FF| AWMARW Thread 2 - Page 33

nice update grace.

Originally posted by: brainychild92

o no.. poor meet.. dont break em up.. please!!! i hope they try and se eachother's point of views...

bechare harmaya.. they are going to have a long ride w/ their dads...

continue soon

Originally posted by: Sukrutha

less of premeer..........thatt shaaaaaaaaddddd........

Originally posted by: Pumpkinn

Awesome update !

Loved it !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

Originally posted by: sadhz

chindi sa premeer part 😆..........bt its k.........
yes u hav 2 concentrate on other people..........
hmmm.................preet is drunk..😔.............poor meher.......
update sooooon n thnx for d pm

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Hey!

That was an awsome part!
Loved it!
Loved the Nihaal - Veera, Maya - Harmaan n Meet scenes.
I hope Vinay agrees soon for Maya and Harmaans wedding then may be they can get married on the same day as Meet???
N i hope Meets problem is solved soon- don't like arguing.
But there wasn't much of Premeer 😔
Want more Premeer next time.

Update soon n thnx for the PM!

Originally posted by: sherma

great part.but meet fight was sad.preet drunk,poor meher.pld dont break meet.do continue soon.

Originally posted by: ...Harshiti...

Hey Grace thnkx for the PM and it was a great update!😊

A very small scene of premeer but was very well written and i Loved it😳. and yes you do also have to cocentrate on other couples so that it doesn't look like that their lives are stuck at one place😆.

Preet is drunk? meher and preet fight! 😲

anyways enjoyed reading it and waiting for some steamy hot bathroom Romance of Premeer ☺️☺️

Update soon!!

Originally posted by: rhtpkcm

loved it...twas awesome

Originally posted by: keer456

great update grace😉.... I really seem to be falling deeper in love with your writing..... you are an excellent writer..😃.... I really miss prem and heer more these days after i read your updates that i have started watching kisdesh scenes from you tube😆...... Sorry for not giving regular comments i am having a tough time with all my test papers, assignments and projects...... Thank you for the pm..... Eagerly waiting for the next updates.....

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Thanks for the awesome update 😃
liked all the parts of Other couples, specially preeths
small and cute premeer scenes❤️
waiting for next part update soon😉

Originally posted by: princess5341

luved it

premeer are so adorable!

harman is always by maya's side - i actually like this couple!

meher and preet is shakey now but im sure preeet will come back for his meher!!

update soon!!!!

Originally posted by: Motibah

D'aaaw hardly any premeer

haha Prem fell asleep on the couch 🤣 Poor boy!

I don't see why Heer's so mad though 😉

and awww poor Meher! Why is Preet being such a jerk 😡

Hope they sort things out 😃

Thanks for the pm and updateee asap 🤗

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

OMG, OMG, OMG!!!😲😲😲 Poor Meher!!😒 Why am I having the feeling that she won't tell anybody about this???😲 Preet should realize his mistake, he was drunk... plzzz let him realize so they will make up with each other😳😳

😆Harman was really getting nervous when he met Vinay...😆😆😆 aaahw Veera is getting jealous at Jyoti?😆

😆😆😆Premeer are having a great time at their honeymoon huh?😆

Originally posted by: Waqas...

Nice Chapter, but less of premeer, want more their scenes😳😳 !!!!

Hope things sort out between meher and preet... in the last Premeer 😳😆, having great time haan !!!😆 But it was cute !!! Thanks for the PM !!!

Originally posted by: khajju

awesmee update....poor meet....awww why so less prem heer....poor prem fell asleep on couch....aww heer angry on him now....harman maya...seems veryy difficult for them to unite now...but iluvd maya's answers to her father...thanks for pm....update soon

Originally posted by: newt2007

nice update grace.

less of Premeer. by the way you ended sounds like you have wondeful premeer part in the next update.

other parts i liked it. hope Preet and Meher fight. hope they sets right soon. can't see them fighting like this.

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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Originally posted by: curledup

so I've been reading this for a long time and I've been itching to comment and I'm a gunna! :D

Originally posted by: -saBii-

Yay, you updated.
& I owe you comments. :P Sorry. :)

I enjoy the couples more than Premeer - so IMO, it's a good thing you're givin' 'em some private time. ;)

*sigh* I <3 Harman&Maya in your story. Bechari Maya, trying so hard, but it's just never enough when fathers are at loggerheads with each other. I'm glad Harman is such a calming influence on her.. and LOL. I <3ed the Pepsi scene; I reckon Meher shouldn't have asked.. she could have gotten it herself.

& on that note - omg, Preet. What's with the beer? Eww.. I never saw Preet as a beer lover.
& yes, Preet is so drunk. I definitely feel for Meher - she's not used to this.. so it's definitely a clash of culture in a way. I guess Preet should have eased her in to all the parties and nights out. Hoping Premeer get back to help solve the problem - Prem will definitely be able to make Meher understand, and Heer will help Preet. :)

I love this story. I love your writing. :D
<3

PS. Fastforward the Nihaal-Veera s/l - as in, I wanna see Nihaal falling for Veera asap ;). I want more of them.. I know, I know, they were pretty boring in the show. But I still reckon they're a cute couple. :D

Originally posted by: Aymee

Great update Grace.

I have to admit and agree with Maya about Meher's "order" about the sodas. Meher could have gotten it by herself. She would have seen how clean the kitchen was and told Maya what a great job she had done. But, Maya grabbing the broom and was ready to hit Meher in the head was hilarious. It is a good thing Harman saw that and stopped her. 😆.

I do feel bad about Preet and Meher's agrument but I wondering what is going on with Preet. He has always been the bad boy of the family and now he is trying to prove that he has grown into a more responsible person. I hope they make up soon.

Vinay, Maya and Harman scenes were very good. I felt bad for Harman and Maya when her dad ended their conversation so soon and walked away. I hope their dads will accept their relationship.

Oh, come on Grace, you know your readers well enough. It is ok Prem and Heer are on their honeymoon. We can still enjoy their scene still. 😆

Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to your next chapter.