Bewajah Muskura deta hai yeh Dard - Page 7

Originally posted by: pari_farista

aww awesome...hun...very well written ...totally luv'd it....

100000000/10 😃 😃

Awwwwwww yayayy Itnay tou I never got in any of my evaluation..;.
Shukriyaaaaaaa faristaaaaaa😳

Originally posted by: -Faith-

Apne hi rang may rang di uss nay meri saansey, meri rooh
Mere wajood may laga de aag uss ka ik bhi ansoo

~ OH Wowwie Sweeto Appo👏👏 Your a poet as well!!👏 A very talented one too👏👏 It really flowed!! So beautifully!
~ ^ I liked the bit above esp because it really does reflect Prem love for Heer so well! I loved the rhyming scheme as well👏👏👏 Please do write more!! They are a treat to read!👏👏

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Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~

~ OH Wowwie Sweeto Appo👏👏 Your a poet as well!!👏 A very talented one too👏👏 It really flowed!! So beautifully!
~ ^ I liked the bit above esp because it really does reflect Prem love for Heer so well! I loved the rhyming scheme as well👏👏👏 Please do write more!! They are a treat to read!👏👏

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heheh Oumzoo naahhh me not a poet at all .. Just a random one off... Boredom-no-net syndrome thingy lol...
And I m glad u liked it.. It was just I dunno random😳
Thankooo for ur shweet words bachaa *hug*

Originally posted by: ~*~sabz~*~

*aweeeeeeeeeeeshhhhhhhhhommmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeee*
lubx it

Shukriyaaaaaaa Saba😳

aap ka bhi shulriya itna aachi poem likhen ka 😆

Originally posted by: ~*~sabz~*~

aap ka bhi shulriya itna aachi poem likhen ka 😆

hehehe Arre phir tou Meray pyaare internet ka shukriya for not working that day.. And meriii pyaari Nupu ko shukriya for daaling the shayari keera in my head.. and merri pyaari Rakshoo ko shukriya for making me post it here😳

Originally posted by: -Faith-

hehehe Arre phir tou Meray pyaare internet ka shukriya for not working that day.. And meriii pyaari Nupu ko shukriya for daaling the shayari keera in my head.. and merri pyaari Rakshoo ko shukriya for making me post it here😳

ooohooo aacha yaara subbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa shhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuukkkkkkkkkkrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiyyyyy yyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaa

now happy😛

Originally posted by: ~*~sabz~*~

ooohooo aacha yaara subbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa shhhhhhhhhuuuuuuuuuuuuuukkkkkkkkkkrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiyyyyy yyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaa

now happy😛

Hehehe awwwwww how shweet..
Bery happy😳