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SOUL MATE
Shot 1

Lalit Juneja came to India with his family members, wife Gaya3 Juneja, Children Kulraj (28), Prem (26), Preet (24), Harman (22) and Veera (20). Kulraj is married to Kiran. Lalit is returning to India after spending 20 years in Canada. He is returning to India to marry his Son Prem with Balraj's daughter Heer.

When they reached Ambala they came to know Balraj and his wife Teji died in accident. Lalit is shattered and searched for Balraj's children Heer and Bebo. When Lalit left India Bebo was a baby in Teji's hand. Heer was 4 years old. Daljeet lied Bebo too died in that accident.

DJ and her husband Balwant wanted their daughter Ash to get married to Prem. DJ showed her daughter Ashlesha to Lalit and introduced her as Balraj's daughter Heer. When Lalit questioned why they are calling her Ash. DJ had answered for that also. 'As she remembers her father and mother every time when we call her as Heer, So she wanted to change it.' Lalit looked confused. Ash behaved very decently like Heer, telling some of child days with Lalit. Ash behavior made Lalit believe DJ's words. he beleived Ash is Balraj's daughter Heer.

After losing their parents Heer and Megher came to Ambala to stay with DJ. DJ first feared to keep them with her. Later an idea struck her mind. DJ introduced them to Lalit. DJ 'bhai, they lost their parents in the accident. They are the one who saved Ash that is our Heer. So I decided to keep them with us.' Lalit was touched by this. 'what is your name beta?' DJ quickly 'paneer. ' Gay3 'but we heard you calling 'Heer.' DJ managed 'ha we call her Heer. Because she saved her our Heer.' Gay3 confused but 'oh.'

Preet biting a apple 'panneer. What a name? paneer, jamun, laddo.' Heer is quiet. DJ 'she calls me Chachi.' Preet 'wonderful Chachi. What great person you are. Giving shelter to all.' Lalit 'Preeeet'. Preet moved away murmuring 'this chand won't allow me to talk. He thinks only he can talk.'

DJ threatens to send Heer and Megher out of the house if they reveal their true identity. They stayed quiet because they don't know any one in this world. They need a safe place to stay. DJ sent them to stay in outhouse.

Prem is talking to someone in his mobile standing in his balcony. He saw Heer standing in the garden. He was able to see only her back. But his heart felt a jump looking at the figure. The feeling he gets whenever he thinks about his Heer. He whispered 'she is my Heer.' He disconnected the call and rushed down to meet her thinking 'she will be happy to see her Prem.'

Entire family is sitting with Balwant family and discussing about Prem's marriage with Ash. They saw Prem coming down the stairs in hurry. His face showed happiness. Ignoring all the people he headed towards the door leading to garden. Lalit stopped him 'Prem, come here.' Prem wanted to finish his discussion with father as early as possible went to him. Lalit pointing Ash 'Prem, she is your Heer. But she changed her name as Ash now.' Prem shocked 'how can she come in so quickly.' He looked at Ash who is blushing. DJ hitting her and whispered to her 'get up.' Ash shyly gave his hand 'hai'. Prem joining his hand in the front 'namastae.' Gaya3 'he didn't forget Indian custom.' Lalit 'we are planning to finish the marriage as early as possible. I have to fulfill my promise to Ballu.' Others cheered.

Prem lost in his thought excused from them saying he has to attend a call and rushed to his room. From there he again saw the place where he saw Heer earlier. She is not there. He sat on the rail 'I didn't get any feeling when I saw Ash. But I got the feeling when I saw her standing in the Garden.' He is confused.

Prem saw Heer in the house doing household. DJ introduced her 'she is the one who saved Heer.' He felt some feeling for her. He himself don't understand the meaning of that feeling. But it grew more as the days passed. His eyes refused to move away when she comes in front of him. His days are always filled with her thoughts. He himself wondered 'why I'm getting a connection with this Girl?' he thought may be because of the name.

