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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Mindblowing !
Premeer scenes were great !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. meet scene was gud. do update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesmeee.....its verryyy good....i m really enjoying it......it hav bcme me fav ff......so now all three are starting to fall fir each other....especially premeeer.....they wer simply awesmee....bth thinks caring abt each other....already started feeling jealous...tht was the best scene......silly girls calling their partners as drivers....but heer didnt like it....thts great....prem searching for heer room and happy tht she is i front of him.....great.....meet part was reallly cute....and rajveer and ash too.....hope ash never comes between premeer and luvs rajveer only....bth premmer are players...good.....veerryy interestingg.....thanks for pm....update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
heers room infront of prem........... wow...........
and heer looking at prem while playing and dried his hair........ and instructed him nt to change infront of every1.........heer jealous....hahaha
loved the caring heer
Preet and Meher were soooooooooooooo cute
he stopped playing coz she didnt come to watch
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Posted: 14 years ago

Marvellous update…⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Heer start to admire Prem's Character….'man of few words' – nice.

Ash comparing Prem & Rajveer….forcing her mind to not think abt Prem…

Preet & Meher confirming that nobody doubting their relation…

Prem searching for Heer's room & got happy that she in opposite of his room…

Prem's msg indicating he cares Heer & Heer feels unknown emotion in heart….

Heer's stern look on Meher & ash quote call on boys & both understood their fault…

Heer admiring Prem playing…both Preet & Rajveer came to their partners….

loved Heer drying Prem's hair & combing it with her fingers…

Heer scolding Prem for changing in ground…the jealous Heer & Prem obeying her demand…❤️

Meher &Preet well planned to hide their relation..Rajveer & Ash sharing same thoughts….

Lovely update ….😊 Continue the Good Writing….👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
Good that ash decided not to interfere in prem's life.
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yayyy Premeer have started falling for each other. Prem searching for heer's balcony, heer getting jealous ................................. lovely 😍 😳
Loved the way premeer are caring & loving each other. Specially the part where heer is asking prem to dry his hair is so cute ..................... 😳
Seems like rajveer will have a tough time with ash. 😉 😆 Anywayz hope ash & rajveer fall for each other.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Pls update soon hun and thanks for the PM. 🤗
Luv Gayani.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi selvy
just now i read this ff
it is just awesome yaar
ur every ff made every one crazy
really different story line
i just love it
thanks for pm
update the next part asap

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Posted: 14 years ago
friends
Thanks for your valuable comments.
i like to thank each one of you spent time to write comments to this FF. i also thank those who pressed LIKE button and those who are reading silently.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 5

Heer was busy reading her book when suddenly she heard drizzling sound. She got excited. She opened the balcony door. She stretched her hand to get her hand wet with rain water. She played jumping up and down like kid. She leaned forward. Water fell on her face. She closed her eyes and enjoyed.

She doesn't notice a pair of eye is staring at her. Prem standing inside his room in the room admired Heer playing in rain. Her face shined when the droplets touched her skin. He admired her childish attitude.

Heer heard mobile ringing inside her room. Cursing the caller for disturbing her happy moments, she rushed to her room. Her face lightened up when she saw his name flashing. She cursed herself for cursing the caller. 'ha Prem.' Prem 'don't play in the rain. Someone said climate is different from India.' He teased. Heer like a kid 'I like rain.' Prem 'if you get sick.' Heer interrupted 'you are there to take care of me.' Prem silent. Heer bite her lips 'my partner. Suppose to take care of me. right.' Prem smiled 'ha. That is why I'm warning you.' Heer 'okay I won't. but how do you know that.' She looked around.

Prem watching her move through the open balcony door 'I'm not in your room.' Heer 'then.' Prem 'switch off the room light and see straight through the balcony door.' Heer quickly switched off the light and rushed to the balcony. She saw his image in the dark. 'oh you are in the opposite house.' keeping her hand on her hip with fake anger 'you are spying me.' Prem 'doing my job. As a partner I should know about you. but don't know much about you. I'm trying to find out.' Heer 'you should have asked me about that.' Prem 'I should but we did't get much time.' Heer 'we met only one week back.' Prem 'even then I don't know about you.' Heer 'but I know about you.' Prem interestingly 'is it? what do you know about me?' Heer 'you are a good spy.' She lauhged. Prem disappointed 'I know you are clever.' Both laughed. Prem 'okay. You go to sleep. Good night.' Heer 'good night.' Both waved their hand.

Megher jumped on to the bed pulling the blanket over her. she dialed Preet number 'hi IB what are doing?' Preet who lazily rolling on the bed 'I'm really tired. My body paining.' Megher with concern 'are you alright Preet?' Preet 'ya. Because of the practice. I started playing after a long gap isn't it? that is why.' He moaned in body pain. Megher 'Preet did you had your dinner?' Preet 'ya. Sorry CB. I want to sleep.' Megher 'its okay. You take rest. We'll meet in the morning.' Preet whispered 'good night Cb.' Megher disconnected the line 'good night.'

