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ok so guys plz dnt kill me for being late i lst updated in december bt i have been givin constsnt exams since then...nyways was complted since wen but didnt post it was very lazy to edit it still nt edited it soo sry for mistakes i have time today b4 toms xam...!!
sum points u guys need to remebr while u read (i soud lyk teacher dnt i 😆??)
1.this is a very old story i have made it modern while writing it cause i couldn't connecet to it
2.the marriage part wil seem nonsense bt the girl went through so much that the guy wanted to mary her to bring her out of the sorrow
3. nt edited so lotzz of mistakes plzz ignore them
4.wil nt update until after 2nd april (the golden daries)



Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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chapter 1
(reposting this chapy since it has been ages)

Her eyes wet wid tears. He saw her his heart ached. He had been seein her frm past 20 yrs. Now his tears faded wid time bt her didnt. He knew today was her birthday n her past memories came to her mind n she remebrd it all. She nevr actuly 4got them. She was always reminded of it sumtimes by action replay aslo! She was 20 bt stil they haressed her n he cdnt do nythin.

He watcehd her cry n tlked to god. There were only handful of ppl she tlked to him n 3 of her frnd s roohi,risha,ahana. N 2 of his frnds romit n sahil. Hi im sanchit arohis bro she has gone throught a lot frm child hood. Today was her 20th bday n i was gona request a frnd of mine to take her wid his sis.. n she shld leave evrythin here. They bth didnt no each other bt bth of dem beliven in me so much tht they wnt reply. He was retunin frm us today n cumin to arus party n now my task is to get her to her party ...

She had been though a lot. I wnet to sit next to her. She was in d house temple starin at good n cryin! I huged her n she huged me back! We r great brother sisters. just lyk twins . We r of same age n stdy in same college.

''shuu shuu'' arohi nuthing wil happen frm now on! U r 20 n evrything is urs nly...my parents cant do nythin to u now...i need u to get ready we r goin to celebrate n u nt telin no! On yes n i need all d legal prpers . N pack ur bags we r goin goa! I have packed mine.. all r cumin here in no time..go get ready'. She nodoed . Arohi nevre said now to sanchit. He bro her basicly entire lyf.

Witin 30 mins all were gaterd . Sanchits parents were gone to temple n b4 they wld b back arohi came dwn wid her bag. N all lft for airport. Arohi was stil sad bt it wa now evry1 who was goin to make her laugh. They lft a note tht theyd b back witin 5 day where goin ..tht wnt b know to ny1.

Reachin d goa airprt. Sancit wnet and huged a handsome man wel tht was all thre gals said. Arohi was lost in her thoughts sancit caled over all others n intoduced them to arjun. He had met him in goa! Arjun was a party animal bt nt a grl eater. He always wanted to b one women man n nevr let tht go.

Arjun n sanciht had partyed 3 days in row...n becam gr8 frnds.

Tht day onwrds arjun n sanchit had becum gr8 budies n when arjun came to know tht sanchit was cumnin to goa he flew dwn frm us his wrk base n came to goa.

Arjun was introduces to evry1 by sanchit. When he saw arohi he was lost. So was she bt she was in her thought processs n arjun was lost in her beauty. He purness tht reflected frm her face bt a tint of sadness made his heat ache.

ARJUNS POV...

Wow...she was d one. I realy knew tht because my mum always tld me tht when i loose in sum grls beauty den she wil b myy grl! Bt y was she sad? She was upset! Now its my duty to find out wht! ...

They headed to the villa!

The day was to relax n suprie was planed at night for arohi. She got to many gifts she was graceful to show tht she was happy bt once al went to their room even arohi. She was cryin arjun found her cryin he didnt no her. He had tried to tlk to her bt all in vain. Sanchit had said tht she tes time mix up with people!

When arjun saw her cryin he went to sanchit. Bt sanchit said he wil hil arjun all when time cum..

