FF:Hamari Chahat PART 11 UPDATED.

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

aawww. cho chweet update. loved it. wonderful. CHahat is just like her dad. Awsum. thnx a ton for d p. =D

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Nice part... loved how prem is such a good father.. looking forward to the flashback part

thanks for the pm..

continue soon!!

take care

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

awesome part..

premeer scenes are really suprb..

loved the family scenes...loved chahat too...

update soon..

thnx for pm..

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

hey the update was splendid😃!!!

u're doin awesume job⭐️

premeer scenes are always soo cute n romantic☺️!!!

chahat is a good irl...i like the way u hav showed her n the way prem n heer hav didvided their own concern n don't interrupt whn the other is scolding or anythin...its goooddd😊!!!

i actually don't hav any idea what are u showing in falsh back...may be u will show how chahat got diabtess...ummm no idea😕!!!

thanks for the pm

update soonnn!!!!!

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

awesome update!! great job!! thank u so much for such a fab update
loved it! i loved chahat!
and yeah thank u so much for writing!
and also thank u for the pm!!
loved it
love vrushika
waiting for next update

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Hello 😃

Very interesting update. Loved everything. Special part was the PHC family interaction. They rocked!

What you like about my style of writing? Dialougue style of story telling & humour in through out the update

What do you think about my : 1. Premeer scenes 2. Prem Chahat scenes(my favourite).. 1) PH are beautiful and very caring. So hearwarming to see them happy. 2) Prem's concern for his daughter to be successful in life was very well portrayed with few lines. Great job 👍🏼 Chahat being her kid/teen self also well portrayed by her bringing up her cousin's story - everyone I know(incl. me 😆) always do that. It was very realistic.

Did you like idea of attaching pictures? Yes loved those pics. It would be awesome to see regular updates with pics. It makes story more attractive and fun.

And anything else you might wish to see and what you're expecting the flashback to be..? I would like Heer Chahat scenes. In the show they were best friends, though Heer was a very strict mom. They were best companions I think. If you're interested, you can give a try on this - I know now Chahat is teen - I'd like to see how Heer Chahat scenes shape up in your story.

I would like to see this dialogue story telling style -it's really easy to understand this way. Also family scenes between all the rest of Junejas would be nice.

My fav. scenes always in show are:

Preet Heer

Preet with rest of family

Prem Preet

Prem Heer Chahat

Kulraj , her children and rest of family

Thanks for the beautiful update. Looking forward to see what the FB would be.

I guess it'd be something tragic or sad re: Chahat.

Love everything about this story - concept, style, scenes and pics (a bonus 😛)