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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello All,

I'm really begging appologise from the core of my heart for hagging you all. Actually was real busy these days!

Harzana bhara...Thora longer part post kiya..Dekho 😆 😆

Ab tum log...."Inteha Hogayi Intezaar ki...Ayi nah kuch khabar Raisu ki FF ki..." 😆 😆 Gane ke pehli hi lo main hazir hogayi...😳

Please Read & Comment...And hosake toh maaf kardena for lots of mistakes! 😃

Part #4

Juneja House:

Meher was coming after see offing Prem & Heer. On her Way she had a hit someone coming very fast from the home. She looked up and saw it was none other than, PREET!

Preet said, "Uffo Tum dekh ke nahin chal sakti, Akhein kya piche hai tumhari" Meher got very angry and said slowly crushing her teeths, "Itna lamba Monky Cap (Which he was wearing while visiting the mall) sar per pehnoge toh raasta kaise dikhega, Aur mujhe kehta hai "Dekh Nahin Sakti". Preet asked, "You said something to me?" Meher, "Ji nahin..Mein aapko kya kahungi…Sari galti toh meri hi hai" Preet nodded his head and left the place saying, "Silly Girl" Meher also left the place giving him a mock.

Prem's Car:

While in prem's Car Heer was watching the view from her side of window. Prem looked at her for quite a number of time but as she was not responding nor looking at him, He thought to do something to drag her attention. Prem said to himself, "Kya karoon, Kaise iska ka dhayan batayoon..Yeh toh is taraf dekh hi nahin rahi hai…Kya kahoon"

Suddenly Prem said in a husky voise, "Tum kya Peer Gin Rahi Ho Raaste ki" Heer right then looked at him and said very innocently, "Haan ab tak sirf 250 hi huye hai" Prem to his utter shock said smilingly, "Don't tell me tum such mein peer gin rahi thi" Heer now become really shy & thought to herself, Now what will she answer him? She was actually counting the trees as Prem was not talking with her and she thought not to disturb him. How can she tell that to him now!

As Prem was waiting for the reply, Heer looked at him and slowly said, "Who mein..Kuch kaam nahin tha..issiliye" Prem, "Iss liye Tum Peer ginogi…Heer Tum bhi nah" he smiled childishly. Heer was too shy now, she said, "App bhi toh mujhse baat nahin kar rahe the…" saying this she bitted her tounge…"Omg, What I've said to HIM"

Prem smiled & said, "Ohhh toh tum abbb mujhpe dosh dal rahi ho…Tum bhi toh kab se..Udhar dekhrahi thi" Heer in a shocking tone replied, "Iska maatlaam app mujhe dekh rahe the…..mera maatlaab..woh mein" Prem, "Tumhara maatlaab mein samaj gaya..Per mein tumko dekh raha tha sirf tumse baat karne ke liye…Aur kuch bhi nahin..." Heer looked down .....very shy to meet his eyes now!

Prem's eye sighted her shy look and to make her comfortable he said, "Verna itna lamba safar kaise katega!" Heer said, "Lamba?" in an astonish tone. Prem, "Haan lamda toh hai, pure Char gante" Heer remembered gayetri's word as she said Prem will drop her office now then full team will go together in companies conveyor. But office is just 20 mins away from home. How can that be 4 hours?

Heer asked, "Per hum toh office jaa rahe hai nah, aur phir wahaan se sath sath challenge nah sub shimla" Prem smiled and thought, "Yes he did all this arrangements to have his lady love for some time….alone with him, only with HIM. That's why he told gayetri that thing!" That's why Heer is so surprised.

Prem took a deep breath and replied, "Haan woh last moment pe arrangements change hogaya." Heer, "Per aap ne mujhe bataya khun nahin…mein samjhi" Prem, "Per hum toh High Way pe agaye hai already, I thought tum samaj gayi…as you were looking outside all the way." Heer now become real shock and thought, " Haan so toh hai…per mujhe pata hi nahin chala…Ab yeh pure 4 ghantee inke sath gujar ne parenge..Hai Rabba!"

Watching her is deep thought Prem said, "Waise tum daar kyu rahi ho…mein koi sheer ya chita thori na hoon…jo tumhe kha jayunga" and smiled cheekily! Heer smiled this time hearing HIM but was also anxious what gonna happen on this journey!

Prem tuned the redio on and there was some show going on where people requesting a song to play. Just after opening the radio a song floated in…..

Tose Nainaa Laage ….. Tose Nainaa Laage

Tose Nainaa Laage Piyaa Savren

Nahi Basamein Ab Ye Jiyaa Savren..

Tose Nainaa Laage Piyaa Savren

Nahi Basamein Ab Ye Jiyaa Savren…..

Prem, "Yeh Toh Mera Favourite ganna"….Heer, "Mera Favourite gaana.." They both said at the same time! They looked at each other and their eye locked!

Muhobbat To Ek Jaavedaa Jindagi Hai

Muhobbat To Ek Jaavedaa Jindagi Hai

Tose Nainaa Laage

Mili Roshani Tose Man Jo Laagaa Mili Jindagi

Tose Nainaa Laage Mili Roshani

Tose Man Jo Laagaa Mili Jindagi

Muhobbat To Ek Jaavedaa Jindagi Hai

Muhobbat To Ek Jaavedaa Jindagi Hai

Muhobbat Ki Hai Daasataa Jindagi

Muhobbat Naa Ho To Kahaa Jindagi

Muhobbat Ki Hai Daasataa Jindagi

Muhobbat Naa Ho To Kahaa Jindagi

Muhobbat To Ek Jaavedaa Jindagi Hai

Tose Nainaa Laage…..

