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This SS is dedicated to all my readers who are constanly supporting me to write more.

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Shot 1

When Heer was born, Prem was just 3 months old. Gaya3 took little Heer in her hand and showed to Prem who is in Lalit's hand. 'See Prem, your Heer.' Prem turned his face away. Lalit and Gaya3 didn't take that serious.

Lalit and Balraj are friends from their school days. When they found out their wives Gay3 and Teji are also friends, they were happy. They were living in the same house. Now they want their kids to same like them. They believed they will surely love each other and remain together.

But their dreams shattered when they found Prem and Heer were just opposite. Both didn't like even to see each others face. Gaya3 and Teji placed their kids always together on the bed. What they see after few seconds, Prem will kick Heer and Heer will kick Prem. Initially Gaya3 and Teji thought they are playing. But it became regular and the level increased as they grew. They searched for every opportunity to hurt each other. When Prem cries Heer laughs. When Prem see tears in Heer's eyes he jumps up and down clapping his in joy. They enjoyed giving each other pain.

Prem turned 10. All the family members were happy. Lalit and Balraj decorated the house. Gaya3 and Teji prepared Prem's favorites items. Heer is sitting in her room and wrapping a gift. All gathered to cut a cake. Prem cut the cake and gave it to his father, mother, Chachu and Chachi. Heer with a smile took a piece of cake and stuffed into Prem's mouth lovingly. Prem is surprised and others are happy. Heer took a small gift box and handed to Prem. Prem with a smile opened the box.

Prem screamed 'oooooh. Ma.' he threw the box down started jumping in pain. Blood started dripping out of his hand. Heer laughed holding her stomach. Elders looked at Prem confusingly. Gay3 ran to Prem and saw his hand bleeding heavily. 'what happened Prem?' he pointed the box which is lying on the floor. Sharp metal spring pressed inside a box which cut his hand when he opened it.

Teji got angry and grabbed Heer and about to slap, but Gay3 hugged Heer before the slap land on Heer's face 'she is child. Leave her.' Heer gave a sad look to Gaya3. Leaving Prem, Gaya3 took Heer to her room and saved from Teji and Balraj's anger.

Teji bandaged Prem's hand. Then she fed him food. Prem with tears ate his food from Teji's hand. Lalit and Balraj are upset. Every birthday there will be something happens between them.

3 months later, Heer 's 10th birthday. Like they decorated for Prem's birthday, they did for Heer too. They doesn't want her to disappoint even in small things. Expecting revenge from Prem, Gay3 inspected the gift before Prem wrapping it. It's a small teddy. Gaya3 thoroughly checked the teddy fearing he may have hidden something inside. She didn't find anything unsafe so she allowed him to wrap it.

Teji busy in the kitchen when Prem walked in 'Chachi, did you made Heer's favorite halwa.' Teji 'ha beta.' He picked her up and made him sit on the counter. Prem looked around 'I want to feed Heer today. Give me bowl of Halwa.' Teji is happy 'okay here it is.' She placed a small bowl of halwa before him. He jumped down. Teji went out of the kitchen to place the dish on the table.

Prem lovingly walked to Heer. 'happy birthday Heer.' he took one spoonful of halwa and fed Heer. Heer with a happy smile opened her mouth. Prem behaved very lovingly to Heer. She also liked the gift which Prem presented. Elders were happily witnessing the feeding scene.

Suddenly Heer started running around shouting 'ha a a ma, water.' She jumped hitting her mouth 'burning.' . Prem jumped up and down clapping. 'headless chicken.' Gaya3 walked to Prem angrily 'what did you do to her?' Prem laughed 'I added chilly powder to it.' Gaya3 raised her hand to slap Prem but Teji stopped her. Teji hugged Prem and took him away from there.

Gay3 put sugar into Heer's mouth and gave water. Her face red and eyes are full of tears. Gaya3 hugged Heer and took her room. Barlaj and Lalit holding their head sat in the couch disappointed.

Lalit and Balraj tried to bridge Prem and Heer with love. But nothing worked out. They asked the teachers to put them in same class. As the years passed their hate towards each other increased. There is no sign of changes in their attitude. Elders effort only gave them more chance to hurt other. Some even advised Lalit and Balraj to stay as separate families. But Lalit, Balraj, Gaya3 and Teji are not ready to leave their friendship for these stupid kids.

