How will i live without you? Premeer SS Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jasmine 🤗

Thanks 😆 I thought intro was part 1 - thanks for clarifying it.

part 1 was v. nice. Love the family scene.
Pari is my fav. 😎
Looking forward to see what will happen next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
awesome update ...loved it ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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How will i live without you? Part 2



Heer's mobile rings.She attends the call.
"Hi Heer".
H:Prem!
P:Yes.Shall we date?
H:What?
P:I mean...shall we go out tommorow?
H:Why should i come?
P:Because im calling you.
She smiles.
H:I don't know if i can come?
P:I know that you will come.
He puts the phone down.
Prem in his mind:Heer...i know that you love me.But you are not admitting it.
Pari appears.
Pari:Are you confused?
H:Yes..i am..
P:Don't be confused.Go..enjoy your date with Prem.
H:Are you sure?
P:Yes.

Heer wears a stylish pink saree with a sleeveless silver blouse.Her neck is empty.Her earrings are long,but very narrow.She looks hot.She goes out.Prem's car stops infront of her.She gets inside the car.He has worn a grand navy blue shervani which has light blue designs.He looks dashing.
H:Where are we going?
P:Wait and see.
He takes her to a beautiful beach house.
She is surprised.
Prem pulls her towards him.
She is shocked.
H:What are you doing?
P:You know very well about what i'm doing.I'm loving you.
Heer is surprised.Because even though she knew that Prem loves her,he confessed it only now.
P:I know that you also love me.
H:How do you know that?
P:I can see love in your eyes.
Heer smiles.
P:Do you remember our first meeting...it was during a fashion show.It was love at first sight for me.
She blushes.
They dance to the song 'Hum hain iss pal yahan, Jaane ho kal kahan
Hum miley na miley, Hum rahey na rahey
Rahegi sadaa yahan, Pyar ki ye dastan
Sunenge sadaa jise,Yeh Zameen asmaan...'{Kisna}.
Their eye contact is getting stronger.
P:Still you did'nt say that.
H:What?
P:That you love me.Tell me...
Heer is so shy that she can't look at his face.She moves away.Prem goes closer to Heer and sings:
Dil mera har baar yeh sunne ko bekaraar hai
Kaho na...pyar hai, kaho na...pyar hai..{Kaho na pyar hai}.
She loses her control and sings:
Haan tumse pyar hai, ki tumse pyar hai..{Kaho na pyar hai}.

Nimmo reaches the office:My God!Today our new Boss has arrived and i'm late for the first time.How will i face him?
She knocks the door.
"Come in".
She enters the room.He sees her Boss.She is bowled over by his dashing look.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww.. so heer and prem love each other.. great.. and nimmo..will it be a love at first sight for her??? awesome update and eagerly waiting for the next chapter...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was a very cute confession!! I loved the way prem said he already know she loves him it was romantic!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww PH scene was cute 😃
Wondering how Nimmo will handle in office.

Looking forward to see PH in next update. Thank you Jasmine 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
superb update ...
premeer scene were awesome ...
thanks for the pm ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Excited for the next ch 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice updates...😊

plz pm me next time...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

How will i live without you? Part 3





Nimmo's boss is Prem.
P:Why are you staring at me?
N:I'm sorry Sir...i became late.
P:Why are you late?
N:Sir...
P:No excuse.What is your name?
N:Namrata Kapoor.
P:Namrata Kapoor?Do you have any pet name?
N:Yes Sir.The people who love me call me Nimmo.
Prem thinks:Nimmo is Heer's sister.
P:Ok...i will also call you Nimmo.
Nimmo is surprised.
P:Ok...now you can go.But here after don't become late.
N:Ok Sir...thank you Sir.

Prem speaks to Heer.
P:Hey..i'm your your sister Nimmo's new Boss.
Heer is surprised:Really?So you joined the new office.How is Nimmo?
P:I could not interact much with her.But as far as i understood she is very hard working.
H:Yes..she is.Next saturday is Nimmo's birthday.We are arranging a party.Hope you will join us here.
P:I hope so.But Nimmo has to invite me.Otherwise people will doubt..
H:Ya...

