Fatima's Cozy Corner 3 - Final Update on Pg 114 :) - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

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The chapter title is there a typo - or does that mean something else.
The song was "hum tum ek kamre mein band ho..." just curious title says Kamer

You're right it was a typo...I corrected it...Thanks 🤗

Preet Gaurav were fun. Like the chat.

Yes they are great together...😆

Preet was interesting - but Viren is smarter. He gets a brownie point - hey if that guy really is a doc then he slogged some years studying so obviously has brain and used it fully.
I don't like Preet's trick or his way of investigating alone. This can only go so far, not only that he would be outsmarted as Meher is not brainless to believe stuff w/o proof.
She may nt know all about Viren but she won't believe fabricated story either. I think you wrote this scene well. Her stand is clear - this is the only part of scene I could appreciate Meher.

You are right...Viren knows Preet is Meher's "friend"...so he figured Preet may mention something about his behavior to Meher...and he beat Preet to it. Preet is also at a disadvantage because Meher is expecting him to do something to break up her engagement...as a result she is prone to give Viren the benefit of the doubt. 🤔

At Rampals Preet rocked in entire scene - it was hilarious to know about ulcer trouble 😆 DJ running behind her hubby. Ash's convo with parents. That was kinda interesting. I was thinking for a moment DJ and RR will have a chat about who the money was being paid.

I guess you were building up the story for the secrets or stuff hidden deliberately by RR family.
Would like to find out.

Yes..this chapter was just to give us a hint that all is not rosey in the Rampal camp 😲

Meher doing the bidding of Kuljeet to keep peace in her dad's life has some logic um if we can call that. Slaving for Ashlesha's parents or in a room w/o ac not being able to sleep - who does it benefit ?
Does Mr.Rampal know his house keeper not paying attention to do necessary repairs lol
Fatima you made me like Ash in this story cz I'm looking forward to see her antics as opposed to Meher.

Ash is funny...but in a stupid kind of a way. Meher is the good girl...and good characters are not always fun...because they themselves are busy doing what is right rather than having fun.

Next chapter seem like some drama coming up. Let's see.


Thanks for reading and correcting my title mistake 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima DJ asking Ash who she's talking to at late hours didn't seem suspicious as any parent will ask. I mean if kids in parents house they will be asked. I thought DJ being curious not suspicious,


I agree...but DJ knows Ash is up to no good...the details of which I can't give away right now.

But if you recall...in a past chapter Ash was speaking on the phone then hung up as soon as her mother walked into her room. DJ then requested her assistant to get her Ash's phone records. 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

I have a question Meher or Ash went shopping and Preet paid bill is understandable. Why Viren is buying out of Preet's pocket ? Is that to show off and say - look I got a gift from one the Junejas ?😕



He's just cheap...remember he told Meher that since Ash and Preet invited them shopping they should foot the bill 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q


Daljeet was telling Rishap Rampal to see the doctor for ulceritis ... not Ash...😆

Yes the Rampals may not be as rich as they make everyone seem they are 😲

I've said this before, everyone is doing what they are doing for their own personal gains 🤔...so is Ash. And it is strange that her own mother is suspicious of her. 😳

hheheeh i guess i m reading wat i really want lol
Hnrstly if we keep meet aside nthing much wrong wid ash n viren (although hate dem a lot)
We really wanna see deir evil part so that we cn really hpe to meet to break deir engag
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q


I agree...but DJ knows Ash is up to no good...the details of which I can't give away right now.

But if you recall...in a past chapter Ash was speaking on the phone then hung up as soon as her mother walked into her room. DJ then requested her assistant to get her Ash's phone records. 😲

I thought that records was to see who she's seeing - Ambala she was staying away from parents and I believe cz Preet Juneja was staying at the same house. Unless I got this wrong. I mean DJ didn't want Ash to be with enemies the Junejas but later things changed.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sherma

hheheeh i guess i m reading wat i really want lol

Hnrstly if we keep meet aside nthing much wrong wid ash n viren (although hate dem a lot)
We really wanna see deir evil part so that we cn really hpe to meet to break deir engag


Actually you are not far from pinning the tail on the donkey. I won't say anymore...😆...except that as the story unfolds...everyone's true colors will be revealed. 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awwe soo cute update

love Preet and Gaurav sceans meet sceans are fab :)
thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
*Finally lazychick makes her entry*😆
throwing myself chappals and jhoote uhhhooo!!!!!!😎🤣

Fatima! 🤗
I'm really very sorry for coming that late to check your update darling!
I'm trying to catch up with everything in the forum, since I've been away for quite a long time.😕


AAAH THIS UPDATE!
I just love Preet being so sarcastic about Chaddi...Chadda or whatever!🤔
Preet & Gaurav scenes are always a treat to read and imagine in mind! These 2 rock! 😃

Keeping all the Rampals aside... I LOVED MEET SCENES the most! Ahem so close ufffooo! 😳
Their scene in the kitchen was just ROMANTIC! ☺️

The bedroom scene was equally BLUSH! ☺️
(I guess this is me who needs the AC right now! ☢️☺️)

Preet! Don't lose hope! Everyones colours are going to be revealed soon! Just carry on! You're doing a fab job! 😎

HMPH Viren manipulates everyone around kya?!?!? 👎🏼Especially Meet?!?!?🥱😡

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tarannum6

Awwe soo cute update

love Preet and Gaurav sceans meet sceans are fab :)
thanks for the PM :)


Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your feedback Tara 🤗

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