Fatima's Cozy Corner - Page 38

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hey fatima

Hi Bhagyashree...I was wondering where you had disappeared to this Friday 😆

This was the most romantic part and the best.
Aww...Thanks so much...🤗

You always fulfil your promise by giving a very sattisfying update.
Thanks again. I try. As a writer...I know everyone takes time out from their busy schedules to read...so I like to appreciate the readers by giving them a worthwile update. I'm glad that you thought it was. 😳

This part had everything including the happenning of the unexpected like the change of weather.
I guess you have written in one scene of aadha ishq where veera taunts preet that he had fallen down and got hurt on his head is true when it comes to preet planning out something.

Yes...poor guy...I tortured him so much in the previous 2 updates that I had to make it up to him in this part 😆

The confession was just so so sweet i loved it.
That was to make up for the fact that we didn't get a Meet confession in the show 😳

The character of preet is so beautifully written by you that you never go out of his basic nature and not even for a sec we feel that he is someone else.
It's no secret that I love Preet......so writing for him comes easy. But I have to really give credit to the original writers of the show here. They did such a fab job of constructing Preet's character. 👏

Now the only thing i did not like is that the story ended and the wait for you to write something else again started.

Aww...thanks 😊

Please fatima come back soon with something bog and interesting and if ppssible a new meet ff so that we can get to experience our meet from start to end just like in adha ishq like from there falling into love and then coming together
Will be waiting for ur next write up desperately

You know there is nothing I'd like better than to start a new FF...😳...but the time constraints on my schedule are like atrocious. 😕

I'm really amazed I managed to even write that Preet OS and this SS in 2 consecutive months. Still...as long as I know there are readers out there willing to put up with my writing...you never know ...you may just get your wish ...😆

Hi
I know i was Late this time because i had guest at jome still some sneeked out time and read it only came back later to coment because wanted to comment properly.
I understand u have ur commitments but still will be waiting for ur next update
And i know you will definitely be back and that too with a bang

Originally posted by: bhagyashree2011

Hi
I know i was Late this time because i had guest at jome still some sneeked out time and read it only came back later to coment because wanted to comment properly.
I understand u have ur commitments but still will be waiting for ur next update
And i know you will definitely be back and that too with a bang

Hi fatima ma'am. . That was really really cute update. . I mean it help so many emotions. . Nice reading it. The prem preet small convo and prem telling him certain things. . The meher preet convo at the reception. . . And the swearing line :-D awesome. . Loved it all in all. . And the last scene i mean the last part 'in rememberance of the kasauli scene in kis desh ". Loved it. Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: vrushika

Hi fatima ma'am. . That was really really cute update. . I mean it help so many emotions. . Nice reading it. The prem preet small convo and prem telling him certain things. . The meher preet convo at the reception. . . And the swearing line :-D awesome. . Loved it all in all. . And the last scene i mean the last part 'in rememberance of the kasauli scene in kis desh ". Loved it. Thanks for the pm

😆 Darn I start to laugh for no reason coming here.

Originally posted by: AASUS

I'm back :P

pg 45 pt 3

Wow smiley face arrangement omg 😲 way cool.

Prem Preet duo Yaay

Cute convo and v useful advice 👍🏼simple and sweet.

Preet"s reaction seeing Meher at reception was v nice.

His hug to Meher is so sweet.😛

The convo in car btw Meher Preet is v realistic. Preet's trying to surprise and Meher really doesn't know so she reacted that way.

Oh man Preet almost lost his way up to longhouse 😲 he didn't prepare for them to spend the night omg. I thought he let the care taker or security or someone know about his arrival 😆wow

The trip was spur of the moment...something he decided on that very day...and so there was no time to have anything ready.

That was sad,cold, climb up hill, rain and getting drenched then searching for keys 😲 oh Preet

Yay key found and Preet even found lamps to light - Yaay for that

But they didn't bring the suitcases 😲 wow I dunno wt to say

Well I made them forget on purpose...😈...I mean if they had remembered to bring their suitcases...then they would have had spare clothes...and that would have defeated the purpose ☺️ 🤣

Meher's so understanding and woah sharing Pjs 😆 Preet's Q was funny aww - how come I get the bottom !

Dinner with water , granola bar and ladoo Yaay - make something out of nothing.

Heer's call and then Kul di's green light was so funny.

Cute date it ended up being. I like the animation u added though I couldn't imagine Preet letting Meher climb on to his back even if she wishes to.😆

@bold: To this I can only say: 🤣

Laughed a lot with Preet and co. Ty Fatima 🤗 u rock.

Wow, Wow Wow...Simply superb. Felt like going back to my teenage Mills and Boons days. Superb Fatima. Loved it to the core. For a die hard romantic like me what more can I ask for on this bright Sunday morning. You made my day girl...I seriously think you should quit your job and become a professional writer. You have it in you. I am not a person who believes in empty praises or flattery. You are really good Fatima.👏 Please keep writing and help us keep our romantic visions alive.