Beshram Dilbar&his Blushing Bride-ch.4pg.25UPDTD

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

awee loved it...

long comment later😊

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#162

superb part mahi...i was just waitng for this one...

aweee...Arjun could not stop himself from seeing his wife...I so love his romantic side...Full of naughtiness and plans...

Arohi found herself in trouble when her father came up..hehe but arjun was right...The father should have been in army...

I kind of get annoyed with Raj... ;) sneaky kid...but he loves his sister and is really upset that someone took his Di away from him...

Atleast antra is understanding the situation...

Loved the naught Arjun and shy arohi is this part...

Cont soon...

Luv ya
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zoya_naziya

@zoya_naziya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Subah ke paanch baje hi pohanch gaya Arjun😆

Nice update Mahi... raj is cute:)

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#164

Awesm awesm updat mhi...
Frst of al arjun's impatience to take her home back..den his entry early mng wah wah ..
Aru's pink room's innocence s lost bcz f arjun ! Heheh n raj my gawd perfect bro ! Gvng dhamki to arjun well i gues his jeeju wil deffo gt dhamki frm him ! Ooorrr??? Wil he be a perfrct husband?? Well i dnt believe ds shaitan wrter mahi ! :P
N d last dhamki frm arjun to arohi..are bhai aise dhamki de doon tho koi bhi wife nahi royegi hahaha.. Ofcourse she 'l mis her parents home bt apni saiyan sath hai tho kisi bhi biwi khush hi hogi hahaha...

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deepika

@...deepz...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Yahoo 🥳 mast update long comments later 😳

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Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Nice update mahi!
Omg arjun mng 5am ko arohi ko wapas lane chaoa gaya lol.. Kitana impatinece hai arjun..
Bt he was so cute! Heyyy Arjuhi mng romance in arohi's pink room hmm hot!
Thanks for the update mahi :))

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Superb superb superb update
Hahahah din to 12 baje hi ho Gaya tha , poor baby ko 5 baje tak wait karna pada, mela aljunnn
Aor ye aaloowaliya parathe Bahot khate he hahahaha balti bhar ke milk phewww
Bichara innocent room badmashi me convert ho hi Gaya
Rajjj hahahaha very tough task for Arjun
A arohi 25 saal maykeee rehke dil nahi bhara kya???? Mere Arjun ab use Jane hi nahi dega
Wese honeymoon kaha he mahi ?
I want Arjun like this plz don't convert him seroius , uske liye me hu
Awww mahiii I love you ,

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Oh my!!! Arjun itna desperate ho!!
I loved him for his early morning surprise...
Raj ko toh patana padega!!!

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Pranjal K.

@-pranjal-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#169

Super duper cute Update mahi ...loved every bit of it. 👏 👏 👏

Haayeee Hamara desparate Aashiq Doodhwale se pahle biwi ke maayke pahoch gaya 😆 😆 the way he wake her up was super romantic. & Arohi's reaction thinking its dream & later realization gosh her reaction was worth watching 👏 👏 you have written everything beautifully. could imagination these love birds romancing on terrace early in the morning. 😃 it was so romantic. ☺️ ☺️ he was so impatient to take his dulhaniya back home. Arohi's parents woke up & She hide arjun gawd that was so funny Arohi agreed her father to have chai in living room warna toh surely pakde jate 😆 😆 Arohi & her cute pink room but hamare aashiq toh waha bhi apni chap chod aaye 😉 he succesded in fooling everyone about his arrival. but Nahi chupa paya saale sahab se 😆 😆 gosh Arohi's bro is khatarnaak. Arjun ko warning direct 😆 loved his innocence & love towards Di. super cute part. Aru cried while biding bye & couldnt stop her tears so now arjun dhamkaofy her 😆 😆 i am despatrely waiting to read how aru reacts to his cute little dhamki.

waiting for the next...Continue soon sweet heart

Love you.

Pranjal.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#170

beautiful update mahi

i am so happy u brought in the chath scene here - i can never forget arjun's YAHAN YAHAN - that is one of the scenes which would be marked in kmh's history

loved the cockroach part tooo - again i was taken back to the kitchen scene where arjun displays a small amount of romance and later on hides behind the fridge to avoid HP, salil and mohan

wonderful update mahi

iam a bit lost these days

i have not read all the stories of the contest

i am so sorry for that - will do it today - iam happy the deadline is extended to today - will try to finish off by tonight and will vote