Fatima's Cozy Corner 3 - Final Update on Pg 114 :) - Page 24

Originally posted by: tarannum6

wowww AMAZING update
loved it
love family sceans
thanks for the pm :)
please update next part soon

Originally posted by: Nataliaaa

Thnx for pm and updating . I like the family gathering thank god lalit j wasnt here. And abt veru can we plz send him to mars or even further away. Meher in a dress show cleavage can u blame poor preet for being uncomfortable with her tha look.i love kulraaj even more now as she doesnt like viru either 😛

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi Fatima!!!!

So today is 17th and I am back as I promised and now I have a lot of writing to do lol when I came here and started reading I just realised I missed out 6 wonderful chapters and since I got time I read it all at once and before I tell anything else I have to let you know that they were just fabulous. Your writing always bring a smile to my face and the one person who is a constant charmer for me is the way you portray preet. You are the best when it comes to write about preet. Ok so let us just move on to the chapters.

Hi Bhagyashree! 🤗

How are you? I hope your exams went well. 👍🏼

Yes...you are a girl of your word...and you're back with your honest feedback...which I really really appreciate. Ooo...so you got to read 6 chapters in a stretch...that's the best way 😆

Chapter 27:

After the kiss thing I was actually wondering how will meher react and how the story will move forward. See there is no denial from both the sides that they love each other very very much and it's just the feeling of helping the junejas that is stopping meher from accepting her feelings openly but what is she getting herself into. Marrying someone whom she doesn't like will only complicate her life.

Well I loved the effect that kiss had on meher but her bad luck immediately after that magical moment she had to encounter that idiot viren. He is such a cheap I tell you. When he asked meher about dodging him I was like yes dude with a cartoon like you everyone will dodge you. Oh god I was laughing when he just caught meher with her flushed face and then meher's sarcastic comment over the behavior of friends.

Finally preet came back to the party and to his bad luck he encountered with lalit and Rampal and their stupid talks. Even I was annoyed when I read about lalit drinking I thought just because he lost his wife he would atleast regret and stay away from alcohol but no he just can't change. Well anyways coming back to Meet. I just hate when that idiot viren talks I mean how can someone speak so much even when he have nothing that great to talk or when he have actually not done so great yet. Is he really a doctor???? I mean how can an idiot like him get a respectable profession like that. Poor preet he was so much heart broken yaar. My heart really goes out to him, he is trying so Dam hard but things are just not falling into place and each and every new day brings a new shock for him.

Yes...Viren is a real doctor. He's even worked hard and quite self-made...but uff! Does he have a mouth! He's a little too proud of himself...He counts every penny and he has no tact when it comes to anything that comes out of his mouth. 😕

And that stupid called preet meher's older brother!!!!! How dare he doesn't he know that he is the hero of this story. I am sure our writer over here will make him realize soon. But keeping that apart I am actually falling in love with all the self talks that preet does I mean in his self talk he is just so natural where he is plain honest and a lot funny like this ogling thing over here I was really laughing like hell. And when that viren was trying to come close to Meher I really felt like killing him and what a big wannabe he is yaar. He is actually just interested with the contacts that he thinks he may get because of Meher but I have to credit one thing to him he is a cheap and he openly display that side of him. Aww preet must be feeling so miserable.

That iis true...it's not like he's madly in love with Meher. he likes her..and is happy with his marriage being arranged with her...but in the end he's loooking out for the benefits he's been promised by Daljeet if he goes through with the match.

But this fighting MEET are rather cute I must say but hey why can't this chaddhi keep his hands off of Meher he dragged her to the dance but the way preet made him leave was rather hilarious I must say. No one can beat preet when he is I to the revenge mode plus even meher can't win against him in the argument he is simply the best. All in all I enjoyed this chapter a lot but since it had a lot of viren into it I had a dull and sulking feeling as well. I hope we get rid of him soon though and I am really waiting for the actual MEET romance to start.

So I am done with chapter 27 and I will be back with another soon.

