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hi guyz! here is the next update.hope u all like it.pllllllllllzzzzzz leave ur comments and press the like button if u like it.

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Veera entered in the room and both Heer and Nihal became quiet. They acted like normal, Heer quickly wiped off her tears.

Veera: Aap dono bhai behen ki baatein agar khatam ho gayi ho to neeche chalein Prem aur Geet aapka intezaar kar rahe hain.

both Heer and Nihal nodded and silently followed Veera.

They reached the staircase and Heer looked at Prem who was sitting on the sofa.


" kyun kiya tumne aisa Prem? kyun chupaya tumne mujhse? kya tumhe mujh par itna bhi yakeen nahi tha? aakhir kyun tumne itna dard saha aur kisi ko kuch bhi nahin bataya? Veera zinda hai ye baat tumne mujhse kyun chupai Prem?" She wanted to ask all these question to Prem and thought that she will find his answers from Prem.

they adjusted themselves on the sofa and chairs.

Veera: to ghar mein sab kaise hai bhaiya?

she asked him handling over a cup of tea.

Prem: sab ache hain.

He replied trying to smile a bit.

Veera: kya baat hai bhaiya aap bahut pareshan lag rahe hain?

Prem: kuch nahin wo bus thoda thak gaya hoon.

Veera: to aap upar Heer bhabhi ke room mein aaram kar lijiye.

Prem: main par.....

Prem looked at Heer realising what she said. Heer also looked at Prem. Nihal tried to handle the situation

Nihal: Haan Prem tum upar room mein jakar aaram karlo.

Prem nodded his head looking at the floor.

Nihal: Veera tumne Geet ko hamara ghar dikhaya kya?

Veera: nahin.

Nihal: c'mon make her feel comfortable use guest room mein le jao.

Veera: theek hai.

she replied smiling.

after they are done with the tea and snacks Veera send Prem and Heer into the room and took Geet into the guest room.

Heer and Prem walked in the corridor with each other but maintained as much distance as possible.

They entered in the room.

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Veera: plz make yourself feel comfortable. kuch bhi zarurat ho to mujhe bata dena.

Geet: theek hai.

Then they remained quite for few seconds.

Geet: Veera main Prem aur Heer ki shadi ke baare mein zyada nahin janti. Unki arrange marriage thi ya love marriage?

Veera: Both! (and she smiled)

Geet: Both?

Veera: haan. bahut lambi story hai aaram se sunaungi.

Geet: kya Prem aur Heer ne gharwalon ke khilaf jakar shadi ki thi?

Veera: nahin. Maa aur bauji ne khud unki shadi karwayi thi. Maa khud bhaiya ko mandap tak lekar ayi thi.

and she seemed lost in some beautiful memories.

Geet: kya? tumhari maa ne khud unki shadi karwayi thi?

Veera: haan maa ne hi toh bhaiya aur bhabhi ko sabse zyada support kiya tha. kyun?

Now she was shocked to know that. but chosed to hide her thoughts from Veera.

just then Geet's mobile phone rang it was her mom. she picked up the call.

Geet: Hello!

Geet's mom: Hello! Geet beta tu kahan hai? maine hotel mein phone kiya tha to wahan se pata chala ki tu, Prem aur Heer teeno wahan se ja chuke ho.

Veera was still present in the room adjusting the bedsheet and waiting for her to complete her talks on phone.

Just then something clicked in her mind and she replied.

Geet: main Ambala mein hun maa Heer ke ghar Prem bhi yaheen hai.

Geet's Mom: par tum wahan kya kar rahe ho?

Geet: Hello!..Hello! mom kuch sunai nahin de raha main aapse baad mein baat karti hoon.

and she cut the call.

Veera: kya hua?

Geet: wo shayad signal nahin mil raha. Main baad mein baat kar lungi.

Geet: . main fresh hokar ati hoon.

and she went in the bathroom. But Veera felt her behaviour strange and felt that something is hidden from her.

