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nice promo...looking forward for the update bhaiya...
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awesome promo
omg arnav is evil 2? i changed my mind i dont feel bad for him anymore.
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PART 13

Every1 in the juneja mansion went asleep after enjoying the sagai of our premeer…and all the guest went home...

NEXT DAY…

Gaya3 called her pandit to get the best date and time for the wedding of

Our premeer…the pandit came and gaya3 called heer and mansi from there house as they ll be able to take the aashirwaad of the panditji too…heer came and so as prem…then gaya3 gave premeer's kundalis…pandit ji viewed both kundalis and said ….

Panditji: arre waah!!! Bahut achhi jodi hai…aisi jodi to bahut kam logon ki banti hai…(premeer saw each other and smiled) par ek samasya(prob) hai..(premeer looked at each odr wid shock expression)

Gaya3: (shockingly and n sadly) kya hua panditji…kaisi samasya…

Panditji: inka vivaah next month ke end tak nahi ho sakta

Gaya3: par y???i mean kyun nai panditji…

Panditji: dekhiye…inki kundali me raahu bhari hai…isliye inki shadi agle mahine se pehle karna bahut bada upshagun hoga…

Prem saw all this and protested against the decision of panditji…but gaya3 stopped him…then prem disappointedly went to his room…heer followed him as gaya3 told her to bring prem down for aashirwaad…

Heer went up and saw prem sitting on his bed's corner…disappointed like a baby…

Heer: prem…

Prem: kya hai ???kyun aayi ho…

Heer: prem…chalo niche…

Prem: kyun mai nahi jaunga us pandit ke paas…

Heer: arre aise nahi kehte….

Prem: kyun uss pandit ne meri shadi 4 weeks postponed kar di yaar..agar usne apna faisle nahi badla na to mai keh deta hu humare rahu ki to chhoro uska rahu mai ban jaunga..aur usse--….(heer stops him in b/w)

Heer: kuch bhi ho…chalo ma bula rahi hai…

Prem: heer plz…mai nahi..

Heer: prem!!

Prem: heer!!

Heer: prem chalte ho ya nahi

Prem: nahi…

Heer: to mujhse shadi tak baat mat karna bye…(she turned odr side to go away)…

Prem: (prem stopped her) aarreeee ruko na mai bhi chalta hu itna achha pandit hai, pair (legs) chhu ke aashirwaad lena kya mai to usse pair pakad ke hi baith jaunga…(prem tried to create sum fun)

Heer: achha!

Prem: haan tum dekho to…

Heer: (thinks) ye prem to achanak kya ho gaya…

Prem: chalo na ab nahi chal na kya…

Heer: chalo…

Prem went down and suddenly fell on the feet of panditji…he waz angry wid him but still for heer he waz showing that he is still happy…

Prem: (thinks while he waz touching his feet) iss pandit ki to mai…mann kar raha hai iska--..(while he waz thinking gaya3 interrupted)

Gaya3: heer tum bhi aashirwaad lelo…(heer bent down and prem whispered)

Prem: is pandit ki to mai..

Heer: shhhhh!!!!

Prem: ok ab tum mujhse baat mat karna ok…

Panditji: khush raho…

Premeer stood up and heer saw prem who waz in a angry mood…and after taking d aashirwaad he went to his room again…but this tym there waz no1 to notice coz ever1 went out to see off panditji and only heer waz left…coz she cant leave making prem angry like this…she went to his room and kept her hand on his shoulder…

Heer: prem?? Kya hua…

Prem: (avoiding her) kuch nahi tum, jao…

Heer: ok…(she said ok in a tone as she never minds him angry)

Prem: hey..(he stood up and pulled her close to him..)

Heer: kya kar rahe ho prem koi aa jayega…

Prem: kyun aayi tum yahan…(he held her hand backside. so that she feels a minor pain)

Heer: ahh!! Prem jaane do na…dard ho raha hai…

Prem: aur mujhe jo dard ho raha hai wo…

Heer: tumhe kya dard…pakad to tumne rakha hai mujhe…choro na…plz…

Prem: nahi …ye rahu- wahu mai nahi manta…ye pandit aaya tha meri life me rahu banke…isne meri shadi 4 weeks postponed kardi…4 weeks…

Heer: oh god…tum ab tak 4 weeks pe atke hue ho…plz choro na mujhe…

Prem: achha jao…(being rele angry now..he left heer to go and turned odr side and said)

Prem: rahu…ya rite…what d hell rahu ll do in my life???

heer waz moving towards d door to leave but suddenly she remembered tapish and turned back…while that prem also turned back and saw her teary eyes…heer felt helpless and suddenly hugged prem…prem also hugged her and heer felt like crying…

Prem: I m sorry…zyada dard hua kya??(thinking that she is crying coz he held her tightly)

Heer: nahi prem mai is dard ke liye nahi…uss dard ke liye ro rahi hu jo aane wala hai…

Prem: (prem held her arms and saw her surprisingly)

Heer: haan prem….tapish…bhul gaye usse….

