TUJME RAB DIKHTA HE :part22 0n page127 april15th

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Anjali

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

next one is this na?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

padha tha maine ye update.. exam time mai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

I'm late at reading sorry for that and thanks a lot for still sending me the pm :-) apreciate it a lot.

Read all 22 chaps in one go, a good treat for me :-) .

Loved how the story started and progreset new concept enjoyed all the parts , but the scene i loved the most was when arjun tok jay and archie to meet the girls at the center and explaned his point of view , for me it was great part.

P.s i read yahi hota pyar he kya 1 , can't coment there so writtin here.

Liket how you put it forward . I have a shock to read about 8 years gap ,to much time.and i loved rats and mew they were adorable. Really o good job .

P.s 2:-)read also the 5 parts of 'you are mine story liked the storyline there too . I will like to read more about it if you are going to write more .

Thanks again for all the pm 🤗