This part is dedicated to two people.
First, we all know today Additi Gupta is coming onscreen after a break of almost a year. All the best Additi.
Second, Our fellow Harshiti / Premeer crazy fan.
She is soon to be mother. Congrats dear.🥳
God bless you and your baby.
Shot 13
Driver parked the car. Heer guessed something. Still she is silent in her excitement. She has read about Singapore cruise. She is very much excited. She wants to jump out of the car screaming like a kid. She always wanted to enjoy a ship journey. She lost in thought and didn't notice Prem got out of the car and ready to go.
Prem opened the door for Heer. Until she felt his hand on her shoulder she didn't realise she need to get down enjoying her excitement. Heer looked at Prem. Prem smiled 'get down Heer.' Heer happily got out of the car. She jumped infront of him like a kid 'what is the name of the ship?' Prem 'super star virgo'. Heer like a kid excitingly 'thanks Prem.' Prem looked at childish Heer and smiled thinking 'she is my same old Pari.'
Heer controlled herself seeing his loving eye on her. She smiled and looked around to divert him. Prem is disturbed by a voice 'good evening sir.' Prem turned to the owner of the voice. He shook hand with him replying 'good evening.' The person turned to Heer 'Good evening madam.' Heer smiled 'good evening'. Another two persons are standing with him also wished Prem and Heer but his wish was like employee. Heer thought 'Prem owning ships too.' Driver kept their luggage. He handed over the gift bag to Prem. He waited for Prem's order. Prem 'okay. you come tomorrow evening here.' Driver shook his head and left. Heer thought 'so we are staying in here for one night.' She looked at Prem. Prem looking at her face. She shyly smiled hiding her dream world. Prem 'shall we move?' Heer shook her head like a kid. He smiled 'come'. The first person took laptob bag and gift bag from Prem's hand while the other staff took their luggage.
As they are walking towards the boarding area of ship, Heer walked closer to Prem. Prem understood Heer wants to ask something. He wanted to slip his hand around her waist like many other passengers who are couple. But he kept himself quiet. He don't want to act too much in his excitement.
Heer looked at the star virgo floating in the sea. She closed her mouth. 'wow beautiful.' She quickly 'is this your ship?' Prem shook his head negatively 'no.' Heer confusingly 'then' her eyes pointed the staff walking ahead of them, she quickly 'you must be having restaurant here. Am i correct?' Prem smiled 'yes. WE have restaurant here. He is OUR manager.' He pressed 'we and our'. But Heer didn't notice that. she is lost in the huge star virgo and her excitement in getting into that ship.
Clearing few formalities, staff walked ahead of them. Prem and Heer followed. Heer slipped when she kept her legs inside the ship. Prem wrapped his hand around her waist to hold her. She managed 'i'm sorry Prem.' Prem pulled her closer and tightened his grip around her 'walk carefully Heer.' He didn't remove his hand till they reached their room. Manager opened the room. He and the staff kept everything in the front room. He left as Prem thanked him.
Heer is standing in the middle of the room looking around. Prem closed the door and came to her. 'how long you will stay with wide open mouth.' He closed her mouth with his fingers. Heer excitingly 'i never thought i'll get a chance to get into a cruise.' Prem 'sometime unexpected things happens in our life.' He held her hand 'come. Many more to see.' He dragged her to another room. There is bed oneside. Prem pushed the curtain to the side. A glass door giving the view of the sea. There is a balcony attached to it. from bed sea can be viewed through that. Prem pushed the glass door. Heer ran ahead of him to have a look from Balcony. Prem stood near the glass door. Heer stood in the balcony looking outside.
Heer felt two hands from her back hugging her. His body pressed against her back. He placed her hands around her stomach. He rested his chin on her shoulder and kissed her. She pulled him more closer.
Heer jerked coming out of her thought hearing mobile ringing.
Prem enjoying Heer. he is clearly sensing she is dreaming him behind her. Her shoulder curving upwards gave him clear sign she is enjoying his back hug.
Prem looked at the mobile cursing the caller. Without hearing anything he replied 'don't disturb me for next two days.' He disconnected the line. He looked at Heer. Heer managing her feeling came to the room from balcony. She 'its nice Prem.' Prem silently smiled accepting her compliment.' Heer checked the room. She even checked the toilets. Prem leaning on the glass door admired her checking e everything. He though 'all ladies are same in this.' He remembers his mother checking everything when they go to stay in hotels. He thought 'ladies wants everything to be comfortable.' Unconsciously smiled thinking 'perfect bahu for my ma.'
Heer 'Prem, are we going to stay one day in this room.' Prem 'no'. he moved forward to Heer who is now standing on the bedroom door 'come we'll go to top of this ship.' Heer threw her hand bag on to the bed 'ha come we'll go. I want to see the ship sailing into sea.' Prem grabbed her hand bag from the bed 'take camera with you.' Heer 'ha i forgot.' She opened the bag. Prem 'its not heavy why can't you keep the bag with you.' Heer 'ha okay.' she closed the bag 'ya.' Im ready.' Prem held her hand. Heer is happy Prem is holding her hand whenever possible.
