Hullo Everyone...This is my very first attempt of writing a fan fiction. Please take a look... Go through it if you get some spare time. I am looking froward to criticism .... please give me some feedback.
It was a beautiful morning. Nippy zephyr blowing, and slowly entering her vaguely opened window frame. It was about to mizzle. A cloud cover approaching Forbes, the to-be metro of India. It was 5:43a.m. But it was too dark as it was the month of January. She lay on her bed covered from head-to-toe with her darling red-pink eiderdown. Her right hand fingers were slightly out. Her pure Indian white visage was exposed too, consequently her nose was red, nails cerulean at their roots and her long white fingers exceedingly cold. Her undulating shoulder-length brunette tresses were stretched over her bolster, a wisp of whose tickled her immaculate face and like a foe tried to agitate her. Couldn't tolerate her sleeping calmly, hmph...! But she lay there, inert and unruffled, wholly riveted in her reveries (a typical Gemini).
In her forty winks, she smiled.... her rosy lips vaguely parted. Her locks dishevelled as she shifted in her kip. But she looked gorgeous.
There in another part of the same conurbation in another gargantuan bungalow he laid. Half out of his duvet sleeping with all his qualms smouldering in the nearby convector like oxygen. His rather devoted and caring mother virtuously entered his bedroom and turned off the convector and retired to her own room. Handsome as he was (a typical Scorpio), he looked as if he was just bodily present in the span. His mind was in a different world.
Now Linda Goodman doesn't consider air and water elements too compatible, but I presume, exceptions are always there.
It was 6:45.m. Her mom, in the spur of a moment arrived in her room and planted a damp kiss on her temple and hugged her close to her bosom and whispered "HAPPY SIXTEENTH". She smiled with her eyes half opened.
She kissed her lightly on her cheek and in her easy on the ear voice wished her. Thus, began her day. Her mum had kept her clothes inside her dressing room and she went to the washroom after bending low to touch her beloved mum's feet and seek her blessings.
Reaching Forbes Senior High School much before time, as usual, she sat on the first desk. There came her best chum Gauri. Both first desk birds...! But OMG! The class was almost derelict that day.
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