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This OS is dedicated to Swati (Sweta2005). She is regularly remainds me to update my FFs. She is one of the reader from my first FF. Sometimes i go crazy becasue of her PM and tempted to wite more and more on Premeer. Thanks Swati. I'll miss you. Get net connection soon and come online as early as possible.


Punish Me

Shot 1

In Mumbai, City Hosptial.

Karan enquired in the hospital reception 'Mr. Lalit Juneja.' Receptionist 'he is in ICU sir.' Kulraj is in tears standing with him. Receptionist told the way to ICU. Karan put his hands around Kulraj's shoulder and took her to elevator. He consoled her 'Dad will be okay.' He rubbed her upper arm.

In front of ICU, Prem is standing leaning on the wall. His eyes focussed on the door. Gay3 silently crying closing her mouth with her pallu of the saree sitting next to him in a chair. 'Prem did you informed Kulraj?' Prem 'ha ma. di will come now.' Gay3 'dad will ask for Kulraj only.' Prem put his hand around her 'dad will be okay ma.' Gay3 nodded.


Karan and Kulraj came running towards ICU. Kulraj tried to open the door. Karan stopped her 'its ICU Kulraj'. Kulraj pledded with tears 'I want to see dad.' Karan held her close with him. They stood before the door. Kulraj cried closing her mouth. Gay3 looked at her daughter. She expected Kulraj to come to her but she didn't. Prem moved to Kulraj. He kept his hand on her shoulder. She shrugged off. Karan turned his face away. Prem 'di' Kulraj moved closer to Karan ignoring Prem.

Doctor come out of the ICU. Prem, Karan and Kulraj stepped to him. Kulraj 'uncle, how is dad?' Dr. Roy 'he is alive by the grace of God.' All are shocked. Dr. Roy 'beta, keep him happy. he will be happy only if he sees you all happy. Try to understand him.' he pat Prem's shoulder 'go and see your dad. but don't disturb him.' He walked away.

Nurse emerged 'who is kulraj?' Kulraj stepped forward 'ha' nurse 'he wants to meet Kulraj and Karan.' Karan and kulraj walked in to ICU. Nurse 'don't disturb him.' Gay3 sat motionless. Prem walked to Gay3 'ma. dad is okay.' Gay3 is silent.


DJ and Ash came there. Ash 'Prem how is dad?' Prem 'he is fine.' DJ 'don't they allow you both inside.' Prem 'Kuldi and Karan jiju are inside.' DJ and Ash exchanged look. Prem sat next to Gay3 consoling her. DJ 'Gay3, you have to be with bhaiya.'

Gay3 'Prem, ask them to go home. Kulraj won't like to see them here.' Ash 'why aunty? i too have the right to see Lalit Uncle.' Gay3 'Prem, do what i say? ask them to leave.' Prem got up 'Ash you go home. i don't want to see any scene here. its hospital.' DJ 'Prem' Prem interrupted 'Aunty, please.' DJ angrily took Ash from there.

DJ 'looks like he is trying to patch up with Kulraj.' Ash 'hope that girl didn't enters our house again.' DJ 'we have to be careful. otherwise Prem will go out of our hand.' Ash 'ha ma. he is shattered by his father's health and will do anything for his sister.' DJ and Ash decided to find way to hold Prem in their hand.

Kulraj and Karan stood before Lalit with tears. Lalit opened his eyes and signalled them to come closer to him. Kulraj cried 'dad' Lalit 'nothing will happen to me beta.' He looked at the door 'where is she?' Kulraj 'she didn't come dad.' Lalit 'why? don't she want to see my face?' Kulraj 'what relation she has?' Lalit 'she is my bahu. Prem's wife.' Kulraj 'that he broke.' Lalit 'doesn't she has affection on me?' Kulraj 'she has dad. she must be sitting in the mandir and praying for you without drinking drop of water.' Lalit 'then why she didn't come?' Kulraj 'she can't keep crying for the things happened in her life.' Lalit 'bu' Karan interrupted 'dad, now your health is important.' Lalit 'how can I leave like that?' He got angry.

Kulraj 'dad,you should not strain like this.' lalit 'Kulraj, come and stay with me for few days.' Kulraj 'no dad. I too don't have any relation with that house.' Lalit 'beta its your house.' Kulraj 'when he threw my husband's sister without mercy how can I step into that house?' Karan 'dad, we are leaving you take care of your health.' Lalit 'Karan, please send Kulraj to my house for few days.' Karan 'dad,' Lalit begged 'please Karan. She is the only happiness now I have.' Karan looked at Kulraj. Kulraj 'no dad. I can't.' she is adamant. Karan 'Kulraj, you go with Dad. Now you are the only happiness for him.' Kulraj adamantly refused. Karan 'dad she will come with you when you get discharged from hospital.' Kulraj 'karan' Karan calmly 'Kulraj'. She agreed. Lalit 'karan, ask them to discharge today.'

Dr. Roy entered 'no Lalit.' Lalit 'Roy, my daughter is agreed to stay with me after a long time. Discharge me. I want to be with her. ' Roy 'I want you to keep in observation for atleast two days.' Lalit 'oh you want fees. I'll give you. now you discharge me.' Roy 'even in this situation you won't forget to joke.' Lalit 'arrey I asking you to discharge me but you are not willing to send me then what is the meaning?' Roy 'I'm doctor. Not you okay.' Lalit 'okay I agree now you discharge me.' Roy 'you will never change Lalit. okay. I'll discharge you in the evening. Don't ask me before that.' Lalit agreed.

Gay3 and Prem entered the room. Kulraj and Karan got up 'dad, we'll come in the evening.' Lalit 'okay beta.' They walked out of the room without looking at Prem and Gay3.

Evening, Kulraj came to Juneja house with Lalit. Gay3 took arti. Lalit didn't show any interest. DJ 'how are you Lalit bhaiya?' Ash 'uncle don't worry I'll take care of you.' she held his hand 'come.' Lalit gave a angry look to her. Ash took her hand off. Lalit walked to his room with Kulraj. Kulraj made him lie down on the bed.

Gay3 went to kitchen to prepare food for Kulraj 'i'll prepare all of her favorite dishes. how many waitied for this day. my daughter is back with me.' She wanted use this opportunity to make her daughter happy. Prem walked into kitchen 'ma what are you doing?' Gay3 happily 'Kulraj has come after a long time. I have to prepare all her favourite dishes.' Prem 'ha ma. but Kuldi is not talking to me.' Gay3 looked at Prem 'you didn't do things which make her happy. ' Prem 'ma what I did? I just' Gaya3 interrupted 'for you its simple matter. But stand in her place and see. you will understand.' She took some vegetables out of fridge 'because of you she is not talking to me also.'