Prem: arre wo kya bigad lega humara…

Heer: par prem…(he kept his finger on her lips)

Prem: arre abhi humari shadi 4 weeks postponed ho gayi hai…ye kya kam hai jo tum aur dukhi ho rahi ho…(creating sum humor so that she stops crying)

Heer: (she gave a smile and prem hugged her)

Prem: jab tak mai zinda hu tumhe apni jaan se bhi zyada care se rakhunga…

Heer: mujhe apni nahi tumhari jaan ki chinta hai…tapish tumhe nuksaan pahuchana chahta hai…

Prem: aur meri jaan tum ho heer…tumne uss magician ki story to suni hogi na jiski jaan ek doll me hoti hai….yahan mai wo magician hu aur tum ho meri doll…tum me hai meri jaan…

Heer: tum sach me ek magician ho prem…najane kya jaadu kar diya hai mujhpe…

Prem: sach…. To mera jadu uss pandit pe kyun nahi chala…humari shadi 4 weeks postponed kardi…

Heer: uuffoooo!!!!! Tum abhi tak whi soch rahe ho….

Prem: haan 4 weeks tak yahi sochunga aur us pandit ko nahi chhodunga…

Heer: prem…(she slowly beats on his shoulder)

ARNAV'S HOTEL ROOM

Here at d morning Arnav woke up and got ready to go to d office…even his heart waz crying…he got ready to go…he got down to d parking lot and started his car and rushed towards the office…he waz very sad that he did not wanted to attend any meeting…he told the receptionist that not to give any calls and do not disturb him but he told her to call d manager as he wanted to talk to him …she said yes n called out for manager… while Arnav waz waiting for him…but today manager waz in half day leave…receptionist assured him that she ll let him noe when d manager arrives…Arnav agreed and went in his cabin…he had a huge cabin…which waz also filled wid mansi's pics…not only her pics…his whole office waz decorated as mansi's taste…the color of his sofa, furniture and everything waz of mansi's likes…he went in his cabin and waz again lost in her thots…everything he ever had waz indicating his love…mansi…

Arnav: ye mujhe kya ho gaya hai…mai kyun usse nahi bhul pa raha hu…kyun….jab mujhe pata hai ki wo kisi aur se pyar karti hai to mai kyun nahi sehen kar pa raha hu is sach ko… mai kyun usse yaad kar kar ke apne aap ko nuksaan pahuncha raha hu…mai kyun apne dimaag se usse nikaal nahi pa raha hu…kyun mujhe uske kho jane ka dard ho raha hai jo kabhi mera tha hi nahi…oh!! God… mai kya karun…(he thinks for a while and gets up in a angry tone)mai mansi ko bachpan se pyaar karta hu…phir kaise koi jo abhi aaya hai uski life me mujhse zyada important ho gaya….nahi…mai mansi ko pa ke rahunga….i love her…and I ll get her…but kaise…how…how….(he thinks allooottt but did not get any answer that how ll he be able to get mansi…he throws away the flower pot which waz near him and again sits to think…) mai kya karun….what shud I do….(then his phone rings which one waz on d table.. he angrily picks it and scolds the receptionist) maine kaha tha na do not disturb me..to kyun phone kiya…

Receptionist: sorry sir but Mr. Kesar (manager) nahi aayenge aaj…unka phone aaya tha…he is not well..