Prem and Heer are now finished their MBA. Heer got up late today morning, rushed down fast to escape from her mother's scolding. While running down, her hand slightly hit on Prem's. Prem is also late today running down to escape from his mother. Gay3 and Teji are strict in pooja timings.

As soon as Heer's hand hit Prem's, she gave angry look to him. He returned angry look. Both silently walked to pooja. After the pooja, Prem 'why you pushed me down?' Heer 'I didn't do anything. You just came on my way and dashed on my hand.' Prem 'its your fault.' Heer 'not my fault. Its your fault.' Prem 'yours.' Heer 'yours' both started yelling at each other 'yours.'

Elders got angry. Teji and Gaya3 walked to them. Prem and Heer started pushing each other down. Heer missed the balance and held a small flower pot which fell on the ground and broke into pieces. Heer trying to escape from the piece out landed on the small broken piece and her feet started bleeding. She screamed in pain. Prem clapped his hand started enjoying her pain.

Prem stopped when he felt a hard slap on his face. He touched his cheek. Gay3 in full anger 'are you mad? Don't you have manners?' Heer stopped crying in pain and started laughing. She stopped when she felt a hard blow on her face. Teji in anger 'can't you behave normally like human being. Always treating him like enemy.' Teji and Gaya3 started firing their kids.

Finally Gay3 looked at Prem 'this is the final warning for both of you. if we see you again like this.' Teji 'we will send you to different corner of earth.' Prem and Heer smiled 'do that first.' Lalit 'you won't get single paise.' Barlaj 'have to earn on your own.' Prem and Heer are shocked.

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After few seconds of shocked silence, Prem opened his mouth. 'I won't fight with Heer anymore. but.' He stopped. Elders are happy to hear this from Prem. Lalit 'what we want to do for that?' Prem questioned 'anything?' Barlaj 'promise. we'll do anything to stop your fight.' Heer is confused 'is he really changed?'

Prem looked everyone for a second to confirm that they are ready to listen to him 'I love Ash. I want to marry her.' Elders are shocked. Heer tried hard to hide her laugh. Prem 'I promise. I won't even see the direction of Heer after that.' Lalit 'how can you marry Ash?' Prem in tears 'I won't be alive without Ash. I love her.' Elders stared at him in shock. Heer walked away from there to her room to laugh her heart out.

Lalit looked at Prem. He touched his shoulder 'Prem, but.' Prem 'please dad.' Teji 'why are you crying for this beta?' Balraj 'ha. We'll go and meet her parents.' He happily looked at shattered Lalit and Gaya3. Lalit and Gaya3 always saw Heer as their DIL found hard to digest the fact, they heard from Prem's mouth.

Lalit and Gaya3 sat in the couch with a sad face. Balraj sat next to Lalit and Teji near Gay3. Barlaj touched Lalit's shoulder 'Lallu, he love her then there is no point in arguing.' Teji 'before they take decision on their own its our duty to finish their marriage.' Lalit 'We always thought Heer as our bahu.' Balraj 'they were never made for each other. How can you bring a cat and dog closer?' Teji 'they won't be happy if we force them.' Gay3 'I can't accept anyone other than Heer as my bahu.' Teji 'Gay3, think about his happiness.' Lalit angrily 'he won't be happy with.' Balraj stopped him 'no Lalu don't curse them before they start their life. He is our kid.' Balraj and Teji made Lalit and Gaya3 to agree for Ash.

After an hour Elders went to meet Ash parents. Prem informed Ash about their parents visit. Lalit, Gaya3, Balraj and Teji entered the Ash house. They seems to be rich too. House looked like a palace. Ash parent DJ and Balwant greeted them. Gaya3 and Teji expressed their wish to accept Ash for Prem. Ash came with a tray of sweet after Lalit agreed for Ash.

Balwant 'Lalit ji, we are happy. We also want to take Heer as our DIL.' Lalit is happy now. 'do you have son?' Balwant 'he is my elder brother's son. My brother and bhabi died when he was only two years.' DJ 'from that day we are taking care of him like our own son.' Balwant 'His name is Manmeet.'

