Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
I'm speechless Nikhad. I don't know what to say
This is an OS that I would never write or want to read, because it deals with a topic that I've pushed out of mind as never having happened. Preet's death is the biggest mistake the Kis Desh writers made. And I'm still not over it.
I'm a super softie...I mean, I'm one of those girls that cry during Mother's Day commercials...and call my mom right after. You made me cry...
I'll never forgive Prem for being so stupid that he stood on a bomb rather than sign the family fortune away. Preet even told him that he should have..nothing is more important than his life.
Or did the writers really expect me to believe, that 3 well educated young men with the Juneja name couldn't rebuild their fortunes.
But no...Prem stood on the bomb like an idiot!! Then accepted it when Preet took his place. His wife was expecting a baby damn it!! Why didn't he push him back? WHY? WHY? WHY?
And I'll never forget Lalit, and how he treated Preet in the aftermath of "Prem's death track". He beat Preet to within an inch of his life and the rest of the family just stood there and watched.
And then old Chandni wound up with egg on his face, when every step of the way it was Preet and not Herman, who filled his elder brother's shoes.
And I've always felt that this is the exact reason why Preet gave his life for his brother...he loved him yes...but psychologically, he never got over the blame and trauma he suffered the first time the family thought Prem died...so how was he supposed to return without his brother this time. He gave the ultimate sacrifice for Prem's stupidity!!
Meher became a widow! His kids were left without a father!! Prem Chachu is not the same thing as Papa!! His unborn child would never know his father!! UUUGGGHHH!!!
Now I've gone from crying to seething with anger...
It may sound stupid that I feel such a range of emotions or attachment when it comes to Meet, but I'm not just a Meet fan...I'm a Meet fanatic.
Okay...time for me to punch a bag or something......and do some breathing exercises.
So...yes I did cry...and I'm in a totally crappy mood now...but having said that...from strictly a writing point of view...this was the best piece of writing you have shared with us to date. It's just that for me personally, it's not my cup of tea.
FATIMAAA. You justified everything my girl. You just did.
The prem thing hit my mind few days back as well. Prem could have pushed him back, just like Preet did to him. Could not he? I want to stop right here, because I can feel tears coming into my eyes. Meet fanatic, I loved the word you used. If this is the word which describes to have feelings for two fictional characters like they mean a world to you, crazily watching their scenes everyday and reading their stories, crying like a baby for them and feeling happiest to see them, then I am also a MEET fanatic Fatima...Like we are very similar with our feelings. I can not put my feelings for Meet in words. I absolutely get your feelings, I do. You know I was crying that day in my car suddenly because I remembered Preet's death. This is me and Meet. This OS was just a piece of feelings for Meet which stabs my heart every time.
On a different note, high5 love, I am such a softie too. You know I even was about to cry while watching a horror film because of the pain of them which I could feel they had for the incidents happening..I just controlled myself because I was in the cinema hall and my Preet was sitting beside me, he would have scolded me so bad haha. He already says I cry everyday. I went with him, his two cousin and the gf of one of those cousins. When I told him I was feeling like crying, he was getting distured because he can't stand my tears ever. Well, I think now I am getting into a all romantic story of mine, haha. LOL.
Oh wait, I have more for you, you have my heart Fatima, I will be starting a horror-comedy-romantic short story today which I wrote on another forum. It will be a gift for making you so low with this one. Will update my FF tomorrow too. Thank you so much for giving such great compliment to my writing...
Can I get a hug Fatima? MEETIAN FEELINGS.
Edited by Nikhad003 - 8 years ago