Gay3 turned away when she saw Ash coming towards kitchen.Gay3 murmured 'all becasue of this girl.' Ash came tp Prem 'Prem, you promised to take me out today.' Prem got angry 'here dad is not well and you want to go out and enjoy. If you want you go. I'm not coming.' He went to his room. DJ watched Prem walking with anger to his room. DJ looked at Ash. She whispered 'Kulraj is here so be careful. Go and pacify him.' Ash nodded.


Ash entered the room and saw Prem sittng in the couch holding his head. Ash 'not feeling well Prem?' she touched his head. Prem pushed her hand away 'I'm fine.' Ash 'Prem, sorry. I wanted to you get relax. For you only I wanted to go out.' Prem 'its okay Ash. Adjust to the situation. Kuldi is here after a long time. So you behave decently.' Ash 'ha Prem. I understand.' Ash thought 'why this girl came here now?' Prem 'for me Kuldi's happiness is important.' Ash 'for me too Prem.'

In the dinner table, Gay3 arranged everything neatly. She made every thing for Kulraj. She saw Kulraj coming towards the table. 'come beta.' Kulraj sat in the table. Gay3 served her. Prem is watching it with love in his eyes. Kulraj without making any scene ate everything. She got up 'thanks for the nice dinner. How much it cost?' Gay3 and Prem are shocked. She opened her purse and placed some currencies and walked to her room.

DJ smiled teasingly 'what a wonderful girl. She paid for her mother's food.' Gay3 and Prem are silent. Gay3 didn't feel like eating but Prem forced her to eat. Prem 'ma she will understand soon.' Gay3 'you could have thought once before doing that.' Prem 'ma I didn't know'. Both ate for name sake and left to the room.

When Ash entered the room in the night to talk to him, Prem 'Ash, don't come to my room until Kuldi is here.' Ash 'how long she will be here?' Prem got angry 'its her house she has the right to stay as long as she wants.' Ash 'she knows about us then what is the use of hiding our relation in front of her?' Prem 'listen to me. that's all I can say.' Without explanation he lied down in the bed and slept. Ash with anger got out of the room.

DJ saw Ash coming out with anger.' What happened?' Ash 'he is asking me to keep distance from him in front of Kulraj.' DJ 'why?' Ash 'he doesn't want to hurt his sister.' DJ 'she already knows about you and Prem.' Ash 'that is what I also said.' Dj warned 'Ash listen. Keep Prem in your hand. Kulraj is the weakness for Prem. with his mother he is also excited to see Kulraj back in this house.' Ash 'we have to send her out of the house.' DJ 'I don't think it is easy now.' she confusingly 'Why she came here?' she paused 'leaving her husband and her beloved Sister-In-Law.' Ash 'ma do you think she has some plan.' DJ 'I have that doubt. any mother will easily fall into her daughters affection. In Kulraj case Gay3 is very much kneen on getting back her daughter's affection.' She clearly 'Ash, don't hurt Prem in anyway. He is the triumph card for us. If he moves one step away from you then that is the end for your love. You should be more careful and shower your love and care on him.' Ash thoughtfully nodded. DJ 'from t'row take care of him in every small matters.' Ash 'I'll ma.'

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Morning, Prem decided to meet Kulraj and open his heart. He thought 'what I did was mistake. But I did for her.' He remembered how his sister was happy when she got Karan jiju. 'because of me she is out of this house now. I'll explain everything to her. She will understand me. She will understand the love I having on Ash. She too know the meaning of love.' He came out of his room.

He saw Ash coming towards him 'Good morning Prem.' Prem 'Good morning.' Ash 'come we'll have breakfast. Today I made you favourite paratha.' Prem 'ya I'm coming. First I want to meet Kuldi.' Ash decided to act normal but internally she is worried about him trying to patch up with his sister. 'okay Prem. bring Kuldi also.' Prem nodded. Ash went down.

He knocked the door of kulraj's room. There is no response. He called 'di'. He opened the door and entered the room. She is not there. He called her again thinking she may be in the washroom 'Kuldi'. But he saw washroom door left open. 'may be she is in dad's room.' He is about to leave the room. His eyes fell on the photo frame in the bed stand. He slowly stepped towards that.

He picked up the photo frame in his hand. She is smiling. She is standing between Karan and Kulraj. Prem remembered the event. It was taken when his father announced Kuldi's marriage with karan jiju. She was so happy and moved around like a kid. He kept the photo frame on its place. He silently walked out of the room. He heard some argument in the downstairs. He quickly ran down the steps as he heard Ash voice.

Ash is fighting with Kulraj. As soon as Ash saw Prem 'Prem, see she is irritating me.' Prem 'Ash, I told you to be quiet.' Ash 'why? she is asking what is the relation I'm having with this house?' Prem 'Ash please be quiet.' Ash 'why Prem? why? she is talking rubbish.' Prem 'I said shut up Ash.' Ash 'why? tell her that I'm your soon to be wife.' Prem ordered 'Ash go to your room.' Ash didn't listen. She got angry when she saw Kulraj smiling in a very teasing manner. 'Prem tell her' Kulraj interrupted 'what do want to tell?' Ash angrily 'I'm his wife.' Kulraj 'who said?'

Ash 'when I marry' Kulraj interrupted 'even if you marry him you will be called Prem's second wife' she pressed 'second wife' she crossed her hands across her chest 'you will be labelled as illegal wife.' She shook her hand in negative 'don't have any rights.' Ash 'Prem she is talking non sense and you are listening.' Kulraj 'no one can deny the truth. Ask him who is his first wife? Only she has the rights.' Ash 'Prem tell her that I'm everything for you.' Kurlaj 'he won't. because he knows until he divorce her she will be his first wife and legal wife.' Ash is shocked. Prem standing without any reaction made her more angry.

Ash 'Prem divorce her.' Kulraj 'nice idea. She will be free and get a nice loving guy.' She looked at Prem 'what a wonderful advisor. Do it fast. What is the use of keeping the relation without meaning.' She smiled mischievously and walked away.

Ash looked at Prem 'Prem, come we'll meet the lawyer and file divorce.' Prem 'Ash, in this situation. Already dad is' Ash 'He already knows about us then why should we dealy it?' Prem 'Ash, i'll ask ma.' Ash 'she will also agree for this.' she dragged him 'come. We'll ask ma.'

Gay3 arranging something inside fridge. Prem stood silently. Ash 'ask ma.' Gay3 'what do you want to ask?' Ash 'Prem' Prem didn't open his mouth. Ash 'ma he wants to know whether he can divorce her.' Gay3 looked at Prem. Prem 'what is the use in having that relation ma?' Gay3 'yes no use. Divorce her.' she said without second thought. Prem is surprised 'ma are you sure?' Gay3 'ha Prem. I'm telling you to divorce her.' Ash got excited 'see even ma is happy.' Prem 'ma' Gay3 'Prem do it.' She continued her work.

