Oh hiii... bas aise hi, Diya can I ask u something?

Yeah sure.

Is it true I m the first girl who got entry in their friend circle?

Yes, it's true u know I was also surprised to know this, I must say u r the lucky one, they are bad guys but nice also, don't think too much about gossips, they are just envious.

Arohi nodded smilingly to her.

Arohi and shefali angrily cursing their car. I m telling u shefali sell this dabba then she kicked the tire.

U r right arohi see it ditched us on middle of the road. Now what to do?? Ooper se ye garmi mera sara makeup kharab ho gaya, stupid car. Agrrr... She was feeling like pulling her own hairs. Both trying to show their mechanic-geeri but badly failed.

After some time they saw two boys coming in their sexy bikes, shefali's smile widen to see Romit and Arjun, she waved them to stop.

What are u guys doing here? Asked Romit.

Enjoying the weather... cant u see our opened car? Replied shefali crossing her arms.

He rubbed back of head and smiled sweetly, sorry... can we help?

Yes u can drop us.

Yeah sure.

Shefali quickly jumped and seated with Romit, arohi was trying to say something but stopped bcoz of hesitation and they left without wasting a second.

Arjun was quietly sat with amused smile...waiting for her to say something, but she was looking here and there while playing with the corner of her dupatta.

When he had waited enough, asked anybody want lift or I should go?

She silently stepped ahead and sat behind him, he get on his helmet and started the Ride, she felt little uncomfortable and afraid of falling too because of his super fast riding.

Plz arjun slow down.

Sorry arohi, its arjun's bike, its cant go slow, he chuckled and said well if u want u can hold me.

She rolled her eyes and softly kept her hand on his shoulder just to make sure she would not fall, her heartbeat increased and lots of butterflies started dancing in stomach only with the simple touch.

When they stopped front of her house, arohi was confused and hesitated, she knows it's a bad manner to not invite in, especially when someone helped u, but what about my typical indian mom, she would start investigating like CID to see a boy with me, how can I forget how much she embarrassed me when my classmate came to my house at shimla, but I should ask him at least as a formality.

Arjun tapped her shoulder, what r u thinking? It's your house right? Then go.

She smiled and said thanks, when he was getting on his helmet; she stopped him arjun plz come inside if u have some time.

He smiled and quickly followed her as if waiting for her invitation. She found the door lock, oh thank god mom is not home, I think mom went to market as told me at morning. She opened the door by her extra keys and both get in.

He sat in sofa comfortably keeping his foot on the front table, as that house was not new for him and he regularly coming...she smiled on his bindass nature and asked can I get u water?

No No don't bother... when she was about to sit he demanded I want coffee.

She shook her head and moved to the kitchen, he shouted I want strong.

She replied back sure.

He was strolling at her house, watching the family pictures hanging on walls, her trophies and shield which her mom decorated in a glass shelf, she came with coffee, your coffee sir.

hey is this all yours? He pointed towards shelf.

Yes I won all this.

hmmm impressive, she handed him the coffee, He took a one sip and complimented nice coffee arohi.

Then he again moved his neck to looking around the house.

I know my house is not big likes yours.

Oh plz , house is necessary for shelter That's it. in fact small houses are better than big, at least chhote ghar me usme rahne wale logo ke beech doori bhi kum hoti hai... she was concentrating on his words as trying to understand the hidden meaning, his voice turned serious while he was saying that part and that thing caught her attention.

Then he said cheerfully, but I must say your house is beautiful and lively, I really like the decoration and specially the picture wall, he moved towards the wall and pointed his finger on a photo which has a cute small girl smiling and showing her broken teeth.

Who is she?

It's me?

He chuckled Really? U were so cute especially your teeth, he again laughed...she gave him a fake angry glare...and this is your parents? he pointed to the other photo.

Yes...

They were watching some more pictures, in one arohi was riding bicycle and her father was holding to give support, other was where arohi was running holding her doll and Amrit was trying to catch her and one was where sudhir and amrit ticking her and she was laughing with showing her all teeth, The wall was full of their awesome old family moments...arohi happily giving him brief of every picture, he felt himself so unlucky to see her beautiful childhood, he also wanted this, attention and love of his parents, but never get even a smaller part of it, just got loneliness and pain.

Well I think I should go now, thanks for the coffee.

She replied smilingly My pleasure...Thanks for the ride.

She followed him to the door, he turned back and gave her a soft hug, she was hesitated before but then hugged back in a friendly way.

Ok bye arohi.

When he left arohi was about to close the door, but noticed that her neighbor shanti aunty was looking at her with wide eyes and disgusting expression, she understood the reason, their old and typical mentality, she rolled her eyes and closed the door ignoring her.

After 1 and half hour Arohi's mom entered with angry expression and asked who was that boy?

Who mom?

Don't try to make me fool, shanti has told me everything...

Omg shanti aunty is so fast in passing news my mom not even stepped inside the house before that she done her work.

Plz mom he was my class mate.

Oh classmate? But she told me you both were hugging? Tell me truth arohi, do you have affair with him?

