FF: Kaash... Aisa Hota note pg-50 *15/7/11 - Page 9

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awesome
waiting for the next part
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nice ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: additi10

awesome
waiting for the next part

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Originally posted by: nisha1984

nice ff

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THANKS! FOR LIKING THE POST !

Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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hi guyz! here is the next update.hope u all like it.pllllllllllzzzzzz leave ur comments and press the like button if u like it.





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Geet: Heer! this house belongs to someone else.You sold it?

Geet asked Heer in confusion when she saw that the door of the house don't have a lock and it was locked from inside.

Heer: nahin! I didn't sold it.I don't know that who is living in it.

she was also shocked to see that someone is living in her house.

Geet: I think we should check it and pressed the switch of the door bell.

they were waiting outside for someone to open the door when Heer got the call of Prem on her mobile and she picked that up and turned backside

Prem: Hello.Heer kahan ho tum?

He asked quite nervously.


Heer: main Ambala mein hoon Prem apne ghar ke bahar khadi hoon.

Prem's heartbeat got raised up after hearing her answer also he was surprised the way she was talking to him she never talked with him so politely in past 6 years and after that.

Heer: acha Prem ab main phone rakhti hoon.

Prem: kya?

Heer: hello!

she said raising the volume of her voice.

Prem: hello Heer kuch sunai nahin de raha.plz dobara bolo.

Heer: Prem...

Prem: hello

she moved slightly away from her plzce as she felt that Prem can't hear her.

Geet was still standing in front of the door when Heer moved away at the same moment someone opened the door.It was a married girl in her late twenties.


" jee kahiye kisse milna hai apko?"

she asked from Geet.

Geet: kya aap is ghar mein rehti hai?

"jee ye mera ghar hai? aap kaun hai?"

Geet: main kaun hoon pehle aap ye bataiye ki aap kaun hai aur kisse pooch ke aap yahan reh rahi hai?

she questioned her in a raised volume.

"excuse me! pehle to main aapko janti nahin aur aap hoti kaun hain mujhse ye sawal puchne wali ye ghar mere pati ka hai."

the conversation was getting heated up.

Heer was still trying to talk to Prem when she saw a car coming towards her and it stopped in front of her and much to her surprise she saw Prem coming out of the car.

Heer: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho Prem?

Prem: tum mujhe bataye bina yahan kyun ayi Heer?

He asked from her in anger.He was almost shouting over her and she didn't liked it.

Heer: kyun? ye mera ghar hai Prem aur waise bhi Geet ne tumhe bataya tha na.

she replied in the same tone as of Prem.

Prem: par Heer...

He was interrupted when he heard 2 girls fighting the first was Geet's voice and the second was also very familiar to him.Heer also realized this and she went back to where she left Geet.Prem also followed her in order to stop her but in vain..

when Heer reached there she saw Geet was arguing with another girl.She can't see her face as she was not very tall and not very fat.Geet was blocking her view.she was just thinking about that girl when Prem came from behind still trying to stop her.

Prem: Heer meri baat to suno..

He can't say more than that because when Geet heard Prem's voice she turned back and now Heer can see her.That girl also looked up to look at him and the only thing she can say at that moment was..

"Bhaiya"

It was Veera.she moved towrds them and hugged Prem.

Heer was feeling rooted on her place.She was still looking at Veera and Prem 'this is not possible, she must be dreaming' she thought in her mind and came back to her senses when Geet came to her and asked her

Geet: Prem ki behen tumhare ghar mein? she asked in utter confusion.

Hearing this Veera broke the hug her eyes were swelled up.when she looked at them Heer and Geet she smiled and walked towards them saying Prem that " bhabhi bhi ayi hain".

Heer was not able to react on the situation she still can't believe her eyes.Geet thought that Veera will come to her but now it was her turn to be shocked when Veera hugged Heer.

Geet can't understand that what is actually going on and why she hugged Heer instead of her she looked at Prem and saw that Heer was also looking at him and he joined his both palms and pleaded them to not tell Veera anything through his eyes.

When thay parted, Veera took them inside the house and called Nihaal.She informed him that there is a surprise for him and ordered him sweetly to come back home right now on the phone.

after that Veera again initiated the conversation.

Veera: aap nahin jante bhaiya ki aaj main kitni khush hoon.mujhe yakeen nahin ho raha ki aap poore 6 saal baad yahan aaye hain.maine to ummeed hi chod di thi par Nihal ko yakeen tha ki ek din aap mujhe zaroor maaf kar denge.waise ye kaun hai bhaiya?

she asked to Prem pointing Geet.

Prem: Ye....Ye Heer aur meri friend hai Geet.

Geet looked at Heer and then Prem.Both Prem and Heer were listening to Veera and they have a forced smile on their face.Then they heard the doorbell and Veera goes out assuming that it must be Nihal.

Nihal reached so early because Prem called her and explained the whole situation while Prem was in his journey to Ambala.Nihal knew this thing that Junejas are in India right now but never mentioned it to Veera as Prem ordered Her to never come in the Juneja house and don't try to meet any of them as her punishment.

Veera don't know what happened 6 years ago as she took a time of 3 years to recover from that accident but Nihal know everything and he promised Prem that he will never tell it to Veera for everyone's sake.

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I am eagerly waiting for ur comments guys! how Veera was saved will be in the next part and in which manner Geet and Heer are going to take and handle this situation.But can assure u 1thing that Veera is not bad now.




Edited by shivangi2092 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice twist
luved it
thnx for pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: samrocking30

nice twist
luved it
thnx for pm


thanks!😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jst awesome!!!!!!
nw watng to see wat wll geet do!!!!!!
pls update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
awesome ff
nice part
superb twist just loved it
do continue soon
thanks for pm
update soon waiting

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