wow di...you seem to have handled a lot in this update, so many problems solved and few at its final stage, and talks about riya's sibling are on! haha! there was so much in this update and i cannot not believe i am this late!! its been twelve hours since you updated!! i couldnt resist myself from giving a super-long comment! the update has been just that awesome!
first para of this comment is for the first para of your update and the comment proceeds in the same way throughout...
'hmm' i was sighing when i read arohi dreaming about arjun's kisses,and the way she realised that it was not a dream, had me laughing like an idiot and in turn waking up my sister who was asleep next to me! lol. i could feel how bad arjun would have felt, when she was comtemplating things in her mind, and i seriously wanted to hug this Arohi *if she had been real, i would have* when she said she did not want to lead on amar! finally she has got her sanity back and has started to think with rationality! for Arjun, can there be anyone more romantic than him?? nope! never! i seriously want him out of this reel world into real world! i love Arohi's determination to give everything into this relationship. i also loved the way he put a smile onto her face!! *winks*
Amar...*sighs* he is a chota version of our arjun! i dont think arohi is a horrible person but i seriously think that amar deserves someone sweeter than her.not that arohi is not sweet and all but it just that she is not truthful to him and she can never be! moreover Amar can never be arjun in catching her lies and also in knowing what she feels like without her uttering a word.so simply saying they are not made for each other. But i feel sad that he is losing his love, the love which makes him turn blind eyes to her faults. He is right on being angry with her,but at some point he will have to agree that arohi had felt nothing for him and she wouldnt have even agreed for marriage if it had not been the emotional trauma which DJ put her through! Arohi had tried her level best to return the favors they had done to her during the most difficult phase of her life. Asking for one's remaining life to serve for a favor, was sth too much to ask for on DJ's part. Though Dj had not been direct, she has literally compelled arohi into the engagement.so i can neither blame arohi nor amar here!
Support at difficult times...,its the best thing a relationship can offer,the secure feeling that your heart wont shatter because you know you have someone who will not let it happen! That someone for Arohi is Arjun who has always been a strong support to her and i love his understanding nature. i liked it that she is getting used to having him around again. very soon she will get adicted to it. And the part she moved into his room, she and arjun cannot live under the same room and keep their hands off each other! very true! what if it was not only for 2 1/2 months but a life time or even more?
Riya's innocence! i need not tell a thing about this para because you should now it yourself di! it was amazing,funny,sweet and cute. rofl!*reading this over again n again* if i try to talk on this para i might under do it! so i'm taking no risks di!
oh yea...SANTA has given us a super hot scene *di, already into christmas mood?* i very badly wish that SANTA could give riya,her gift! in this case, my SANTA is YOU di! muah! love yoou! haha!!
reading with the same thoughts of the previous para, for a second i thought *just for a second*, that may be she was pregnant again! *lol! how stupid of me* this para is again out of reach for my words! you were amazing at describing their emotions di! simply tounge tied!! one line: i love mothers! and this was very sweetly portrayed with well chosen words di!
**believe me or not di...i finished writing the above part at 9.30 and its 10.00 now! i started reading the next para and got immersed in it that i almost forgot about the comment lol!**
Rashi and Riya...Arjun and Arohi..-too beautiful a family, i was amazed by the way you actually put rashi's pov of entire ARjun-ARohi's relationship and their partition and their reunion, finding out about her neice..god! you are too good to explain di! you know i have always wanted to know what the other family members had thought of their relationship and here you go, within a single para you told us everything!!
car ride--Arohi's confused emotiions and nostalgia! *too good*
Arohi and Rashi against arjun,somethings never change! *old times are back*
At his home-
Arjun: no ne can be more supportive than him.
Arohi: luckiest girl ever!
Arjun's mother's reaction to Arohi and riya: overwhelming!
Arohi seeing the RESEMBLENCE between Arjun, Riya and his mom: heart warming
Riya's little story and this part:
"When I get back I'm going to tell you a story." "A story of two friends who no matter how much distance separates them, always love each other." he said smiling at Riya's excited nod. "I love stories." she said. "Does it have happy ending?" she asked. Rudra stared at Arjun "It most definitely does."----simply heart wrenching!
