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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

@Ras di: mere bari bahna!!! is someone getting a lil teary!...go see my mothers day post in Kyunki section...it applies to u too.

Hey little..I've written there...words of my heart! 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Melissa

Thankx a ton for commenting on my FF, Yeah i've done that intentionaly....😳 😳 I'll try to Update soon...😉

The request is very good darling...But s i'm not that Spicy like Preet so don't know how much i'll be able to create his comments But i'll try to do my level best! 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ghia

Thankx a lot darling! I'm glad that you LOVED it! 😃 😃 😃

I'll do that soon....Thinking about good Preer scene 😉

Posted: 17 years ago
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Aww rasia di!!!!! (*tigggggggggght huuuuuuuuuuug*
loved ur comments! thanks!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey..please update it soon..and dun forget to pm me.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Thank you soo much to my luvly readers🤗 . Your comment really means a lot to me, it insparises me a lot to do better works 😳 😳 And really sorry for the long pause, was really busy guy's... almost floating with FF's, Video Mixes & studies...😆 😆 😆

No more bak bak Here goes, Will be wait for ur luvly comments....

Part #3

After deciding Meher will stay with Gayetri. Prem, Meher & Heer came out from Juneja house. Meher was looking very Happy, so Heer was also very assured now! She was thinking in herself how will now she THANK Prem who have taken so many burden JUST FOR Her!

As Meher was looking at them Meher thought to give them a little bit time to talk as they will never speak up without her doing anything! So Meher suddenly said, "Didi, Aap Prem ji ka shukriya Adda kijiye…Mein Zara Aati hoon." Heer felt like catch Meher so that she doesn't go away & they become alone. But Meher's move was so fast that she ran away from the spot giving a *Wink* to heer. Heer's eye almost popped up…." Haye Rabba, What this girl is up to now." But Prem smiled naughtily looking at heer….Heer's heart started bitting fast as usual seeing Prem ALONE with her!

After a moment Later….. Heer said, "Ji mein Aap ka Shukriya kaise adda karun…Aap mere liye …." Just then Prem placed his hand on heer's mouth & looked deeply in her eyes. Heer looked very frightened to the sudden move of Prem. Prem said, "Ji haan maine itni Takleef sirf tumhare liye uthayi…Kyunki…....Kyunki….Kyunki…" Every passing moment seems to Heer like passing ages. She can't took it anymore…But "what gonna prem tell her now?" this was spinning through her head. "What will she do if Prem tell her those three magical WORDs" Prem was enjoying the effects he has on her. When Prem moved his hand from Heer's mouth she right then said, "Kyunki….?" Prem said looking deep in her eyes, coming very close to her…..only a inch spacing in between…"Kyunki…Tum meri……….......... company ki manager ho!....Aur Mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai…..I mean meri Project ko.." Hearng this Heer felt like….BLANKED. Prem runs his hand through his hair. Prem gave her a naughty smile & moved a bit. Heer took a deep breath which of course was not missed by Prem.

To Make Heer little bit comfortable Prem speaks up, "Tumhari tayari sub hogayi hai nah…Kisi cheze ki zaroorat toh nahin hai nah" Heer replied negatively….She was not in a position to answer anything….she just wanted to run away from him. Prem was so happy to see the effects he has on her…"That means something is surely between us" Heer said, "Mein chalti hoon..bohout der gogayi hai…" Prem replied, "Acha thik hai….Good night" Heer also bid him good night. They both turned there face from each other & started moving in opposite direction. Prem was running his hand through his head & thinking, "OMG…I love this girl crazily….I loved teasing her….When a red shadow appears in her face….I loved that look, When she says's, 'Ji' confusingly I loved that look….When her breathing becomes heavier seeing me closer to her…I love that one…OMG I love her like hell…I love her sooo much"

In the mean while heer was also thinking, "Mein kyun Prem ki taraaf jhuki jarahi hoon, Kya rishta hai mere sath Prem ka, Prem toh Ashlesha ka hai…Phir bhi kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai..Ki Mein…." After a deep pause…'Pyar…" Her heart almost skipped a beat now…she thought, "Nahin nahin aisa kaise ho sakta hai, Woh kyun mujhse pyar karega…Per…"

Just then meher shouted, "Didi, Aap dono ki baatein Khataam hogayi hai toh plz ajao mujhe sona hai." Heer came home quickly & thought, "Is ladki ka toh kuch karma parega, bohout bollne lagi hai aaj kaal….Kuch bhi bolti hai" But when she came to her room Meher was in deep sleep, So she just covered her with a comforter & went to change!