When DJ decided to fix Heer's marriage with Manmeet, Prem became more jealous. He felt Heer is the girl for him for whom he is waiting from his child days. But he got confused when Ash has been in front of him as his Heer.

Megher is a baby when Lalit left India and she is lovingly called by everyone as Bebo. So Lalit family didn't know her real name. That became advantage for DJ. Heer and Megher with their loving attitude got good name from everyone. Megher 'Heer di, now we'll tell the truth to Lalit Chachu. He will understand Chachi's plan.' Heer 'no Megher, then we have to loose our bapuji's house. We have only that in remembrance of our bapuji and ma.' Megher tried to convince her but Heer took promise from Megher 'you should not reveal the truth to anyone.'

Lalit decided to perform Prem-Ash and Heer-Manmeet marriage on same day. DJ is also happy because of this Heer will also be out of the house. She doesn't want to see Heer around when Ash lives with Prem. DJ advised Menmeet's family to do everything in decent manner so that they will also get some money from Lalit as gift to Heer.
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Shot 2

Mehendi is in full swing. Heer is sitting in the function thinking about his fate. 'I got my Prem back but he is not mine anymore. He didn't identify me. Ma, you always said Prem and me are Soul mate. My Prem will come to me oneday to marry me. Now he didn't remember me at all. ' Tears threatened to come out. Gaya3 sat next to her 'thinking about your mother.' She wiped her tears.

Kulraj came to apply Mehendi on Heer's hand. After putting mehendi, she wrote something in the middle of her palm. Heer confused 'Kuldi, what is this?' Kulraj 'in Spanish it means Manmeet.' Heer 'why are you?' Kulraj cut in 'let him search for entire night.' She winked 'you both can have fun for entire night.' She smiled teasingly. Heer returned a fake smile.

Ash looked at her hand. 'Veera, what are you writing?' Veera 'bhabi ji. Its Prem in Spanish. PB likes Spanish.' Ash shyly smiled. Veera looked at Kulraj and showed thumbs up sign. Kulraj returned a wink.

Heer looked at her hands, which are brighter. Megher came in and looked at her hands. 'Manmeet seems to be in love with you more than Prem bhaiya.'Heer felt pain in her heart. 'no one can love me more than my Prem.' As DJ called them down, both went out to join in other rituals. Megher is internally crying looking at her sister. She knows how much Heer loves Prem. Now in front of her eyes he is going to marry another girl. She can feel her sister's heart. She is confused 'when Heer di can identify her Prem, how come Prem Bhaiya didn't identify his Heer. He agreed to marry fake girl.'

Heer and Ash stood in the living room. Both the groom family came with their bridal dress. Gaya3 and Kulraj handed Ash's bridal dress and jewels for her wedding. Manmeet's mother handed Heer's bridal dress and jewel to Heer.

Heer in her room stared at the wedding dress which is kept on the bed. He lifted the pink dupatta covering the tray. It's a very pretty red color dress with heavy golden embroidery. Wearing red color bridal dress which marks the symbol of her love with Prem. She tried hard to control her tears. Whenever he thought about Prem, she always remembered this color. She thought Prem will one day come with this dress to take her as his wife.

Megher 'di, please. Come we'll run away from here.' Heer 'no Megher we can't. our Babuji's land is in Chachi's hand. We need that to fulfill our Bapuji's dream.' Megher 'if our bapuji is alive he won't allow you to sacrifice your life like this.' They stopped as Kulraj entered the room.

Kulraj helped Heer to get ready for the wedding. Kulraj watched her expression as she inserted the bangles into her hands. Finally she put two bangles which had unique design. Finally before covering Heer's face with the dupatta, she kissed her forehead and wished her 'Happy married life.' Heer with tears thanked her. Kulraj smiled.

Kulraj brought Heer to mandap, while Veera brought Ash. Heer is in red and Ash is in pink dress. They settled next to their partners. Heer looking down and not want to see Manmeet face. DJ has already advice to Ash 'don't look here and there. Just look down. just for few hours then your voice will be heard every where.' thikng her mother's advice Ash too looking down.