Nimmo is sleeping.She is snoring.Heer shouts:Nimmo...wake up.
Nimmo wakes up.
Nimmo is sleepy:Why don't you allow me to sleep?
Nimmo looks at Heer properly.Abhay and Kkusum are also near Heer.
They all wish together:Happy birthday Nimmo.
Nimmo is surprised.She smiles.

Nimmo is ready to go to the office.
Heer:Nimmo...for today's party,are you not calling your office mates?
N:Usually only our relatives attend the party.Right?Then why did you ask this today?
H:Simply.
Heer thinks:This Nimmo...Oh!
N:My office mates are boring.

Nimmo submits the files to Prem.
P:Good.You are good at your work.I appreciate you.
N:Thank you Sir.
P:Nimmo...i heard that today is your birthday.
Nimmo is surprised:Sir...How did you know that?Nobody in the office knows that.
P:I know that.Won't you invite me for your birthday psarty?
Nimmo is excited:Sure.But how did you know that there is a party at home?
Prem does'nt know what to say.
P:Ah!We all celebrate our birthday.So i guessed that you also celebrate your birthday.So there will be a party.Right?
Nimmo smiles.

Nimmo runs to Heer:Heer...my boss is coming for the party.
Heer is excited:Really?
N:Ya...
Kkusum sees it.
Nimmo goes to her room.Kkusum enters the room:You are so excited about the fact that your boss is coming home.Any reason.
Nimmo is shy.
K:Is there any soft corner towards him.
She blushes:no mom..nothing like that.

Nimmo wears a black sleeveless frock with silver dangling earrings.Heer wears a majenda sleeveless frock.prem arrives.Heer and Nimmo are excited.
Nimmo runs to him:Hi Sir..
P:Happy birthday Nimmo.
He gives a chocolate box to her.
N:Thank you sir.

Nimmo turns to Abhay,Kkusum and Heer:Mom..dad...Heer...this is my Boss Prem ji.
P:Hello everyone.

Nimmo cuts the cake.

The song 'Falak tak chal saath mere..'is played.All the couples including Abhay and Kkusum are dancing.
Prem and Heer stand as if they dont know each other.
Nimmo:Heer...Prem ji is alone.Dance with him.Heer is a good dancer Sir.
Prem smiles.
They dance together.
P:Heer..Nimmo said what our heart longed for.
H:Very true.
P:You are looking stunning.
H:You too.
P:All the girls who are present here are hot.
H:What?
He laughs:You are jealous?
H:No.
P:You are.
H:No.
P:I will prove it.
He goes near Nimmo:Can i dance with the birthday girl?
Nimmo is surprised.
N:But...i can't dance.
P:You can.
He holds her arms and dances.Prem winks at Heer.Heer smiles.She finds it funny.
Nimmo's eyes are on Prem.
Kkusum notices it.
K:Abhay...Look at Nimmo and Prem.I think Nimmo loves him.
A:Just because she danced with him you can't say that she is in love with him.Heer also danced with him.
K:Ya...but i feel so.

After the dance Prem goes near Heer:You did'nt become jealous like i expected?
She laughs:Why should be jealous?You were with my sister.I trust both of you.
Prem smiles.

Nimmo is in her room.
She thinks:Are Heer's words coming true?Am i falling in love?
Pari appears.
N:Who are you?
P:I'm fairy..Pari.
N:Nonsense.I don't believe in fairy tales.I don't like it.
P:You have started falling in love Nimmo.The people who are in love long for a fairy tale ending 'They lived happily ever after'.Don't you want your love stoy to have a good end?
N:Yes.
P:My blessings will be with you.
N:Thank you.
Pari thinks:Your love story will have a good ending.But only your true love will win.

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