Ash happily dragged him out of the kitchen. Kulraj eating a apple standing in the door way. 'some people are overexcited for small things.' Ash angrily looked at Kulraj 'what' Prem held Ash hand and dragged her out of the house. 'don't you want to meet the lawyer.' Ash hearing those word got suppressed. Kulraj continued to smile watching them going out of the house.

In the night, Prem sitting in his room on the bed leaning his head on the board. Gay3 entered the room 'Prem, why you didn't have dinner?' Prem 'not hungry ma.' Gay3 kept the plate on a table 'why beta?' she touched his head. Prem 'I'm fine ma.' he sat straight. 'Kuldi is here after a long time but she is not talking to me.' Gay3 'she talks only to dad. treats others as aliens.' Prem 'because of me she is hating you also.' Gay3 took a deep breath 'I can understand her pain. She came to India with lot of dreams. She got everything' Tears rolled down her cheeks 'if you had told the truth before your marriage then this won't have happened.' She got up 'atleast my daughter won't be treating me as alien.' she walked out of the room. Prem stared at his mother walking out of the room with heavy heart. He cursed himself for breaking a mother and daughter love.


##

Lalit came to India in search of his friend Balraj to fulfil his promise. Kulraj grew up dreaming Karan as her husband. When they reached Ambala first news Juneja's heard was the death of Balraj and Teji in an accident. Accident happened two years back. After that Karan and Heer left the Village in search of a job. So no one in the village has idea about their whereabouts.

In Mumbai, after a month of their arrival Lalit and Gay3 accidently met Karan in a shop where Karan is buying a gift for Heer. Lalit went home with Karan and happy to see Heer. When Lalit went to Canada, Heer was not even born. Karan was five years old. Lalit is happy to see Heer. He immediately liked Heer for Prem. Gay3 too liked Heer. Heer was working in company as a marketing manager. Karan is working as Executive manager in a big company.

Immediately marriage was arranged. Everything happened in hurry. First Karan and Kulraj, Prem and Heer got engaged in the morning. Evening both marriages were performed together. Heer with a smiling face entered the Juneja house. Lalit and Gay3 were happy to see both of their children married to loving partners. As Lalit requested Kulraj and Karan also spend their first night in Juneja house.

Heer is waiting for Prem in his room. Prem entered the room. Heer shyly smiled looking down. Prem 'Heer, I'm sorry.' Heer looked at him. He is standing facing away from her. Heer is confused. But Prem didn't take much time to her to confuse. 'Heer, I love Ash. But dad fixed my marriage without consulting me. I didn't get a time to explain my part. I can't accept you as my wife.' He finished his point in one stretch.

Heer felt the earth just move away under her feet. She knows her brother is fixed for Kulraj when she was young. She also know Lalit is having another son Prem. Her bapuji always tell that he will ask Prem for Heer. So she grew up dreaming Prem as her husband. She got up from the bed but she fell back unable to stand in the shock.

Prem 'I'm sorry Heer. hope you will understand.' Heer gathered her strength and got up 'now what is your decision?' Prem looked at her confusingly 'decision?' Heer 'are you going to live with me or not?' Prem got angry 'I can't Heer. I can't live without Ash. She is everything for me.' Heer 'alteast you could have told this to me. Instead you showed happiness for our marriage. Why?' Prem 'I feared for Dad. Even now I don't want to tell this to Dad. we'll' Heer interrupted 'what do you want me to do now? do you want me to put drama in front of Dad and ma.' Prem 'for few days. then I'll find the way.' Heer 'I'm not a stupid to believe your words. you will romance with Ash in front of me taking this as an opportunity. I have to watch all those.' She shook her head 'I can't I can't' Prem is shocked and don't know how to handle her. Before he could realize the situation she opened the door and walked out of the room shouting 'Bhaiya.'

Hearing Heer's sad sound, Lalit, Gay3, Karan and Kulraj came out of the room. Prem signalled Ash that he told everything to Heer. DJ and Ash watched with a happy face. Karan 'what happened Heer?' Heer with tears hugged Karan. Kulraj 'Heer what happened? She gave suspicious look to Prem as she saw him standing without any expression. At the same time she saw DJ and Ash giving some happy smile. Karan shook Heer 'Heer' Heer told what Prem told. Everyone are shocked. Kulraj walked to Prem 'what is she telling?' Prem 'ha di. I love Ash. I can't accept Heer as my wife.' Kulraj slapped hard on his face 'why you didn't tell that before?' Lalit 'Prem' Prem interrupted 'no dad I can't.' Gay3 shook Prem 'Prem listen to me. This is not right.' Prem 'I can't.' after that Except Gay3 everyone tried to put some sense. But he repeated 'I can't'. Kulraj 'ma, tell him to understand.' Gay3 'if that is his decision we can't do anything.' Prem, DJ and Ash are happy. Others are shocked to hear this word from his mouth. Lalit 'Gay3 what are you telling?'

Heer 'dad' everyone were silent. She removed mangalustra and handed over to Gay3 'ma I'm sorry.' She walked towards the entrance. Karan 'Kulraj, I'm not a guy to spoil your life for your brothers stupidity. come with me.' He walked behind Heer silently. Kulraj 'Heer stop.' Heer and Karan stopped. Kulraj looked at her mother 'you are a married woman still you didn't know the meaning of marriage. From this second I don't have any relation with this house.' Without taking anything she walked out of the house. Gay3 and Lalit tried to stop her but she didn't listen.

Its almost a month. Kulraj never turned back to see her parents.

##

Heer took the papper from Karan's hand. She stared at it for a while. It is divorce notice from Prem. She signed it and handed over to Karan. She went to her room. She sat on the bed with tears. Karan followed her 'Heer' Heer interrupted 'I'm not sad bhiaya. I know one day this will happen.' She wiped her tears. 'I'm alright bhaiya.' Karan don't have words to console her. He is confused 'how Kulraj allowed this?' but he know there is no use in talking to Prem. 'He is not like Kulraj. He is a typical businessman. Stands on his own decision. Never listens to others.' He came to conclusion 'this will help Heer to move on in her life.'

Ash was excitingly waiting for Prem to come with court order of divorce from Heer. Kulraj, Gay3 and Lalit are sitting in the living room with sad face. DJ murmured 'have to manage this gang.' Ash 'ma, I'm so excited.' DJ whispered 'shhh. They will put some big drama as soon as Prem enters the house. So make sure you stand by Prem side.' Ash nodded.

