Originally posted by: arta
sorry di can't repost it earlier (conect problems . till the page is full charged don't permit to write 😔 )
I Love it and i was there to write the coment Di 😊
it's that sometime i don't want to sound like a broken record, cose i'm not so fluent with the english phrases and don't know hindi either not being good at these 2 languages it take me much time to write a sensous phrase or don't make a mess with the words ... so in the end remain a broken record ...and i REALLY LOVE your ff's di . for the way you portray the emotions or how you make them go forward i Super love it ...
i was going to coment yesterday but my internet is not stable so don't let to send or sometime IF too not allow ...anyway i come back to reply today cos i found a little stability of the conection first i make the quote and was going to post the coment but recived you pm first so i'm going to write there the coment ..😊
the frist's parts of the story this arjun bring to my mind Al Pacino in the film 'devils advocate'.
He seems so ruthless, so black , so fearless , so cynic , so egoist , so strong head so powerful like first comes he then the other are nothing . and he too is so handsome so apealing so atractive that you are scared about him but at the same time are attracted can't take the eyes of him ...yeah he is so powerful di and you can't avoid him and he evoce so much emotions in you...
and then comes arohi she was so fragile so inoccent so good...
and now that we have know them better is amazing the way you have make them go forward grow up like perssons and their story ...
and i love more them now, what to said about arjun he is fantastic now we understand that he has a sweet heart , and he have gone through so much pain but he was hiding it behind the wall of the ruthless man...no words do describe him , he is unique his love is unique his strength too...
and arohi she to has grown much sufered a lot when before she belived other and run without wanting to confront things now she have learn how to stood up for herself (like he did with gauri) and how to fight for her love and for her family, it's sad to have you own soon calling you rohi and not calling you mom or like the circumstances make her give ayan to salil and purvi to be his parent ,she has gone through so much pain or better say they have gone through so much pain...
it's happy to see them together now in the end after being appart and sufered to much they have realised that they are nothing when they are not together so this make them to realise at the 300% that they deserve to be happy and give so much value to what they have... they are perfect for eachother ... and di don't scary me about those lines of life and death 😆
they are perfectly crazy and super protective about ayan and his first day at school...which parent's will not be??? but they have passed so much that they are 100 time more worried about the other parents...and their lines were great 😊
every update leave me with the desire to know more and more about them .
every bit of your writing is perfect .you can make me feel every emotions what's going in their life and this all of the ability you have to portray their emotions and i love it .. it's SUPER
and di you too have grown up along with this story 😃
first you were not confortable to write romantic scenes you were thinking that you were not good at them... and see now di you are superb at writing them ...
i have blabered a lot i hope that a part of what i have write is understable if not sorry di it's all fault of my english 😆...
take care di and a big hug for the emotions you make me feel with your ff's , you make my day happy with them even when the day is not good...
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