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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima

Pg 94 was fantastic long woot woot. You're so generous.😆🤗
I hv no complain.
I like the tree idea and woah Meher did that.
As a kid I did too with my gang of friends but didn't go higher 😆 it's really fun to do that and it's like we r in another world of our own.😆
I liked how Meher relaxed and enjoyed her time. Preet was sweet and caring.
Whenever sad moment came up both picked up on it and cheered up each other. So cool - really nice friendship,👍🏼



Athisda...so nice to see you on this thread after a while 🤗

Yeah...I figured Meet spending a part of their date in a tree would be something unique 😆

They've both lost their mothers so they can really relate...it's sweet how they can be there for one another...and be really comfortable enough to share their private moments.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima 🤗 miss you🤗

Pg 96 v detailed update.i tried to catch every line but didn't.
However I got this : Preet is trying to figure his way out. Meher is unaware of what is happening to her.

Gaurav Sam catching them in kitchen was nice scene.
Haha Gaurav's description of Bauji 😆 it cracked me up.😆 So Lalit Juneja doesn't pay attention to Gaurav either.
I guess we will see what Preet does and how he will approach to his dad.

The paper cut scene was funny.

Meher is multi talented she is a tuition teacher, she can sew, cook tasty meals, do house chores, make flower bouquets and works in a shop. 😲 I wonder if her father ever think of how much she does.
Well I think he's really a loser anyhow but just amazing how much she does with a smile.🤗 Cutiepie she is.


Boy you really hate her father don't you 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
^ updated my post Fatima and congrats on crossing 100 pages 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!!amazing,superb...srry but honestly I dnt hav a single wrd 2 say abt dis chapter yar...I jst loves it... thank u fatima...🤗 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fatima
to reply u re; Meher's dad - he's another version of Preet's Bauji "idiots" so ya I don't think much of either one.

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Congratulations you reached 100 pages 🥳

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Update is v entertaining. Sam and Meher convo was fab. Dialogues are superb and had fun.

Maya's character you got her exactly like in show woah good job
( for bringing her characteristics in to your writing).👏

Oh Man Preet's dad is such a weirdo - really wish someone could just argue with him right now and say "shut up and don't insult your son" lol😡
He is so uncaring :( and thinking of using Preet - man look at Harman 😲 he's all set to use Preet too. With family like that Preet really doesn't need Ash as enemy 😆 His own family is ready to screw his life omg.

Anyhow so from here on wards drama starts hai na. Preet vs Bauji and many more confrontation.
I really hope Meher is not in receiving end and sit and cry while all of the unpleasant stuff takes place :P

I couldn't pick out the dialogues - you always do a great job. Very smooth, scenes switch very smoothly too. Perfect!


Waiting to see what you have next 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Fatima for pm
Wow fabulous update👍🏼
I missed Preet in the update 😭

I liked Sam the way she tried to knock senses in Meher and helped her to not htink low about her because Meher is perfect girl will all qualtiies to drool Preet over her.👏

Maya is oppurtunitst & selfish and also bauji who is thinking only about business and not about Preet's happiness.😡

Prem & Heer are concerned for Preet's happiness.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lazychick.maria

res res res res 😛😆

UNRES
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This made me ROFL 🤣
"I swear on every single drama that Ekta Kapoor has ever produced, there was a major eye-lock session going on back there."
You've described the whole thing and all our feelings Fatima 😆 Haaaye those never ending Meetlicious eye looks 😳

but ...
what about this twist now Fatima 🥱 an Ekta wala one too? 🥱😲😆
Maya hasn't changed at all... running after 5 lakhs like seriously? and that too working with their ennemy Daljeet Rampal eeerfff 😵 and Bauji's decision ?😲 What he agrees? 😳😲 thumbs DOWN to Harman... you couldn't say anything kya ????👎🏼

When Preet will come to know about his "engagement" already decided an that too with Ashleesha, the person he hates the most he'll be broken 🥺 and Meher ka kya hoga? 🥺

Bauji?!? Like seriously what the?😡 Your son has already been through so much and now you don't care about his feelings anymore kya? 😡😒 He was not there to go out with girls or to go at parties, he went out there to try to forget his past and he found sachaa pyaar

Just loved Sam & Meher convo, they both are really sweet and adorable😳. Sam getting engaged to Gaurav I just hope the same happens to Preet & Meher. ❤️ Premeer plz do something... you seem the only ones to care about Preet

Thrilling update Fatima can't wait for the next part... 😳
you rock! 🤗


Thanks for unreserving so soon Maria 🤗

Ekta wala twist...me? 😈

No no...I'm not into tragedies...😆...but let's just say nothing in this world is free...so Preet can't just expect to get Meher just like that.

Sam is a wonderful friend.

Premeer definitely care for Preet...let's see what happens. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: SNKaD

Wow!!!amazing,superb...srry but honestly I dnt hav a single wrd 2 say abt dis chapter yar...I jst loves it... thank u fatima...🤗 😊


Thanks for taking the time out to read and comment Kulsum 🤗

I really appreciate it.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AASUS

Fatima

to reply u re; Meher's dad - he's another version of Preet's Bauji "idiots" so ya I don't think much of either one.

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Congratulations you reached 100 pages 🥳

Thank you 🤗

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Update is v entertaining. Sam and Meher convo was fab. Dialogues are superb and had fun.

Maya's character you got her exactly like in show woah good job
( for bringing her characteristics in to your writing).👏

Thanks again 🤗


Oh Man Preet's dad is such a weirdo - really wish someone could just argue with him right now and say "shut up and don't insult your son" lol😡
He is so uncaring :( and thinking of using Preet - man look at Harman 😲 he's all set to use Preet too. With family like that Preet really doesn't need Ash as enemy 😆 His own family is ready to screw his life omg.

Yeah...other than Premeer...no one really seems to care at this point. And Veera is the youngest so her opinion doesn't count much anyway 😕

Anyhow so from here on wards drama starts hai na. Preet vs Bauji and many more confrontation.
I really hope Meher is not in receiving end and sit and cry while all of the unpleasant stuff takes place :P

Let's see 🤔

I couldn't pick out the dialogues - you always do a great job. Very smooth, scenes switch very smoothly too. Perfect!


Waiting to see what you have next 🤗


Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback Athisda 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chit15

Thanks Fatima for pm

Wow fabulous update👍🏼
I missed Preet in the update 😭

I liked Sam the way she tried to knock senses in Meher and helped her to not htink low about her because Meher is perfect girl will all qualtiies to drool Preet over her.👏

Maya is oppurtunitst & selfish and also bauji who is thinking only about business and not about Preet's happiness.😡

Prem & Heer are concerned for Preet's happiness.😊


Sam is the voice of reason...she represents me and all the readers trying to guide Meher to the right path

Maya is...well..she's Maya...so what do you expect?

Prem & Heer will always be there for Preet. They've practically raised him.

Let's see what happens.

Thanks for reading and leaving your feedback Chitra 🤗

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