They heard car horn. Lalit and Kulraj exchanged looks. They looked at the door way. Prem came first. Ash is excited and ran to hug him but stopped when she saw Heer behind him. Gay3 got up from her palce wiping her tears 'stay there Heer.' Lalit and Kulraj are looked at Gay3. DJ is shocked to see Heer with Prem. and Gay3's reaction confused her more. Gay3 went inside and return with arti. Prem and Heer confusingly stood there. Gay3 took arti. 'come in beta.' She touched Heer's head when she bent down to take blessing from her.

DJ thought 'what is this drama? Why she is here?' Ash shouted in anger 'Prem, why you brought her here?' Prem 'court order.' DJ confused 'what?' Prem 'court ordered we should live in the same house for three months. Then only they will take further step in our case.' Ash 'why?' Prem 'don't know.' He walked to his room. Ash stood before Heer 'stay away from him.'

Heer 'you stay away from me. I'm not running behind anyone.' Lalit and Kulraj managed to hide their laugh. Gay3 'come beta.' She took Heer to a room next to Prem's. Gay3 joining hands in front of her chest asked 'sorry beta.' Heer covered Gay3's hand 'ma. its not your fault. Its my fate.' She wiped her tears. Gay3 'I wanted you as my DIL.' Heer 'but I'm not lucky to get you as my MIL.' Tears came out of her eyes. 'ma, I didn't come here to live with Prem. I want to end this meaningless relation.' Gay3 touch her head 'God will do the right thing for you.' she walked out of the room wiping her tears.



Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Rest of the day Heer didn't come out of her room.

From next day, Heer had food before everyone else or Kulraj took food to her room. Heer spoke only to Kulraj and Lalit. Sometime she went to Lalit room and spent time with him. She went to office and returned late in the evening. During weekends she spent her time either in room or in library.

Its Sunday, Lalit decided to hold Heer at home. Lalit and Heer were playing chess while kulraj is watching them. Lalit 'Kulraj, did you spoke to Karan today?' Kulraj 'ha dad. he is going to Singapore t'row on duty for 3 months. I'm going to airport t'row.'

Lalit 'Heer beta. Spend time with Prem. then only.' Heer 'no dad. I don't want to play any trick to get him back into my life.' Lalit 'beta you should at least' Heer interrupted 'Dad, when he is not cared about me then why I should care about him?' Lalit 'he likes you beta.' Heer 'he didn't love me dad.' Lalit thought its not easy to bring them together. Both were adamant in their part. He decided to leave it.

Kulraj and Gay3 were busy instructing servants. Kulraj wanted to arrange pooja which Gay3 also liked. After Heer's entry into the house Kulraj sometimes talks with Gay3. So Gay3 don't want to refuse any of her daughter's words. Heer is also helping them. DJ didn't like the way Gay3 and Kulraj keeping Heer over their head and treating her as princess of this house.

DJ quickly went to Ash 'Ash go and help Gay3'. Ash 'why ma?' DJ 'see Heer is helping them.' Ash 'so what?' DJ 'she trying to get some sympathy from them.' Ash confidently 'when Prem is in my hand I don't have to worry about those ladies.' DJ 'Ash, you are miscalculating. Prem has soft corner for his mother and sister. if the situation arises mother or you then he will side his mother only you . same with his sister.' she explained 'now like a good girl go and help them.' Ash too felt that is the correct way to get some good name.

Ash came out of the room wearing beautiful salwar 'this is to attract Prem.' then she walked down 'now have to trap this ladies.' Prem came down the stairs wearing golden color dress. He is busy attending the call. Gay3 took the phone. 'switch it off. I don't want any ringing sound during pooja.' Prem switched off the phone.

Ash 'Aunty, can I help you?' Gay3 'no Ash, everything is over. Heer and Kulraj did everything.' DJ recalled those words again. 'everytime she calls Heer as beta but not for Ash. Why?' Ash with a smile stood next to Prem.

A family with boy of Prem's age entered the house. Lalit and Gay3 welcomed. Kulraj 'arrey Rajveer when did you came?' Rajveer 'y'day di.' Kulraj 'good. will be stying in India only na?' Rajveer 'ha di. India is my motherland then has to be here na.' Kulraj pat his shoulder 'true Indian.' Rajveer 'where is Heer di?' Kurlaj 'Heer' she looked around 'she is here only. You sit here. I'll call her. may be in kitchen.' Rajveer 'okay di.'

Kulraj went in search of Heer. Few seconds later she returned with Heer. 'here your best Heer.' Rajveer 'hi Heer' Heer excitingly 'Rajveer when did you came?' both hugged. Prem looked at Heer hugging Rajveer. Gay3 passed him. Prem 'ma who is that guy.' Gay3 'he is Heer's friend.' Prem 'but why they are hugging like this in public.' Gay3 'don't you hugged Ash in public?' Prem 'I'm going to marry her.' Gay3 'Heer and Rajveer also will be good couple. Oh ya you gave us nice idea. I'll talk about their marriage.' Prem 'ma' Gay3 'we have to do something for her life also after three months.' She walked away. Prem went to thoughtful mode. Ash elbowed 'what are you thinking?' Prem 'nothing.'

Prem is frequently looking at Rajveer and Heer who are talking and laughing all the time. DJ and Ash are annoyed by Prem's repeated glance at Rajveer and Heer. Until Rajveer left the house either Rajveer or his mother is talking to Heer. Rajveer was acting as if she is everything for Heer.

Prem went to his room after everyone left the house. Lalit and Kulraj was talking about Rajveer even after they left. Heer was excitingly telling about their prank during childhood. Prem sat in the bed. Ash 'good she too got a person otherwise they will blame you for spoiling her life.' Prem is silent. Ash 'Prem, do you still have any attraction towards Heer?' Prem 'I never had.' Ash 'then why are you worried about her now?' Prem 'I'm not.' Ash 'Prem, I didn't like you going in front of her .' Prem 'we are in the same house. I can't sit inside my room all the time.' Ash 'I want you to be with me all the time.' Prem 'Ash, I have parents to take care of. I can't hide behind your pallu all the time like stupids.' Ash 'until Heer leaves this house.' Prem 'I can't put drama. That is why I told her the truth in that day of our marriage.' Ash 'P' Prem 'Ash, I don't want to you to teach me. I know what to do or not. now leave me I'm tired.' He lied down on the bed. Ash in anger stormed out of the room.

Prem didn't come to have dinner. Kulraj was very tired so she went to her room as soon as she finished her dinner. Lalit too went to his room. Heer stayed back to help Gay3 in clearing the kitchen. After pooja Gay3 gave leave to servant and asked them to come tomorrow. Heer 'ma, Prem didn't have dinner.' Gay3 'may be he is not hungry. You go and take rest beta.' Heer left without asking further question.