Sanchit had noticed

Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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chapter 2
The night

All got ready for d party arranged b sancit wid arjuns help for arohi. Reachin ther they saw a nyc quite arragment...evry1 sat on d table lited wid candles...n butiful jazz musix playin on ...after sum food n drinks... an annocument to cut d cake was made.Enjoyin a little n dancin makin arohi smile dey all sat back in their seats... Sancit n arjun were on d bar waitin for drnks. Arohi had been behavin wirdly wid nly arjun. He was nt feling ok abt arohis behaviour he wanted to know abt it... ''sancit...''arjun srted with even sanchit sayin ''arjun'' same time...''U say'' arjun said...n sanchit continued. ''arjun take dis leters..i have ritten evrythin in dis letters i need u to read dem fter we get otu frm here which wnt b ny moment casue arohi wil want to leave'' ''sanchit y is she beahvin lyk dis wid me n nt ny other of u?'' ''d ans in in der...'' arjun luked at arohi she was forcin smile which was noticed by evrnyone bt nevre tld. He looked at d angelic face n got lost ...sanchit was abt to say sumthin bt he noticed tht arjun was lost sum where he shook a hnad in frnt of arjun to bring him back ...arjun shruged his shoulders n den sancit asked'' wht hapend man?'' ''nuthin

''arjun i need a pomis frm ur side i need u to do all i say yes widout askin wht'' ''ok'' arjun said widout askin. Arjun n sanchits bond had grown very strng cause sanchit had once hlpd arjuns sister rahsi.

Arjuns atention now turned to arohi. Her frnds were telin her sumtin bt she was refusin. Arjun n sanchit soon walked over with drinks. They stil had 4 days in goa. Celbration was jst a reason to go to goa. Make arohi go away frm d atmosphere she was livin in...an atmospsher which was killing her... All wnet home early cause on arohis insistance. They setteled in living room. Arjun givin sum wrk reason he went to his room. Changin n freshin up he sat on d chair n takin out d letters frm his coat jacket he started readin...

Dear arjun,

Im cumin to topic dirctly. I need u to take arohi wid u n keep her wid rashi for few months til i cum der to take her back.ill settel things with my dad n den cum to take arohi. Arohi has to run a business n ill help her in tht n once she is settled ill go.

Well im askin u dis favor cause...u said na d favor ive done by savin rahshi

Arohis dad n my dad are real brothers. My dad n her dad got equal property for my grndpa. My dad wasted all d money in gamble i.e. nt wrkin case he was rich accordin to him...arohis dad used all d time n made a big emprie. He was very sucessful. My dad always enved him. So he made a plan n decided to end arohi n her fathers lyf. Her mother had died when she was born ...so her fater didnt lyk her...bt stil took her care just for the sake cause arohis mums blood ran in arohi.

The wrst part was when accident took place arohi was 2 yrs old. Bt she survied n her father died. She was bought to my house fter tht. My parents gave me evrything n her nuthin. I used to share my things wid her bt if they found tht out they wld hit her. She used to cry 1st i diidnt no y..bt i used to jst hold her when she did...i was her nly frnd she was nt alowed to make frnds. Bt slowly in skol we all met n becam frnds.once whn dey doughted arohi tld dem evrythin n evry since dey have supported arohi. when arohi was 15 my dad tried to rape her n when she ran my mum slapped. I tired to protrest bt den they locked me. Arohi saved herslf sumhow. N frm den they sum times hit her so tht she gives her propperty to my parents.

I wil always b greatful to u for dis..n do all i can for u if u do dis much for me. U all saty in us bt rashi in delhi. So tht is good. N im askin u to do dis is cause u r d nly one my family dsnt no ...i request n beg u to do tht ...

BY the end of d letter arjun had tears in his eyes.

He didnt no wht to say or do. He was numb. He wanted to tlk to arohi he wanted to marry her he thought. N den he thought again n one thing came to his mind ...he shld marry her. She wld get a luvin family. He wanted nly tht n nuthin else for her. He didnt xpect nything in return.

He was abt to go out fter wping his tears when sanchit enterd d room with arohi.

Little rewind

Sanchit n arohi had a tlk abt arohi going away wid rashi n den Sanchit cumin der. To take her back. Arohi knew tht he was doing it for all good. So she had agreed bt without knowing Wht was in store for her when arjun came into picture.!

