FF- Prince in a Shining Armor|Part20,Pg 63| Jan 11 - Page 2

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awiee datz nice!
luvd the sisterly love!

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loved the start
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Hey Im Tia
Do contiune i love it...
But can u try writing in english coz i dont understand hindi plzzz.
Waiting for next part...
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Thanks for all the overwhelming response guys, simply did not expect it t seem this good. Thanks again. Hope I can make it upto you. Please let me know what you think about this chapter :)

~CHAPTER 2 - AROHI'S THOUGHTS & THE "STRANGER"~

"roz mujhe call karti rehna aur'" " aaj raat ko bhi call karoongi, aur honeymoon pe ?" arohi said with a naughty smile. " Aruu!" purvi blushed. "okay Advocate Ahluwalia, oh sorry advocate Mittal " The sisters shared some emotional smiles & hugs & then the voice came " Baarat aa gayyi, baarat aa gayyi" Arohi ran to the terrace, Salil jiju looked just so amazing, but who was that guy he was sharing some hilarious jokes with ? " Arjun Singhania " A voice called. She looked back & saw some 15 girls standing near her & staring at the boy who was apparently Arjun Singhania. Nice name she thought, then she looked at Jiju, he looked dashing, he was definitely the most perfect man for her sister. Theres couldn't be anyone else who would love her as much as Salil jiju does & the thought was enough to take Arohi to a land faraway from the reality. Standing on the terrace, she thought it was finally her sister, Purvi's wedding, the day her family had been waiting for, ever since her mom died Purvi was the one who looked after her like a mother & never made her life feel like it missed a motherhood. Purvi was 4 years elder to Arohi & very responsible. She had taken care of the house very well & bought up Arohi & Ishaan really well. Ishaan, arohi's twin brother. The bestest brother ever. A friend who knew everything about Arohi except when she had a crush on some cute guy, & if by mistake Arohi told Ishaan about the guy she had a crush on, Ishaan would either kill him or make sure the guy never ever appeared in front of Arohi. He was very protective for both his sisters & thought it was his responsibility to get both his beautiful sisters married to the right man for them , he'd already found the right one was Purvi. Now it was her turn. Purvi di had found love in the perfect man & their brother or family didn't doubt at him even once. He was perfect, had a perfect home, perfect family, perfect business, a perfect pure heart & ofcourse perfect looks. Is there anything else a girl would want or ask for ? NO !

I wish I got a guy like this as well, same ! Just like Salil jiju, just perfect, so amazing , her eyes fell on the stranger again, she avoided him & though " I'm yet to find the right guy for me. My sister who never believed in love & though it was all crap, who hated love had actually fallen in love with someone & found her true love. I'm so happy for my sister, we're very very close, infact the 3 of us have a bonding in which no other perfect can interfare. I'll miss her so much when she leaves the house & gets married to jiju, the most perfect man ever, not that I wanted to marry him or I liked him, just that I found him good enough for my sister & I've known him since forever now. He has always been like a brother type friend to me & he respected & loved me just like Ishaan did . He wasn't for me, he was for Purvi di, the perfect couple, each other's type :D The thought made her smile. So basically I feel my unromantic sister who never thought about love & was a bookworm, who wasn't interested in stuff like this, actually fell in love with Salil :O And theres me whose always waited for my prince charming to come & take me to a fairyland on his horse, is still waiting'.. This isn't fair dear god !

But was it actually love that I was looking for ? I do not get easily impressed by someone's looks or what he talks, theres a lot more to it, ofcourse he should be handsome, heartthrob, caring , charming, kind, sweet & he must have a good sense of humour ! But there is a lot much, just so much I've expected.

