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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: nikitagmc
Loved the part!!!! (Have I said that before? 😆 )

One thing I really liked about the part was how all the small details mentioned earlier tied up beautifully to carry the story forward - this shows in itself that you have a well thought out story beforehand and the twists and reasoning in place. Good job!

oh... I love Preet! <3 adorable he is, still keeps those beads close to himself.

Precap for the next part sounds hilarious! Waiting for it eagerly!

Thanks for the wonderful comments. I hope my writing continues to live up to your expectations.

And watch out for those beads. They play an important role in this story 😊.

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Siti Nabilah

@ctnabilah

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Awesome update but what the hell is wrong with Preet? So, all these problems in last 6 months has been created by him who are just listened the matter in only 1 side. How can he be soo mean to Heer? OmG! I can't believe it...

But Fatima, I love the way u update ur ff...it's in full details. That's y I will open IF everyday to check ur update ff PM to me.

Do update it soon dear...really cant wait for it

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Hi Fatima 😃

Enjoyed the update

This part cracked me up so hard, especially the recounting described in bold 😆😆 It's so Preet & Meher! I laughed for at least a minute 😆

""Oh my God! I am so sorry!" cried Meher as she pushed her hair back from her eyes, "I was running late and...Tum?!" A stunned Meher found herself looking into the face of a smiling Preet. "Han main...", laughed Preet. "Tumhari ye girnay ki adat nahi gayi. Here let me help you up", he said offering Meher his hand. Meher just glared at him. "Oh sorry, I forgot...you never need my help", said Preet as he stuck his hands in his pant's pockets."

I love the way you're taking the story forward! Really beautifully written!!

Preet is acting as moron for the moment 😔 Prem too has made a decision impulsively. If he can't understand his Heer then he doesn't really deserve her at this point - he really should take his own cool time to educate himself about Heer or any other person for that matter. So sad for Heer 😒 Preet looking out for his bro & Meher doing the same for her sis is very nice to see.

Very excited for next chapter !

Thanks Fatima, you did an amazing job! You're an awesome writer 🤗

Edited by athisdagrh - 13 years ago

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Fatima

@Fatima_Q

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: athisdagrh

I love the way you're taking the story forward! Really beautifully written!!

Preet is acting as moron for the moment 😔 Prem too has made a decision impulsively. If he can't understand his Heer then he doesn't really deserve her at this point .

Very excited for next chapter !

Thanks Fatima, you did an amazing job! You're an awesome writer 🤗

Thanks so much 😃. It took me forever to write this chapter. But I'm glad you all liked it.

Okay...I think more than one person called Preet a moron 😆. But let's cut him some slack, he is after all just looking out for his PB.

I really don't blame Prem in all of this. He and Heer just got caught in the cross-fire of misunderstanding between the 2 families 😭.

And anyways a little confusion is necessary for the upcoming dhamaka between Meet.

Oops don't want to give too much away.😆

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

updated after so long ...thank u so much

it was an awesome update... prett meher scenes were really very cute...

actually really really cute...

they were superb... actually u made it so nice...

loved the update...

thank u so much fr the update... also thank u fr teh pm dear.. loved it...

take care... and yeah update soon...

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Monaghosh

@Sumaan_fan

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

fantastic🤗update soon😃

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sharmeeli

@sharmeeli

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Fatima dear, did you know that you are a talented writer????😲😲Cause let me tell you: you are!!!!!!🤗I loved your update🤗 But I feel sad for Heer, hope that the Juneja's will get to know about the truth soon😲 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆Loved MEET's ''meeting'', Preet was already smiling while Meher didn't know on top of who she fell😆😆😆😆😆😆Plzzz update ASAP dear😳 and thanks for the PM😳

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--Minks--

@--Minks--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Hey Fatima (if I may)... I have read the last few parts, and being the lazy me, forgot to even comment... sorry... 😳

Btw, very nice and crisp chapter.. love how the two sisters go to the two destinations, coz of a practical reason... and things are following through for more of Preet -Meher interactions ... hope that they at least get to see some good side of each other during the whole wedding ceremony... warna unki dosti to patan nahi kab hogi...

On the other hand, I felt sad for poor Heer... well, I knew it was coming (following P&P)... still, it was heart-breaking to read about her going through her life so listlessly... that's terrible.. and hope that she gets a bit stronger, and is able to handle things better maybe after her Canada trip...

And, Preet is such a cutie.. ki uspe to gussa bhi karne ka mann nahi karta.. he played spoil-sport between Prem and Heer... bewkoof kahin ka... hope ki Heer ke achche din jaldi aaye...

-- Minks