While crossing Prem's room, Heer saw his room wide open and Prem is not seen in the room. Heer stood once with confusion. Her legs refused move forward. She is confused. She kept her one leg in the entrance of his room but pulled back. She turned to leave but her heart felt something heavy. Fighting with her heart and thought for few minutes, she stepped into the room.

She looked around. She called in lower voice 'Prem'. she heard some sound from washroom. she walked to washroom when she heard someone vomiting inside. she is shocked to see Prem holding his head sitting on the floor inside the washroom. he is throwing out. Heer stepped in 'Prem what happened?' he continued to vomit.

Heer quickly reacted. She washed him and helped him to get up from the floor. She brought her out of the washroom. She touched his forehead and found temperature. She took a dress from the closet 'change this Prem.' She searched for medicine box. She found in bed side table. she searched for the medicine. Prem came after changing. Heer 'you lie down. I'll get some water and medicine.' She pulled the blanket over him before leaving the room. Prem closed his eyes.

Heer ran into kitchen. Gay3 saw Heer's tensed face. Heer 'ma Prem has fever.' She filled the water bottle. 'ma need tablets.' Gay3 'I'll check in Lalit's room.' She ran to Lalit room and return with medicine. Both ladies rushed to Prem's room. Gay3 sat next to Prem and touched his head. Heer gave him medicine and water.

Heer dipped cloth in water and put on his forehead. 'ma, we'll call the doctor.' Prem 'no ma. I'm okay.' Gay3 'we have to call the doctor.' She took the phone. Prem stopped her 'ma we'll wait until morning.' Gay3 'Prem' Prem 'ma please.' Gay3 'Heer you go to your room. I'll take care of him.' Heer accepted and left the room.

Prem 'ma you too go and rest. I have take medicine. So don't worry.' Prem forced Gay3 to go to her room. 'if I want something I'll call in the phone.' Gay3 touched his head 'okay'. She left switching off the light. She closed the door.

In the middle of the night, Heer got up and went to check up Prem. She saw him struggling holding his stomach. Heer quickly 'Prem what happened?' Prem murmured 'my stomach is paining' he found hard and held her hand tight. Heer don't know what to do. she quickly dialled Kulraj number 'bahbi, Prem is stuggling in stomach pain.' Kulraj came to Prem room.

Kulraj sat on the other side of the bed. 'Prem what happened?' she pat his cheek as she saw him closing his eyes in pain. Kulraj 'Heer, you call the doctor.' Heer went out of the room and called the doctor. Doctor asked her to bring Prem immediately to the hospital. 'Bhabi uncle is asking to bring him to the hospital.' Kulraj 'go and tell the driver to take the car.' Heer ran down and shouted for dirver.

On the way back she knocked Lalit and Gay3 room. She ran upstairs and helped Kulraj to bring Prem down. Soon driver came to help them. DJ who came out of the room sensing some sound outside saw Kulraj and Heer taking Prem who is shouting in pain. She ran to wake up Ash.

Kulraj, Lalit and Gay3 got into the car with Prem. Heer stood silently watching the car moving out of the door. Heer quickly looked at the security 'is there any other dirver.' Security 'ha ma do you want to go to hospital.' Heer nodded. Security called someone over phone 'he is staying near by don't worry he will come now.' Within few minutes that driver came. Heer got into the car and rushed to the hospital.

Before they come to doorstep, all left to the hospital. DJ asked to Security and found out everyone left to hospital.

In the hospital, several tests taken. Prem is given injection and sleeping. Kulraj, Lalit and Gay3 went to meet the doctor. Heer sat next to Prem silently looking at him. The tired is visible in his face. Ash and DJ came to Prem room. Ash 'get up why are you sitting here.' Heer without a word got up and left the room. she sat in the bench outside the room.

Lalit, Kulraj and Gay3 returned with tears. Heer rushed to them.' Gay3 broke down. Heer made her sit in the bench. Lalit holding his head sat next to her 'only son.' He cried. Kulraj is silently crying. Heer shook Kulraj 'bhabi, what happened? why are you all crying? Tell me. what happened to Prem?' Kulraj 'his liver is damaged completely. His days are counted.' She broke down.

Heer 'no no they are wrong. Prem don't have any bad habit. Then how is it possible.' Lalit 'report says so.' Heer 'no ask them to do the test. I won't believe them.' like a mad she blabbered. Kulraj sensed Heer is going to faint. She quickly held her in hand 'Heer Heer' Heer 'no bhabi. Prem is alright. he is alright.' Kulraj made her sit in the bench.

DJ and Ash came out. They sensed something bad. DJ 'what doctor told?' Heer continued to murmur 'Prem is alright.' Kulraj 'liver damaged completely. His days are counted.' DJ and Ash are shocked to hear this. Ash ran to Prem. Kulraj sensing she is going to tell that to Prem ran behind her to stop. Prem just opened his eyes. Before Kulraj could stop her, Ash 'Prem your liver is damaged. You won't live for long.' Prem is shocked. Kulraj shouted 'Ash' ash 'anyway he has to know this oneday.' Kulraj stunned.

She rushed to hug her brother. Prem 'di di' he cried. Kulraj 'no Prem. nothing. She is telling without knowing the truth. You are alright.' Ash 'Prem they are hiding the truth.' Prem 'di i'm going to die.' Kulraj 'no Prem. you will happily.' Ash 'Prem dont beleive them.' Heer just entered the room slapped hard on her face.'get out from here.' Ash 'who are you to tell this?' Heer 'im Prem's wife.' Ash 'you filled divorce.' Heer 'until i recieve court order i'll be his wife. get out of here.' Ash 'Prem they are chasing me out of this house. you will pay for all this.' Prem 'i won't be alive to pay back. so you both don't have to fight. Ash you marry someone else and live happily. i won't be alive to marry you after 3 months.'


Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Heer confidently 'Prem is alright. I won't believe these reports.' She threw everything away. Lalit 'Heer, try to understand.' Heer 'no dad. Prem is alright. Please believe me.' She cried 'Prem is alright.' Prem is lying on the bed hearing Heer crying downstairs. Heer's words expresses confidence. 'he will live for hundred years.' Kulraj and Gay3 are sitting in the couch with tears. They don't have words to console Heer and surprised to see her faith.

DJ and Ash left the house as soon as they heard Prem's condition. Prem felt that is the right thing for Ash. Heer entered the room with food for Prem. she placed the tray near the bed. 'Prem eat this. you have to take the medicine.' Prem turned to other side 'what is the use? Instead of dying in a month I'll die after two months.' Heer 'Prem, you are not going to die.' Prem 'Heer, please don't give me wrong hope. I'm not a kid to believe this. I know about this disease.' Heer 'don't you know how to overcome sickness.' Prem 'this is not something like gaining strength by some hope.' Heer 'Prem, hope is the best thing of faith.' Prem 'I don't have a single percentage of hope.' Heer 'but I have 100% hope.' Prem is surprised to see confidence in her face. Heer 'now get up and eat this for me.' Prem 'Heer please.' Heer immitated 'Prem please.' Prem sat on the bed.

