Chai'sTeahouse2: 22/4 New Chpt p116 - Page 5

wow..wat an update... it was amazing...sooo cute
prem and heer r soo cute...

Just replying back to comments made...I know a bit late as these are for Chapter 27 😆

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

me..!

res..!

wil edit it l8er..!! hv 2 go 2 clg..!!

thnx Grace...!!

*edited*

wonderful update...!! luved prem n heer scenes in prem's room n in truck..!!! 😳

Kiran n Teji r on their side..! dats gud..!! Balraaj wil take time...coz heer has been hurt bck..!! he is father alast...he wil care for her daughter,,,,!!! but eventually he wil agree..!!! coz PREM is d bst..! made for each othr...no one cn brk dem..! 😆

thnks for d pm Grace..! 😊

Prem is the best...he's like the number 1 prize a girl could get

We will see how everything unfolds between Prem and Balraaj 😉

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Originally posted by: -alisha-

lovely update grace...specially warming each other thingy and how heer felt about prem changed frm a 15 year old boy to a man...makes me nostalgic...very nicely written...do update soon

Thanks Alisha, I liked the truck warming part too...had some fun writing that.

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Originally posted by: Oblivious

once again lovely update...👏 cant w8 for the next part ...thanks for the pm ...and please update soon ...😳

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Originally posted by: harshiti8

awesome update grace..waiting for the next part

thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: sadhz

Awesome update...sry for nt commentin on previous updates...was busy wit my projects n school...anyways...
congrats on new thread 🥳
update was great...prem heer scenes were lovely...
thnx for d pms...do update soon

No problem I understand how school is.
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Originally posted by: vrushika

once again like every time a very good update loved it

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Originally posted by: Aymee

Great update Grace.

Loved the interaction between Kiran and Heer. Kiran had me laughing when he asked Heer if he knew any girls that could handle Prem. The toliet seat had me 😆. I loved Heer's boldness and told Kiran that she was up for the challenge.

I am not surprised with Balraj's response but the reasons he gave to Teji, doesn't convince me. I feel there are 2 reasons to why Balraj said no. One, he doesn't want to lose his little girl. He wasn't around much when Heer was growing up and once she gets married, he is afraid he will lose her forever. The second reason might have to do with Prem's past. We still don't know what happened to Prem's parents. Perhaps the death of Prem's parents could be the reason why he said no. They must have known or done something that it ended up losing their lives.

I didn't like how Balraj tried to convince Heer that her relationship with Prem won't last long. 😡 I hate when people try to convince or a better word for it "brainwash" you. I can't wait until Heer proves Balraj wrong.

Prem/Heer and Preet/Meher outting was great. I loved how Meher cheered Heer up. She is already becoming a good friend to Heer.

Thank you for the PM. I can't wait to read your next update.

Very perceptive you are Lisa 😉 We will see the true reasons behind Balraaj's issues soon.

I thought I put in a little humor with Kiran's responses. Prem's a good boy cause his Mom taught him to put down the toilet seat and he does it 😲 😆

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Originally posted by: maryaa8688

this balraj has seriously gone mad😡 he is rejecting prem?!!!! prem!!!!n i really liked heer's reaction.her anger towards her father..only coz she loves prem soo much awww😳...update soon.dont make us wait for long this time ok?

We will see what are Balraaj's reasons for the way he is acting in the coming chapters.
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Originally posted by: deshdeewani

hi grace!how r u? sorry for late commenting.ectually when i comeback i was ill.and when i m feeling better i burnt my right hand with steam while cheaking the rice (only cheaking not cooking)😆funny na.but seriously yar! it was paining to much.so sorry. the update was vry nice,i really luv it. kiran was talked heer so friendly.luv the heer,kiran scenes and i also miss kulraj vry badly. premeer scenes was so cute and meet was too vry nice.they r a true friend.

but one thing i can't under stand what is the problem of balraj?i know hw is concerned about her daughter but he is overreacting.he already knows that her daughter starting luv prem.

but any ways teji and kiran are with them.

and ya may be i will go to my nani's place again because my nani is angry with my papa for my early return and vry miss me.now my papa is plaining to visit their place again.

so,if i not commenting on ur next update,it means i m at my nani's place.sorry for that in advance.

please countinue soon.

and thanks for the pm.😊

I hope you are feeling better now. I'm sorry to hear about your burn hand. I know how that is...been burned myself a couple of times doing kitchen stuff.

We will see what are Balraaj's reasons in the coming chapters 😉

Thanks for taking the time to comment 😃 And if you go to your Nani's place again have fun.

wow dat was a romantic proposal🤗

Grace, what a wonderful chapter.

sooorrryyy for not commenting on the last chapters 😳
Nywayzzz it was an awesmeee update...really luvd tht prem heer are back to place whr their love story started...luvd it how he surprised...prem is really good at givin surprises 😃...but all thanks to u 😆 ..lol.
Premeer in the room sittin near the window...thts was such a cute scene. 😃 .
Luvd the proposal...like heer said it was perfectt...i just luvd the dialogues...awesmeee ❤️
Premeer in their school rememberin their chilhood memories...prem is nice at tellin stories 😆 ...how he made up the story tellin they hav a daughter 😆 .
Hmmm so all friends gonna meet and will be sharin their stories...i hope abby doesnt cme there .
Aww i luv u teji...u r the best mother and mother in law.
Whhooo such a hot and steamy moment between premeer 😳 ...i just luvd it...too good...but i just hate these interruptions 😡 .
I advice premeer to take up a house in underground on their phingoli so noone can intrrrupt them atleast at tht moment...i hope u luk up at this grace 😉.
Ooops debbie heard...but prem didnt let heer talk naa 😳 😆 ...then wht she heard.
Nywayzz thanks for pm...update sooon.