Arnav: ok…

He puts the phone down and goes out and leaves for his hotel room…he reached d hotel then the manager of the hotel told him that one gal is waiting for him from 5 mins…arnav went in his room and saw mansi seeing her pics which were on his walls…he saw her and suddenly went emotional…but mansi saw him and welcomed him…

Mansi: arre Arnav mai tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi…aao na…

Arnav: mera wait kyun…

Mansi: arre tumhi to ho jisse mai bahut sari baatein kar sakti hu…

Arnav: kyun heer aur preet kahan hain…(in a lil hard voice)

Mansi: kyun mai tumse baat nahi kar sakti(making a long face)

Arnav: nahi nahi aisi baat nahi hai (he softens.. then they both sit on d bed and started to talk)

Mansi: pata hai preet na bahut achha hai…

Arnav: achha kaise…(he waz lil disappointed but tried to act normal)

Mansi: pata hai tumhe wo ek ladka tha tapish naam ka…(mansi tells him everything…how tapish attacked premeer…how prem saved heer…how they came to noe abt tapish and how bravely preet fought wid tapish)

Arnav: what!!!!! itna kuch ho gaya aur heer ne mujhe kuch nahi bataya…

Mansi: arre yaar tum to jante ho na ki heer kabhi kisi ko dukhi nahi karti…

Arnav: issi liye usne prem ko rok liya tapish ko marne se..

Mansi: haan but preet ne kya maza chakhaya usse…kya mast fight ki usse…

Arnav: achha!!

Mansi: haan but ab mujhe darr hai ki tapish wapis aayega…

Arnav: ohho tum fikar mat karo…

Mansi: ok ab mai chalti hu…

Arnav: itni jaldi jaogi ….plz ruko na..

Mansi: nahi Arnav phir kabhi aungi…abhi jana hai…

Arnav: ok…par zarur aana…

Mansi: ok…bye…

Arnav: bye…

Arnav followed mansi to d door and then she left…he became more sad now as it waz heart breaking for him to resist preet …he turned negative and decided to meet tapish…he found tapish's place and went to meet him…

Arnav: hi …

Tapish: hi aap kon…

Arnav: mai Arnav hu

Tapish: I m sorry but I don't noe any Arnav..

Arnav: I noe u but u don't noe me…

Tapish: umm…sorry…

Arnav: mera enemy aur aapka enemy ek hi hai…

Tapish: kya?? Kya matlab

Arnav: preet…

Tapish: preeet??

Arnav: aapka enemy…jo ab mera enemy bhi hai..

Tapish: par ussne kya kiya hai…

Arnav: mera pyaar china hai ussne…mai barbadd karna chahta hu usse…

Tapish: pyaar?? Kon…

Arnav: mansi…meri jaan…par wo usse pyaar karti hai…aur mai nahi chhodunga preet ko…

Tapish: achha to ab tum mujhse kya chahte ho…

Arnav: kehte hain dushman ka dushman dost hota hai…I m here for frndship…

Tapish: tum meri madad karo mai tumhari madad karunga...this ll be our frndship…nothing else…

Arnav: sahi kaha tumne hum dost nahi zarurat hain ek dusre ki…

Tapish: so frnds…

Arnav: ya frnds…

Tapish: but tum ye to nahi chahte na ki mai preet ko tumhare hawale kardu…

Arnav: mat lab…

Tapish: mat lab yahi ki preet ko mai marunga tum nahi…

Arnav: mujhe preet se koi matlab nahi..mujhe sirf mansi chahiye…only mansi…tum baki ke sath kya karte ho I don't care…

Tapish: ok…done…

Arnav: done…so whats ur plan…

Tapish: plan??

Arnav: haan koi plan to hoga tumhare paas…

Tapish: ya hai but I wanna destroy whole juneja family…

Arnav: but mansi ko kuch nahi hona chahiye…

Tapish: ok mansi ko kuch nahi hoga…wo tumhari hogi…but I want ur help in my plan…

Arnav: meri help …kaise…

Tapish: (tapish tells him his evil plan)

Arnav: ok…I ll help u but in sab me mansi shud not get hurt..ok…

Tapish: ok…I promise mansi ko kuch nahi hoga…

Arnav: ok…

They both shake hands and their evil plan begins…

AFTER 2 WEEKS

Premeer were happy in there lives…prem waz in d office and heer wanted to go to shopping…so she took mansi along wid her and then they went to a shopping mall…heer waz buying sum stuffs and mansi waz talking wid preet on the phone…they became gud frnds in this 2 weeks but did not tell any1 that they love each odr… mansi told him that she and heer are in shopping mall and heer is buying something…preet requested mansi to bring a nice perfume for him as he has finished all of his bottles…mansi agreed…while they were talking preet heard door bell and went down from his room to open d door…that tym every1 waz in home…gaya3, lallit, preet…all three were at home…

