New OS ~ You Are Still The One

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello guys...😊
Hope you remember me...
Its been a long time since i have updated any FF..
Sorry guys but Im little busy with my personal life..

I randomly got an idea and my friend kavya(Kavya...) came up with another idea..
So we combined both the ideas and came up with this story.
We want to dedicate this story to Vrushika and Noor as their long awaited birthday gift.😆😉
This is not an FF or SS. It is a little more than OS with five to ten chapters.
Hope you guys like it..

So here comes the first chapter

Chapter-1

She lowered the window pane a little so that she can feel the cool breeze. As she looked at the surroundings, she realized she's still far away from her destination. She recalled the reason of her journey.

"Heer beta it's been a year now since you have completed your Graduation and when asked about your further education you said what you want to do with your life. Your dad didnot say anything about that and moreover he has appreciated your decision. But now we feel that it's time you get married. I know you still haven't thought about it but you have to now. Your grandma has found a good match. She wants you to visit her and meet him there."

Listening to what her mother has said Heer got lost thinking about something maybe someone.Suddenly when her mother called her name she came out of her chain of thoughts.

Before Heer could say anything she continued saying " you will be shocked to know who the guy is. Do you remember Laddoo.. your childhood friend..Remember They used to stay in Mumbai beside your Nani's place. You used to play with him when you go there for your holidays. You were best of friends. Later on they moved to UK. And suddenly day before yesterday Nani has met his mom somewhere and invited them for dinner. She got to know that they moved back to Mumbai permanently. She saw the guy and she liked him a lot. Now she wants you meet the guy. By the way you already know him , you both used to be friends and I'm dont think you will have any problem."


Now Heer got really upset and said " Mom stop joking. We used to be friends when we were kids but not anymore. I dont know anything about him. You know what, I don't even know his real name and you want me to get married to him." saying this Heer sat on the sofa restlessly.

Her Mom smiled and sat beside her and started carressing her hair ansd said calmly "Heer, I know what you are trying to say. You are worried whether the person you are going to marry will also support you in what you are doing now. Trust me beta he has also got the same thinking. Your Nani has already told him about you and he wants to join with you even if you say no to his proposal. So just meet him and talk to him if you really dont like him then we will leave this alliance but I'm sure you will like him. "

Listening to what her mom said Heer decided rather explaining her mother its better to explain the guy she is going to meet that she is not yet ready for this marraige

Without further questioning, she packed her bags and started to Shimla. She knew her parents were surprised by her silent acceptance but she was in no mood to explain. For quite a while she hasn't been herself. She started to accept things as they come without any question.

It started to drizzle. Her heart couldn't help but recollect the memories which never seem to fade.

She was on her bed surrounded by books trying to finish the assignment when her phone started to ring. From the mess of books in front of her, she found her mobile and picked it up.

"Hii sweetheart'"

"Premmm stop it" She said rearranging the books properly.

"What are you up to?" He asked her.

"Finishing the assignment and you?" She asked him.

"Thinking about you" He sighed.

"Prem haven't you found anyone else today? Why me?" She questioned

"Why you??? Its' always been you dear' It's raining outside and who else could I think of other than my sweetheart?" He answered back sweetly.

"It's waste of time fighting with you. What do you want?" She asked him directly.

"Keep the books aside and come out into balcony." He ordered.

"What?" She didn't get him,

"Why the hell do you ask so many questions? Come out in to the balcony." He cut the call.

She gave a huge sigh and pulled the glass door of her bedroom leading to the balcony. She found it empty except for the heavy rain pouring in. She peeked into the balcony adjacent to hers and there he was- Prem, her neighbour, classmate, BF as in boy friend for him probably but not for her'

He jumped into her balcony and pulled her to him. She raised her eyes in askance.

He simply started to dance. She thought he turned mad for some time.Meanwhile he took her hand and pulled her into rain along with him.

He kept his hand around her waist and blocked her gaze with his.

In the beginning she tried to protest but in the end joined him and had fun dancing in the rain.

The rain stopped and he left. She too went in to her room to dry herself. She knew what she had to do next. After changing her clothes and drying her hair, she heated a pot of water with tulsi leaves and few other things.

She locked her apartment and went out. She knocked on a door. It opened but all she could hear was sneezing sound.

"Come on now drink your juice fast." She said handing him the glass.

