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Posted: 17 years ago
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QUOTE=anita fan]wow everyone is good except
Ilike anita with ejaz😳 they look very romantic


Indeed they do, but I wanted to try something different and also I have seen Ejaz work with Panchi... so I thought of giving it a try... Anyways thank you for your support and I assure you that you will love Prachi and Neev's chemistry...

Originally posted by: Sweetxsuga

awesome... plz continue soon.. i cant wait to know the how ,Krishna's n Dhruv, lovestory grows... hey aryan n shruti 2... kewl huh

I know that your excited to know how its going to start, but right now I can't post first part but I can post introduction and it might be similar to the show, but I assure you that I won't disappoint you or anyone else...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Character Sketch of Tejwani Parivaar

Vishal Tejwani: Nandani's husband & Aryan, Hiten and Krishna father.

Nandani Tejwani: Vishal's wife & Aryan, Hiten and Krishna mother.

Neev Tejwani: Vishal's oldest son. Neev is very charismatic. He loves going around with women and enjoys his life. He has a very good business sense and his father has high hopes from him. He does everything with a lot of energy and passion. He has a very volatile relationship with his lady love, Nisha.

Krishna Tejwani: Krishna is the daughter of Vishal and Nandani Tejwani. Krishna is a lawyer by profession and works a lot for Special Crime Branch in Panchmeswar along with Preet and Prachi.

Aryan Tejwani: A spoiled Rich brat who is always trying to take advantage of Shurti his wife.

***

Character Sketch of Sharma Parivaar

Rajesh Sharma: Married to Prerna Sharma and father of four kids (Dhruv, Shurti, Prachi and Preet). Also Rajesh is dying of cancer... last stage.

Prerna Sharma: Married to Rajesh Sharma and mother of four kids (Dhruv, Shurti, Prachi and Preet).

Dhruv Sharma: He is the pillar of strength for the entire family. Everyone looks up to Dhruv during the time of any crises as he has a solution for anything and everything. He is an ideal son, brother, husband and person with a heart of gold. Dhruv has sacrificed his ambitions for the sake of his family. He has always kept his brothers and sister's wishes and dreams over and above his own. Dhruv is good looking, well spoken and has a great sense of humor. Dhruv is a man any girl would want to marry. Dhruv is a single thread that binds the entire family and has a unique ability to be a fun loving prankster as well as a responsible human being.

Shurti Sharma: Well known CID Officer in Panchmeswar. Also she gets married to Aryan as her father's last khwaish.

Prachi Sharma: If Shurti is a CID Officer than Prachi is a lawyer by profession like her younger brother Preet. She also agrees to marry Aryan's older brother Neev as her father's last khwaish.

Preet Sharma: Preet is Rajesh and Prerna's youngest son and very much like the boys in Rang De Basanti''..Preet is an arm chair rebel and a lawyer by profession, the profession that he has never taken seriously. He is very much like Shah Rukh Khan of Dilwale''

Preet always looks up to Dhruv and wants to be like him but does not want to make an effort.

Rajesh thinks that his son Preet is good for nothing and nothing will happen of him as he is not at all serious about anything in life. Preet is in love with Kaajal. Its only when Dhruv passes away that's when Preet realizes his responsibilities and even agrees to marry Krishna and become 'The son of the family'

***

Your's Truly,

Sneha

PS: Part One will be posted late night around 1ish or 2ish.






Edited by Radha...Shyaam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Radha...Shyaam

QUOTE=anita fan]wow everyone is good except

Ilike anita with ejaz😳 they look very romantic



Indeed they do, but I wanted to try something different and also I have seen Ejaz work with Panchi... so I thought of giving it a try... Anyways thank you for your support and I assure you that you will love Prachi and Neev's chemistry...

Originally posted by: Sweetxsuga

awesome... plz continue soon.. i cant wait to know the how ,Krishna's n Dhruv, lovestory grows... hey aryan n shruti 2... kewl huh



I know that your excited to know how its going to start, but right now I can't post first part but I can post introduction and it might be similar to the show, but I assure you that I won't disappoint you or anyone else...

Originally posted by: pawani

can't wait!!!!!

Pawani<3



Even I'm excited to start this fan-fic... 😳

Your's Truly,
Sneha
PS: I'll post first part maybe later in the evening around 1ish or 2ish.. I hope you guys don't mind...

sure go ahead waiting for ur story
basiclly i am Ejoo and Anita fan😳 thats the reason
yeah ur right we need to try new things and panchi looks good with ejoo
Radha...Shyaam thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: anita fan



Indeed they do, but I wanted to try something different and also I have seen Ejaz work with Panchi... so I thought of giving it a try... Anyways thank you for your support and I assure you that you will love Prachi and Neev's chemistry...



I know that your excited to know how its going to start, but right now I can't post first part but I can post introduction and it might be similar to the show, but I assure you that I won't disappoint you or anyone else...



