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..areeba..

@..areeba..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

[DIV]dont worry areeba - better late than never

Yes better late than never
I agree 😊

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SHAHAD971

@SHAHAD971

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

wow..!! I'm so glad you write it again...I was enjoying it a lot...

All the updates were great ... i like your style of writing and i love the way the story is heading so far.

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

WHAT A CONTRAST THE SISTERS ARE

HER SISTER WARNED HER AGAINST HIM

HIS SISTER BROKE HER PROMISE TO HIM AND GAVE HIS ADDRESS, SHE WANTS THEM TO MEET

SHE REMOVED HER ENGAGEMENT RING

HOW SENSIBLE

SHE HAS TO KNOW WHAT HE FEELS FOR HER AND WHY HE DID NOT ACKNOWLEDGE HER LOVE BEFORE SHE TELLS HIM ABOUT THE CHANGES IN HER LIFE

PLEASE UPDATE SOON

WE WANT TO SEE HIS REACTION

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Ruky07

@Ruky07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: ..areeba..
Update quick,thre 2 many questions need 2 answer.the update was beautiful.the description & play of words,just awesome,lve the way u write.
tears came to her eyelashes," mujse nahi chootha."

That line mead me cry :( this is one of my fav story, heartwarming. She finally meet him. That line "His eyes somewhat darker, which no ink would provide me."
"zest of his grain...
Wonderful description. She took the ring of her finger, aman feel sorry.
Knw that they have meet, hope it's going 2 be good. Don't mke it sad
Update soon, very soon am waiting
Take care

thanks areeba for ur lovely words 😃
glad u like this story means alot to me, aww i knw poor guy he got stranded in-between
maybe or maybe not.. it might be good 😛 sad ! erm...
yes i'll try updating ASAP
u aswell take care

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..areeba..

@..areeba..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: Ruky07

thanks areeba for ur lovely words 😃
glad u like this story means alot to me, aww i knw poor guy he got stranded in-between
maybe or maybe not.. it might be good 😛 sad ! erm...
yes i'll try updating ASAP
u aswell take care

since u write for us, it right for me to write a comment
yes, poor guy. plz dont maKE it sad, we need a happy phase.
plz plz update sooon it has been 5 DAYS ! going on to 6.TO many questions need 2 be answered

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

hey ruky,

we need an update pls😃😃

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Ruky07

@Ruky07

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

hey ruky,
we need an update pls😃😃

Hey priya,

Ermm... I hvnt written anything yet, i do have the weekend off but prospectus of updatin on The weekend look bleak
So..

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love.1

@love.1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#138

When are you updating next????!!!!

Whats going to happen... you left it at a cliff hanger so please update soon! want to see what your amazingly evil mind has planned for them! hehehe 🤣