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hey Fatima

I am back again and now moving on with chapter 28

It started again with the confrontation of MEET. Honestly speaking for a min I thought preet was just not done with kissing meher and he is again into that mood... Lol but you can't blame me the way he came close to her during the dance and the way he dragged her it just gave that feeling you see

But coming back to the confrontation we that was very beautifully written with the right amount of fun and emotions. Both preet and meher's feelings could be understood very clearly as well as their helplessness. But you know the best part is the effect preet have on meher and then the way she becomes nervous around him. I really don't know why does she try to hide her feelings when she knows that she can't lie in front of him and if that was not enough she was trying to threaten him by saying that she will shout lol seriously meher you think you will say and he will believe.

I loved the way preet said that he can't let her go and I also love this jealous preet I mean in the earlier stories we just got a glimpse of the jealous preet which was short lived but over here we will get to see that in abundance since over here meher is in denial mode and that cheap doesn't leave a chance to come close to her. And when at the end it felt like he was going to actually kiss her Sam and gaurav came like kabab main haddi. Buts it's fine I am sure you are gonna give a lot many chances for preet to do that.

Then came preet and balraaj conversation, I was seriously in fits of laughter when preet said abhi toh rishta judnewala hai and saw meher. Oh god this guy is really good at his dialogue delivery lol I know most of the time he makes blunder but when he is on a mission he knows exactly what he has to say and of that dialogue has to be directed towards meher then he cannot go wrong.

Now I am getting accustomed to the fact that every good conversation will get interrupted by that idiot viren and for now we have to bear with him but hey can we just do something which would lead him to loose his voice, I mean whenever he opens his mouth I feel like killing him right at the moment. He is just so annoying. But now I won't comment about him because in reality I am trying to avoid him. But I do think that even he is on some mission and one of which is getting high contacts but I feel like there is more to it, I mean I could be wrong but right now all these negative characters are very confusing and weird.

Finally preet was successful in making meher stay back, though it is a good idea from the point of view from preet and US MEET fans considering we get to read more of them being together but looking at the situation is it really good I doubt that.

Later on the whole prem - heer scene and then preet and heer scene was really fun to read. Heer care and worry towards preet is so motherly, its like if gaytri helped prem and heer to come together then spot heer is going to fill in preet's life. Lol but poor prem had to go to the guest room because of all this but the make out session later on and the good news was the cherry on the cake and I am sure for a news like this prem can sleep in that guest room for life. And then the conversation between preet and heer where he clearly declared that he is not gonna give up without a fight was so cute yaar and later on his dreamland where he thought about meher was so sweet but the end was superb where he again went into his jealousy mode.

So now done with this chap as well see u again in a short while...

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hey Fatima

Me back again and let's see what chap 29 has in store...

Hello again! 😃

Ok first of all the title is really interesting because it just leaves you guessing about various permutations and combinations lol I mean from the word shopping one can understand that ok they are going on shopping but with the word blues added to it and when you have MEET as ur couple and the writter is fatima all you can do is think and continue thinking lol.

The title pretty much sums up Meet's situation...neither of them want to be shopping of alll things right now. 😆

Now over here me being lucky enough in this case I didn't get a gap of time so that I had to think so much for me all I had to do is start reading and that's what I have done.

The chapter started with our lovely meher again trying to convince Kuljeet and balraaj to take her with them but when the situation is created by preet who knows how to play his cards how can meher even think that she will get her way and top of it she just cannot oppose Kuljeet but still she tried her luck...

Well...I wasn't going to let her go that easily...and neither was Preet! 😆

Then came the entry of the core villains maya and daljeet. You know preet have given the perfect title of cinderella to Meher because in this story she is nothing but cinderella, you see one word and it actually defines meher's situation completely. I love meher to be honest because she is actually taking a very brave step of getting married to someone she doesn't like just to help the guy she loves she by all means is showing the character of selflessness but still yaar looking at preet all this seems so unfair. Ok coming back so daljeet thinks she can trouble preet by keeping meher under her roof and pushing her towards that idiot but hey I guess she is just underestimating our hero here but no worries she will soon find out what is preet capable of.