Present...

Arohi n Sanchit sath on d bed n arjun facing them

''Arohi'' arjun started. Well im nt going to say nythin out of sympathy ok ...listen carefully . Arohi n Sanchit both were socked. Arohi was thikin what was arjun goin to say! She was unsure of evrythin. She was scred bt den she herd arjuns voice again ''arohi wil u marry me?''
Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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chapter 3

Arohi and sanchit stood shocked. Arohis mouth fell open. She wasnt xpectin dis. Sanchit luked at arohi

She was numb he cld feel it. Arjun jst watched d brothe sister duo-deciding suthing which arjun cdnt understnd...n den all of sudden sanchit went out of d room. Arohi said she wanted to tlk alone to arjun.

Arohi was abt to strt bt den she saw him starin at her wid pain in his eyes... D whole day she had seen arjun stelin glances at her which made her uncomforatble cause she was bacicaly scred of goin n tlkin to strangers she tlked wid her frnds nly.

Arohi strted tlkin to arjun ''arjun i cnt marry u..im nt d right grl for u..u r arjun sighnia..u wil get dozens more who are more butiful den me..dey wil keep u happy..trust me she said stammering ...feling scred

Most importantly d..d.. dey wil satisfy ur need ...'' she was sayin when arjun cut in ''arohi for gods sakes i no wht im doin...eldr to u...m more mature to u...i no wht has happned wid u...i can fel d pain''

he said wid anger in his eyes..

''arjun u dnt understd d pain u dnt no wht it is nt to b luved by ny1 nt havin a family...nt havin a mother to take ur care...u bloody dnt no...n u no wht u r doin no favour on me by maryin me...'' she said clearly she was angry...arjun understood he had gone to far in his anger ''arohi im sry.. I luv u arohi..u might nt belive me whn i say i luv u..because we met today mrning it slf...bt i do luv u..u have a family ...im more then ready to b ur family...i want to make u feel luved...arhoi im more dan ready to hurt better kill dose ppl who hurt u...arohi if u r thinkin tht u wil nt b able to make me happy den u r rng...jst by being mine u wil make me happy...crying in frnt of me whn scred letin me protect u wil make me happy...nt nly luv makin shows how much a persons luvs other...arohi i jst wnt u to myslf...i wnt to b frnds wid u...i wnt to take awya all ur pain...i wnt u to b hapy i wnt u to live a happy lyf bt i wnt u to do all dose things wid me...i dnt wnt u to think of tht stpid mutt nutcase taya n tayiji...arohi as far as luv makin is concernd im redy to wait...n u no u cant or wil nt b able to resist dis hot bodyy...'' he said wantin to make her laugh as he saw her abt to cry...she did laugh a teary laugh..to b specfic... Wld he b able to b happy? Was d questin came in her mind again n again was he doin all thinsilt? Or did he pitty her? She had no idea how many questions poped up in her mind... for a while bth were silent...

As arohi was lost in her trail of thoughts arjun was lost in her angelic face. He was lost in her purity n sanity..which was visible from her face. She was realy matured because of wht had haped wid her bt arjun knew tht threr was a side to a chindish side which she had hidden deep inside which he wld find out...

All of sidden arjun strted tlkin ..

''arohi u didnt ans me'' ''wht?'' she said shaking her head to clear thoughts...n nt following his question

''wil u marry me?'' dis time he said coruching down on his knees...

''I cnt do dis'' arohi said ... .

Arohi do i need to convienc u more??...u no im a big boy i n i no wht im doin...n im on ma kness wil u ans alredy? He said...

''yes'' arohi answerd ...n arjun luked into arohis eyes n made her wear a new 3 cart diamond ring...wis small blue solitares on d platinum ring where diamond was embeded

Arohi looked down...she wasnt able to look him into the eye ...he eyes filled wid tears...arjun instntly hugged her bt realinzing tht she might b uncomfortable...he pulled back...bt now she huged him ...arjun felt happy...a sense tht she was hers nly was der wid arjun...

