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myviewprem

@myviewprem

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Scene208 Raj-Gunjan lost in Mela

In their romance they have forgotten Raj and Gunjan. They search for them in nearby stalls. They are not to be seen.

Arjun panicks: Gunjan was unwell last week and had asthama. Raj is small to look after her. And PRS and Karan are not in India

Arohi goes in one direction searching for them and Arjun in one. Gunjan and Raj are so unaware they are going further and further looking at each stall. Finally they reach almost end of stalls and start going back in other direction. The shops are placed in a round manner. Arjun and Arohi go round and round searching them but cannot find them.

Arjun tensed: What will he tell PRS and Karan and Yashodhara if he cannot find Gunjan? Where is his Raj?

Its already 2pm lunch time. Its an hour he and Arohi are searching. Finally he finds both of them at a stall at one end of the huge mela. He gets angry. His heart has been in his mouth for so long.

Arjun runs towards them and shouts: Raj, Gunjan

Raj and Gunjan turn back and Arjun is in rage and in tears almost. He was so scared where these kids had disappeared another 5 minutes they would not be found he would have called police and Karan abroad and informed them. And these kids were enjoying themselves least bothered about him and Arohi who were running around searching for them. He is very angry on them.

He taps a bit hardly on both their shoulders in anger and shouts: Where the hell had you both gone? Did i not order you both to stay near cartwheel

Raj and Gunjan scared: Sorry dad Sorry bhaiya

Arjun hysterical: What sorry? If you were lost, if someone kidnapped you, if Gunjan got asthama, if raj fell and hurt his leg blah blah blah

Arohi arrives and is happy that he found them

Raj starts crying in fear and Gunjan also has tears dancing in her eyes and looks at him angrily. Both scared and angry first he hit them and then shouting in front of so many. Many people are looking at him shouting at them.

Gunjan takes Raj hands and barges off in front.

Arohi: Baby, Raj wait

Arjun shouts: Wait here you both, i have not finished.

Arohi: What are you doing? Why you are shouting at them, they are kids?

Arjun: Kids, they are kids. Do not listen to one word of elders. See their audacity i am talking and they walked off

Arohi: You were shouting. Now run and console them. Go Go and pushes him

Arjun angrily: Why should I? They are at fault

Arohi: You are one kid only do you need greater proof than this? They are small kids go and console them you idiot right now.

Arjun runs behind: Wait wait both of you, where are you both running wait

Gunjan and Raj run to the car park and wait for Arjun and Arohi

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

oh poor arjun was scared 4 them!

he inhibited a concerned father's or brother's picture there!

tnx 4 the pm...

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

he he raj n gunjan felt insulted??!

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cherry227

@cherry227

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Poor arjun... must be scary to lose kids! He needs arohi to tell him how to handle kids :D Thanks for the pm :)

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lazyblues

@lazyblues

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

hehe...

awesome update...

i luv regular updates

n they are fun to read

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: vrshn
he he raj n gunjan felt insulted??!

kids obivously feel bad or insulted when scolded and hit in front of others

i would, still do if something like that happened 😊

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

nice part..
Poor kids arjun made dem sad..bt deres no fault in hs side..he ws so worried..
Wd .ove to c maturedarohi here...
Consoling dem lyk her own kids

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myviewprem

@myviewprem

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Scene209 Arjun trying to pacify Gunjan

Arjun reaches the car parking.

Arjun: Sorry, i think i shouted a bit more

Gunjan and Raj stare at him with tears and anger. Gunjan is really angry he can make out from her face.

Arjun: Okkk Okkk I am very sorry, i should not have shouted at you both. Come we will go back and buy whatever you want from mela

Raj: Dad, first you hit us in front of so many. Then shouted

Arohi: What he hit you both?

Arjun: Where hit? I just tapped like this and shows to Arohi

Arohi: Ouch, this is tapping for you so hardly. This is called hitting not tapping. Poor babies. Do not dare touch my children again

Arohi hugs Gunjan and Raj

Arohi: Bad daddy, baby, Raj i will punish your daddy for that Okkk

Raj smiles Gunjan not bothered is angry.

Arjun stares at Arohi

Arohi: Hold your ears and murga banno abhi

Arjun whispers: Arohi, what nonsense? Am i a kid so many people are around. It was their fault.

Arohi begs him in eyes showing Gunjan

Arjun looks around and holds his ears unwillingly.

Raj laughs. Arjun stares at him to shut up.

Gunjan still angry and turns hers back towards him: Even if he become kabootar i will not forgive. My Karan bhaiya never hits me or scolds me even though i hit and trouble him so much.

Arjun whispering: Iskko nahhh uss Karan ne bigad ke rakha hai. Ane do uss gadhe ko usko naaa mein(shows his hands as if he will strangle Karan)

Raj laughs. Arohi is trying to pacify Gunjan and Arjun is himself acting smaller than Gunjan.

Arohi tries to pacify Gunjan: Become murga right now for my baby else

Arjun stares at Arohi. Arohi begs him in eyes.

Finally Arjun goes down on knees and holds his ears

Arjun: Sorry baby, very sorry. Please forgive me. Pleaseee and turns her towards him

Arjun: Very sorry baby, pleaseee

Gunjan still angry and looks away

Arjun: Sorry please, you are my small angel no forgive me

Gunjan: No, i am only my papa's angel not anyone else

Arjun: Ok, my papa's angel. Very sorry and takes her hands and kisses them please very sorry

Gunjan looks at him. With her family she would have extended her anger drama for another few hours but that's because her Karan bhaiya and daddy would take all her tantrums. She is not sure if Arjun will take all her tantrums and she knows its Raj birthday she should not spoil his day with her tantrums.

Gunjan has a faint smile now

Arjun: I can see a small smile. How do i make it big now? Haan and tickles her stomach

Gunjan starts laughing: Leave me leave me bhaiya and Arjun hugs her.

Arohi and Raj smile.

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Madhusmita das

@moonkmh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#229

Wao! Its so cute prem. I luv d way aru stands wid raj n gunjan n make arjun murga,i luv it. Bt gunjan is so swt,when she said dat she is nt going 2 4gv evn if he be kabootar.