I was rewatching old episodes and really wanted to read a FF on the june 18 2008 episode (where Premeer finally get together) but i couldnt find any. Therefore I decided to write one myself. I wrote it within 20 minutes and havent proof read it so please excuse any errors. I figured I might as well post it instead of writing and ignoring it lol.
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Heer leaned against the wall. The chipped pieces pressed into her thin kameez, digging painfully into her skin. Her mouth was dry and her stomach clenched in hunger. Absently, she massaged the cramp, and swallowed. S he averted her thoughts to what was happening in the main hall. Although the celebrations were far away, she could almost feel the vibrations of the music bounce against the walls. It felt as though she was in this dark room for months, but it may have been a few days.
A tear slipped out of her closed eyes. Clumsily, she wiped it away with considerable effort. Lack of food or water made even thinking difficult and alien. She thought of Meher, wondering if Daljeet Chachi punished her as well. Fear gripped her heart and relaxed immediately. Chachi wouldn't do anything in public, and Meher was smart enough to stay away; if not then Vishaka would help her.
Her thoughts wandered to the night of the party. The party where Prem openly admitted his love to her; the party where her life became the ultimate misery. Never in her entire life, had she ever experienced humiliation to this degree. When she was younger and made a mistake, her parents would scold her – no matter who was around. But she had never been physically abused or insulted in such a manner. Heer was disgusted with the lack of humanity her chachi had. Not just her chachi but everyone else in the party. She would never see them in the same respect again. She shook her head, as if to clear her thoughts.
Prem's face came to light and another tear made its way down, followed by many more. It was a wonder how it felt as if there was no liquid left within her, she still had the capacity to shed tears. Her breathing hitched and a sob erupted within her. Fisting her hand, she pressed it to her mouth to stop the sounds. But it didn't help.
She always had the hope of her love prevailing through everything. But that night of the party broken the dream her parents had woven for her. And tonight it would be completely destroyed once Prem fulfilled all the rituals and married Ashlesha. Her heart ached with the leftovers of the broken love.
Calming down, with tears still formed and trailing down her cheeks, Heer thought of what to do next. Once Prem was… was… married… she would be let out of this hell. Once she's free, she'll take Meher and go back to Ambala. Enough of the city, and enough of relatives. Her parents had left them land and a full family back home. An entire community that would come to their help if needed. She had her love's memories and would live with that. They will not stay here anymore!
Sounds came from outside, and the door unlocked. Quickly clearing her face she turned and saw Daljeet Chachi staring at her with emmense hatred. Once again, fear gripped Heer's entire body and involuntarily she moved back.
Daljeet slowly made her way to the shaking body and crouched, "you are the cause for this."
With burning eyes, Daljeet yanked Heer's hair loose and dragged her to the door. Unable to get her footing, Heer cried out in pain as her roots pulled against her head. Throwing Heer out, Daljeet's fury grew.
"Now you will know what happens when you mess with Daljeet"
Heer slowly got up and backed away from Daljeet. "Chachi, Please", She begged.
Slap. Her cheek stung from the sudden contact as her entire body shuddered with force. Daljeet ripped Heer's hair and dragged her out to the Venue, releasing her pent up rage on the weak.
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Prem looked up as he heard screams. The image that he saw, would stay with him forever. Clenching his jaw and fists, Prem felt for the first time, true hatred for an elder.
Slap. The entire audience flinched to the uncountable number of slaps the poor child received.
Heer sobbed in pain yet again as Daljeet dug her sharp manicured nails into her soft skin while still dragging her down the stairs by her hair.
"Look at what you have done to my family! Look at the homes you have destroyed! Look!" Daljeet screamed as she threw Heer to the ground infront of the Mandap.
Heer folded her hands and silently begged her to stop, but to no avail, as Daljeet yanked her up by the hair again and added another bruise to her face.
"Go die in a well, you witch! Die and rot! Get out of my house! Get out!" Daljeet yelled. Moving towards the door, she twisted her hand in Heers long hair and yanked with her full strength and threw her towards the door.
Heer lost her footing and fell straight into the arms of Prem. She slowly raised her swollen eyes up to his furious brown eyes and broke. Prem gathered her into his arms and glared at Daljeet.
( Prem words – if I write it then it will not be the same. Please watch)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uCRY0c_e7F8
Heer heard the beating of Prem's heart. Her mother was right. This man was her soul mate. He was the one who would be her support, her friend, her love, and her husband. He would be the place she would now call home.
"Heer," Prem softly addressed her. When she looked up, he cleared her face of tears and tucked her hair behind her hair.
"Before we leave, I want you to say something to Daljeet. Leave with your respect, not without it. Prem spoke.
Her eyes widened with surprise. Speak against elders? She was never taught that. But then she heard her Bauji's teachings
always stand up against injustice, what is happening to you, will happen to another. The truth will always prevail.
Heer turned to a furious Daljeet and a broken Lalit and did exactly what her father taught her. She spoke.
"Chachi, I know I have hurt you, and for that I will always be guilty and saddened. But you should know, the pain I have received is painful too. You are not the only one suffering. I can forgive everything but my humiliation, my sisters humiliation and Prems. And you have done all three. I will never forgive you for what you have done to us, but I pray that you and your family get all the happiness you deserve. Our relation ends here." Heer softly said while Daljeet was dumbstruck.
Heer turned to Lalit, "Lalit Chachaji, I am sorry that you believe that I have taken Prem from you. But I haven't and I never will. You are his father and you will always have first rights on him. No matter what. I just hope that you can accept me in time as well.
"One more thing. I have to tell you the truth. My full name is Heer Mann. Daughter of Balraj and Teji Mann. You were lied about my identity for reasons I don't know why. But no more. This is my sister Meher. As of this moment, My sister and I will leave to Ambala forever. The love I have received from you all will never be forgotten." She finished.
Heer looked at her sister, Meher nodded and left the hall to pack the clothes. Heer turned to look at Prem, who in return looked at her with such devotion and pride.
Within minutes Meher was back with a black bag and the papers for the land. Together hand in hand, they both started to the door when prem stopped them.
"I am coming as well." He turned to his father, "bauji I love you and I always will. I am your son and will always be. I am leaving with Heer and Meher and will only come back when you come and get me from Ambala. Good bye dad" Prem said and all three walked out of the room with their pride and dignity while the others in the room looked on.
Some with Love, some with regret, and some with hatred.
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Hi,
So i've been a fan of Kis desh since 2009, and this is my first piece on Premeer.
I hope you like it, and please do comment. I might end up writing more. Im watching the entire show you see. Im really missing Kis desh.
Aleeha
Cricket