Prem " Heer yaar, how do you know to make all this stuff . Its hell drinking your juice.

Listening to this she glared at him to which he started drinking.

She smiled calmly and while he was drinking it, she went to find a towel to dry his hair.

She sat on the sofa drying his hair while he sat on the floor.

"Heer are you going to do this even after marriage?" He asked cutely.

"Yes I'll but to my husband." She answered back.

"Well it's me anyways so that's good" He said enjoying.

She kicked him and started to walk away. He pulled her back and made her sit on his lap.

"I'm sorry Heer. I know I promised to watch the movie with you but I was struck with Arjun." He tried to convince her.

"Oh really!! I thought it was the other way round. You forced Arjun to stay with you so that you can miss the movie" She said trying to free her out of his strong grip.

"Heer, how can you even think I'll do something like that with you?" He pouted innocently.

"Now stop that innocent look, I know both you and arjun ganged up together so that you can miss your appointments and blame the other." She said knowing him fully well.

"Hmm I'm sorry Heer" He said leaving the hold on her hands and holding his ears.

"Its' okay." She couldn't help but forgive him when he pleads her so cutely and he takes full advantage of it.

"Now if you can please get up. My legs are aching." He said feigning pain.

"What??" She started to hit him while he fell on the floor pulling her beside him.

They lay on the floor beside each other talking and fighting occasionally.

Heer came out of her thoughts when the car went on a speedbreaker and now again she is all alone going to face the reality of her life.

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"Heer betiya' the food in this daabha is really very tasty. It'll be late by the time we'll reach home so shall we eat here?" Driver asked her bringing her out of her memories.

Nodding her head, she got down.
Tears started trickling down her cheeks which she soon wiped off because she knows that she has not been cheated and the man she loves will sure come back for her.

People cry when they lose someone who their heart desires the most but I haven't lost anyone its just that the one I desire the most in my life is not there with me at this moment and I wont cry for that instead I will wait until I get my man back even if it is a lifetime waiting'.

Thinking this she composed herself and went into the dhaba.

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Hcsee17 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start of ur ff...
its really good to read it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful start...loved the nok-jhok b/w Prem-Heer and the last para was really amazing. Loved it...I am really eager to know what's gonna happen next.

Please do PM me and if possible please ask Kavya di to update her stories.
Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved de starting part :D thanks for de pm :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi kkmouli di!!! i m surprised shocked having all emotions!!!
i mean wanna thank both of you kavya di and you for such a wonderful surprise
i doubt you know me.. but i know you... and its really nice to see you writing again..
and well offcourse more hapy to see you and kavya di writing togather!!!
this was one of the best surprises!! and it means a lot to me
dont know how to thank you both,, wanna give u both a bear hug!!!
even after being so busy in your busy lives.. with all hectic schedule..you'll wrote it
and that too for us!!! really really means a lot!!! thanks a lot...
love you both!!!! thank you didz..
and well when its a merger idea of both you the story has to be fantastic as always!
it is awesome.. but tell me
is it saddy sadyy???? coz usually u'll dont write saddy updates
but hehhehe i know premeer have to meet!!!
and is this laddu has something to do with prem???
are they the same.. i know u r gonna keep the suspense.. and make us die here
and keep thinking about it!!! but it was really sweet
loved the part when premeer were togather..
if prem loved heer so much where is he now????
hope he is well.. poor heer is waiting for him
and i think her trip to simla is gonna give her prem back!!! forever!!!
thank you so much again.. for this wonderful os.. i m loving it!
can u pretty please add me to your pm list!??????please
and dont make us wait too long.. varna i m to sure gonna die of wait
do update soon!!!! i m waiting.. actually all of us are waiting


keep smiling,.. loads of love!!!! waiting!!!!
loads of love
vrushika!!!!




love both of you!!!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hiii
Awesome os
Loved it
Beautiful
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start...
update soon ...
and please add me in ur pm list .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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great start
pls cont soon
and do add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The OS was just...loved it..


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Posted: 13 years ago
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kkmouli wow glad you wrote OS. Thanks to you and Kavya.
Since it's a b'day gift for two of your friends, you won't keep them waiting right 😆

The mystery is interesting. So sad about PH separation.
Heer's waiting so when will we know about Prem?
Great start. Please continue.

Thank you for sharing 🤗

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