.Romantic OS Contest || Voting Round. - Page 14

1. air and fire

simple and cute

loved raj

2. apun dil hara thanedarni se

its a refreshing story

loved arjun totally

3. hale dil

good boy bad girl characterisation was great

4. renewed promises

short n sweet

5. lift me up

reminds me of karnika

6. a kiss of forever love

karnika again

its what all those who love them desire

7. kismat ne mila di jodi

predictable but cute story

i especially loved arjun's description of love

8. love in drizzles

bffs in love

9. meri aashique... bus tum hi ho

loved it ⭐️👏😛

10. home is where you are

its kinda like a continuation to kmh2

loved aman preet

11. sajna vaada nibhaana

delightful story

loved the penpals angle

telling the story through letters was great

12. tu hi hai mohabbat meri

clich but adorable

13. jeena sirf mere liye

sweet

for story:

2. apun dil hara thanedarni se

9. meri aashique... bus tum hi ho

7. kismat ne mila di jodi

11. sajna vaada nibhaana

10. home is where you are

for titles:

2. apun dil hara thanedarni se

8. love in drizzles

11. sajna vaada nibhaana

7. kismat ne mila di jodi

6. a kiss of forever love

oh found it 2 days ago..nd finished them all in 3 hours only..but it was hard to select few..

well..here is my favrts

2,7,8,1,12

adorable they are..

Titles 8 love in drizzles, 2Apun dil hara thandarni se,6kiss of forever love,12.tu hi hai mohabbat meri nd 4 renewd promises

Originally posted by: -sanju-

Fabulous stuff guys!!👏 I'm like blown!😆 Seriously.. Amazing talent here.. Beautiful stories you've woven.. I wish I had even a l'il of that imagination😛 Each time a different setting, different Arjuhi.. I could imagine so distinctly.. Such was the trance of your writing.. My heart felt the happiness at every reunion❤️

A l'il something about the stories..

Air and Fire Loved the characterization.. In those few words, I could connect to Arjun and Arohi and justify their thoughts and actions in my head.. The story, simple and so close to today's reality of relationships.. And I know there's just one person who can do that😆 And mela Raj cutie🤗

Apun Dil Haara Thanedarni Se I love the newness in the characters.. Its refreshing.. Idk how much I'd like Arjun talking like that though😆 Here in Mumbai, its regular to come across people with that lingo.. And I kinda detest it.. But Arjun hai.. Kuch bhi karega style hi lagega😆 That apart, you brought back so many ML memories.. You seem to be fond of it yourself.. Member or Silent Reader? The mention of Kavya Di's and Aksh's OS.. and Ullu's ka toh poora orchestra bajaya hai..🤣 So ML again..😃

Haal-e-dil I like how its put together incident after incident.. The library one is my personal favourite❤️ Its cute.. I like good-boy free-from-arrogance Arjun.. Such a rare occurrence in our world of fiction😆 The reunion moment was nicely done.. Shefali is a sweetheart!

Renewed Promises The short and sweet kinds😊 I like the candle wale phere.. I like the fact that they've both arrived 'there' emotionally.. Its not one person who has to confess or initiate.. They've both come around and they know why..

Lift Me Up I know where Sanjana's "authoritative look" is coming from!😈 I'm a fan of simple and its just that! The straight out of the heart confession!❤️ It was so Karanika!

"You have no idea how it feels to keep on waiting for a message, a text, a phone call..any means of communication from a man who would not spend a minute without you..and then, doesn't have a minute to spare you!!"
I felt a pinch here!😵 Sigh! If it isn't so familiar..💔 I desperately want them to get locked up like this! Anything! Anything it takes for them to reconcile! And you did it so much in their style.. Light hearted! Cutting out the drama! Well ofcourse there's only so much time you can stay locked up in an elevator!😆

A Kiss of Forever Love Aaah! The Beach Gola.. The Safai wala promo.. What memories of the glorious times.. I miss them so much.. It was almost dreamlike.. A chance meeting and everything is back to being "Karanika" again.. Sigh! There are times like these when I see an old picture of theirs or something just makes an old segment play in my head, my heart aches.. I might be over them, indifferent towards their 'individual' lives.. But nothing changes that adoration I had for 'Karanika' and how much we let it mean to us.. Well! The OS was a beautiful culmination of our wishful thinking.. And yeah, the driver bit was the absolute 'aww' moment!❤️

Kismat ne mila di Jodi The fairytale kinds.. Destiny playing cupid.. Meant-to-be kinda Lovestory.. Liked the concept and the very filmy sequences! And you reminded me of that Singhu moment jab usme Karan ki aatma ghus gayi thi and he goes "Aap kyu khush ho rahe hai..." facing the camera.. I'm going to believe that's what you intended to do.. 😆

Love in Drizzles! I like besties Arjuhi! Becharo se faltu mein mehnat karwa li magar!😆 Saari setting toh vaise hi ho rakhi thi😛 It was a sweet confession.. 'Pehle Aap' mein phas gaye janaab! (That actually rhymed!😎😆)

Meri Aashiqui.. Bas Tum hi ho This one seems to be a hot favourite already!😆 I liked the l'il flashback bit and the 1st time he sees her in place of Gauri! And I like a kind-hearted Gauri.. Gauri somehow manages to bring Arjuhi closer, nai? By either intending otherwise or by goodwill😳 The twists almost like a daily soap!😆 Arohi's panic on seeing the car took me back to Arohi's wedding in season 1.. :')❤️

Home is where you are.. I really like this story frame.. And ts nicely worded.. It flows naturally.. Aman Preet❤️ Its officially nostalgia time!!😆 Arjun Arohi were very much the Arjun Arohi we recognize from our screens! And its kinda nice that the separation was not made out to be anyone's fault in particular🤔😳

Sajna waada nibhana Adorable!!❤️ The end especially.. Super sweet! And I really liked the concept of pen pals, as hypothetical it might sound in today's times.. Its fiction so we're allowed fairytales here😆 I loved how you could develop an image of theirs, their characters through just their letters! Strong writing👍🏼 Heartwarming story!❤️

Tu hi hai Mohabbat Meri Valentine's Day.. That's 'love' in itself..😆 Adorable how Arohi is showered with flowers all day.. And the romantic day concludes with the a perfect date and a perfect confession! And a kiss to seal the moment! Some valentines day indeed!❤️

Jeena Sirf Mere liye Its sho shweet! Like 'Aww..' sweet!❤️ Besties Arjuhi is actually cute.. You don't always have to make them fight the complexities of ego.. And here you built the whole ideal besties world.. What with the tree house and balconies facing eachother Love so strong.. The cliche 'no words needed'.. Works beautifully! Adorable! Adorable! Super Adorable!❤️


^ That's "l'il" something gone wrong😛 But see how much I loved every story.. Ab is nanhi si jaan pe choose karne ka pressure!😒

So yeah.. Its #1 #5 #6 #10 and I really can't choose between #11 and #13.. They're both equally lovable.. I'm going to do 'inky pinky ponky' here and settle for #13..

P.S.: Shibzy.. Thank you for the contest.. 🤗 Arjuhi fictions are such amazing late night study companions❤️ And the OSs were a treat! And my votes kinda look biased but they're not.. I could identify most, if not all.. And my choices still happen to be these.. Its a possibility that having read so much of these people's work has moulded my taste that way!😆

And whoever suggested voting for 5 is a complete idiot!😳

Originally posted by: -sanju-