Sanchit decided to move in tht very ,moment. ...''Guys u finished tlkirn?'' he asked...so wht did u bth decided? Arohi n arjun looed at sanchit lyk bhe had seen dem hugging when he wlkedin...! ''sancit we r geting merrid tom'' ''shld i tel evy1 dwn?'' '' wht u wnan tel?'' arohi asked ''gusy i saw it im soo happy for u two guys'' sancit said...sancits heart was filled wid greatness for arjun ...he wnet n huged both of dem... ''arohi u wnt to tel my parents?'' ''no sanchit we r nt telin ur parents..arohi is an adult n she can marry whoever she wants.to ...n im positive they wdnt let hern teling then wnt help ''arjun siad anger clearly visible in his eyes ''ok'' sancit replid to arjun. Arohi walked out of the door n arjun n sancit followed. They bascily decided to announce dis news now...n so dey did it... Arjun informed his frnds in uk. Now it was arjuns parents n rahsis time. Arjun was gona tel den on phn introduce arohi to dem bt she fel aslp on sofa nly. They had plned a wedin for day fter tom in chappel near by in goa ! N den arohi wolud go to uk wid arjun.

Arjun went to his room n caled his parents n rashi on conference call

Telin n xpling them evrythin ...they were reticulat at first bt whn arjun repetdely said he luved her n how butiful she was n smart...dey beliver tht arjun wld keep arohi happy!!

They were happy for arjun ..

Within a days time everyonegot every thing ready ! Arohi felt nuthin was real. It was a dream for her lst nyt she was crying over her past n today she was xperiencing a new lyf wid sum1 compltly unknown

She didnt want to give tht a thought even arjun had tlked to her in morning bt nuthin worked she was stil thinkin n sum more thinkin

Arjun n arohi were stdin at goa airprt at nyt 11...watin for his parents to arrive...they bth were getin married the flowing day...

As they arrived arohi felt buterflies in d pit of her stomach. She didnt no wht to say or to day...she did no tht they knew evrythin abt her n she was felin guity cause she was thinkin she had spoiled their sons lyf. As his parents n rashi approched arjun n arohi ...she felt numb...her heart beating faster...her breathing goin from 0 to 100 in seconds... Generly for her strangers wld be scary ppl...she didnt no wht to tlk or do...bt wid his parents she didnt have any alien felings...she greeted dem taking their blessings she tried to observe them wht were they thinking.bt she cld nly see happiness...when it came to rashi...she was very xcited. Rashi nevry had a sister...n dis was her chance...she litraly...jumped n hugged arohi..n strted spkingto her...n at lst she said...''arohi v r gona b lyk sisters...cause im movin in wid u n bhai'' arohi luked at arjun...n arjun jst smiled lukin at arohi. Arjun had thought tht a girl in house wld help arohi...Rashi saw arjun thinkin n she went n kissed him on his cheeks...''rashi nt again yar i tld ya nt to do tht''he said irrtated...''u no my future bhabi he hates it whn i bt i gess he wil luv it whn u do it'' she said winking ...n arohi blused.. ''rashi go away... she wil b scred n run away frm here i dnt want u to make my bride to be run away thinkin i have mad family..'' arjun said ...''hello wht mad family ??'' ''u calin us mad'' said kumud in mock anger..rudra .glared at him...arohi was actuly scred ...she thought sumth..n sudnly all busrt into a laughter...

Arohi felt wht was it to b lyk family..luv n caring n masti in jst few minutes...little little moments u share wid others..n d beauty of it...nevry cld b xpressed.

Arjun saw d happines in her eyes n he was so dam happy tht he cdnt xpress ...

Arjun drove back home.

Tlking n doin masti dey went back home...

Goin strigt to her room fter greatin goodbye..she fell in her bed n cried.

Downstais when she went... arjun was worried n said he wld go check on herbt kumud stoped him.

She herslf went to her room.

Kumud knoced on her door. Arohi wiped her tears n oped d door...