She took the bowl 'like a good boy open your mouth now.' Prem opened his mouth, Heer feeding him with a spoon. Heer 'did you reduce your effort when you lose some impotart work or contract?' Prem shook his head negatively 'I have confidence then why should i?' Heer 'like that I have confidence.' Prem 'this is different Heer.' Heer 'for me its same. If you take medicine regularly and keep yourself healthy surely you can overcome this.' Prem 'I don't think so.' Heer 'but I think so.' Prem burst into laugh.

He choked food. Heer kept the bowl aside. She pat his head with her palm. She gave water to him. she rubbed his chest. Prem 'okay for you I'll take this medicine. We'll see. hope or fate.' Heer 'we should win fate with our brain.' Prem grinned 'you should have been a philosopher.' Heer 'I'll try.' Prem stared at her 'Heer, don't you get angry on me?' Heer 'for what.' Prem 'I gave you pain.' Heer 'you love her. i understood your heart. So didn't get hurt.' Prem 'you are great.' Heer 'halo I'm not a great person. It's a selfishness.' Prem 'how?' Heer 'my happiness is in your happiness. In that way.' Prem 'oh.' She gave him medicine. 'okay you take rest.'

Prem 'Heer, you stay with me. I'm feeling lonely.' Heer 'okay. But one condition.' Prem 'what?' Heer 'from t'row you are going to office.' Prem 'no I can't.' Heer 'you are going.' Prem 'no.' Heer 'okay you stay here alone. I'm going to my room.' Prem 'okay okay I'm going.' Heer 'that is good.' she sat next to him. Prem 'but one condition.' Heer 'what condition?' Prem 'you have to come with me.' Heer 'okay. For few days. after that you have to go alone.' Prem 'I'll be alive for few days only.' Heer got angry 'I'm not coming.' Prem 'okay. I'll not talk about that again.' Heer 'promise' Prem smiled 'Promise.'

Morning, Prem is sleeping peacefully with a smile on his face. Heer entered the room 'Prem get up.' He ddint' respond. She shook him 'Prem get up.' Prem turned to other side hugging his pillow 'I want to sleep.' Heer shook him again. Prem 'Ash leave me. I want to sleep.' Heer became silent hearing Ash name from his mouth. Prem 'you never get ups before' he stopped. He opened his eyes. He turned and looked at Heer who is standing with a sad face.

Prem then only realized what he said 'Heer I'm sorry.' Heer smiled 'Good morning. That is what everyone says in the morning. Big business man. Don't you know thins.' She turned to the closet 'okay get ready. today you have to go to office.' Prem got up 'did you informed your office.' Heer 'ha' she placed his suit on the bed. she adjusted the covers on the bed. 'Are they gave you leave?' Heer 'why?' Prem 'I won't give leave to marketing manager for two months.' Heer 'what will you do?' Prem 'I'll send him home.' Heer 'that's what they did.' Prem 'what?' Heer 'ha they asked me to resign.' Prem 'you did.' Heer busy straightening the covers 'ha I sent the letter. Later I'll go and collect my settlement.' Prem 'for me you resigned your job.' Heer looked at Prem 'I'll get another job but' she msiled 'I won't get another chance to be with you.' Prem became silent.

Heer pushed him into the washroom. She closed the door and went to take his other things. Prem peeped through the door 'Heer do you want me to shave my face?' Heer 'no Prem you trim it. You won't look nice as clean shaven face.' Prem 'okay.' He went to take shower. Heer kept everything his watch, mobile ready for him.

Prem came out of washroom. He changed into suit. Heer turned him to face her. she combed his hair. He shook his head. Heer 'Premmm' Prem 'Heeer' Heer 'behaving like child.' Prem 'you are treating me as child.' He stood straight as she combed her hair. Straighten his tie. 'okay come.' Heer picekd up his office bag and coat.

Kulraj, Gay3 and Lalit saw Prem and Heer coming down the stairs with a smile. They are happy. Already Heer instructed them not to show sad face in front of Prem. They all with wide smile welcomed Prem. Heer placed office bag and coat in the cauch. All walked to mandir. Gay3 did pooja. She gave prasath to everyone.

They all had breakfast. Heer and Kulraj continuously joked during breakfast. Prem too joined them slowly. Kulraj was telling how Prem behave during his exam times and cheat her mother. How his father use to chase him around the garden for lieing about his marks. Prem is telling about Kulraj pranks. Lalit and Gay3 enjoyed then having fun.

Prem and Heer went to hotel. A lady welcomed Heer with punch of white roses. Heer is surprised. When they wen to Prem's cabin, Heer 'Prem, I'm here just to give you company. why this welcome formality. i'm not your business partner.' Prem ' you resigned the job for me. can't I do this for you.' Heer 'okay. I accept your point.' She looked at the flower. 'but how do you know I like white.' Prem 'its simple.' his expression showed like he is going to big story of investigation. But he 'you only told me.' Heer confused 'when?' Prem 'during our engagement.' Heer 'do you remember that?' Prem 'ha do you know one thing.' He leaned forward 'I have good memory.' Heer quickly 'is it so? Very good.' Prem 'thanks mam.' He bowed before her.

Heer 'Mr. Prem Juenja, you are here to work. You have a client meeting at 10'o clock. Not its 9.45.' Prem is surprised 'how do you know that?' Heer 'I checked with your secretary.' Prem 'Heer, you are' he pulled her cheek 'so sweet'. Heer 'is it? Okay after finishing your meeting come and eat me.' Prem 'nice idea. I'll do it.' He took some files. Heer 'Prem' she inserted a tablet in his coat pocket 'if you feel pain. Take this.' Prem nodded. He went out of the cabin.

Heer know the meeting will take about an hour. So she went to her office and collected her settlement. She returned to hotel after and hour and found still he is in meeting. So she decided to take tour of the hotel. She liked the architecture and all interiors. She retuned to his cabin after an hour. She sat in his cabin reading a magazine.

Prem came inside with a wide smile 'bored.' Heer 'no. I just went around the hotel and reading this.' she showed the magazine. Prem sat next to her. he loosened his tie. Heer enquired how he feels now. Prem 'ya I'm okay. No pain in stomach.' Heer 'did you take that medicine.' Prem 'no.' he took the tablet out of his coat pocket. Heer 'did you drank that juice.' Prem 'ya. You send that in.' Heer shook her head 'ha. ma said its good for health. So I asked to prepare it.' Prem 'Heer, tell me one thing.' Heer looked at him with confusion. Prem 'why are you taking care of me like this?' Heer thought 'because I love you.' but she said 'someone has to take care of you. that I'm doing. If not me either Kulraj, dad or ma will do that.'