Ash is applying face pack. She received a call from Rajveer. Rajveer 'whar are you doing Ash?' Ash thought for a while thinking 'what he will think If I say I'm busy in maintaining my beauty.' She decided 'just going through today's lecture.' Rajveer 'Wow, you have the habit of reading daily lessons?' Ash thought 'did I made any mistake?' Rajveer continued 'I have the habit of reading books only before exams.' He thought 'Heer always taught me everything before exams. Good that Ash too has similar habit like Heer, reading daily lessons.' Ash 'sometime. Not always.' Rajveer 'good. Hope you will help me before exams.' Ash 'I'm not that much good in studies.' She thought 'Prem always dumped the details into my head.'

In the class, Heer is sitting alone and going through the previous day lecture. Rajveer saw her sitting alone. He sat next to her 'hi.' Heer smiled 'hi' Rajveer 'where is Prem?' Heer 'he went to library. Where is Ash?' Rajveer 'she too went to library.' After a pause 'Heer.' Heer looked at his face 'umm.' Rajveer don't know how to ask her. understanding his thought, Heer 'he is a good person. I don't have any problem with him. He is taking care of me as a good friend.' She smiled. Rajveer too happy and let out a relieved smiled. Her last statement gave him relief 'I was thinking about that only.'

Heer 'I think your partner is also nice girl.' Rajveer 'she is a nice girl but I'm little scared.' Heer 'why? Is she fighting with you like me?' Rajveer 'no. but I'm fearing about my anger.' Heer calmly 'you get anger when you see me in trouble. But Prem won't give me any trouble. So you don't have to worry about that.' Rajveer 'I know Prem will help you but there are many eyes on you.' Heer confidently 'don't worry Prem won't allow them even near my shadow.' Rajveer teased 'oh he is that much possessive on you.' Heer shook her head and corrected 'no. PROTECTIVE.' Rajveer smiled.

In the library, Prem is searching a book that Heer told him to take. Ash walked to him when she saw him behind a rack searching book. 'hi Prem.' Prem still searching 'hi.' Ash 'what are you doing here?' Prem looked at her seriously 'playing football.' Both burst into laugh. Prem 'where is your partner?' Ash 'he went to class. I came to return a book. I saw you so came in to say hi.' Prem pulled the book 'got it.' Ash 'why you need this book?' Prem turned few pages to give a glance 'Heer asked me.'

Ash 'is she behaving decently with you?' Prem gave a confused look 'what do you mean by decent?' Ash smiled 'you always advice me to be decent. That is why I asked you.' Prem 'till now I haven't seen her using makeup kit. So I think she is a decent girl.' Ash 'so girls who are not using makeup kits are decent.' Prem nodded like a kid 'according to my law.' Ash gave him a fake angry look. Prem smiled 'come, we'll go to the class.'

As they walked towards the class, Prem 'Ash, don't scare Rajveer with your makeup. Try to reduce a bit.' Ash 'I try.' Acting as scared person 'Hope he doesn't get scared of me.' They entered the class laughing. Rajveer and Heer looked at them. Prem jumped next to Heer while Ash sat next to Rajveer. Ash 'hi Heer, what are talking to my partner. Is he complaining about me?' Heer shook her head negatively 'he is praising you like anything.' Ash 'hi don't say lie. No one in this earth can give good certificate about me.' Heer 'its true. He gave good certificate.' Ash looked at Rajveer surprisingly 'is it?' she smiled 'thanks.'

Prem 'Heer, here is the book.' Prem and Heer started reading the book and immersed in the discussion. Rahveer and Ash are discussing about some random stuff.

Megher shouted at Preet 'we are already late.' Preet 'what can I do Megher? I'm really tired and slept.' He managed to drive through the heavy traffic and reached the college. Megher getting out of the car 'today that oldie is going to scold us nicely.' Preet and Megher rushed towards the classroom. They stood silent when they heard a lecture sound from the room.

Preet 'Megher, you stay here.' he bent low and walked to the other side below the window. He stood hiding from lecturer's sight and searched for Prem and Rajveer. He tried to get their attention. He waved his hands. he made some noise. He failed. He cursed them 'stupid fellows. Don't even take their eyes out of that old man.' After several attempt Heer unconsciously turned and saw Preet waving hands to them. She gently nudged Prem and whispered 'Prem, Preet is outside.' She stayed quiet to avoid giving any clue to the lecturer. Prem looked at Preet and understood.

Prem got up 'sir, I have a doubt.' Lecturer 'yes Prem.' Prem started pointing a table of details on the board and asked some stupid question. Lecturer thought Prem is confused and started clearing his doubt. He is standing facing the other side to read the board, showing his back to the window.

Using this chance, Preet signed Megher to jump inside the class through the window. Preet followed her. Ash moved a bit to give space for them. Megher and Preet settled near Ash quietly. Heer signaled Prem under the table to indicate him that they are inside the class. Prem repeated what lecturer said few minutes before and 'thanks sir.' Lecturer happily continued his lecture.
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Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
nehara thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey...
awesome update...
so prem and heer are kind of getting closer... sweet....
and i really liked the last bit...
cnt wait to read the next update..
pls update soon... 😃

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