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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggggg

thanks for waiting swati dear i will post it in few minutes🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

my special thanks to all my friends who commented and pressed like buttons and silent readers.🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!...
i hope prem and heer will accept their love for each other!...
continue soon!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago


part 4

meher continues " look heer this letter is just rubbish , its just joke ". heer " what you saying meher look after this letter only that incident happened". meher laughs " no heer you misunderstood this person cant do like that ". heer " what ". meher " cant you identify the handwriting ". heer " whose handwriting ". meher " the person loves you more than his mobile phone ". she adds " he is such a idiot who always cares for you and gifts you chocolates ". heer screams " rajveer" . she calls rajveer " rajveer why did this stupid thing ". rajveer " i thought you are so brave but you feared for it ". heer " you stupid i hurted prem bcoz of you ". rajveer " what me you only wanted me to stop your marriage i just sent a sample letter ".
heer " rajveer i am loving prem ". rajveer " oh really then fine dear i comeback soon to see how prem handle you ". heer " but rajveer how could i propose prem ".
she heared a voice saying " no need heer i am here sorry i should not have been angry on you ". heer turns to prem . prem continues heer its true first i hate you without knowing your face or name " . but when the moment i saw you i fell in love " . " i loved to fight with you ". " will you fight with me forever ". heer smiles " yes i do need a punch bag in my life ". all the four laughed.
prem " heer tmrw i give you a party i want to propose you in a romantic way ". heer " romantic way heer laughed heavily ". prem got annoyed . heer " prem you are not a romantic person how can you do like that ". prem " hello i am not the one you are like that ". heer " is it let me check tmrw ". prem " you are going to be amazed ". heer " let me see prem ". they starred at each other and sits thinking how to win .

next day

heer was waiting for prem's call. but he didnt even messeged her .heer thinks " how can i live happily with this stupid person always says one thing and does one thing ". heer angirlyy walks hear and there in her room. door bell begins to ring .

she goes and open the door a man stands there . he gave a bunch of flowers and a card. in that card says " heer to get a surprise come to jewel shop and the address is mentioned there ". heer thinks " oh prem you are doing great let me see what you selected for me ".


she goes there a girl gives her a diamond ring which have heart shaped stone . it looks beautiful . heer was surpised to see another note to come her to a restuarant . she goes there . she saw a table full of candles and light music played. she goes and sits in the table as per instruction. she saw prem on his kneels and folding his hand with a bunch of flowers and

says " miss .heer maan will you accept me ". heer was in a surprise she felt joy and she gets up from the chair and says " i love you prem ". prem " shall we have a dance ". heer " ofcourse why not ". they performed jalsa everyone was just gazing at thier lovely performance.
after they finished they both in the car . prem " heer how is my proposal ". heer " really good but so filmy ". prem " oh let me see how you will do ". heer " hey what do you think in your mind i can do this far better than you . let me see . heer just get out of the car . prem " what ". heer " do what i say prem ".
they both stepped out of the car . heer hugs him and gave lip to lip kiss . prem was surprised . she looked his face and she moves from him and shouts " my dear angry youngman i love you". prem comes near to heer and whispered " too filmy but i accept you too.
suddenly he left speechless . heer was shocked to see his reaction . heer turned to see what was there . lalit stands there starring at them . heer and prem looked at him with fear .
lalit looks at them he angrily asked " so both come here to enjoy life ". prem " no papa sorry i challenged her she is a good girl ". heer " uncle actually i provoked him to do so ". lalit looked at them . prem " pops sorry ". lalit comes near them . they both feared.
lalit smiles " prem look you may love her , you both may be engaged but kissing in public like this not a decent one". i know you both are sportive love to tease other . but this things will hurt your prestige ". premeer got relived .
heer " sorry uncle ". lalit " dont be sorry dears i just ask you to behave thats all . okay now i am going i think you will follow what i said ".

heer " omg i didnt even thought we would be in such an awkward situation ". prem " hmm but i am happy ". heer " what nonsense ". prem " no heer my dad never behaved like this but today he is super cool ". heer " it all happened bcoz of me ". prem " heerrr my mood is good shall we go for a drive ". heer " oh wat a person you are ". prem " heer plz ". heer accepts.


heer and prem stepped into the restuarant . prem kept his mobile in car so he moved to pick up . heer sits inside the restuarant. there he was shocked to see gay3 speaking with the goons who attacked him. prem was shattered seeing this. he got confused . he immediately went inside to take heer out . he drops heer at home . he madly drives the car to home.


friends i finished part 4 plz do read and say if it is bad or not?

Edited by anuu2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeee part lovelyyyyyy waitingggggg for next asap

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Edited by sweta2005 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oo... now what story is she going to cook up...

continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update
Premeer scenes were really funny
Nw seriously i want to know y G3 is doing al these things
Continue soon..................................................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice romantic update!!!!!
goos that prem came to knw so soon abt gayatri!!!!
jst lovd this part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one.thnks for pm. do continue soon.

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