Even I'm excited to start this fan-fic... 😳

Your's Truly,
Sneha
PS: I'll post first part maybe later in the evening around 1ish or 2ish.. I hope you guys don't mind...

sure go ahead waiting for ur story
basiclly i am Ejoo and Anita fan😳 thats the reason
yeah ur right we need to try new things and panchi looks good with ejoo


Even I am a big fan of Ejoo and Anita! Anyways don't be upset cause Anita will make her entry as Ejoo's girlfriend in my fan-fic šŸ˜‰

Your's Truly,
Sneha


Edited by Radha...Shyaam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Hey guys... the wait is finally over here is the first part along with prologue... I hope you guys like it and please do tell me how I did...


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Prologue

Like every father I also wanted to see my daughters married before I die. So one day I went over to my friend's house and I asked for his sons' hand in marriage with my daughters. At first my friend disagreed because he knew his sons weren't worth for my daughters, but after I told him about my cancer... he agreed for this marriage... even his sons agreed... for this marriage.

And today my daughters are getting engaged with my friend's sons...Neev and Aryan.

***

Part One – Engagement

"Come' on Dhruv! It's your sister's engagement so you have to dance" Said by one of his friends

"Vijay, you know that I can't dance but Preet will dance on my behalf" said by Dhruv

"No way man... You have to dance after-all their also your sisters not only mine" said by Preet

Afterwards Preet winked at Krishna...

Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai

Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Kudi Ki Tarhan Na Sharmaa
Hai Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
(Dhruv was totally flatter by Krishna's challenge she gave him openly in-front of their family members and friends so Dhruv gathered some of his friends like Vijay, Rishi and many more).

Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa
Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada
Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Hai, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

O Soniyee... (Both girls were totally surprise that their brother could dance even Krishna, who winked back at Preet, who was totally enjoying with his friends)

Dhruv: Sar Pe Sajaa Ke Sehraa
Baarat Le Ke Aaon
Dulhan Tujhe Bana Ke
Doli Mein Le Ke Jaoon

Krishna: Bholi Samajh Ke Mujhpe
Na Daal Aise Daane
Shaadi Nahin Karoongi
Ja Maan Ja Deewane

Dhruv: Sun Albeli
Meri Tanha Akeli
Abh Kat Ti Nahin Ratiyaan (Krishna goes standing beside her brothers while
Kaajal takes up the floor while Preet gets hold of her hand)

Kaajal: Jaa Re Harjayee
Chal Chod Kalayee
Sabh Dekhti Hain Sakhiyaan
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja -2

Preet: Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja -2
O Maan Ja...
(Kaajal goes running behind her friends while Preet tries to get hold of her hand)

Kaajal: Kehti Hain Meri Sakhiyaan
Dil Mein Hai Chor Tere
Kyoon Haath Dho Ke Aise
Peeche Pada Hai Mere
(Preet takes one of Kaajal's friend with him)

Preet: Sakhiyoon Se Apni Keh Do
Ke Beech Mein Na Aaye
Ban Jayein Meri Saali
Jija Mujhe Banaayein

In-between Krishna, Dhruv, Preet and Kaajal's dance the ring ceremony take places... Shurti slips her ring first on Aryan's finger while Prachi does the same on Neev's finger.

Afterwards, Neev places his ring on Prachi's finger even Aryan does the same after awhile...

Afterwards, they all take blessing from their elders... while Shurti had tears in her eyes but nobody notices them.

(Back to Krishna, Dhruv, Preet and Kaajal's dance)

Krishna: Main Na Aaon Tere Sang
Tere Ache Nahin Dhang
Na Aise Baat Badha

Preet: Mujhe Karna Tu Tung
Abh Band Kar Jung
Aa Ban Ke Dulhan Ghar Aa
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Kaajal: Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Haan, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Both girls Krishna and Kaajal: Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Aaj Hai Sagaai
Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa
Aaj Hai Sagaai

Sun Ladki Ke Bhai
Zara Nach Ke Humko Dikhaa

Both boys Dhruv and Preet: Sabh Ko Nachaoon
Nach Nach Ke Dikhoon
Aa Mujh Ko Gale Se Lagaa

Kaajal: Kudi Ki Tarhan Na Sharmaa

Preet: Munde Se Zara Aankh Lada

Krishna: Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Dhruv: Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Both girls Krishna and Kaajal: Hai, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Both buys: Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja, Hoi...

Both girls: Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa
Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa
Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa
Aa Aa Aa Aa Aa

Both boys: Hoi, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Both girls: Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja
Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja

Both boys: Hoi

Both girls: Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja, Tu Meri Gal Maan Ja...

Slowly the engagement came to an end. Both girls went inside their rooms...

Next day, Mr. Sharma goes for his daily check up while Prerna gets ready for her daughters upcoming rituals like haldi, menhdi, sangeet and many more plus this wedding is done in Bengal style.

***
Your's Truly,
Sneha
😳
Please do let me know - how I did with this part?



Edited by Radha...Shyaam - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOW!
Great first part, continue soon please!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its very nice very good starting and ya looking forword to the next part plssssss igve it soon and a big round of applause for u dear
lov
Tanya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
this was a great first part! continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
love it can't wait 4 the next partt!!!!!!!!!
Pawani<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
wow dat waz so cute... all four of thm got engaged n that too 2 fulfill Shruti and prachi's father last wish... i hope they spend a happi life...
Krishna n dhruv dancing 2gether... that was so sweet... i cant wait 4 da next part... plz continue soon

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