They felt like going in another world….where there are only two souls deep in love…Nothing eles! They both started to remember their past memories; mesmerizing days…..Full of innocent love! The love which they felt for each other….the heart that beats only for each other….Which an angel can give that was given to them by each other. In their heart and on there mind, This is where They're living! Their eyes were shining bright, when everything is dark, They can give each other light. They're an angel for each other…Who have come to this world only for each other.

Their Eye's were saying to each other…

You're the angel that makes me live another day,

You're my angel and you'll always care,

You're my angel and I know I'll always be there for you!

They were completely lost in each others eye, But suddenly a Horn of a vehicle lead them back to reality! Prem gave side to that car & heer looked by the side of her window! They both were not looking at each other as they were not in a position to look at each others eye…they both thought if He/she can read my eyes…then what gonna happen, song keeps going….

Tose Nainaa Laage ….. Tose Nainaa Laage

Tose Nainaa Laage Piyaa Savren

Nahi Basamein Ab Ye Jiyaa Savren

Tose Nainaa Laage Piyaa Savren

Nahi Basamein Ab Ye Jiyaa Savren…..

Both expelled a heavy breath remembering their love for each other. Heer's nerves had calmed and her face was no longer flushed with uncomforting, she suddenly realized she is feeling better now… just a min before her heart had even stopped its feral hammering and was also uncomfortable with PREM beside her…..but now everything is feeling so good to her! She thought is she was dreaming for something really happening with her.

The car was suddenly too cold; shiver was running down from her spine. She looked up slowly…. and her eyes met familiar deep brown eyes. In a strong…..clear defined face. A face she knew too well, because it had stayed always in her mind in her heart. Her mouth, which had opened automatically to say something but she didn't at last! Prem saw her shivering a bit. He stopped for a second and caught his breath; his heart was beating double time.He stooped the car on road side. His deep voice rang out in stunned silence suddenly, "Heer?" She turned at him and looked up at him. She looked deep at his eyes again and replied, "Ji?"

He spoke kindly, "Tumhe thand lag rahi hai? AC kum kar du?" he right then turned off the AC and looked at her in a caring sight. Heer was about to say something just then PREM took out a Jacket of him from car's back seat and keep covering her with that. Heer almost went back from her seat. Totally hugging her back with the car seat as Prem was real close to her. She looked down & said in trembling voice, " Yeh mein..Yeh Toh Appka" Prem just then pleaced his hand on his lips and said, "Shhhhhhhhh" He keep continued doing his work, Covering her with his coat!

Heer suddenly felt so good, as if she is in a protective hand….which will keep her away from any danger of life! A sweet smile appeared in her face as she can feel the fragnant of HIS body under her breath!

To Be Continued……

Pre-Cap: Prem Heer in A Tea Shop.

Quoted Symone Raven beautiful poem, "You'r Angel"

Edited by Jai & Bani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
haila the ending....sshhhhhhhhhh😍

again Rasia u out did urself... another great entry.... 👏

loved the way u used Harshad's favourite song.....

cnt wait till next update.... chai kya rang layega, dekh na payega!!!! 😉
Edited by salma_786786 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
wow u finally updated...abhi pad kar i'll comment 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
wow...it was so awesome 👏 👏 👏 I love premeer scenes...they are cute and romantic 😛 It's like II can picture this in my head as I read...it's really cool. update soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65

ohh itsss great😳heer counting tree😆😆😆could imagine prem giving a look of what!it's true!!!she was actually counting treesss😆he was actually wanting to draw her attention towards him awww😳prem should better pay more attention...not on heer but on driving😆😆😆

there was a preet-meher alcho in the part😳love them!please do bring more and more on them aswell😳😳😳preet looked sooo *umuhhh**cough* in that topa😍😍😍

this time continue sooon moi cho wanting to read more😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
HEYYY...just started to read ur fan fic...n i must say tht its simply mindblowing...n i after readin ur fic i cant help bt wonder....tht y cudnt u b da runnin da actual show instead of ekta:P...nywayz eagerly w8in 4 da nxt part so do upd8 soon:)
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
heyyy... i jst read all ur parts today... wow.. ur an awesome writer...keep it up 😃 ...prem n heer r sooooooooooooo cute... js luv dem... plz continue soooon... ur doin a fabulous job 👏 👏 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
#68
Raz di!!

👏

You deserve that!
Beutiffuly written!
Ever thought of writing as a career?
I would SO buy the book!!
Keep writing!

Shabz
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69

I agree with Shabo.. I wud SO buy that book too..
Ras😃 I just lubbbbbbbbbeddd ur update...
It was so beautifully done!👏
The poem u used! Beautiful and Purrfecto!
Loved how u added the perfectttttttt song!
It was sooo cutee.. esp the parts of counting trees and the wrapping of the jacket....
And come on dont say sowwie.. Your updates are truly always worth the wait😃
And u left us at such a cliff hanger.. no fair hehe...
Will wait for the next part.. bery patiently *giggles*
*gibs tight huggie to ras*
*gibs a box of chocolates and a bouqet of pink roses*
Thank you for such a fab ff and such a fab update😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
Raisuuuuuuuu
sorry yaar i m too busy that hvnt commented on ur other post yet 😭 😭

that was a fabulous update
yaar how do u write
i was all 😳
looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovelyyyyyyyyy yaaar
great part 👏
plz cont soon

PS- Prem can drive car looking in Heers eyes!!reminds me of the movie 'Too Fast Too Furious' 😛 😆

PPS- ya ofcourse i was ready to kick you 🤣 🤣
Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago

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