Fatima's Cozy Corner 3 - Final Update on Pg 114 :) - Page 48

Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima we'll enjoy cake for your come back 🤡

Originally posted by: AASUS

For you 🤗 my goofy trial 🤡 - it kinda suit the last ch. scenes 😆

Originally posted by: AASUS

Yay new update 🥳

Fatima showed up woohoo Fatima so sad no one asked for you while you were away😭
Phir b you came and updated for lil old me 😆 It's like you took the crowd away with you 😆

At least you were here Athisda...you are the rock of this forum...no matter how busy you or everyone gets...you still make time to keep the threads and our spirit alive ...🤗

oh you know I was excited to read this update.

This was fun 😆 dialogues rock 😎 hehe the Decent hotel was - some choice for a name 😆 Creative 👏

You got the joke...right? 😆

Meher and Kuljeet phone convo was weird - Kuljeet was really that clueless and she was polite to Meher? More importantly Meher is not scared of her anymore ? 😲 Very surprised.

I have to say I really dislike Meher's dad - useless guy. I don't think he's any use to anyone. Seriously he's so clueless what is happening to his daughter, knowing how his wife treats Meher, he should talk to Meher more frequently to see how she is. When she calls, he's ill 😲 lol No sympathy if he's indeed sick. This guys is worse than Bauji.

You have it in for Meher's father from the very beginning...maybe I should have killed him off instead of Teji 😆

Having said that rest of the update was fun.

Reversed psychology was fun. Meher's sometimes a village idiot and other times very smart. I dunno wt to make of her. Although I understood her fear after having been with Viren - which she voluntarily put herself through.

Some of the words cracked me up from Meher as well as Preet. "Double awful" is one 😆

Y'know Fatima this chapter seem like a story of it's own rather than a part of this FF 😲 CZ it's so detailed and so riveting. One scene to the next is that good - the way you moved the scenes. 🤗 I'm so proud of you. Couldn't help grinning looking back how beautifully you wrote every bit of detail.

Awww...that's a huge compliment...😳...thank you...🤗

The story and concept is on one side - people could criticize or praise you for it.

But the story telling is another side - I really enjoy it in this FF more than in any other story you've ever written. 🤗 lob you.

Woohoo

Originally posted by: Chit15

Thanks for pm and a much awaited update

I was checking my inbox from last few days to see is there any mail from you. And finally I got your mail. :-)

Wow it was full of Meet moments so sweet

Preet is so adorable and his love for Meher is so genuine

Cute moments of meet made my day

Awesome and sweet update :-)

Please update soon

Originally posted by: .sweetchick.

Fatima! 😳

You're back! 🤗

you disappeared kya? 😆

Something like that...just kidding...was too busy with the new house...some renovations are going on that taking forever to get done...plus with work and Ramadan preparations, I'm just not getting any proper time to write. 😕

Spectacular update! I was not expecting this for sure...😲 but awww Preet is getting so adorable day after day, he loves Meher so much yet he knows that he'll have to be really careful about her... Love the way he tries to protect her and make her feel better...😳

Meher is totally herself! Really cute with her antics and down to earth as well. She's realistic unlike Preet and is really anxious about how to announce her break up to all her family...😕

Such a cute and sweet moment they shared...😳

Next update is going to be another phataka for sure! Can't wait!!!!!😎

Fatima my baby YOU ROCK!!!!🤗