Next Morning, 7:00 am

The light of the sunshine from the middle of the both side of the curtains at the window hit Heer's face. She opened her eyes to wake up but she wrapped again to hide her face from sunshine. She looked at her side and saw Meher cuddling there, sleeping deeply. She thought to be fresh first then she will wake up Meher. After waking up, she strait away went to the window to open it and welcome the new day. After freshing up she came out of the bathroom, wearing light blue Salwar Kames with white dupatta. After she finished her dressing and combed her hair well, she left her hair open and started preparing her side of bed. She than went strait away to "Pooja Ghar". After praying to god for a safe journey & healthy stay of Meher, she went to the kichen to make breakfast. After she finished preparing the breakfast dressed the dining table, she called out loud saying "Meher, Jaldi utho…..Breakfast Ready hai" But she knows very well that she will not wake up unless she go & back her up. So smiling a bit she went to Meher's room & saw her sleeping in an 18O* position. She thought to herself, "Kya hoga is larki ka, Mere ilava kuch nahin kar sakti yeh." She now started shaking her up, "Areee baba utho nahhh.....Kitna soyegi yeh larki. Der hogayi hai baba....Uthooooo" This time to heer's utter shock Meher didn't do anything just woke up & sat on the bed. She knows very well today that Heer will go to Shimla, so she get dressed and came to the dining table early. As they sat down they start having their breakfast silently as heer will be late if they started their chatting now!

They finished having their breakfast silently. A moment later Meher said, "didi aapne sari tyari karli na, kuch reh toh nahin gaya." Heer looked at her lovingly and replied, "Haa Meri Maa, Hogaya sub kuch…bas abhi 30 mins mein nikalne wali hoon, Per tujhse mujhe kuch baat karni thi" Saying this heer made her sit in a chair & she also sat with her, "Meher, Tu thik se rehna yahaan, haan… Koi pareshani ho toh mujhe phone karna…Chachi (Prem's Mum) bohot achi hai, unnhone tumhe yahaan rehni ki izajaat di…isiliye unhe satana maat…Aur haan khane pine ka khayal rakhna, mein yahaan nehin hoon..Koi laparvayi maat karma, Thik hai?" Smiling naughtily Meher replied, "Diiiiii, aap bhi naa, Ab mein bacha thori na hoon…mein apna khayal rakh sakti hoon..Aap meri chinta bilkul maat kijiye". Heer hugged her baby sister tightly and said, "Haaa tu toh meri bhi Maa hai" and they both bust into laughter.

After a moment later Bhavesh (Juneja's Butler) came to call Meher and Heer as it's time for leave. Heer & Meher came along with bhavesh to the living room of Juneja House, where everybody was waiting to see them off.

Seeing Meher and Heer gayetri came towards them & said, "Sari tayari hogayi, beta?" Heer nodded assertively, "Ji, Aunty woh..…" Gayetri said, "Haan beta bolo" Hesitated a bit Heer replied, "Aunty mein Meher ko aap ke pass chor ke jarahi hoon, isse pehle woh hamare ilava kisike sath akeli nahin rahin. Isse agar koi bhool hojaye toh Maaf kar dena." Gayetri replied lovingly, "Are beta..yeh bhi koi kehni ki baat hai. Tum bilkul chinta maat karo, Yeh toh bilkul meri Veera jaisi hai. Tum uski chinta bilkool maat karo". Saying thanks to Gayetri heer took her blessing & said, "Toh Aunty mein chalti hoon." Just then gayetri said in a shock tone, "Kahaa...Tumhe toh prem chorne wala hain office tak…Phir wahaan se company ke bus se tum sab ek sath jayogi, Prem ne tumhe kuch bataya nahin?" This time it was a real shock for heer. She never thought how the arrangement was and didn't even ask anyone. She have to go with prem now……how she will go alone with HIM in his car, She was in a deep thought.