Prem and Heer are standing on the top of the ship along with many more travelling on that. as the horn marked the start of the journey all the passengers cheered. Star virgo sailed into sea. Heer was excitingly watching her first journey into sea. She forgot to capture anything. Prem took camera from her and covered face enjoying the journey. Heer turned back and saw Prem capturing her. 'Prem, see there. wow.' She shouted like a kid making comments between her excitements.
After sometime, all the passengers started dispersing taking picture. Prem stepped closer to Heer who is still lost in her first journey into sea. He slipped her hand around her waist. She kept her hand on his shoulder. She excitingly 'take one picture of us too.' Prem 'okay.' he looked around for help. A little girl standing next to them heard their conversation. She smartly 'can i help you uncle.' Prem looked down at the girl. He smiled 'ya'.
Girl took camera from Prem's hand and walked few steps back. Prem is holding Heer with his hand around her waist. Heer is standing straight. Girl focussed the camera towards them. she removed the camera from her front and looked at Prem and Heer. 'aunty, put your hands around uncle.' Heer then only noticed Prem's hand around her waist. She quickly slipped her hands around his waist and leaned closer to his chest resting her head on his shoulder. Girl 'perfect.' She clicked. She handed over the camera to Prem and ran away. Prem checked the picture. As girl said it was perfect picture of them. Heer hanging on his shoulder watched their picture. he showed it to her.
They spend time clicking pictures of each other.
Ash is about to dial Prem's mobile from her mobile. She stopped 'no'. she took the land line receiver. dialled Singapore office number. 'let see how Prem escapes from this call.'
After few minutes of ringing tone, a female picked up the call. 'Good evening.' Ash don't have patience to hear her welcoming words. She hurried 'good evening. can you please transfer the line to Mr. Juneja. I'm calling from Indian office.' Female ' your good name.' Ash 'Ms. Ash' female 'sorry Ms. Ash. Mr. Juneja asked not to transfer any calls to him.' Ash 'its very urgent' female 'he is not in the office.' Ash 'where is he?' female 'don't know.' Ash 'i'm very close to him. Connect to him.' Female 'if you are very close, call him in his personal number.' Ash 'give me his personal number.' Female 'you said you are close to him.' Ash 'yes.' Female 'don't you know his number.' Ash 'i forgot.' Female 'sorry Ms. Ash, that is not my problem.' Ash 'i'm his' she paused 'i'm very close.' Female 'then you must be knowing his personal number.' Ash 'i said i forgot' female 'sorry Ms. Ash , i don't have authority to reveal his personal number. Sorry i can't help you. thanks.' Before Ash say further female disconnected the line.
Ash angrily kept the receiver down. 'he is not in office. Where is he?' she wanted to shout aloud 'this Prem is making me fool all the time. I feel something going on in his mind.' She held her head and tried to think something to catch Prem into her hand.
Prem holding Heer's hand came to Juneja restaurant. Heer 'this is also nice Prem' Prem 'should be nice otherwise we are not allowed to keep a restaurant in a ship like this'. She tugged her other hand into Prem's hand which is holding Heer's.
A waiter welcomed them and asked them to sit in a place. Prem showed his eye to Heer. Heer understood Prem trying to hide his identity here. Both settled in a place designed for couple. Waiter waited for them to settle. Waiter placed the menu card 'enjoy your dinner sir.' Prem looked at the menu and ordered. He looked at Heer 'want anything more.' Heer smiled 'enough for now.' Prem finalised the order and looked at Heer. Heer 'Prem, why' Prem intruppted 'shhh'. Heer kept quiet and didn't talk further even about other things.
Prem teased ' i didn't tell you to close your mouth completely.' Heer 'i have nothing to talk' Prem 'i know you have so much to talk.' Heer 'when did you start reading my mind?' Prem 'long back.' Heer 'when?' Prem managed 'past 2 days.' Heer little disappointed. She played with the spoons. Prem enjoyed her face.
Dinner served. Prem and Heer ate silently. Prem is in thinking mode while Heer is in disappointed mood. Heer thought 'how long he will take to understand my heart? He is always dominating munna.' Prem thought 'how to surprise my Pari? Today is the perfect day. I don't want to miss the chance.'
After dinner. Prem looked at the waiter 'i like to meet in charge of this restaurant.' Waiter pointed a direction 'he is inside that cabin sir.' Prem got up 'don't you get scared when i asked you about manager.' Waiter 'why should i sir? I'm confidence. I did attend you both well.' Prem smiled. Pat his shoulder 'well done. Keep it up.' he walked towards the cabin following the waiter. Heer followed Prem holding his hand. she whispered to Prem 'don't you know manager's cabin?' Prem whispered back 'i know. i wanted to check his confidence.' Heer 'oh. Inspection.' Prem 'just for fun.'
In the middle of the way, someone informed the manager about Prem's visit. Manager came rushing towards Prem. 'sir, you could have ordered over phone.' Prem 'its okay. i just wanted to feel our restaurant environment as common man.' Waiter is surprised and looking at Prem and manager. Prem 'really everyone doing their job great.' He smiled at the waiter. Waiter 'sir' manager 'he is our owner.' Waiter became nervous. Prem pat his shoulder complementing him. Waiter excused and went ahead to continue his job.