Marriage rituals started. Prem not even concentrated in any of the formalities. Kulraj guided him to move every step. Heer on the other side just following the pandit instructions like a machine. Both the couples exchanged mala, took 7 rounds around the fire. Kulraj and Veera is about lift the duppatta for grooms to wear mangalsutra around their partners neck. Pandit stopped 'no beti. Let it be there. They have to wear mangalsutra and keep sindoor without seeing their face.

When it is time for keeping sindoor on the maang, Prem felt hard when he thought he has to see Ash face instead of Heer. Heer to felt sad when she thought Manmeet is going to keep sindoor instead of Prem. So this idea seems to be nice for them. Prem and Heer are relieved as they don't have to see their partners.

DJ 'arrey Pandit ji how it is possible?' others wondered 'why this pandit is giving funny instructions.' Pandit 'it is their talent.'

Prem and Manmeet without looking at their partners slipped their hands around their partners neck and tied the mangalsutra. Then they kept the sindoor too as the brides kept the duppatta little away from from their face.

Preet put his hand around Kulraj. Harman hands around Veera they silently cheered. Lalit looked at the kids and thought 'they are happy for Prem's marriage.'

After the marriage, Prem entered the mansion with his bride. she printed her happiness in the mansion. Kulraj took her to Prem room. Manmeet and his partner is sent to another room in the mansion.

Gaya3 is about to enter Prem room but Preet stopped her 'ma, why are you wasting your energy giving the old gold advices. Go and relax. We'll take care of them.' Preet and Harman sent all the elders to their rooms. Gaya3 went away 'don't keep them with you all the night. Leave them fast.' Elders thought youngsters planning some fun. They decided to leave them on their own.

Preet pushed Prem into his room. Kulraj pat his cheek lovingly 'your love is front of you.' she closed the door behind him. Prem stepped in with a heavy heart. He dreamed many things with Heer. He even married her, made love and even he imagined pregnant Heer. But now he is going to do that with different women.

From the day Lalit introduced Ash to him itself he is sure that she is not his Heer. But he didn't get enough proof to prove that. But sometimes he too felt that she is real Heer. But he never got any attraction to Ash. He always felt the attraction to Heer who is no way related to him.

He neared the bed. She is sitting with her head covered. Red and golden color shined in the light. Room decorated neatly with flowers. It's a perfect for newly married. Prem decided 'whatever now I don't have the rights to think about Heer. She is someone's wife. I have to accept Ash as my wife.'

He sat in front of her. gathering his courage he touched edge of the dupatta to lift it to see her face. as the duppatta slowly revealed the image in front of him, his face changed. He doesn't know how to react.

Heer is confused the things happened around her. She got tensed when she felt the pressure on the bed infront of her. He bite her lips to control herself from shedding tears. He closed her eyes tight. She don't want to see Manmeet. She dreamed Prem with her many times. Now how can she look at someone else in his place.

She opened her eyes when she heard 'Heeeer'. The sound did many thing in her body. It sent shock into her nerves. Her blood ran in full speed all over her body. Her heart beat increased. She longed to hear those words.

What she saw in front of her is dream or real? She stared at those pair eyes staring into hers with joy and surprise. Prem cupped her face 'Heer, you. here.' Words fumbled. Heer is struggling in his touch. 'Prem' she stretched her hands to touch his face. 'Prem' she whispered. Prem with tears pushed the dupatta completely out of her head and pulled her into his hug. Heer holding his shirt tightly cried into his heart.

After a second both realized their condition and pulled away. Heer 'Prem, how did I came here. I'm suppose to.' Prem 'ha Heer. But how?' both were confused. Heer quickly got out of the bed. Prem held her wrist and stopped her as his eyes fell on something when she got out of the bed. Heer looked at him with confusion. 'Prem, this is wrong.' Prem shook his head negatively 'no Heer. Its not.' Heer 'Prem.'

