Arjuhi OS#13:Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron(Complete)

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Great start Ana - I know arranged marriages always has its perks
When r u planning to fill the second and third post
Loved the way u have described arjuhis state of mind

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pari_15

@pari_15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Omg di..what to say? M totally at loss of words...
Mersmerising..thats what it is...truely..
Luv how u used the song to project emotions of arjuhi..itni baar padh liya hai muje to gaane ke lyrics bhi yaad ho gaye..:DD
everything u've written is just perfect..her nervousness, his desire of marrying a simple girl, and their first meet ..aww
plz continue asap..

Ps-cant stop this stupid smile on my face coz of ur os...:$

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lazyblues

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Cute...! I luv to read abt arrange marriages...! <3

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow ana vacation pe jate hi update kar diya. mujhe to laga tha ki ana ghar pauchte hi hume bhooj jaye gi. :D:D lol.

A typical arranged marriage in ana's style. would love to read ahead.
contnue sn.
love you

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STUTI KANSAL

@arunsunita_gm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wowooo yupiii another os by my favourite writeer

waiting yu to finish this then i willl comment

cont soon and dont frgt to pm me

gn tc ks hsd

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

First of all
Muahhh partner for dhashuuu starting
Omg iskeee title ne hi mera dil le liya
N aor ye janab to sirf Payal ki chan chan se hi ghayal ho Gaye omg
I m blushing
Pata nahi par muje kuch ho raha he padh ke
M blushing
Hayeee Ab inka pyar kese start hoga n Kya hoga
Dhadkaneee kitni raftsr se chalegi aor Konsi najarrr pe dil ghayal hoga
Arjun kese hichkichake apne dil ka Hal byaaa karega n morover sr pe Kya hoga
Now mere sare sawalooo ka answer chahiye muje
So better u update next

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Ana, pls post the next parts soon

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Wow, how cute.
Awesome start.
Waiting for the next:*

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: moonkmh
Whoop! New os! By my anarkali didi!

I have to keep my sheikhu happy na 😳

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Ana

@..oneOone..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: -pranjal-
WOW Ana you are Super fast yaar ...idea click hua & within a week hame treat mil bhi gayi😃

this is mind blowing😊i am Off to read now😊

Pranjal yaar i have to be fast otherwise, i forget the story that my mind created na...
It start to move on with the next one 😉