when he opened the door…sum1 sprayed sumthing on his face and preet fell unconscious…and then gaya3 came out to see who it waz…gaya3 waz stunned to see tapish wid his bad guys…she screamed and lallu came out too…then all the bad guys came in and took all the 3 wid them..lallu and gaya3 struggled wid them as they did not wanted to go…while getting out tapish asked lallu that where is prem and heer and mansi…lallu didn't tell them and then tapish ordered sum of his bad guys to stay near by…so as if any1 else cums he ll get them too…and then tapish took lallu and gaya3 wid him while 2 of his bad guys carried preet as he waz unconscious …

mansi and heer were back home…but the goons were in juneja mansion so they did not saw mansi and heer cuming …they came to there house and then mansi took out the bottles of perfume she got for preet and then asked heer to cum wid her to juneja mansion as she waz going to give the bottle of perfume to preet but she waz unaware of the goons in d juneja mansion …heer ands mansi were walking to juneja mansion….then suddenly heer saw a bad guy and took mansi into a corner as she smelled sumthing fishy..

Mansi asked her…

Mansi: ahh!! Heer kya kar rahi hai…

Heer: shhhh!!

Mansi: (whispered) kya hua..(They were talking in very low voice so that the goons were not able to listen that sum1 is near)

Heer: mansi…ye to wahi insaan hai jisne mujhpe aur prem pe hamla kiya tha…

Mansi: kya???but ye yahan….r u sure…

Heer: haan I m sure ye wohi hai but ye juneja mansion me kya kar raha hai…

Mansi: hume prem ko bataana chahiye…

Heer: haan chal wapis…

Mansi: ok…

They tip toed to there house…mansi locked the main door…heer and mansi went to heer's room and tried to see from the window that what is happening…they saw prem's room…2 bad guys were holding guns…heer waz scared…but mean while the bad guy saw heer and he remembered that heer waz d same gal who waz wid prem that nite…he shouted and told every1 abt heer being in the next house then he came towards heer's home…heer mansi saw this and locked all the doors…and then they quikly dialed prem's number…

(Ring..ring..ring….)prem's phone waz ringing but he waz not picking it up…

Heer: bloody hell!!! Prem pick up d phone dammit!!!!

(while that bad guys were at the door of heer's house and they were knocking it hardly…. Heer got more scared and then she redialed and prem picked up this tym…heer waz in a panic state )

Heer: hello….

Prem: hello..heer….

Heer: prem?? Prem..plz jaldi aaao plz…

Prem: (got worried) kya hua heer…

Heer: plz prem jaldi aao wo gunde…

Prem: (he got up from the chair in which he waz sitting) heer??? Gunde ???? kya hua…heer….tum thik ho…

Heer: prem plz tapish is back…he is back….

Prem: (shocked hearing tapish's name)kya tapish…

While the door waz broken and goons were inside the house…and prem already left from the office…he waz in his car…heer heard the voice of door and she screamed…

Heer: ahh!!!!!!!!! PREM PLZ JALDI AAO PREM…

Prem: haan heer mai aa raha hu…I m cuming heer…

Heer: prem ye log ander aa gaya hain

Prem: (driving more fast)

Heer: prem??aaHHH(the mobile phone dropped from her hands and now the bad guys were on the room's door)

Prem: kya hua heer…heeer???????????

Heer: (to bad guys) kon ho tum log…kya chahte ho…

Prem: heer kon hai wahan….

(then the bad guys broke the door too…mansi screamed as she waz hurt on her hands…)

Prem: mansi…kya hua…(he heard the voice of door breaking)

Heer: bachao!!!!!

Prem: heer??heer…..mansi????

Heer and mansi were not able to listen prem's voice and here prem widout getting any response he threw his mobile on the seat besides him and increased the accelerator…now his car waz in d speed of light….he waz driving rele fast to reach home and rescue his heer….