Then the scene moves towards the intelligent conversation (I am sarcastic over here) between preet and gaurav. I don't understand why is everyone reminding preet that Meher is engaged and then when he explains that he is not gonna leave her the next question is what will you do, I mean over here preet is always in an explaining and declaring mode. Kabhi meher ko samjhata hai toh kabhi apne parivaar ko. Preet is really miserable here yaar because no one has any idea which can help preet but one thing that everyone has is they are scaring the poor fellow. I understand they all are worried but right now I am only thinking from the point of view of preet and I am being a but biased here.

The phone conversation between meher and preet was superb. I actually look forward for these conversations these days because they are very new and very refreshing also they give a strong hope that everything will be fine. But I hate ash and daljeet they are literally making meher work as if she is their servant, I mean they do have servants right but all this they purposely doing to Meher just to humiliate meher, I know this is what is expected from them but still it angers me seeing her suffer.

Well...Daljeet definitely wants to keep Meher under her thumb, because she knows how Preet feels about her. Ash o the other hand is spoiled and just plain dumb. At least that's what we are being made to think. 🤔

So mission find who that idiot viren is started but before that our hero wants to see his heroine and for that he is ready to take all the risk that the world have to throw on them, how romantic is that. I just loved the line that he craved her that one line describes each and every feeling of preet towards meher and why he wants meher in his life and he just can't let her go.

Preet is madly in love with Meher...but the poor guy is just not getting a break. 😭

So to meet meher preet came to the rampal's house. Poor preet just to meet meher he have to tolerate ash. Uff I being a girl cannot tolerate ash I don't know how he manages. But then again the prize for all this was meher. The way ash pounced on preet it was really hilarious, lol I mean I do sympathize with preet but sometimes it's good to see ur favourites in trouble right. Then when preet made meher to cook something for him I was again laughing. Your dialogues are superb I mean the way meher was cursing preet was actually so cute and then preet hearing all this silently and then his flirting with her was superb. You know these days it's like I just look at the update to find some MEET scenes in it even if it is very small because the impact is very strong. So in between the romance ash came back again you know fatima you are leaving no stone unturn to trouble preet in this ff and guess what to further make preet's life miserable she had to take him to shopping and with that word I understood your meaning of blues in the title lol.

@bold: I'm evil...evil I tell you! 😈 😆

The description of shopping that preet gave was so typical male definition, but to be honest though I don't completely agree to the definition even I hate shopping. I just can't keep on looking for stuffs so much. For me I have to like something very soon and if I don't like anything soon enough then I just loose interest and leave that place. OK back to the story well shopping is boring but it becomes more pathetic when you are in unwanted company and for preet it was ash. But as expected he did find his way out to Meher but then again ash came and interrupted but even after all this preet still maintained his focus on what meher is doing and making her choose something for her difficult.

So gaurav called and said that viren is a clean guy but I have a feeling he isn't there is something about him that doesn't meet the eye. Also this gurrinder thing that gaurav said I feel there is something in that as well. I don't know when you are planning to reveal the true colours of all these villains but I have a strong feeling that everything that these people are doing are doing for a reason.

Talking of the devil and the devil arrived. Our super intelligent ash had to invite that idiot so that he can make preet angry and meher uncomfortable with his stupid choices. God does he even think what the other person wants, I mean to him meher is his fiancee so he should consider her feelings as well right but all he cares is about himself. I am really getting irritated with this guy. I hope we get rid of him soon.

The story is really getting interesting fatima. It really has its unique flavour. I had always liked preet and Meher and was really disappointed when in the show they showed their capabilities as a couple in bits and parts but didn't utilized it to the fullest. Preet was the only character in the show who was a balanced person. He knew what is right and what is wrong and he never took any decision under the influence of his lived ones. He even pointed out prem's mistakes who was his idol when he was wrong. And you over here are utilizing all that in this ff. I mean I am getting to see all the qualities of preet and Meher in this ff through all the twist that you are putting up and I am just loving it.