Fatima
to reply u re; Meher's dad - he's another version of Preet's Bauji "idiots" so ya I don't think much of either one.
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Congratulations you reached 100 pages 🥳
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Update is v entertaining. Sam and Meher convo was fab. Dialogues are superb and had fun.
Maya's character you got her exactly like in show woah good job
( for bringing her characteristics in to your writing).👏
Oh Man Preet's dad is such a weirdo - really wish someone could just argue with him right now and say "shut up and don't insult your son" lol😡
He is so uncaring :( and thinking of using Preet - man look at Harman 😲 he's all set to use Preet too. With family like that Preet really doesn't need Ash as enemy 😆 His own family is ready to screw his life omg.
Anyhow so from here on wards drama starts hai na. Preet vs Bauji and many more confrontation.
I really hope Meher is not in receiving end and sit and cry while all of the unpleasant stuff takes place :P
I couldn't pick out the dialogues - you always do a great job. Very smooth, scenes switch very smoothly too. Perfect!
Waiting to see what you have next 🤗