FF-I like the way it hurts-1/11ch17pg58+NOTE pg 59

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-SnowKid-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

nice part...............they feel awkward..............waiting for nxt part...............wt wil happen......................update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

yar very very awasome.....................................................plz update next part ASAP

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-salma-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

awwwwwwwesome update

waiting 4 d nxt

update soon

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natasha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

awww that was so good! I loved maya's part with the pill! I didnt like how she was mean to meher but the pill thing was hilarious! I used to work as a pharmacy tech and sometimes girls from my highschool would come buy it! they would be so embarrassed infront of me but its not like i was going to tell!

I am so excited now that premeer cant hide from each other anymore! i can imagine the awkwardness!

Preet is an ass for not mentioning meher,i hope meher is too busy to go to lunch with him.

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Khadija

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Posted: 14 years ago

#355

awesmee....noo premeers awkward conversations.....i guess it wud be in next one as they are alone now....maya and the pill.....hilarious.....oohh soo the kabab main haddi between meet is ashlesha.....preet and lalit are tooo funny.....luvd it....thanks for pm and update sooon...and plzzz i want whole of premeer in next one.

Edited by khajju - 14 years ago

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Diya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#356

awesome update .

next part want only premeer in London.

plz update soon

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Namrata Kumari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#357

thanks 4 updates

i knw its quite weird.............now they r one their own.......

and really happy 4 preet

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-alisha-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#358

lovely....now the journey starts.... love the part where prem while taking shower imagines heer skin as soft as satin.....hahaha....omg this guys is hillarious........plz update soon......thnx for the pm

Edited by alisha_harshiti - 14 years ago

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

wonderful update...loved the preet-lallu dialogues...

premeer scene was sweet...each of their POVs were good but then after the night , till their departure they stayed away from each other as much as possible? hows that possible esp when you are wed and stay in the same room...but no complains , we are more bothered about their life together alone...cant wait to read how heer and prem deals with it and why are they no happy about it...arent they one bit attracted to each other , mentally I mean...what ever, will wait for the next update to know more..

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newt2007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#360

nice update

even after a wondeful night they are feeling awkard to face each other. why? what is this Heer's problem alsways thinking wrong and this maya giving stupid ideas.

did Heer took that bills? hope she doesn't land in problem because of that.

now Preet going to do MBA. Ash is also coming there. already Preet is thinking about a girl.

now Prem and Heer are goinf to stay. hope to read many sweet moments between them.