Just then Prem said in a deep voice, "Maa hum chalete hain, bohot der hogayi hai…" Heer looked at Prem, and her eye just locked there…he was looking so HOT today, in black T-shirt with blue denim jeans. She couldn't even take her eyes off. She thought to herself, "Mujhe yeh kya ho raha hai…Mein yeh sub kya soch ne lagi hoon." She blushed at her own thought, which was not missed by Prem, of course!

As they bid good bye to everyone including Meher, Preet, Gayetri, Lalit they came out of the house. Just then heer said very slowly, "Aap ne mujhe bataya kyun nahin?...ki main aapke sath…" Pream replied cheekily, "Agar pehle bataya hota toh kya tum bhag jati?" Hearing this heer looked at once in prem's face & her tongue slipped, "Ji" remembering prem's last night comment about "Ji" she bitted her lips. Prem laughed cheekily at her innocence. To make her little more comfortable he said, "Chale…Gari wahaan hai!" Without uttering a single word heer walked along with him towards the car. They just reachead to the car and prem came to Heer's side to open the door just then.....Meher came running towards them with a bowl in her hand shouting, "Didiiiiiii…..Rukiye"

Prem and heer both looked back shockingly and soon Meher reached closer to heer & prem. Heer said, "Kya hua Meher, Koi problem hai..?" As meher came running she was now breathing very fast so she said slowly, "Di aap ache kaam se jarahi nah, Maa bauji hamesha kehti thi….Ache kaam pe jane se pehle Dahi Shakkar khake jate hain…issiliye mein aapke liye…" Before finishing Heer cutted her saying, "Meher…tu" her throat almost filled with glumes remembering her Mom & dad…but she controlled her & took one spoon of Dahi from meher with a smiling face and kiss her on the both cheeks. They were leaving just then meher again said, "Prem ji aap bhi…yeh dahi" Prem and heer both looked shocked as there was only one spoon from which just Heer ate. Prem came towards her and said to meher, "Agar tum chahti ho toh…mein khaunga per ek shart per.." Meher looked at Heer questionly. Prem said, "Call me Prem bhaiya…iske baad hi khaunga" Meher & prem both laughed out loud. But heer was standing quietly there.

Meher than said, "Thik hai aaj se Prem Bhaiya…Per ek problem hai…Chamach toh ek hi hai.." and she continued, "Per koi baat nahin aap khalijiye varna der hojayegi…" And she looked straightly into heer's eye to see her reaction…and as she guessed it right..heers eye almost popped up. But she didn't waste a bit but gave a spoon of Dahi to prem..who willingly took it giving a *wink* at Meher. Later on he stretched Mehers cheeks & said good bye to her.

Heer was going towards the back seat of the Prem's black Mercedes Ben's, Just then prem said, "Are madam…Samne bathiye.." Heer said in a hesitated voice, "Samne?" Prem replied, "Haan samne….Mein aapka driver toh hoon nahin, jo aap piche bathe…." Heer smiled a bit at her foolishness & took her seat at front. Sitting on the seat and taking a deep breath she thought, "Yaatra se pehle hi itna kuch hogaya…Aab rab jane aur kya kya baki hai." Prem also took his seat & looked at his side where heer was sitting closing her eyes…he started his car without saying a word.

To Be Continued……

Please leave ur comments, Good or Bad...I'll be ever grateful to you guy's!😳

Raisa

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Posted: 17 years ago
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is reserving allowed...sorry but i'll read it pura ache se and would leave my comment 'ere 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ofcourse allowed hai yaar...Read when you are free no jaldi 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
Really good Fanfic Raisa 👏 👏
Love PH though Prem seems a bit naughty😳

Please do continue soon😃

May
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Posted: 17 years ago
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okok i read bothe parts i.e 2nd and this one...its soooo cute😳Heer is having effect of prem....and prem enjoys seeing that😳😛..awww prem bhaiya for meher😳...both of them are sitting together in the car😳kya baaaaaaat haiiiiiiiiii...do cont soon😃

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