Rudra and Arohi's convo plus Arohi's emotions:: A complete emotonal rollercoster which ended with my eyes pouring down. Arjun was such a gentle man and now, defintely the old times are BACK! i am damn sure this second chance will not be wasted!
MR.BESHARAM SINGHANIA IS BACK! And also the messy Arohi, oh! i'm loving it! Also Loved that everyone is wrapped up in riya's fingers!
Friends can do wonders to your mood! Rashi and Arohi's convo showed how much they missed each other and how they can easily forgive and forget! And the excitement when rashi told abt her marriage plans, was so contagious! it just lifted the emtions that had covered us over the last few paras and filled us with joy! But why does Arohi always get back to her insecurities at the end of each para?? i just wish she could stop comparing the life she is living now to what it'll be after th 2 1/2 months! hope she understands soon that her life will be the same or even better if she gives in a little ad for god's sake, she has to stop thinking! the careless arohi was much easier.lol!
So Arjun will be moving back to mumbai,they have a problem to solve but i am sure arohi will move back to mumbai with him, afterall she misses the place too! its the weird truth that Arohi is back in town and he reason is same as the reason for which she left it, ARJUN! Arjun's shocked with Rashi's future plans! *protective brother is back* i loved it that arohi helped rashi break the nervousness and support she gave her reminded me of a few friends at school who used to butter my mom to let me out for night stays.
This para brought me the memories of RNBDJ! that was the best compliment i could give! the part where he talked about the guys these days! *it totally cracked me up* And he loves his sister when she indirectly helps him get naughtly! i guess he forgot that it was the same sister whom he wanted to trange for keeping his wife out of his reach during the initial days! rofl!
POOR ARJUN! i can even sing this part as a song, it rhymes too!
We're happy,
and we're together.
We love each other,
and we have a child together.
then what is the hesitation?!
once again ...poor arjun! he has to put up with her insecurities but still i cannot blame her for wanting assurance for a happy future! i loved every word of what he said! i was hit once again by how much a gentleman he is!
hope! finally she knew things were going to be better! neha is pregnant, again! haha! Arjun never fails to try, does he?? but i could feel how hurt Arjun was...hope Arohi realises that delaying her confession is hurting him badly! She has to know how much it hurts to keep explaining love to someone but that someone keeps hesitating!
rofl!! 14 for 4! how embarassing! effect of arjun on arohi! And their phone convo--too naughtly!lol!
di...last para, the way yu said Arjun had missed her even more than usual is giving me wrong vibes...DJ is ill when Amar is away! whats going to happen now?? hope she doesnt put arohi through more emotonal stuff,she already has so much on her plate! Its quite scary ending...
except for all the things i said above...i had a bad feeling of how arohi had gone into a little garden of amar and DJ and she gave them false hopes with or without realising...but now the entire garden seems to have been damaged...though not her fault i could not help but feel bad for DJ and Amar!
i cannot believe that i have opened a word document for a comment but then its SWTE, nohing can be normal! :D
hmm and then coming to how many times i read this update...hm..i lost count but till what i remember,
first time i read it my dirty mind loved the passion! lol
the second time it was riya's innocence that struck the chord!
third ime itt was rudra's emotions!
fourth time it was for amar!
fifth time it was arohi and rashi!
sixth time for maya!
seventh time for Arjun!
but everytime it was arohi!! she stole the lime light completely!
after seventh it was all for MYSELF! haha! i had to read it and have been doing it for the past 4 and 1/2 hours!
when i finished reading the update once, i thought it was quite short and i wanted more. but no writing the comment i realised how long the update actually was and this did not reduce my want for more in the least bit, but still you deserve a very big THANK YOU from our side di! And a great round of applause :) :)
i cannot believe that its 12.15 pm nw!! And note it i am NOT going to the part where you said SWTE is ending.
i know you are upset over the stupid girl who copied your work, dont worry di, she'll be taken care of. But please do make a note n every update after this that copying this is not allowed. (i know that wont be much of a help but still atleast this will let the person now that you dont like it and it might prick them a bit) please dont be upset di... we are there to support you!
thank you and we love you di!
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