When they saw Manmeet walking like zombie and sat in front of them as instructed by DJ, Lalit face expressed disappointment. 'no Balwant we are not planning to keep Heer marriage now.' Gay3 'ha she wants to study further.' Lalit and Gaya3 will be happy to give Heer into same house but this guy seems to be abnormal. Balwant 'till then we can wait for Ash-Prem marriage also.' Lalit and Balraj are shocked. Gay3 is about to open her mouth, DJ interrupted sensing that they are trying to avoid the proposal 'unless you accept my son now, we are not ready to give Ash to your son. We will like to see some other person for her. There are many waiting for her. We want our son and daughter marry in same family.' now All 4 are in confusion. They remembered Prem's word.

After a brief silence Balraj 'we are ready. I'm ready to give my daughter Heer to your son Manmeet.' Gay3 and Lalit are shocked. Lalit whispered 'Ballu this guy seems to be having some problem.' DJ 'he is in fasting. He won't speak to anyone.' Teji too joined Balraj in acceptance. Gaya3 held Teji's hand to stop the proposal but Balraj and Teji readily accepted the proposal without any hestiation.

Balwant 'then we want to finish Heer-Manmeet marriage t'row. because after that he is going abroad for business. He will return only after an year.' DJ 'Prem and Ash marriage after that.' She going on telling 'keep both the marriages in your house.' Gaya3 'in our custom marriages are done in girls place.' Balwant smiled 'Prem and Heer grew up together in that house. so it will be nice to have their marriage in the same place.' Lalit felt something uncomfortable when Balwant told these words. Balraj agreed. Lalit and Gay3 are first shocked when Prem told about Ash. Now Heer marrying this zombie is made them hard to breath. Balraj spoke on behalf of Lalit and finalized the proposal for both Prem and Heer.

On the way back Lalit and Gay3 argued 'he seems to be abnormal.' Gaya3 'I won't allow my Heer to go into that zombie.' Balraj and Teji admant 'no he will be perfect for Heer.' they closed Lalit and Gaya3's mouth. Prem is happy hearing about his marriage date. But he is not happy that Heer is also going to the same house that will make him meet her now and then.

Balraj and Teji entered Heer room. Heer switched off the TV expecting sad news about Prem's marriage. She sensed like that from her parents face. 'what happened Dad?' she laughed 'Did Ash rejected Prem?' Balraj and Teji are silent. Heer 'I know no one will be ready to marry this fighting cat?' Heer got confused when her parents silence seems to be unusual. Balraj sat next to Heer 'Heer, Prmoise me. On my head.' He took her hand and place on his head. 'that you will do anything I ask you to do.' Heer confused. She looked at Teji. Heer love her father more than anyone. She agreed 'I'll do dad. I'll do anything for you dad.' Heer thought 'may be my dad wants me to stay away from Prem after his marriage.'

Balraj's word came to her as a shock. 'Heer, we have fixed your marriage with Manmeet, Ash brother.' Teji 'with the hope that you won't ignore our words.' Heer thought for a while. One side she is not ready to marry anyone now. Other side she can't say no now because she promised on her father. She agreed. She felt like lost her life when she heard 'we have fixed your marriage t'row.' Heer nodded silently. She bite her lips to avoid breaking in front of her parents. Balraj and Teji are happy about her daughter's obedience to their decision. But internally they cried for spoiling their daughter's life. But they want to do this to save Prem and their friendship.

Heer lyed on the bed hugging a pillow. She let out her tears silently. She thought may be it's a curse of Prem that I have to live an unhappy life. She very well knew that Ash's brother Manmeet is mentally ill person. She thought 'its written on my head that I should always live with a psycho. First with Prem. Atleast that is for a period of years. Now I have to be with that psycho for my entire life.'

Next morning, JM mansion is busy. Manmeet family arrived. After few hours, Heer fully dressed as a bride came to mandap which is put in the garden. Prem and Ash are happily chatting near the mandap. Heer stopped for a second near Prem. He didn't pay any attention to Heer. Ash tucked her hand into Prem's and gave a victory smile to Heer. Heer hiding her tears walked to mandap. Gay3 and Teji helped her to step up to the mandap. She sat next to Manmeet.

DJ tied their duppata. Pandit asked them to stand up for round around fire. Prem is ready to throw flower on them with Ash. Balwant helped Manmeet to stand up. Heer too like a zombie stood behind Manmeet. Manmeet put one step forward and fumbled and fell down. Tied duppatta pulled Heer also down along with Manmeet. She fell near Manmeet. The fire caught up on Manmeet dress and started spreading through the cloth. Pandit jumped out of the mandap. Guest started screaming.