Prem leaned back 'Heer, I'm hungry. Can I order something.' Heer 'why? ma has sent food from home.' Heer got up and brought the lunch bag. She took the plate and kept in front of him. she served all the food. Prem 'Heer' Heer 'ha.' she took another plate. Prem 'don't mistake me.' Heer looked at him confusingly 'do you want anything?' Prem nodded 'I want you to feed me like you did y'day night. I'm not feeling like eating.' Heer 'but you said you ar hungry.' Prem hungry but I like eating from you hand.' Heer 'you ate breakfast.' Prem 'I can't ask in front of dad and ma. di will tease me.' Heer smiled 'okay.' She started feeding him. He ate like a kid. He bite her fingers in between. He made refusing face. Heer enjoyed feeding him.

They became very close friends. Heer went with him to all the places. They shared their thoughts. They spoke lot about business to movie. Heer did everything for him.

Heer is spreading her bed. Suddenly power went off. Heer 'ouff this electricity.' She searched for candles. Suddenly she saw candle lights in her room. Heer confusingly turned and saw Prem, Kulraj, Lalit and Gay3 holding candles standing. They started singling happy birthday song to Heer. Then only she remembered that her birthday.

The lights were on. Heer cupped her face in surprise. There was a big cake in front of them. Kulraj 'come birthday baby, cut the cake.' Prem 'ya we have to eat.' Kulraj pat his shoulder. Heer took blessing from Lalit and Gay3. She hugged Kulraj. Prem shook hands with her. Heer cut the cake. She fed to all. Prem 'you ate this . now the remaining cake is for me.' he went taking the cake into his room. Lalit, Gay3 and Kulraj presented some gold ornaments earing, chain and necklace. They went out of the room.

Heer standing near the window thinking 'everyone gave something but Prem didn't give anything to me. it means he didn't like' before she finish her thought she felt his presence close to her. She turned. Prem standing behind her.

Prem 'Heeer close your eyes.' Heer 'why?' Prem 'close your eyes.' Heer closed her eyes. Prem 'stretch your hands.' Heer 'why Prem?' she opened her eyes. Prem 'close your eyes. Do what I say.' Heer closed her eyes and stretched her hands. Prem took two bangles out of his pocket and wear it in her hand. 'now open.'

Heer looked at the bangles in her hand and got surprised. 'is it for me?' Prem grinned 'I wore this in your hand then its for you only na?' Heer 'I couldn't believe this.' Prem 'why?' Heer tried to hide her feelings 'just teased you.' Prem kissed her forehead 'happy birthday.' Heer is in heaven. She felt this is the perfect and memorable birthday gift for her.

Days passed.

Heer grabbed all his medical files. 'Prem come we'll go.' Prem is sitting in the couch 'I'm scared Heer.' Heer sat next to him 'Prem, think positively. I have confidence on God. We will get good news only.' She got up. Prem decided to smile only for Heer. They are going for medical test as the doctor felt there must be some improvement after so many days of treatment. Family members sent them to hospital with prayers. Heer strictly told the others to stay at home.

In the hosptial several tests were taken. When they asked to wait for the result Prem held Heer's hand and sat leaning on her. Heer is praying. After several hours Doctor called them into consulting room. Prem squeezed Heer's hand. Heer kept her hand on his. Doctor 'Mr. Prem, you are improved a lot. No need to panic anymore. You are perfectly alright.' Prem couldn't believe his own ears. 'doctor tell me once again.' Doctor 'you are perfectly alright. How is this possible?' Prem 'because of Heer. Heer, she is the one who gave hope and strength.' He looked at Heer who is in tears of joy. Prem 'because of you Heer.' Doctor gave some more advice and send them wishing good luck.

Prem sent driver away and decided to drive on his own. When they got into the car, Prem hugged Heer and kissed her 'thanks Heer. Thanks. ' Heer is in happiness words refuse come out of her mouth. she took her mobile. 'we'll inform this to ma and dad.' Prem 'ha.' Heer called and informed the good news to Kulraj. Prem started the car happily. Heer with a happy face looked at Prem 'I'm so happy Prem. you are fine now.'

Prem 'ha everything because of you Heer.' Heer 'I just helped you. its your confidence.' Prem 'ha Heer, call Ash inform her.' Heer face became sad. Prem 'no. you dial her number I want to tell her this good news. She will be happy.' Heer without any word picked up Prem mobile and called Ash. Prem 'out it in speaker.'

As the ring goes Heer felt her life moving out of her. After few rings Ash picked up the call. Initially she sounded uninterested. as soon as she heard Prem telling about his health she got excited 'I'm coming Prem. I'll be there at home in few hours.' Prem happily disconnected the line. Heer smiled without showing her sadness.

Lalit, Gaya3 and Kulraj celebrated with Prem. Heer participated without showing her sadness. Their happiness faded away when they saw Ash entering the house with DJ. Ash hugged Prem 'I'm so happy Prem.' DJ 'I know nothing will happen to you.' She gave a angry look to Heer. Prem 'its all because of Ash's prayer.' Heer felt as if she has been buried alive.

Heer mobile rings. 'ha. ya I remember.' She disconnected the line. Kulraj 'who is that Heer?' Heer 'bhabi, lawyer. T'row our divorce case hearing.' Prem 'ha I too got the message.' Ash 't'row you will be free Prem.' Lalit, Gay3 and kulraj looked at Prem who is busy chatting happily with Ash. They moved to their room without any hope.

Heer packed her things in suitcase. Kulraj entered the room 'what are you doing Heer?' Heer 'I don't have any rights after getting divorce bhabi. I can't live in this house after that.' Kulraj 'I'll talk to Prem.' Heer 'no bhabi. You are not talking to him. I accept his decision. He love Ash only.' Kulraj 'I won't leave him. because of you he is alive today.' Heer 'bhabi. I can't take the credit. Its his love for Ash brought him back. I'm not sad. please don't talk about this to Prem. then he will feel bad.' Kulraj 'even now you are thinking about him only.' Heer 'I love Prem.' she burst into tears. Kulraj 'Heer' Heer begged 'please bhabi. Let him live happily with his love.' she closed the suitcase. Kulraj walked out of the room with tears.

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Lalit didn't come out of the room. Gay3 who sat in the mandir didn't get up form there. She didn't take even a drop of water. Kulraj is sitting leaning on the wall staring at the door. She is ready to tear Prem into pieces when he enters the house. DJ and Ash are walking up and down in excitement.