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Sooooo sorrryyyyyy for the delay guys…as my net is not working properly….I ll wait for ur replies….plz reply….i ll reply to u all when my net is fixed...plz dont mind na😳😳

Wid love

PARTH😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hii
m not much of a FF reader but I dont know what made me read yours
I remember reading the first part and went on to read all the 13 parts at a stretch
I loved they way u narrate things.I could imagine everything.
good work👏
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oh man..so much happened all of a sudden..I must say u r doing a very good job with this FF..really..one moment they r having light conversation and cute scene and the next Tapish comes..huh..man..too good..waiting to see how Prem rescues everyone..
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SOOOOOOOOOOO sorry to reply late....my net waz not working properly na..thats y...here r my replies....hehe...😛



Originally posted by: pm rocks

oh okay...well then i might be able to read and reply you on friday since its friday😆 n i get off from college early...so will be waiting😳



ur wait is over here is the next part😃
wid love
PARTH😊


Originally posted by: zenia

very nice update bro....

thank god heer ko kuch nai hua......
and i really liked the dresses which u hav choosen...
mansi and preet track is awsome.....



thanks...i m happy that u liked d dresses coz i m horrible when it cums to chose sumthing 😆😆
wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: premeer fan

your writing is awesome i read love story premeer . she ask me to read her favourite ff .she is right .

awesome work do up date me with your new part please


hey gud to have u here...ya i ll surely update it...i usually do it on fridays ...once in a week...as i m a college student and i m busy in studies too....i loved that u also started to read it...😳😳

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PARTH😊

Originally posted by: atop

heylo bhaiyya lolz......
how r you........hmmmmmmmmm ammmmmmm extremely sry for havinf replied this late...gosh i was damn busy u noe na....have extremely hectic schedule whole september....donno how things will turn out and plus am really in a hectic situation....hmm chalo behna ko maaf kardo..hmm i liked the part as ussual bhaiyya par yeh kya tapish abhi tak khula ghoom raha hai..lolz he needs to'be stopped now..aap is villian ko hatao and p-h ki shaadi kyun late ho rahi hai.......grrrrrr now arnav has joined hands'with him uffff 'dod'do musibat...aap ko humein satane mein bahot mazza aata hai ............hehe aww just luved it bhaiyya as usual...aakhir'mere bhaiyya ho toh asar hoga hi na..chalo take care........and'haan'next update soon okiz.....



luv atop



ohho ab mai kya bolun sis...i m just finne...as u noe me....hehe....dont worry everythng ll be fine...hey no sorry ok...dont start again d silsila of sorries...ya ph ki shadi late ho rahi hai but ont worry sirf late hui hai cancel nahi...sis tum to janti ho mai kitna naughty hu...as u noe me very weellllll...to phir ....aur tum meri behen ho to aur badmasshi karni padti hai....hehe lols next update is here...

wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

ohno arnav tooo?hhhhh and premmerr marriage delayed again something bad going to happen ?oh anyways bhaiya nice promo very good i will be waiting for the part too

lov
Tanya



hey tanya dont worry yaar as u noe na mere ff me nothing bad is going to happen atleast no1 is going to die..hehe....well thanks...adn next part is here ...wait is over...

wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hello Parth..nice promo..looking forward to read the next part of the FF..



hey next part is here....thanks...

wid love
PARTH😊


Originally posted by: pm rocks

nice promo...looking forward for the update bhaiya...



hey sis here is ur update plz read n reply😳😳


wid love
PARTH😊

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

awesome promo

omg arnav is evil 2? i changed my mind i dont feel bad for him anymore.
can't wait to read the update



hehe i told u dont feel bad for him...and ur wait is over here is ur next part😃
😃
wid love
PARTH😊



Originally posted by: NeIN

Hii

m not much of a FF reader but I dont know what made me read yours
I remember reading the first part and went on to read all the 13 parts at a stretch
I loved they way u narrate things.I could imagine everything.
good work👏



aww thanks for joining dear....its chhooo sweeettttt of u..😃😃.well i m glad u liked it....thanks for the compliment.😳😳..i ll never let u down...i ll try to improve more n more...thanks for clapping dear...😃




Originally posted by: ranrags

oh man..so much happened all of a sudden..I must say u r doing a very good job with this FF..really..one moment they r having light conversation and cute scene and the next Tapish comes..huh..man..too good..waiting to see how Prem rescues everyone..



hehe...thanks allloootttt for the compliments dear...its all ur and every1's support that i m here and writing a story...the credit goes to all my readers...😃😃in future u ll have more turns and twists....i hope u ll like them😳😳


wid love
PARTH😊




Edited by Parth Garewal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bhaiya realy nice but lil angry wid u as when i was about to scroll down to see prem's heroism the part was ended lol anyways kya batao it was really nice amazig and superb will be eagerly waiting for the next bhaiya
till then tc bye
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update .eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Wowwwww bro....u rockz...Prem anger on panditji...really superb...and their love...but arnav & tappish😡....save heer bhayya...let prem save heer....plzzzzzzz...aur hamara preet ko bhi...

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