Prem and Heer went to manager cabin with manager. Prem 'Heer, you sit here. I'll be back'. Heer sat inside. Prem looked at the manager 'i want to talk to you.' Prem came out of cabin. Manager followed him.
Prem alone came to cabin after some time. 'Heer, come we'll go.' Heer got up 'are we going to the room now?' Prem 'no'. Heer 'what else we can do here?' prem 'i'll show you. come with me now.' Holding her hand Prem took her to few shops inside the ship.
Around 11:30, Prem opened their room door. Room is dark. Heer stepped in 'where is the switch?' Prem 'wait Heer.' he closed her eyes with his plam. Heer 'Prem what are you doing?' Prem 'shhh'. He stretched his other hand to switch on the light. He slowly removed his hand from her eyes. Heer opened her eyes slowly. She covered her mouth in surprise.
Room decorated with colourful balloons and flowers. She turned around enjoying the fragrance of flowers and decoration. She hugged Prem. Prem is surprised and happy. He wants to hold her tight. But don't want to waste time. He pulled her away. She is disappointed. He picked up the gift bag. He gave it to her 'Heer, fast change.' She 'what is this Prem?' he 'dress for you. fast you have only 10 minutes.' Heer then only realised it her birthday. She is standing in a surprise. He hurried her 'Heer, fast'
Heer ran to bedroom to change. She pulled out a wrapped cover from the bag. She opened the cover in hurry. She looked at a blue lehenga with silver embroidery. There are few matching accessories with it. heer quickly started wearing this lehenga. Quickly put all the accessories. She looked herself in the mirror for a second. She opened the door.
Prem restlessly sitting outside with so much confusion 'will she like his choice of selection? Can able to express my heart to her?' he opened the cake set everything ready for cutting. He looked at Heer as he heard the door opening sound.
Heer stepped out with a smile. Prem unconsciously got up from his place and walked to her. He showed his hand. she slipped her hand into his. He led her to a couch. she settled in front of a cake. Cake is small enough for them to eat. Prem sat next to her. He gave the knife into her hand. he lit the candle. She is excited to cut the cake. he 'wait'. He looked at his mobile. Exactly at 12 he told her to blew the candle to cut the cake. Heer blew out the candle. She cut the cake. he sang happy birthday song for her. she took a small piece and gave it to him. He took a bite and gave the remaining piece to her. She licked her fingers like a kid. She stopped suddenly when she sensed a movement next to her
Prem went on his knees. He showed his palm. Heer breathlessly waited for him to propose. She wiped her fingers with a tissue and ready to give her hand to him. But he is staring at her face without a word. Heer is staring at him with an expectation. Ever after few minutes Prem didn't open his mouth to propose her. Heer without losing her hope staring at him.
Prem took her hand 'Happy Birthday Pari.' Heer for a second lost her all hope. But lost word got her attention. 'Pari' her heart beating fast thinking 'he found out me as Pari. I don't want to waste this chance.' She stood up as he is still on his knees expecting her reaction. She asked him with a bold heart 'will you make me your wife, munna?' Prem jumped on to his feet and hugged her tightly 'i'll. I'll Pari. You are always my wife.' He cupped her face and started kissing her madly. Heer forgot to suck air for her life as he is kissing her all over her face. Heer laughed accepting his love. He slipped his one hand around her waist another around her shoulder looked at her. 'i love you Pari.' Heer 'I love you too.' She giggled putting her hands around him.
He placed a kiss on her lips. Heer didn't protest. Even then he didn't go further. He looked at heer who is waiting with her closed eyes. Heer slowly opened her eyes. he smiled. She shy smiled 'i liked your surprise. But instead of me you should have proposed.' Prem nuzzled his nose on hers 'i want you to do that.' Heer 'why?' Prem seriously 'i brought you here to knowing you are my Pari. I did so much. i expected a small part from you too.' Heer smiled 'oh businessman. So calculative.' Prem shook his head negatively 'i'm always your Munna.'
Heer 'what next' Prem released her from his hand 'my surprises are over. Now go to sleep.' Heer shook her head negatively 'no i won't. I didn't receive my birthday gift.' Prem innocently 'this dress'. Heer 'no. you must have saved so much for me all these years.' He pulled her nose 'naughty girl.' Heer 'you have something else.' Prem shook his head positively. He took two covers from other side. 'ya this is for you. i saved all these years.'
Heer happily started unwrapping one pack. She saw a iPad inside. Prem is scanning her face. She opened the next. There is a jewel box inside. She looked at him before open the jewel box. He signalled her to open. She opened the box and saw diamond necklace. With a wide open mouth 'diamond' Prem took the necklace 'for my Pari.' He wore it around her neck. She put her hand around his neck and kissed his cheek once. Prem 'only one.' Heer placed few more kisses on both side of his cheeks. He is happily showing his cheeks to her for more kisses.
waiting for your comments.
Edited by newt2007 - 12 years ago
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