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Akshaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Bina dekhe us ki tasweer bana sakta hun...

Bina mile us ka haal bata sakta hun ...

Meri MOHABBAT main itne taqat thi kay uski aankhon kay aansoo

apni aankhon say gira sakta mein

Ab NAFRAT Itni badhi ki apne aankhon ke aansoo

uski aankhon say gira sakta hun

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priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#2

wah kya baat hai very niceeeeee

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Akshaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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jab pyaar ne saath chod diya

aur khuda ne bhi haath chod diya

jis haath ko maine thamne ki khwaish thi

usi haath ko maine chodne ke liye thaam liya

har darwaaza tod dunga

apni taraf uthe har haath ko rok dunga

itni shiddat se nafrat nibahonga

ki khudko jalakar, duniya ko jala dunga

Edited by aksh4IF - 14 years ago

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ishikaek43

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Posted: 14 years ago

#4

Nice poem, just want to continue hope u dont mind.

"Bina dekhe us ki tasweer bana sakta hun...
Bina mile us ka haal bata sakta hun ...
Meri MOHABBAT main itne taqat thi kay uski aankhon kay aansoo
apni aankhon say gira sakta mein
Ab NAFRAT Itni badhi ki apne aankhon ke aansoo
uski aankhon say gira sakta hun "

Lekin phir kyon tere aakhon mein asoon dekhkar mujhe itna bura kyou lagtha hai.

If any one else wants to add any line feel free

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Payal

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice poem, just want to continue hope u dont mind.

"Bina dekhe us ki tasweer bana sakta hun...
Bina mile us ka haal bata sakta hun ...
Meri MOHABBAT main itne taqat thi kay uski aankhon kay aansoo
apni aankhon say gira sakta mein
Ab NAFRAT Itni badhi ki apne aankhon ke aansoo
uski aankhon say gira sakta hun "

Lekin phir kyon tere aakhon mein asoon dekhkar mujhe itna bura kyou lagtha hai.

Akhir itni nafrat mein bhi dil kehta hai 'Kitani mohabbat hai' ....

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Akshaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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subhan allah.. wah kya baat hai.. beautiful.. 👏

lemme edit mine.. inspired ofcourse by u both

Bina dekhe us ki tasweer bana sakta hun...
Bina mile us ka haal bata sakta hun ...
Meri MOHABBAT main itne taqat thi kay uski aankhon kay aansoo
apni aankhon say gira sakta mein
Ab NAFRAT Itni badhi ki apne aankhon ke aansoo
uski aankhon say gira sakta hun
Lekin phir kyon uske aankhon mein asoon dekhkar

uske dil ka samandar, meri aankkhon me bhar aata hai

Akhir itni nafrat mein bhi kyon dil kehta hai 'Kitani mohabbat hai' ....

plz, feel free to pitch in everyone

Originally posted by: payal_4
Nice poem, just want to continue hope u dont mind.

"Bina dekhe us ki tasweer bana sakta hun...
Bina mile us ka haal bata sakta hun ...
Meri MOHABBAT main itne taqat thi kay uski aankhon kay aansoo
apni aankhon say gira sakta mein
Ab NAFRAT Itni badhi ki apne aankhon ke aansoo
uski aankhon say gira sakta hun
Lekin phir kyon tere aakhon mein asoon dekhkar
mujhe itna bura lagtha hai.
Akhir itni nafrat mein bhi dil kehta hai 'Kitani mohabbat hai' ....

Edited by aksh4IF - 14 years ago

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Akshaya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#7

season 1 mein humne ek pal ki zindagi de di

season 2 mein ek dil ne humari duniya le li