FF.Tere bin na lage mera mann-chp 15 pg 69[18/08] - Page 6

OMG surya di!! Y do u leave me breathless!!??

Great 1st chapter! I'm very intrigued as what's going to come next.

Thanks for including more English this time around.

So far love Prem's character and Heer's too. Different is always good.

Can't wait for the next update.

Delightful beginning…..⭐️⭐️

Heer started day with unknown face but his loving gestures in her dream

Teji & daughters sketeched on loving relation…..

mother & daughters worried abt how to cope the future ….

Heer's dislike on Gayatri's aid relate to Prem…

Long hair plays a nice part in story & eager abt why Heer adamant on short hair…sure it to relate Prem ….

Prem & Preet siblings talks….. preet giving threat on facing Heer alone changes Prem from his plan….. so Prem have soft corner on that portion of Gayatri's decision –nice….

Prem - Gayatri sequence natural way u described -a loving step mother who tried & tired on gaining her son's love.but still she persist – loved the water scene b/w Gayatri & Prem Lalit silently tracing the effect of 'Heer' word on prem's attitude…..

Elevator scene & bracelet tugged on to Prem – story kicked in right way….

Anger talk b/w Prem & Heer …The half word out from Heer – it shows the possession that person holds on her life even in anger…..

Tremendous move with an entirely new approch given to characters…..👍🏼

Continue the Good work soon….😊

tat was mind blowing....
nd luv preet nd prem prt dat was awesome...
nd meher nd heer was tooo....this foursome are rocking.....
jst luv it....
even in anger she shout prem's name lol...

nice part!

awesome


thnx 4 the pm



update soon


Kamal

really nice update hmm totally different prem and heer and wat about preet he seems to be more cared about heer

what an update yaar

Awesome update !
Loved it !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !

its really diff