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Posted: 13 years ago
That was the most utterly, truly, heart-breaking update I have read!
Oh my gosh, I understand what Arohi went through but poor Arjun..
She's left him! :-(
No way... so upsetting
But once again hats off to you Raman Di!!
I must say you've written it beautifully!
Described each and every emotion of the characters!
Wow update soon, looking forward to what will happen next..
And one question.. will there be a leap?
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Posted: 13 years ago
yea di! is there going to be a leap?? :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh im not sure what to say. i understand the emotions portrayed and the actions. on both parts. however the end. can't help but feel arjun was cheated a bit. the situation is hard. and its tough. but given the character that you had created arohi to be. i would've assumed that to be her low point. because a person can only take so much. the suicide attempt drastic but can be taken as her low point. but the leaving. if she had left instead of the suicide. ok more acceptable. but suicide and leaving? would've thought the arohi that she really was would've wanted to stick around or give atleast a little back for all that arjun and his family had given. have to give it to you tho. great twist yet again. for these two. things could be argued both ways...so looking forward to seeing how you fix this one. could it be pthht and ki next...lol not sure if i can wait till you come back to this...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am speechless...indeed speechless...

What a super piece of art I shall call it...you ahve portrayed her emotions so well that it can be deemed as one of your bestest ever...

I could see and read each and every expressions and thought of her...what a traumatic situation to be in..just the feeling that one is a dirty blood can be so pathetic...

She loves him too much to see him in that situation...it must have so hard for her to take that decision but thinking logically what esle she could have done...it is the human mind that always aspires to find the question about "Who Am I?" and for Arohi to know that she was product of a rape and not born out of love was devastating...just knoing that her whole existence is meant to be pitied by others she didnt want hmi to be associated with her

I just hope and pray that Arjun can bear with this trauma as well...it is going to be such a hard journey of love for both of them...but love has the power to heal all wounds...love yu..muahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
There are lot many emotions running on me...when i saw the twist in the last update i was utterly shocked/surprised very unexpected and in this one, you portrayed it so naturally, how a depressed once feeling will be and there loved once to bring them back... suicide and these leaving were so in tack in the place i never feel they are twists in the story..but i could see pain of two people in front of me..

The whole update made me breath heard and i don't know even if breathed while reading last para...took me away...i just realized i had tears after a while touching my checks...no words for this update...

Great writer is a very small word i can use on you. If i recollect my self from the very first writing of you on this forum and this one...kudos..applause..every update you make us speechless with romance and funny scenes and this one took them all away..it made me think that i cant tag you any more to a romantic writer, you are versatile ..i am very bad at expressing but you are lot more which i couldn't explain in words.

Now disparately waiting for next updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg
aruhi left arjun shocked
awsum update as usual
plzz cont soon fanx 4 da pm x
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Posted: 13 years ago
great hatsooff to this arohi...
Agreed dat she s in such a situation...bt i wd never agree wth d decesiin to leave arjjn..
Yes she doesntdeserve arjjn...did she ever love arjun??if yes she wdnt hv done ds??
Does she rely thnk arjun wd move on???n find another so called ''right'' women??? Wat if arjun did d same thng to her??wil she survive??

No! I hope she realize her mstake soon n comebackkk...
Raman di dat was an awesm chapter...
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Posted: 13 years ago
:'( :'( :'( :'( :'( Oh my Arjun, and Arohi! I cried through the whole part. It was so deep, and soul touching. So emotional and brave. So beautiful! My heart wrenches to think what wold have happened if Arjun had not saved her. What will happen of them now. Arjun's going to run looking for her everywhere. What's going to happened to him at not finding her! What's Arohi going to do now. Where did she go. Why did she leave him. He won't be able to go through it! That stupid, horrifying troll, Rudra. Disgusting. He ruined everything! The fact that she wont ever be able to look heself in the mirror again. Ughh, he should be the one feeling that! It's unbearable to face the fact that people liek him actually exist! Her mom is at fault too, I agree with Arjun, she was suppose to protect her daughter! But she didn't. She left her isolated to go through that, and that is not okay! Oh man, I want the happy KI back! The happy Singhania family, making my Arohi feel like the princess she is. The cocky, flirtatious, amazing Arjun. More than anything I want that Arohi, who seems so faraway.

You're killing us di, what will we do before the next update. This was way too emotional. So well written, I cried tears of gratification! muahh, you're so blessed and talented xoxox TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
Arohi left Arjun!!!!!!!! =OOO
Nooo!!!!
I know that she went through so many difficulties and stuff but she left him =O
Raman you put so much emotion in your writing that I cannot believe what you write is not real!
It seems so real and while I'm reading the scenes play before me.
And I'm like omiiigoddd at the end of each chapter cause I want more and more and more!
Update realllyy reallly sooon! =D
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Posted: 13 years ago

omg what a twist! i knew she was emotionally traumatized and detathced but not to this extent of leaving.maybe she feels she's not good enough for him! awww so sad for arjun,he's trying so hard to make her back to normal and he's suffering also.he might have a total break down now! oh god plz update soon di!! after PTHHT of course😉

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