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Shot 3

Prem pulled her back and made her sit in front of him. he took her hand. Pointing the bangles 'how this came to you?' Heer confusingly 'this is the gift from Manmeet.' Prem shook his head negatively 'this bangles Ma has specifically ordered for her DIL.' He touched her dress 'this dress I selected for my wife thinking Heer in my mind.' He leaned forward 'do you know the cost of this dress.' Heer shook her head. Prem 'its 1 lakh.' Heer opened her mouth in surprise. He lifted the mangalsutra 'watch it. Its Juneja families. You can see my name in it.' Heer carefully watched and saw Prem carved in a very loving way. Heer thought for a second and showed her palm to Prem 'Prem, read this.' Prem looked her palm and smiled 'who wrote this?' Heer 'Kuldi.' Prem 'she has written Prem, in Spanish.' Heer and Prem surprised.

Prem 'one second.' He pulled out a digital camera which Harman gave it to him as he was entering the room. Harman with a teasing smile 'may be you and bhabi may need this to recollect everything.'

Prem checked the pictures.Prem 'Heer see. One in red and another in Pink. you are wearing red now. So red one is you then pink is Ash. Let see where are you moving.' They saw Kulraj taking red dress girl to Prem who is wearing white and red sherwani. Ash is moving to Manmeet who is wearing white and blue sherwani. As they watched the entire marriage both got happy. Prem pulled her into his hands as they watched the remaing piece.
Finally, as a last shot his siblings appeared on the screen with a wide smile 'how is it bhai?'

Prem switched off 'so its all their trick.' Heer 'Prem come we'll tell this to everyone. Otherwise.' Prem covered her mouth with his palm. 'no. I don't want to waste any of the second. How much I loved you Heer. Why you decided to marry Manmeet instead. Don't you love me?' Heer with tears 'sorry Prem, I was happy when I heard about you. but shattered when you believed Ash as Heer. I thought you will find the truth but no use. You decided to marry Ash.'

Prem 'I know you are my Heer, when I saw you for the first time. But you always proved that wrong.' Heer 'for Chachi. She took Bapuji's house' she told everything. Prem cupped her face 'Heer, what you thought about me. Can't I retrieve that for you. you didn't believe me.' Heer 'I'm sorry Prem.' Prem pulled her into his chest 'its okay Heer. Now forgot everything.'

He kissed her all over her face lovingly. Prem 'I'll show you today how much I loved you in the past 20 years.' Heer 'I'm yours Prem always.' He started removing her jewels one by placing sweet kiss on her tender skin. His lips made her forget the pain she carried all these days. As he removed her dress her fingers unbuttoned his dress. Prem pushed her on to the bed switching off the light. Prem kissed her stamping his love on her. she allowed him to explore fully on her. she melted in his love and surrender herself into him. Both shared precious moments which they longed for 20 years. They became one. One Soul.

Prem lyed flat pulling her on to his chest. Pulling the cover over them she snuggled into his arms. hugging her tightly he kissed her forehead. They drifted into sleep. They are not bothered what is going to happen t'row morning. they are ready to face anything togehter for their love.

On the other side, Preet and Harman dragged Manmeet to garden and made him drink too much. In the room, Ash waited for Prem and slept. After confirming Ash has slept, Preet and Harman pushed Manmeet into the room. Manmeet saw Ash sleeping on the bed. 'so you slept.' He fell on the bed and he too slept. Preet and Harman went to sleep with a happy smile.

Morning, Prem admired his angel sleeping with a cute smile on her lips. Her face comfortably rested on his chest. He pulled her closer. Heer with a lazy sound kissed his chest. Suddenly she lifted her face fro his face 'Prem, I'm scared.' Prem 'for what?' I'm with you dear. We are married and no need to get shock.' He kissed her cheek 'come lets have bath.' Heer 'okay. Pass me that dress. ' Prem 'why do you want that now.' Heer 'I have to go to the washroom.' Prem 'no need.' Heer 'what?' Prem got up picking up her in his arms. 'Premmmm.' She covered her face with her hands. Prem 'I have seen you fully then why this dress?' he walked to washroom carrying her.

