FF: Iss Desh Mai Hai Mera Dil Chapter 24 Pg 49

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

heyyylllooo...

here's the surprise: my new n first FF

ISS DESH MAI HAI MERA DIL!

courtesy: vrushika

thankooo very much...really loved it🤗

in thiz story will be sume bites n bytes of kdmhmd bt the concept n story will be mine!!

i'l contine my story frm when prem left for delhi for preet's interview n two days after it was heer's birthday n their wedding!!!

so i'l write the story the way i wanted it to be in serial😛!!!

hope u guys love it n enjoy it!!

chapter 1: page 2

chapter 2: page 3

chapter 3: page 4

chapter 4: page 7

chapter 5: page 10

chapter 6: page 11

chapter 7: page 13

chapter 8: page 15

chapter 9: page 16

chapter 10: page 19

chapter 11: page 20

chapter 12: page 21

chapter 13: page 23

chapter 14: page 25

chapter 15: page 27

chapter 16: page 28

chapter 17: page 30

chapter 18: page 31

chapter 19: page 34

chapter 20: page 38

chapter 21: page 40

chapter 22: page 45

chapter 23: page 47

chapter 24: page 49

Edited by repunzell - 13 years ago

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kiran

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey pls add me in ur PM list

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey di it was the best surprise it was wonderful

i m waiting

love u di

it was the best surprise...

awesome one..

so is desh mein hai meraa dil...

really waiting fr it update sooney soon.. and do ii have 2 say.. plz add me 2 ur pm list????? plz add me na

love u...

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repunzell

@repunzell

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran_28
hey pls add me in ur PM list

I'L Surely add u 😊

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushika
hey di it was the best surprise it was wonderful

i m waiting

love u di
it was the best surprise...

awesome one..
so is desh mein hai meraa dil...

really waiting fr it update sooney soon.. and do ii have 2 say.. plz add me 2 ur pm list????? plz add me na
love u...

i knew u will love it vrushuuu😃!!!

and ya u are in the list obviouslyyy😉!!!

the next chater is very soon...may be later tonytee😉!!!

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kiran

@kiran_28

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: repunzell

I'L Surely add u 😊

thanx yaar

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: repunzell
i knew u will love it vrushuuu😃!!!

and ya u are in the list obviouslyyy😉!!!

the next chater is very soon...may be later tonytee😉!!!

so tonite then now i'll go and study finish up ma chapters and come 2 readur update.. and offcourse i had to love it finally my sweet sis is writing

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Mrs. Gossip Monger

@Surreal_Dreams

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww...plzzz continuee...i ll b looking fwd for ur update...

do pm me wen u update...

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priya

@JugniPH

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Posted: 13 years ago

yey...dinkha chika dinkha chika dinkha chika.....new ff...

and the name is...aww...

update the first part soonn...

pls and me to pm list...

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repunzell

@repunzell

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

chapter 1:

In the morning, we see heer packing prem stuff in his bag n prem sitting on the bed n watching her.

he knows that heer is sad bt she doesn't want to show on her face so that prem is not upset. bt prem knows n so he stood up n went to heer;

prem: what happened heer?

heer (controlling her tears): nothing prem, what wuld happen to me?

prem: heer look in my eyes n tell the same the thing!

heer look into prem eyes n turns aways. prem makes heer turn around n thn it was the moment tht she had tears in her eyes n started flowing:

prem: heer y are u crying? i'l be back in two days.

heer: but u won't be here on my birthday (makes a pout).

prem(smiling): awww mera bachaaa...but whn i will cume back i will make the most memorable moment for u.

heer becumes shy n hide her face in prem chest.

and thn prem n heer hugged tightly.

and suddenly sume one *coughed* n they move apart!

and it was preet wid the whole family.

preet: aray PB kiya howaa?? jaldi karay flight keh liyai late ho raha hai.

lalit: chp kar nalaiye teeri wajah say woh ja raha hai n tujhsay mazay arahay hai.

preet: aray babuji, PB waha ka khayaal rakhay gay aur mai yaha ka.

everybody know kiska khayal :p!!

prem hugs everybody n leaves.

when he is about to sit in the car, he turns n see heer watching him through the window. he smiles n waves n signal i ❤️ u n heer also does the same i ❤️ u too!!

precap: heer: kaun hai waha par?? andar kaun hai??

preettt!!!! kaha hooo???

aahhh!!!

Thiz is the end of the chapter...i hope u like it...do comment n press the LIKE button if u wish!