Return to Paradise - An Arjuhi OS

varshini karthik

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Truly beautiful! I don't know why you were apprehensive at the beginning.

The words you used were perfect and gave a deeper sense to the story! 👏

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lazyblues

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Posted: 13 years ago

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one of the best os's i have read here...!

i dnt understnd y did u have to think twice before posting it...!

it was so much beautiful...perfect and even when it as a short story it had a lot and lot of meaning to it...!

keep up the good wrk...! 😊

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Originally posted by: Angel.KMH.AK
Reserved...u r going to say what's going on everyone just reserving...well I 'll try to comment on weekend...I've da same excuse exam srry😃

Rofl, nah. I understand. I've been doing the same thing for quite some time. 😳

Best of luck for your exams. 👍🏼

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Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

Omg dt ws a great os..
Believing in ur love n standing along wth him/her in al situations..
Beautifuly wrtn dear

Thanks a lot dear. Thanks a lot! 😊

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Originally posted by: sreeja_rox
whoa!!!!u sure r gona stay here in d forum yipeee!!!!!
Congrats on your 1st work on Arjuhi!!!!👏
Res..dnt wory i am gona edit it max within 2 hours😉

Hehe, I hope so! 😛
Thanks a lot dear! Yeah, I read it. 😊

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox
aww..it was such a beautiful and emotional OS yaar!!!! I totally loved it yaar!!!!!The way Arohi cums 2 d place dey had got married,she pouring out her mind while drunk and loosing there baby and at d end dey giving it a second chance!!!!Everythng was just beautifully written..u r awesum aditi!!!!waiting for more of ur work!!!!😊

Thanks a lot dear. 😃
Well I'm planning to write a SS. I'll see if it works out. I'll post the concept in some days. 😳

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Originally posted by: salmankh1
First of all welcome to our forum..it's great to have you joining us and writing as well. Your first update looks great and has my attention. Looking forward to reading more. 😊 Take care.

Aw, thanks a lot di.
Thank you di. I guess I'll post the concept for a SS soon. 😳

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Originally posted by: -vrshn-
Truly beautiful! I don't know why you were apprehensive at the beginning.

The words you used were perfect and gave a deeper sense to the story! 👏

Thanks a lot di. 😊
Di, I've written many things before this, but this is my first work on this couple. And so, I was a little nervous that whether I'll be able to match up or not. 😳

Thank you di. 😃

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Sreeja Nair

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow new ss??waiting for it😳

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Originally posted by: mansi_47
one of the best os's i have read here...!

i dnt understnd y did u have to think twice before posting it...!

it was so much beautiful...perfect and even when it as a short story it had a lot and lot of meaning to it...!

keep up the good wrk...! 😊

That's a big compliment dear.
Thank you. 😳

It's my first work on Arjuhi, so I was a little nervous about it. 😳

Thanks a lot dear. Thanks a lot. 😊

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