She shouted angrily mom plz I don't have affair with anybody, he is just a friend.

Amrit started crying with fake tears, u r shouting on me... boys are coming to our house, u r hugging them and answering your mom shamelessly, today only shanti saw this, one day whole colony will talk, they would split on us, do you have any care of our dignity? she sat on the nearby chair and started slapping her forehead... arohi was watching all this with irritated expression, said Amrit looking up to the sky... hey waheguru ye sab kya ho rha hai mere ghar me...then she again looked at her angrily Aise chalta rha toh kaise milega tere liye koi bhale ghar ka rishta?

She rolled her eyes wow my talented and full of variety mom, in one second she has full of bucket tears and in other all just vanish... then anger, miss drama queen.

Mom plz stop over reacting, u really should stop watching those drama serials and u r talking about shanti aunty? did she know what her own daughter doing? She has lots of boyfriends, every day a new one, I think she should look after her instead of keeping eye on other's daughter.

Arohi finished her last sentence and moved upstairs.

Amrit angrily walked towards kitchen and placed the vegetable basket, hunhhh... I won't let her effect by Mumbai air, I think I should start looking for a nice boy for her marriage.

PMs later😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update shreya 😛
first i thought uss party k baad k kuch scenes honge .. its ohk direct morning ..

love shefu and arohi's girly talk. and arohi's thought abt love and relationship ..

we think different way, our background, thoughts, living way everything is different, just because of his some nice gestures we can't deny how is he? He and his friends are most spoilt guys in college, they involves in gang wars, blood shade, drinking, smoking and lots more, being rich is not everything, a person should have capabilities, he should be responsible and serious about life.

I m like that, boyfriend then roaming around, had fun then breakup this is not my thing, for me love is life and one person is for forever, I m sure arjun is definitely not that person. U asking me I like him or not, I don't know, maybe I do but I know very well that we are not for each other.

loved arohi and arjun scenes 😳 riding 😉

She silently stepped ahead and sat behind him, he get on his helmet and started the Ride, she felt little uncomfortable and afraid of falling too because of his super fast riding.

Plz arjun slow down.

Sorry arohi, its arjun's bike, its cant go slow, he chuckled and said well if u want u can hold me.

She rolled her eyes and softly kept her hand on his shoulder just to make sure she would not fall, her heartbeat increased and lots of butterflies started dancing in stomach only with the simple touch.


ouse is necessary for shelter That's it. in fact small houses are better than big, at least chhote ghar me usme rahne wale logo ke beech doori bhi kum hoti hai... she was concentrating on his words as trying to understand the hidden meaning, his voice turned serious while he was saying that part and that thing caught her attention.

Then he said cheerfully, but I must say your house is beautiful and lively, I really like the decoration and specially the picture wall, he moved towards the wall and pointed his finger on a photo which has a cute small girl smiling and showing her broken teeth.

Who is she?

It's me?

He chuckled Really? U were so cute especially your teeth, he again laughed...she gave him a fake angry glare...and this is your parents? he pointed to the other photo.

Yes...

They were watching some more pictures, in one arohi was riding bicycle and her father was holding to give support, other was where arohi was running holding her doll and Amrit was trying to catch her and one was where sudhir and amrit ticking her and she was laughing with showing her all teeth, The wall was full of their awesome old family moments...arohi happily giving him brief of every picture, he felt himself so unlucky to see her beautiful childhood, he also wanted this, attention and love of his parents, but never get even a smaller part of it, just got loneliness and pain.


and last ye shanti aunty 😡 ek hug se ye haal hai unka


Edited by payal_4 - 12 years ago
Ankita__S thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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N di its me ankita.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I couldn't stop smiling n laughing after reading this update!!
I seriously laughed after Amrit's reaction... I get it... she's concerned about her daughter but she should listen to Arohi also... marriage of Arohi... that would be interesting...
So, the news has flashed that Arohi got an entry into Arjun's friendship circle... n the first girl for that...
Loved the roadside scene... Arjun is seriously amused by Arohi n her ways... he readily came inside with Arohi... was he dying to go inside her home? Loved all the scenes inside Arohi's home... Arjun just needs love n care n needs to be showed that someone is concerned for him... may be that was the only time he said all those things... n Arohi is the one to whom he will say everything...
Update soon... n I wish it's your birthday every day! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving the way arjun is bonding with arohi
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Posted: 12 years ago
i guess i'v missed last part :/
first of ol have to read dat then i'll cmmnt on it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg adult talk ;)
hw can i miss dis...god where was i when u updated dis...khair watever ab to padh lia :P
offfooo hw can smbdy talk abt s*x so casualy wid a prsn whom u met a few days ago *blushes*
bt kya kare they r arjuhi ye kuch b kr sakte hai
nw i want kuch luv jesa ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
again another awesome update Shreya 😆
couldn't stop laughing at most of the parts of the update..! :P
Arjun remembering his childhood, it was quite heart touching n wrenching too..!! :(
anyways, very well written...! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update shreya
The return gift was tooo good

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