Premeer OS **Ab keh Bhi do Part 2 Updated Page 4 04/01/14

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Posted: 11 years ago
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(Disclaimer: This story is solely the work of my own imagination. The characters belong to the serial "Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil.)

Ab Keh Bhi Do

"Salsa, jazz, disco, bollywood" and all the dance forms of the world known and unknown to him were being performed by his heart with his mind. He was on cloud 9. And Which is that song? Yeah "Aaj mein uppar, aasman niche and whatever whatever.." lyrics are not important, bhavanao ko samjho. And right now only feelings were important. She was coming after all. She was coming after whole damn two months. How much had he missed her.

He had heard the news of her coming, yesterday, thanks to his sharp ears. He had come home after a tiring day at work. He had been walking upstairs to his room when he had heard Kulraj Di who was on a call when he had arrived, telling everyone that Heer was coming to Delhi. And everyone had turned all exited. Now if you are wondering who Heer is, let me tell you that Heer is his elder sister, Kulraj di's Nanand', as in "Sister-in-Law" in English , Kiran Jiju's sister and Kulraj di's Veera's and Preet's would-be Sister-in-law, as in Bhabhi'in Hindi and he was going to make sure of that. To make her Mrs.Prem Juneja soon. He couldn't wait any longer and wait for her to come to Delhi every time so that he could meet her.

Now talking about his family. He had to make sure none of them get to know anything about it before he tells Heer. He was sure that she knew by now and even he knew that she loved him. No! nothing as high as Yashraj Films happened around for him to confirm that she loved him. No blowing of wind, or falling of leaves or sound of violin. The shy smiles, the blushing of cheeks to perfect crimson red, the look in the eyes searching for him whenever he was not around, the sound of increasing of heartbeats, and the way they understood whenever they were around even without seeing were enough to confirm that she shared the same feelings as him. He is not The Great Prem Juneja for nothing.

But their "Pyar ki Gaadi" had not gone beyond this. She stayed at Shimla with her family, his di's in-laws and his soon to be, completing her studies, to be precise, final year of her masters. He mentally thanked god that it was her final year. And he was at Delhi handling their family business. Even Kiran Jiju stayed with them at delhi along with his di, he was India's best lawyer practicing in the Supreme Court at Delhi. Heer would visit them during her 2 month vacation. She loved her Bhabhi and loved spending time with his family. So she would come to Delhi to spend her vacation, and would also make some visits every two months or so.

So now that her final exams were finally over she was coming to Delhi. He would definitely tell her this time. He had full proof plan. He knew it would be successful *condition apply* his family does not do something. His family inclusive of his mom and dad were pranksters (mind you the best-in-the-world). Their common victim was Prem Juneja. His naughty brother Preet, who loved his PB more than anyone was the leader of "WTPG" i.e "We the Pranksters Gang" whose other members were his elder sister Kulraj Di, (Kiran Jiju was not included, and he wonders how he bears up with his sister), next was Veera his youngest sibling, his mom and dad and Preet's Girlfriend Meher and whose sole motto after being put under the same roof as him was to Make Prem Juneja's Life Hell.!. Prank-playing was their copyright. But he knew that they loved him immensely and so did he.

After making calculations and re-calculations he made his way downstairs in his casuals. Seeing him walking down in casuals everyone's faces looked shocked. Oh yeah, they must be wondering how me-the-workholic-Prem' was taking a day off from work. To them it must have been definitely the 8th wonder of world. (by the way wonders are 7 only right? Because last time he checked they were seven). Anyways, so looking at the shocked expressions on everyone's face he cleared his throat. Everyone seemed to have come down back to earth. Finally!

" I thought it was Wednesday today. Suppose to be mistaken. It should be definitely Sunday?" he heard his Di say.

" No di, its not Sunday. It is Wednesday only." He replied calmly.

"Preeettt! Hold onto me first .. I am fainting. And then put on the TV and see if "this is the breaking news" "PREM JUNEJA MISSING OFFICE????" this has to be breaking news. Someone pinch me.. how on earth did it happen... ouch!!! Why did you pinch me." Said an over dramatic Kulraj.

" That is because you just said someone pinch me and I did the honors . And what is wrong if I choose to stay home for a day. I just feel like staying at home today. And I've checked my schedule for today, and there is nothing much to be done."

Everyone just nodded their heads. May be they couldn't really say much or may be they were too shocked to say anything. Whatever the reason may be "meri jaan chuti!"

During breakfast everyone kept giving him weird looks. He wanted to ask them when was heer coming. May be JUST to H.E.L.P Them he could go and pick Heer from the airport. I mean why should Kiran jiju or anyone else take trouble unnecessarily, he was staying at home so maybe he could just go and pick her up.

He was wondering how to bring up the topic.? Wasn't Kiran jiju not worried that his sister was suppose to come and someone had to go to collect her. Shame on you jiju!

" who is going to the airport?" said gayatri.

"finally!" Prem said in his mind. But so smart that he was he acted all unknown and asked the audience at the dining table.

" why to the airport?????"

"oh that Heer di is suppose to come today na, That's why." Said Veera.

He was about to say " I can go if anyone wants.." but Kiran jiju's next lines were enough for him to shut his mouth.

" Maa I've already sent a driver to collect Heer. She had strictly told me that no one should come to the airport. She didn't want to trouble anyone." Everyone nodded and continued with their breakfast.

Prem did a *face palm* ! Now wait till Heer comes home.

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Hell everyone. I guess m late. Writer's Block (Feeling proud) :D :P that's coz atleast with this I can call myself a WRITER(bold and capital).. hahaha!

Never mind I keep blabbering like this. Point is hope you all enjoyed Christmas. This shot is based on one scene of kis desh. Which will be included in the next part and the next part should be up by this Saturday. I didn't get time to complete this one. I am sorry. I'll post the next one soon.please ignore the typos

PS- wishing you all a very happy new year in advance..

Thank you for reading. Love you all

PSS- from now on I'l be posting my OS on new threads. And ive just posted some stuff that I've made. :D I promise I've improved.

Muuhaaa <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

Vrushika...

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ragvir92 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice os vrushu
Awesome start
Aww Prem took leave for Heer.Thats so sweet and planning to propose.Great
And the family was as usual dramatic.hahah
Waiting eagerly for next part and heer to come
And A very Happy New Year dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice <3
Looking forward to the next part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ouch .. i am blown .. vrushi ... u r just great .. i can so picture everything .. prem doing his victory dance thinking about heer's coming ... hehe and the guy is in love ... he is always in love ... :P his not going to the office being 8th wonder is so relating i mean .. yea i can expect that from our prem juneja isn't it ... hehehe kulraj di kabhi nahi sudhrengi .. waiting for more . soon !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awasoem OS vrushu 🤗
Waiting eagerly for next
Happy New Year
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesum :D
haha Prem is so desperate n love kulraj's words so cutee :D


update soon , do add me to ur list :)

waiting for heer :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.superb OS vrushi
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for next
Please update soon
Thanks for the pm. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Vrush Yaay new story *goofy grin* 😆😃

Nice title. I can see by the 1st part how it will be meaningful to this story.
Very cute. Thank you.🤗
I loved how u were I guess in Prem's pov going back and forth in English and Hindi.😆 Or is it the author's pov.? Anyhow I laughed cuz it's funny.
I loved the family interaction. So nice. I could just imagine all that happening like in the show.

Can't wait for next ch.

Wishing you in advance, Happy New Year.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey another OS
first of all i love the title...and the concept is so cute..
eagerly waiting for next part pls cont soon
thanks for PM😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh this is sooo beautful Vrushika
waiting for the next part

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