Hello..was wht she was able to choke out in her wobly words kumud repled in smile ''can i cum in?'' she asked ''oh yes..im sry..i 4got to ask u tht'' ''its ok beta'' ...

They both sat on her bed...sayin nuthin kumud luked arohi in d eye..she cld see d gulit n pain der...

''beta whts all d worry abt?'' she asked her..''nuthin'' ''i can see it in ur eyes...u can share it wid me...u caled me mom rember?? '' tht is when arohi felt sumtin wht she didnt no bt she said her heart out abt her felins n her guilt abt tht she is maryin arjun..n all fter she was done..kumud made arohi lay down in her lap n she cried her heart out when tears dried out kumud said ''beta never say u r gulity abt maryin arjun...he seems very happy '' ''bt mom wht if i cant give him evrythin after marriage??'' ''wht if i '' ''arohi i understd u..n trust me he knows dis n he is ready...to wait..he tld me ...i had a tlk wid him...n u no wht arjun is a nyc guy..im nt sayin caues he is my son bt as a human or as ur mother..im sayin dis to u...cause i no u wil keep my son happy.''

Arohi huged kumud n asked her to slp wid her for tht nyt..she nevr had a mother ...bt kumud in one meetin felt lyk one to her...kumud was more den happy now she knew wht kind of a girl arohi was she jst needed nuture n care...n she wld becum all to well soon she belived tht...

They bth fell asleep der while tlkin n laugin. She always praised arohi how butiful she luked n how sweet she was...

Arohi xprenced a comftlevel wid kumud n a feelin of how mothers are. She always used to think her lyf wld change..n today it was hapening n tht also a fairy tale way!!!
Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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The end

4 yrs after marrigae..

Today was arjun arohis wedin aniversyr...in dis 4 yrs lyf had changed a drzstically...they had two kids...

One manan n other soman...manan was eldr to sonam... he was jst 3 yrs...bt he used to luv his sister lyk his bacha...rashi had married sanchit,... Now...n dey had one kid...

the question poped by aruns mum...was one made their lyf cahnge
they went on honeymoon n an incident there changed their lifes
arohi got lost n was nt found nywhere tht is when arjun decied to find her himself after searchinf for hours he saw a girl crying behind a building
making his way there he saw it was arohi a sense of hapiness spred over him
he took her back to hotel ...n commforted her ...! arohi saw actual luv in his eyes n decided she was ready to b his forever...!!!
Tht night in hotel arjun n arohi had made luv for 1st time...n frm der arjun had becum besharm arjun which arohi luved he made her happy , blush. He made her happy...he was evrythin to her...

Arohis life had taken a turn afetr she met arjun...a spontaneous decison had chaged her life for bettr...it had made things...best for her...

She n sanchit had never seen sanchits parents again...cause dey were in jail...once one arjun came across dem he was soo boiling in anger tht he complainde n got dem arrested

Sanchit used to help arohi wid her india office n even run his dad bisiness ..which frm a small sacle he had made it huge...n den married rashi...!

Arohi...arrjun...didnt have a perfect luv stry bt their luv was perfect...

Fyting...wid one another on simple issues n den making up wid each other...!

Arjun used to take her on dates...n romace wid her.even 4 yrs fter d marrige dey were newly weds...

He didnr leave one chace to romace wid her...arjun used to rock sonam to sleep...while arohi to manan ... .!!

They enjoyed their lyf n dey lived it to its fullest...! They used to wrk hard n even also remeov time for each other

Taking chaces to drop childer to school ...sundays take them to park

N play wid them...! Arohi watched her 3 fav ppl in the world play

Arjun was running to catch manan n sonam...a butiful famil she thought ad she joined dem...

Asmaan ko tarron se ...

Sagar ko lehro se...

Dil ko dhakano se...

Chand ko chandni se...

Humko apse bas itni mohobbat hai...
Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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wow totally luvd da os
beautifully written x
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will read and cmmnt tmmrw aftr xam:)
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so cute!

arjun really did change her life...
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BEAUTIFUL!
is all i can say hats off to ur grandma...
thanks a ton for the pm!

love
komal
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it was jst beautifull!!luvd it:)

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