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Gaya3: Kya? wo log Heer ke ghar gaye hain?

She was shocked to know this.

Geet's mom: Haan Geet ne to mujhe yahi kaha. Kyun kya hua?

Gaya3: Kuch nahin.

" Nahin ye nahin ho sakta mujhe Heer aur Prem ko kareeb aane se rokna hoga. Mujhe jald se jald Ambala pahunchna hoga." she thought in her mind.

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Prem came out of the bathroom after changing his clothes in a comfortable pair of white kurta pyjama.
He saw that Heer was sitting on the bed and looking at their photograph which was placed near the bed.

He noticed that her eyes were teary and she was lost in the sweet memories of that time when they were with each other. She even didn't noticed that Prem was standing near her.

He slowly moved towards her and quietly sat beside her.

Prem: Kya soch rahi ho Heer?

Prem asked her in a low tone looking at her. His voice made her back in the reality and she looked at him.

His eyes were saying so much to her. There was pain in her eyes and concern for her. She observed his eyes so closely after very long time. First time in these six years she felt the trueness in his eyes. His eyes were a reflection of his heart. She can feel the condition of his heart right now. But she wants her answers and she decides to ask her questions from him.

Heer: Tumne itni badi baat mujhse kyun chupayi Prem? Kya tumne mujhe kabhi is layak bhi nahin samjha Prem ki tum apna dard mujhse baant sako. Kya tumhe mujhpe itna bhi yakeen nahin tha Prem?


Tears were flowing out of her eyes. She was looking into Prem's eyes as she knew that he can't tell her a lie while looking in her eyes.

Prem: aisa nahin hai Heer. Khud se zyada yakeen hai mujhe tumpar aur us waqt bhi tha par.....

Heer: par kya Prem?

Prem: Dar lagta hai Heer. Dar lagta hai ki agar tumne mera yakeen nahin kiya to ye jo saansein chal rahi hain wo band ho jayengi. Mere jeene ki akhiri wajah bhi khatm ho jayegi. Pichle 6 saalon mein main jeena bhool gaya tha Heer par ye saansein chal rahi thi ye dil dhadak raha tha kyunki is dil ke kisi kone mein ye yakeen tha ki tum mujh par yakeen karogi par tumhare ilzamon ne mujhe tod diya hai Heer.


He stopped for a second and then again continued....

Prem: Agar tumne mera yakeen nahin kiya Heer to mein nahin janta ki wo dard mein kaise sahunga isliye behtar hai ki main us jhoothi ummeed ke sahare jiyun.


And he stood up from the bed he turned and was about to leave when Heer held his hand. He looked back at her.

She was looking at the floor and tears were still there in her eyes.

Heer: main yakeen karna chahti hoon Prem. Main sach sunna chahti hoon.

He sat with her again and slowly cupped her face. He turned her face to made her look in his eyes.

Then he slowly wiped off the tears present on her cheeks.

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Eagerly waiting for ur comments guyz! plz comment asap!
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Posted: 14 years ago
veera is so sweet .
i hate gayatri😡
sankita thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
yr u donot have give us more prem heer scenes.next time we want our premheer scenesmore
sankita thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
gayatri ko premheer se door hi rakhna
shivangi2092 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sankita

thanks for pm and update


ur welcome😊
shivangi2092 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sankita

veera is so sweet .

i hate gayatri😡


wait for the next parts then decide
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sankita

yr u donot have give us more prem heer scenes.next time we want our premheer scenesmore


Promise yaar next updates will have more Premeer scenes.
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesomeeeeeee loved da update it was too good waitingggggg for next asap


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Posted: 14 years ago
gayatri should stay away from premeer
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsummmm :) luvd it
thnx 4 d pm
waitn 4 d nxt part
plx gv more premeer senes nxt tym
overall it ws mindblowin :)
keepup the gud wrk

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