hi really nice plzz send me pm also:)

Originally posted by: divya4salmanyk

me..! wow dat was a steamy update..!!

wow dat was a romantic proposal..!!!

prem gave heer d bst suprise..! '

finally as i said debbie n othr gang wil meet later..! 😆

n i guess Abby wil also b there..! 😛

Heer n Prem r always interrupted hehehe..!

thx for d pm GRACE..! n thnku for updatin so soon...n update nxt prt also soon😳😳

Glad you enjoyed the update. Prem's so romantic 😍...hehe
We will see who shows up at the dinner.
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Originally posted by: -alisha-

lol i loved the total part...specially the ending masala...im sure premeers legs are going to be pulled really hard...loved the way heer forgot to hang the fone up properly and debbie heard ev thing...haha really funny and romantic at the same time...great write up grace i cant wait for the next part...do update soon

Debbie sure got an earful 😆 she heard some things that she probably didn't want to hear 😳
We will see what ends up happening at dinner with Prem and Heer 😛
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Originally posted by: Oblivious

wow..wat an update... it was amazing...sooo cute
prem and heer r soo cute...

thanks for the pm ...

and please update soon ...😃

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Originally posted by: seema.sharma86

wow dat was a romantic proposal🤗

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Originally posted by: Aymee

Grace, what a wonderful chapter.

I really loved this chapter because it was only about Prem and Heer.

Prem and Heer visiting their old homes and their school was very cute. Prem really gave Heer a very nice surprise.

Prem's proposal was perfect. Perfect for them. It was great that Heer understood Prem's nervousness, even though they knew her answer would be 'yes'. Gorgeous ring btw. I feel like going to the store now and buy that ring. 😆

Prem and Heer's love scene was just too 😳 and too funny 😆 with a side of 😳. Ok, I know what I just wrote didn't make an sense so let me clarify. Of course whenever Prem and Heer makes love, it will always be 😳 for me. But what made me laugh was that Heer didn't hang up the phone properly 😆 and to make matters worse, Debbie heard something that she wasn't suppose to 😳. OMG, if I was Heer, I would have died out of embrassment. 😆

Thank you for the PM Grace. I am really sorry for my comment being short. I can't wait for your next update. Oh, one more thing, Teji calling Balaraj, Mr. Grumpy was too funny. He deserved that name 😆

A nice little chapter with just Prem and Heer as we will see what happens next to them 🤓 with Balraaj and all.

That ring is gorgeous...so pretty and shiny...I really loved it when I saw the picture of it and thought hey this could be a good ring for Heer 😆...so I saved the picture.

If I was Heer I would die of embarrassment as well...I think most people would if they knew someone had heard something that they weren't suppose to hear ...we will see what happens at dinner 😉 😆
Thanks for taking the time to comment. Glad you enjoyed this chapter 😃

Originally posted by: khajju

sooorrryyy for not commenting on the last chapters 😳
Nywayzzz it was an awesmeee update...really luvd tht prem heer are back to place whr their love story started...luvd it how he surprised...prem is really good at givin surprises 😃...but all thanks to u 😆 ..lol.
Premeer in the room sittin near the window...thts was such a cute scene. 😃 .
Luvd the proposal...like heer said it was perfectt...i just luvd the dialogues...awesmeee ❤️
Premeer in their school rememberin their chilhood memories...prem is nice at tellin stories 😆 ...how he made up the story tellin they hav a daughter 😆 .
Hmmm so all friends gonna meet and will be sharin their stories...i hope abby doesnt cme there .
Aww i luv u teji...u r the best mother and mother in law.
Whhooo such a hot and steamy moment between premeer 😳 ...i just luvd it...too good...but i just hate these interruptions 😡 .
I advice premeer to take up a house in underground on their phingoli so noone can intrrrupt them atleast at tht moment...i hope u luk up at this grace 😉.
Ooops debbie heard...but prem didnt let heer talk naa 😳 😆 ...then wht she heard.
Nywayzz thanks for pm...update sooon.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Prem's proposal was perfect wasn't it 😍 Heer's so lucky.
Story time with friends at dinner will be 🤔 interesting 😆 especially after what Debbie heard. As for what she heard well, I didn't think I needed to go into detail of that. Prem may have kissed Heer's mouth the first time to keep her quiet but then after that I don't think I need to go on. Debbie just heard some things that she probably shouldn't have heard. Poor Debbie she was on the phone probably like Hello? Helllooo...oh, uh-oh...sounds like someone is 😳 okay...I'm going to hang up now.

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Originally posted by: alwaysharshiti

hi really nice plzz send me pm also:)

Hi *waves* ⭐️ new reader I see. Thanks for taking the time to comment. You've been added to the PM list 😃

u r awesume writing...amazinggg pattern of writing...😊...thankooo <3 very much for the update :) u rock...

perfect grace.. just perfect

Awesome update...wow
i loved d surprise ...it was so romantic...everythin was perfect...
teji is lovely maa n this balraj*angry*...maan jao yaar...
n premeer romance at d end ☺️...haayyyeee...this two na...
thnx for d pm...do update soon nxt part