He made her stand under the shower and opened it. As the water went to their body, Prem leaned forward 'I forgot to give one thing.' Heer confusingly 'what?' Prem 'kiss.' Heer 'you have given' Prem shook his head negatively 'no. one kiss I forgot.' Heer 'Prem, we have to get.' He pressed his lips on hers. She stood shocked as his lips moved rhythmatic on hers, she let only moan. Her hand clutched his hair for grip. Both went deep exploring each other until they needed air to live. She buried her face into his bare chest and giggled. Prem gently ran his fingers on her back. 'your lips are tasting like honey dear.'

They came out wrapping themselves in towel. Prem opened his closet and took one dress and some boxes. 'Heer, these things I brought for you. i'm happy I'm able to give it to you.' he gave the boxes 'I'm not sure about your taste but I selected keeping only you in my mind.' Heer opened the box 'its so cute.' They changed.

Heer stood before the dresser wearing the saree which Prem gave to her. it's a red saree with some work on it. She put the jewels. Prem came to her wearing his dress. He took the mangal sutra in his hand 'y'day I wore it without my conscious. Today I wanted to wear it with my heart.' He wore around her neck and kissed her throat. Heer pushed him gently with a shy smile. He filled her maang with sindoor. He kissed her forehead. Both hugged gently.

Heer 'shall we move.' Prem pulled her back and sat in the couch. 'until now we didn't receive any shocking sound from Ash room.' Heer 'may be she also.' Prem shook his head 'these guys must have done something. I'm sure Ash won't have watched his face.' Heer 'then what are we going to do?' Prem pulled her nose 'we'll stay inside until we get signal from outside.'

He took his laptop and started working. Heer like a kid 'you started working.' Prem 'I cannot sit ideal when you are sitting next to me. But you won't allow me to touch now.' He leaned forward 'I have to postpone all my meetings for few days.' Heer 'why?' Prem 'actually I fixed all the meeting today thinking what I'll do with Ash. Now' he touched her nose with his 'now what I'll do in the office when my Heer is here.' Keeping her index finger on his nose she pushed his face back 'no touching until the pooja is over.' Prem 'I know that is why I decided to work.' As Prem started to mail, Heer resting her chin on his shoulder watched him.

Ash mobile ring. Ash opened her eyes. DJ know her daughter won't get up before 8. So she set the alarm in her mobile to wake her up in the morning. Ash saw the clock its just 6. 'oh no. I have to put on drama again.' She sat on the bed rubbing her eyes and letting out a big yawn. She looked at her side thinking Prem may be sleeping. She screamed when she saw Manmeet lying on the bed. The posture gives clear picture that he is drunk. Ash screamed like pulling the entire building down to ground.

Kulraj, Preet, Harman and Veera stayed in the downstairs while DJ and Gaya3 rushed to Ash room and knocked. DJ 'sound coming from Manmeet room. but sounds like Ash.' They knocked the door. Ash got out of the bed and opened the door. DJ 'Ash, what are you doing in this room.' Ash 'Veera only brought me here last night.' Gaya3 shocked 'what?' she shouted 'Veeeeeeeeera.' DJ 'thank God he is drunk and nothing happened?'

Gaya3 'then who is there with Prem. Till now they didn't come out.' Gaya3 walked ahead to knock the door. DJ and Ash followed with confusion. By that time Kulraj and Veera too joined them.

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Shot 4

Heer hugged Prem tightly when she heard Ash screaming. Prem 'time has come.' He closed the laptop. He slipped his hand around her waist and pulled her closer. He kissed her forehead. At the same time they heard Gaya3 knocking the door 'Prem, open the door.' Prem got up and opened the door. Gaya3 'Prem' before that DJ walked in pushing Prem along with the door. Prem angrily 'Chachi.'