Suddenly Kulraj shouted 'ma dad.' she shouted 'bring the arti.' She rushed to door 'ma Prem dad Heer.' she blabbered in excitement. She shouted again 'bring the arti fast. come fast .' Prem holding Heer's hand standing in the door way. Gay3 thanking God got and rushed to the entrance. Lalit 'Kulraj' he came out of the room. DJ and Ash were shocked to see Prem and Heer together.

Kurlaj handed the arti to Gay3 'ma take arti. Your DIL has come.' Gay3 with tears of joy took arti. Lalit and Kulraj hugged and watched the scene happily. Prem and Heer entered the house. They took blessings from Lalit and Gay3. They hugged kulraj. Gay3 'come here.' She took them to mandir. She instructed something to Kulraj.

Kulraj returned with mangalsutra. Gay3 'keep sindoor in her maang.' Lalit 'Gay3, we ask the pandit.' Gay3 'no need when both hearts are together. There is no need for date and time. You keep it Prem.' Prem filled Heer maang with sindoor. Gay3 handed the mangalsutra to Prem. Prem put around Heer's neck. Lalit, Gay3, Kulraj and servants clapped. Then only DJ and Ash came to present what was happening around them.

DJ and Ash are shocked to see Heer standing with sindoor in her maang. Mangalsutra in her neck. Ash 'Prem what is this?' Lalit is about to open his mouth. Prem placed his hand on his shoulder. He held Heer in his one hand and walked forward 'what is your confusion now?' Ash 'you only called me.' Prem 'yes. I did.' Ash 'then why are you marring her again.' Prem 'what I told you?' Ash 'you are perfectly alright.' Prem 'did I told you anything more than that? did I told you I'm going to divorce Heer and marry you?' Ash shook her head negatively. Prem 'then why are you shocked now. I though you will be worried about my health and called to inform you.' Ash 'you cheated me. do you know the pain of cheating?' Prem 'one second madam. As soon as you heard about my health you are the one who preferred to leave me. If you had true love one me then you should have stayed with me even if my days are counted.' He pointed his fingers to Heer 'Heer did that. she know very well that I don' have love for her. Even then she helped me to recover.' DJ 'it was their plan.' Prem 'okay its their plan but it showed you real face.' Ash 'Prem' Prem interrupted 'I wanted to show you the pain which Heer felt when I ignored her. I want to feel you the pain I went when you walked out of my life. For that only I called you here.' He pointed the door way 'now you can leave. I don't have any relation with you.' DJ and Ash with shameful face left the house.

After picking up Karan from the airport giving surprise to him both the couple had wonderful dinner at home as Gay3 made for them. Prem and Heer went to their room.

Prem closed the door. Heer 'Prem, I ddin't take my cloth from that room.' Prem 'what is the need for that.' Heer pushed him back. Prem 'go and get it.' Heer walked out of the room to take night suit and dress for her.

She returned to the room and surprised. 'Premmm' . Prem 'why are you opening your mouth this much wide?' Prem has showered rose petals on bed. candle light lit inside the room. He has removed his shirt. Prem pulled her in and closed the door. 'you are wasting my time now.' he pulled her dresses out of her hand and dumped it in the couch. Heer 'Premmm what are you doing?' Prem 'shhh.' He scooped her in his hand. Heer put his hand around his neck happily. He placed her on the bed. he lied down beside her. He lifted her head and slipped his hand underneath. He put his other hand on her other side and pulled her closer. She put her hand on him and kissed her chest. he nuzzled her cheek with his lips 'Heer, don't you want to give punish this bad boy?' Heer 'who?' Prem 'me.' Heer 'why should I punish you Prem?' he rubbed his nose on hers 'I gave pain to you.' Heer 'now you are giving me love.' Prem 'even them I should receive punishment.'

Heer 'okay then I'll give you.' Prem is expecting something serious from her. Heer 'you have to love me.' Prem 'I'm doing it. Something else.' Heer 'don't hurry. Loving me is not so easy. I'm very bad girl.' Prem repeated 'bad girl?' Heer 'I'm very romantic you know. So you to be romantic.' Prem 'romantic. I'm also.' Heer 'but I never saw you in that angle.' Prem 'I didn't show that to you.' Heer 'okay come on show it to me. then I'll decide whether the level is okay or not.' Prem captured her lips 'naughty girl. I won't leave you.'

She giggled when they broke the kiss. He pressed his kiss every part of her body. She continued to go made over her and didn't stop until they became one in a very romantic way. Prem hugged her tight 'Punish me Heer. Punish me.' Heer 'loving me the punishment for you.' Prem 'I'm ready.' he started kissing her again.


Later he came to know that his liver damage concept was from Rajveer who is psycharist working in the hospital decided to play the game to bring Heer and Prem together. It was actully a simple stomach pain because of some food. But this truth is known only to him and the doctor who interacted with Prem. When Prem come to know about this he was surprised to see Rajveer's true friendship. He respected Rajveer more and more.


Heer aranging dress inside the closet. 'Heer, you must be happy na. if i died in that disease.' Heer got angry 'Prem its a trick by Rajveer to bring us clsoe.' Prem 'if it is real.' Heer 'i had planned something else.' Prem teased her 'what plan you had? you decided to marry Rajveer?' Heer 'no. i'll surely die with you. I love you so much Prem.' Prem 'Heer, i just joked.' Heer 'you are always joke in love matter. you never understand others heart.' she turned away. Prem turned her to face him 'Heer, forgive me.' Heer strictly 'no i'm going to punish you.' Prem 'okay punish me.'


This is actually his trick to make Heer come closer to him more. Evertime when he feel Heer spends much time with others than him. He try to tease her with some stupid matters. That will make her angry. then he will ask for forgiveness. but she will punish him. In their dictiontary meaning for 'punish me' is making love and spending time alone with each other.


He loved Heer with his heart and soul.

He cosnidered loving her as his pleasure he got as a gift from God.

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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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thanks for dedicating it to me
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updt updtt
and why is ur premmm so stupiddd ab heer ko to gahr aana hi haii pehle bekar mein bhagake time waste kar dia
aur ye heerr bhaiya bhiyaaa kartiii bacchi ki tarahh kaam karti hai
koi hotty prem ko suhagraat pe chodke jata hai kya pagal samjha haiii

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me...!! luved ur OS selvy..!!
was awsum...!!!
Prem married Heer evn wen he luved Ash??? doesnt he have sense???
But heer's luv made Prem realise that wht is luv...!!!
DJ n Ash always spoil their happiness...!!!
What happened wen they went to the court??? i mean u didnt mention nythin bout it...!!
Luved it...!! i m glad n damn happy coz u r updatin daily as before..>!! missed ur writin a loads...!!!
Edited by divya4salmanyk - 14 years ago
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Selvy!

r u updatin all in 1 go???
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wow...again a gr8 os ...u r too gud...loving your all ff...well done

Edited by cute1122 - 14 years ago

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