Arjuhi OS#4: Dilbar Shikdum Shikdum(Complete) - Page 3

Omg... Ana wat a hot update? jst lovd it.. u r a brilliant writer yaar.. cnt wait 2 read d nxt part.. plz continue soon dear..

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

cnt say antythng more..
Its just 'AWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE'

thanku sooo much aparna dear😳🤗
sooo happy😃

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

HOTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!How can u xpect us 2 giv a lamba wala cmmnt aftr sch a hot os!!!!!it was mindblowing!!!The way Arjun tries 2 distract her 4rm cleaning d house and nt wearing d shirt,d way Arohi checks him out and every bit of it was jst fab!!!!!Seriously u were writing dis kinda hot os for d 1st time???Omg i want mre of ur os's.. P.S:I am goin out of station and i just came in 2 cmmnt here!!!!!i wil update my Os as soon as am bak but u please please write one mre hot Os!!!!!!!i noe am greedy bt wat 2 do😆😆

Hot update the baad he hot comments atay hain Senior😆😉
arjun has a naughty mind, and after showing his all too serious side in BTOOMH i thought to give it a break😆😉 And arohi is not as innocent as in my other OS's..☺️ Wild cat...meawww😉
hunh, no more OS's till you came back and not complete your OS...its balaoo time😛
have a nyc journey and trip and come back super fast with a dhasu update...
will be eagerly waiting 4 that🤗

Originally posted by: moonkmh

Ana,hats off to ur writng. Aftr a lng tym i felt so much of hotness in weathr. He he. This one is awsomest,hottest n mostly sensual. I love it. I cnt stp drming. Arjun n aru both r breathtakngly gorgeous. Superb. Love ya.

thanku sooo much moon😳
oye no yar, i think Raman di's updates and Kavya SR part was more hotter than this☺️
so glad and happy and jumpy to see your guys response...its an awesome feeling you know😆😆😉

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

ooohhh a very very hhhooottt update ana -

thanku sooo much priya dear🤗

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

sorry 4 late comment. . . i thnk i shud tell u reasn behnd dis delay, after ur warning i wait to read it on bed time :p

love da title . .jhkas romantic. m nt fnd of music ,i just da song aftr readng ur OS.

wht a sizlng start . . naughty arjun & hs naughty thoughts lovely!

aru bhi kuch km nhi hai. .arj ko chalnge krna us ko bhari par gya

too hot . . amazng

keep wrtng. . .

wid love

Mahi...you are embarrassing me dear...☺️ reading this on bed time...GOD!!!!!☺️
waise i myself never liked this song till just 4 days before. Saw the whole song on a music channel, ALONE in my room😆 and the whole OS get into my mind...then heard it twice to rewind the story and post it😉
Woh tau hai, arjun se bhala koi jheet sakta hai🤣
thanku sooo much for lovely comments...i m truly stunned...😳

Originally posted by: Jerryberry

Omg... Ana wat a hot update? jst lovd it.. u r a brilliant writer yaar.. cnt wait 2 read d nxt part.. plz continue soon dear..

thanku sooo much Jerry dear..🤗 for the compliments..
i m just trying to get better😊 in writing
an the next OS depends on Sreeja's return...so wait for that😉😛

Originally posted by: mysticlover

how will i write a long comment? i am speechless and spellbound.. still not out of the dreamland.. there are no words to praise your writing! you are an amazing writer.. keep it coming!

arjun-arohi of this os are too hot to handle.. i am blushing.. i can't say anything more.. you fill in your own..

Archana dear, thats not fair yaar...why would i fill on my own😕
but so happy to see your response😛 thanku sooo much for the amazing support and love you guys showered on me...i felt truly blessed being a member here otherwise i would have lost some of the amazing frnds...😳🤗

Super hawttt...
I likd that song...actually jab ye new new aaya tha tab suna tha bohat...
Its really nice that u worte an os on this song...wo b arjuhi ko le k...
I enjoyd whil readng it...