Prem stepped back. Heer quickly went to Prem and held his hand hiding behind him. she clutched his shirt in his back tightly. DJ and Gaya3 are shocked. DJ 'you.... what are you doing here?' Gaya3 'Prem, what is Heer doing here?' DJ confusingly 'nothing happened right.' Prem laughed 'Chachi, we are not saints. everything happened what has to happen?' he pulled Heer to his side and put his hand around her waist. He hugged her gently so that she can rest her face on his left bosom. he kissed her forehead.

Gaya3 confused 'Prem is not a boy to sleep with some one's wife.' DJ shouting in full sound 'how dare you married my daughter and sleeping with another girl.' Ash shouted 'that is why you people don't take arti for me. you all cheated us.' DJ shocked 'what?' Gay3 looked at Ash.

She is confused 'I gave red color bridal dress for her then this pink.' She looked at Heer 'Heer, come here.' Heer stepped to Gaya3. She looked at her mangal sutra. 'DJ there is some confusion.' DJ angrily 'ha. This Heer is trying to steal my Ash place.' She angrily lifted her hand to slap Heer.

Gaya3 held her hand in air 'DJ you don't have rights to rasie hands on my DIL.' DJ shocked 'what are you telling Gay3. She' Gaya3 cut in taking Heer mangal sutra in her hand 'see this Prem wore around her neck. So y'day Prem married Heer not Ash.' DJ 'what?'

Ash started crying 'ma these people cheated me.' Gaya3 'shut up. I don't know how it happen but Heer is my DIL now.' She looked at Prem 'Prem, you come down with Heer.' Gaya3 walked out. DJ dragging Ash went to Lalit for justice.

Prem looked at Heer and about to hug, Kulraj cleared her throat. Prem running his fingers through his hair looked at his sister. Heer blushed and looked down. Kulraj and Veera walked in with a teasing smile 'so how is our surprise.' Prem 'kuldi' he hugged her 'thanks di.' He pat Veera cheek 'thanks.' Veera 'hoye thanks is not enough.' Prem looked at them with confusion.

Lalit shouted in anger 'Preemmmmm.' Prem holding Heer hand rushed down. He stood silently in front of Lalit. Gaya3 is trying to calm him explaingi the situation. DJ in full anger cursing them which made Lalit more anger. 'Prem. You should have told this when you found out Ash is not in your room.' Prem calmly 'how can expect Ash there when I noticed my named mangal sutra in Heer's neck.'

Lalit angrily 'what?' he looked at Gaya3. Gay3 shook her head silently. Lalit 'how it is possible?' Gay3 'entire set of things got changed. Heer got ours while Ash got manmeet's. their face covered so we were not able to identify them. Only with their dress color.' Lalit cut in 'are you all gone mad.' He shook his head 'its not accidental. Its seems to be planned.'

Lalit 'who did this? I want to know who is that person.' Kulraj stepped forward. 'I did dad.' Lalit slapped her with full anger 'how dare you do like this?' Everyone shocked. This is the first time he has raised his hand against her. Others always get nice scolding and slap from him. but Kulraj never went against his word even for once. The slap made Kulraj lose balance and about to hit the gorund in shock. Prem rushed forward and grabbed her in his hands 'dad.' Lalit too got shocked for a second for raising his hand on her but the words made him angry. Lalit roared 'you always made me proud but today.' He hit his fist on his head.

Kulraj moving away from Prem hand 'even today I helped you to be proud dad. I don't want you to feel bad for breaking the promise with your friend, Balraj Chachu.' Lalit with tears 'you made a big confusion. See I couldn't keep my Ballu's daughter.' unable to continue he pointed his fingers to Ash. Kulraj touched his hands and turned towards Heer 'your friend's daughter is happy.' Lalit shocked.

Kulraj 'dad, please listen to me. Then you give your judgement. I'm ready to accept your punishment.' Lalit 'what story you are going to tell now?'