Gay3 and Teji screamed. Lalit and Balraj jumped on to the mandap to save Heer. Heer didn't show any sign of movement. She is totally shocked. Before Lalit and Barlaj reach Heer, Prem jumped on to the mandap. He pulled the dupatta out of Heer's head and threw on Manmeet. Prem jumped out dragging Heer. Heer held Prem shirt tightly. Prem held her tightly with him. Lalit, Barlaj, Gay3 and Teji are relieved that Heer is safe. They got shocked when Mandap fully caught fire. In front of guest the mandap came down and fell on Manmeet. Guest started running around. Teji and Gay3 rushed to Heer who is standing in full shock holding Prem.

DJ shouted 'this girls bad luck killed my son.' Gay3 and Lalit got angry. 'don't talk too much. You too have one girl.' Balwant 'we don't want your son.' Prem got angry. He pushed Heer out of his hand. Heer fell on the ground. 'Uncle, you don't go.' Lalit and Gay3 are speechless. Prem 'they are true. She always wanted to give pain to me. Now she is paying for everything.' He laughed.

Heer with tears looked down. She silently got up and ran to her room. Teji and Gay3 with tears looked at Heer. Teji ran behind Heer. Balraj too followed them.

DJ 'Prem, they are trying to stop your marriage.' Lalit got angry 'you are not sad for your son's death.' Balwant 'we are sad but we have to see our daughter too at the same time.' DJ 'I don't think this Heer will allow our daughter to live happily in this house.' both started cursing Heer. Prem also supported them. Lalit and Gay3 are in full anger decided to break the Prem marriage with ash. But Prem didn't allow. He threatened them to finish his life. That became strength to Ash family. Lalit and Gay3 became silent. They went to their room announcing 'Prem marriage will happen as planned.'

Balwant and DJ met Balraj and Teji separately and asked them to leave the house if they really want Prem to live happily with Ash. They asked him to change all the property into Prem's name. Even though Balraj thought Prem is in danger he felt its very hard to stop Prem marriage now that will only kill him. He believed later Ash may start loving truly if we leave them forever. Teji and Heer too agreed when Balraj told about his decision to leave the house. Balraj and Teji felt this is the only thing they can do to Lalit and Gaya3 for their friendship.

Lalit and Gaya3 are sitting with Prem in the living room. Balraj, Teji and Heer came down. Lalit and Gay3 are shocked while Prem didn't show any sign of shock. Balraj placed some files in front of Lalit. 'Lallu, I changed everything into Prem's name.' he handed over all the shares 'even Heer shares.' Lalit and Gay3 are shocked. Lalit got up 'Why?' Balraj 'we tried all the way to bring Prem and Heer closer. But everything failed.' Teji 't'row Prem is marrying Ash. We don't want to create problem in their happy life.' Lalit pleaded but Balraj adamant 'I don't want to spoil Prem's life.' He walked out of the house with Teji and Heer.

Prem happily walked to his room. For the first time his dream came true. He informed the happy news to Ash.
Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
sonia7 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
oh my god they hate each other since they were babies 😆
loved this shot 1
continue soon and pm me
thanks
Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesum m in do pm mee dearr as always loll i love this hate love story thing hahahaha
sonia7 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh my god prem loves ash and he wants to marry her eewww
that was funny when balraj said how can you bring dog and cat closer lol
oh poor heer had to marry that jerk manmeet
thank god that mandap caught a fire and im glad prem saved her but he was so cruel
he started cursing heer and joined dj and balwant
i hate that ash
oh no they left the house
when is this stupid prem going to realise that ash doesent really love him
update soon
sonia7 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks for the pm but i read it before lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome
do pm me when you continue
Sukrutha thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG.....they fight like dog and cat...seriously..
nehara thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey...
man heer and prem hate each other....
and prem wants to marry ash.... is he crazy??
i felt bad for heer.....
i hate ash and her family.....
i cnt wait to read the next update....
wen is prem and heer getting together??
pls update soon... 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey thanks for the Pm....
m shocked that Prem and Heer hate each other..
waiting for next part.....please pm me....!!

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