In all this while Arohi kept shifting her gaze to the "stranger" & back to her dreams. She cut her thoughts off & went down to welcome the Baarat. Her excitement had just no ends. She came near the door & helped DJ do the rituals. Once the rituals were done the girls stopped Salil from going in, asking for the money ! Salil said in his sweet, kind tone or maybe he was just making up that voice to please us " My dear saaliyon, I think we're already late '" "We want money, we want money" Salil sighed " How much ? " "twenty thousss'." " Salil dude have you freaking lost it ? Hum larke wale hain, sarr hum nahi ye jhukayenge " Seeing the strangers magical voice Arohi felt herself stand like a statue, she came out of the shock when DJ snapped " ye tum bachcho kii baatein hain, main to andar jaa rahi hun " Arohi came back to her senses. " Ohh really ? We'll see who will jhukao his sarr " Arjun was left awestruck seeing how beautiful she looked, simply like an angel in a green ghaghra & a pink choli showing her bare stomach. The heavy jewellery & her shining noisy bangles. The nosepin making her look just so wonderful. He thought " who this girl was ? " Hearing the OHHH's & WOOO's Arjun came back to reality & said " You make us get in or we get Bhabhi out from the window, I'm sure she loves Salil enough to run away & marry him, but I pity how all your decorations, food & all the arrangements you made would go waste. " Arohi thought she couldn't mess with this stranger, he was too charming to argue with. She said " Ahh just for jiju's sake we're letting you in, but remember theres no way we let you out of here without giving us the Shaggun "

Everyone entered the house, awestruck seeing how wonderful the house looked, just like a palace. Everyone praising Arohi for how well she's managed the decorations & got everthing right herself. All the girls couldn't help but fall all over themselves just to get a smile from Arjun, that's exactly how handsome he looked in his royal blue shirt * a westcoat above it. Ishaan & Arohi were busy checking if all guests were comfortable when arohi felt eyes on her, she looked around to see all the boys from the boy's side staring at Arohi & making moves to flirt with her . Ishaan moved towards them to get their eyes where they should be but Arohi stopped him saying it was Purvi di's wedding & she didn't want any issues happening. Saying this she rushed upstairs to see how Purvi di was. While Ishaan got himself into chats with Salil & a few of his friends. Arohi noticed ishaan talking to "him" as well. Seeing the girls all staring at him she rushed upstairs, not looking back even once.

Once in purvi's room she found her sister daydreaming, she was really happy for her . Purvi looked so happy. "lucky her" Arohi thought as she felt a pinch of jealousy build up, but obviously her excitement & happiness was a lot more than anything else.

"PURVI" Arohi shouted trying to get out DJ's voice from her mouth, she giggled as Purvi was startled & almost fell off the chair, jerking out herself from her dreams. She stared at me like she was going to kill me when she saw me laughing but definitely I laughed harder as I bowed my head off at her state of hopelessness. She was like a princess trapped in her room waiting for him to take her away. Only if she had hairs as long as Rapunzel then her Prince Salil or maybe her Knight in a shining armor would come to rescue her or probably save her & take her away. Umm.. maybe by climbing up her hairs. No wait' umm isn't that impossible ?

"AROHI ! " This time it was Purvi's turn to jerk her out of her thoughts. She looked at me smiling & grinning. Then she opened her mouth to speak. I know you were thinking of wishing or maybe suggesting me to grow my hair long, maybe as long as Rapunzel, yeah like Rapunzel Purvi laughed, so that Salil can come & save me, no no take me away like me... " Okay okay mujhe pata hai ki apko sab pata hai, but wait a sec, ab to aap chale jaoge, bass ek baat bata do, How do you always know what I am thinking ?"

"Huh ? Well you know I'm your sister ! & I know you more than you do yourself too. I don't need any certificate to prove or know what you're thinking about, your eyes say it all. "

" but dii.." Ishaan enters the room " You both have started your chatters again. Its time for Piurvi to go down, she's being called. " Purvi turned to her brother, leaving him surprised. " Awww, dii you look so pretty , meri beautiful sister. I can't belive you're getting married & soon will leave us" "par main to hun na, main kahin nahi jaoongi" All 3 hugged & held their tears back so the other one does not cry.

Purvi comes down, the rituals are started. Arohi makes her sister comfortable & then remember " Ohh jiju's shoes" She calls the girls & they start planning. Arohi is too prud of herself & for what she's planned, she rushes away to the kitchen she takes a glance back to see if their girls are at their place & suddenly bumps into something hard'..


Okay so that was it. Hope you guys liked it. I've tried PMing all the ones who I could, if you didn't get the PM then please mention it on comments. And yes add me to your buddy list if you want PM's on the updates.

Please comment & let me know how you all liked it.

Edited by AyushiSinghania - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES
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Me First 😃
You Are A Wonderful Writer Ayushi.
And i love the way you are heading your story towards.
It seems interesting.
I am Looking Forward To it.
Do update Soon 😊
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it was nice one
now waiting to see how arohi steals salil's shoes
continue soon
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good one - good start - pls continue
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