Page 23
The chapter title is there a typo - or does that mean something else.The song was "hum tum ek kamre mein band ho..." just curious title says KamerYou're right it was a typo...I corrected it...Thanks 🤗Preet Gaurav were fun. Like the chat.Yes they are great together...😆Preet was interesting - but Viren is smarter. He gets a brownie point - hey if that guy really is a doc then he slogged some years studying so obviously has brain and used it fully.I don't like Preet's trick or his way of investigating alone. This can only go so far, not only that he would be outsmarted as Meher is not brainless to believe stuff w/o proof.She may nt know all about Viren but she won't believe fabricated story either. I think you wrote this scene well. Her stand is clear - this is the only part of scene I could appreciate Meher.You are right...Viren knows Preet is Meher's "friend"...so he figured Preet may mention something about his behavior to Meher...and he beat Preet to it. Preet is also at a disadvantage because Meher is expecting him to do something to break up her engagement...as a result she is prone to give Viren the benefit of the doubt. 🤔At Rampals Preet rocked in entire scene - it was hilarious to know about ulcer trouble 😆 DJ running behind her hubby. Ash's convo with parents. That was kinda interesting. I was thinking for a moment DJ and RR will have a chat about who the money was being paid.I guess you were building up the story for the secrets or stuff hidden deliberately by RR family.Would like to find out.Yes..this chapter was just to give us a hint that all is not rosey in the Rampal camp 😲Meher doing the bidding of Kuljeet to keep peace in her dad's life has some logic um if we can call that. Slaving for Ashlesha's parents or in a room w/o ac not being able to sleep - who does it benefit ?Does Mr.Rampal know his house keeper not paying attention to do necessary repairs lolFatima you made me like Ash in this story cz I'm looking forward to see her antics as opposed to Meher.Ash is funny...but in a stupid kind of a way. Meher is the good girl...and good characters are not always fun...because they themselves are busy doing what is right rather than having fun.Next chapter seem like some drama coming up. Let's see.