FF: PYAR KE DO PAL NEW chapter 23 pg 147 - Page 15

@Priya

I have started working on the next chapter...the outline is taking longer than I expected...I will try my level best to at least to finish the next chapter by tomorrow ..even I want to get it out of my system ..it's just the phrasing of emotions taking much longer than I actually anticipated...knowing that this chapter can make or break this FF I am getting quite apprehensive as well...

thanks a lot for all yours patience and support...

Anu di, Wonderfully written update.
why did u stop here ?
really egar to find out the reason behind her,breaking the engagement
cheerio :)

@Madhu...dnt worry at all..take your time...you guys are my ultimate inspiration...your jiju tthinks I have completely lost it ..he just can't believe that I am writing FF on Arjuhi...he used to joke before regarding me mixing with teenage crowd and now on top this..he is really taking the mickey out of me ...

Originally posted by: Anupa28

@Priya

I have started working on the next chapter...the outline is taking longer than I expected...I will try my level best to at least to finish the next chapter by tomorrow ..even I want to get it out of my system ..it's just the phrasing of emotions taking much longer than I actually anticipated...knowing that this chapter can make or break this FF I am getting quite apprehensive as well...

thanks a lot for all yours patience and support...

Di,i m havng goosebump in my body nw. I dnt knw why bt d way u describe arohi's desire,arjun's luv was mindblastng.
The whole birthday celebratn is lyk drm 4 any gal,d shoppng dn dinner n all.bt d luv n desire arohi kept 4 arjun in his absence,n pour it when he was wid her was felt smthng vry much touchy.
Di,i cn undrstand u r doing a lot 4 us as u hv 2 go 2 job n also tk cr of jiju. We shud thank you as well as jiju dat he undrstand u n us. N u shud gv him 2 read dis ff m sure he wl felt proud of u as we feel everyday.
Luv luv luv ur ff.
Luv u so much di.

Originally posted by: Anupa28

@Madhu...dnt worry at all..take your time...you guys are my ultimate inspiration...your jiju tthinks I have completely lost it ..he just can't believe that I am writing FF on Arjuhi...he used to joke before regarding me mixing with teenage crowd and now on top this..he is really taking the mickey out of me ...

di,jiju ko bolo ke aap itne young ho ke hamare sath itni jyada ghul mil jati ho:-D

amazing, absolutely loved how arohi didnot want to wait since it would be torture for her. it was explained beautifully. arjun being matured one tried to stop but he too is in deep love and he could never dream of rejecting her desperate moves, that would have been insulting to her, so giving in was the right thing for him here. ahh cant wait to know what changed her mind.

Awesome update...!!!
Did someone came in between them to create a misunderstanding...?
Update fast...

I applaud you as a writter for taking the storyline the way you have! I know that it was risky, and many people feel apprehensive at the thought- that they are already together, but you still went on to write the way you sought the storyline. Great job, really!