~~FLASHBACK~~

Kulraj rushed to Prem when she heard Prem's marriage date has been fixed with Ash. 'Prem, you are lucky. You got your love at last. Your Heer.' She jumped happily rounding him. Prem didn't show any sign of happiness. Kulraj turned Prem to face him 'Prem, are you not happy. You waited for her all these 20 years.' Prem shook his head 'di, I'm feeling uncomfortable whenever Ash comes near to me. I feel she is not my Heer.' Kulraj 'may be because she changed her name.' Prem 'no di. She is not my Heer at all. I'm 100% sure about that.' Kulraj confused. Prem 'but I'm feeling the love when the other girl Heer comes to me.' Kulraj thought for a while 'then why you didn't tell that to dad.' Prem 'I don't want to break his heart. May be I didn't see Heer for too long and I missed her heart. I'm confused di. I can't think Ash as my wife.'

Kulraj 'Prem, now everything is fixed. You have to tell this too dad before its going to be too late.' Prem 'no di. I have confidence on dad. He won't take wrong decision. I believe Ash is my Heer.' Even though his tongue spoke all these his heart is still crying for Heer. His heart refused to accept Ash as Heer.

Kulraj walking in the garden recollecting Prem's words. 'Prem can't be wrong.' She slowly walked to the outhouse. She peeped through the window. She saw Heer sitting on the bed with tears. Megher in the opposite. Megher 'di, please come we'll tell the truth to Lalit Chachu.' Kulraj heard the whole conversation and found the truth.

She rushed to Preet for help. Siblings sat to discuss about their plan. Before they could find the solution they heard Lalit announcing Mehendi today. All got shocked. Preet came out with idea. First plan, Kulraj has to do all the formalities for Heer, While Veera to Ash. DJ 'Kulraj beti, you are elder sister to Prem. So you have to put mehendi on Ash hands.' Kulraj 'Prem likes Veera. she is her favorite sister. So let her do the formalities. And Manmeet don't have sister.' Kulraj wrote Prem in Spanish on Heer's hand and Veera worte Manmeet's on Ash.

Next problem has to switch the bride during the ceremony. Harman found out that Pandit has some legal problems in his house land. He offered him help. Pandit in return decided to hear his instruction. Pandit told to cover brides face as per Harman's instruction. He informed that when Lalit and Gaya3 visited him as a family to wedding.

Gaya3 told Kulraj to keep bangles along with Ash's wedding things. Kulraj and Veera entered the room where everything was neatly kept in the bigger tray. They saw two sets of everything. Kulraj shouted 'ma, in which one I have to keep this?' Gaya3 'one which is covered with red dupatta is for Ash other one is Heer's. you keep it in Red covered Tray beta.'

Kulraj looked at Veera and winked. Veera lifted the red dupatta and saw red color bridal dress. In another she noticed jewels which Gaya3 brought for her DIL. that is also covered with red. Kulraj 'Veera, bring that tray here.' She lifted the pink dupatta and saw pink color dress kept for Heer. Kulraj took the red dupatta and covered the pink dress tray. Then she covered the red dress tray with pink dupatta. Veera understood her plan. She did the same for jewel try. They exchanged the place.

Gaya3 and Manmeet mother came in and picked up their tray. They handed to respective brides. As soon as they received the things, Veera took Heer to one room and Kulraj took Ash to another room. but kulraj and Veera swapped when they reach the room. Kulraj took Heer, Veera went with Ash. Preet captured all the events carefully for later proof.

Heer and Ash stood in the stairs with face covered with their dupatta. DJ proudly 'red dress my daughter Ash. Marrying Prem.' Everyone now know that Prem's partner wearing Red and Manmeets partner pink. No one tried to look at their face as Kulraj is guiding one bride and veera the other.

Throught out the function, kulraj, Veera,Preet and Harman are alert not allow anyone to see brides face. Kiran stick with Lalit. He also kept Balwant and DJ under his control.

~~END~~

Kulraj finished 'if you want you check the pictures.' she asked Prem to hand over the camera. 'don't even Prem is not aware of out plan. we want him to get his Heer. and you have to fulfill your friends's wish.' she cried like kid. 'now give me the punishment.'
Lalit looked at kulraj with tears. He hugged ' you saved me. Sorry beta. I slapped you.' Kulraj 'its okay dad.' Lalit 'you should have told this before.' Kulraj 'we tried but every time DJ Chachi made us fool.' Lalit angrily looked at DJ. DJ is about to open her mouth. Lalit roared 'I don't want any explanation from you. you deserved for what you did. Now get out with your daughter.' DJ moved out of the house with Ash, Manmeet and Balwant after giving a angry look to Heer.

Megher rushed to Heer and hugged her. Lalit came to Heer and Megher 'do you thought your Chacha is heartless man.' Heer 'no Bapuji.' She cried. He hugged her with tears. He looked at Megher 'bebo' both hugged. All gathered around them with tears.

Gay3 after giving hug to Heer 'okay beta go and make halwa.' After pooja and breakfast, Gaya3 told Prem and Heer to move their room.

Prem is sitting in the window frame thinking how lucky he is now. Heer came in. she leaned on his shoulder. He slipped his hand around her waist and pulled her into his hug. He nuzzled his nose on her cheeks 'Heer, I Love you.' Heer whispered 'I love you too Prem.' Prem 'Heer, where do you want to go now?' Heer 'Prem, I want to go to the place where we go married when we were kids.' Prem got up 'come lets go.'

Entire family is having fun telling each thing they did during the wedding. Lalit enjoying. They saw Prem and Heer coming down. Prem 'Dad, we are going to the place where we got married when we were kids.' Gaya3 'ha beta. Go.' Lalit 'ha beta you both have to go their to thank God. I too want to come.' Children 'daaaad.' Lalit 'no not now. You both go now. We'll go some other day.'

Prem and Heer went to that place. They did pooja. Then walked around the places where they ran around as kids. They sat under a tree where they spent most of the time as kids. Prem sat leaning his back on the tree trunk. Heer keeping his back of head on his chest sat silently. Playing with her fingers 'Heer do you know we have one girl.' Heer looked at him surprisingly 'girl?' Prem 'ha our daughter.' Heer hit his chest shyly. 'you are fast Prem.' She sat straight 'how do you know we'll have daughter.' Prem made her lean on his chest 'Heer, I made love with you. I took care of you. I saw you as pregnant girl. Then we played with our daughter.' Heer cut in 'when it happen?' Prem pressed his forehead on hers 'in my dream.' Heer shyly smiled 'Prem, what is our daughter name?' Prem shook his head 'I didn't keep any name. I want to you select one.' Both giggled.

Prem hugged her close to his heart, he whispered 'you are my soul mate Heer. I can imagine you with out seeing your face. when I saw you for the first time, that too your back. I know you are my Heer.' In sad tone 'but this Chachi confused everyone. Even then I was very much clear Ash is not Heer.' Heer 'I'm yours that is why everything turned out to be success.' both hugged.

Tree showered fresh flowers on them to congratulate and bless them for their journey as one soul.
~~END~~
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5
me... shot 1 was ok.....intro to family....DJ...aargghh....wanna kill her.....but juneja's r awsum....
shot 2..awsum prem falls for heer...sad for heer n meher....gang u r bst...wow exchange plan was awsum too gud.....both prem n heer shocked was awsum....
shot 3....wow prem makin heer undrstd dat heer is now his.....by showin bangles......dats was awsum n den their romance n becomin one too gud yar.....ash n manmeet.....preet awsum made manmeet drunk...
shot 4.....chachi v r nt saints...evrthin happened...dat was awsum yar.....luv u kuldi.....u r too gud....lalit i h8 u for slappin kuldi.....wow....prem n heer scenes thnkin bout their daughter..awsum yar.....
sorry for editin late....but i hope my comment is long one.....awsum selvy...do update dis kind of FFn SS v r big fan of urs......
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Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i actually rememeber desh .........by reading it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u updt fast or i l kill uu awwww suhagraat pe chhor diyaa hihih paneer ko lolll
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heer married to prem........names are in spanish
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first night toh manane do unhe..........jaldi update karoo plzzzzzz

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kya baat hai...........itna pyar hai prem ko heer se
ab kya hoga

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