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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#591

update soon di..u told u will update..whn???

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#592

hi dear loved ur ff plz add me to ur pm list waiting 4 ur update

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#593

2 nd a half months
still waiting

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#594

Originally posted by: kiran_28
2 nd a half months
still waiting

OMG its been so long plz plz update...we are waiting so eagerly

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#595

waiting fr an update...update soon di..u said u r gonna update right???

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#596

Eagerly waiting for an update!

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#597

dis is one of ma fav ff
pls update soon
we ol r missing dis ff

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Scribbler M

@Scribbler184

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#598

Waiting . . . . . .do update soon.

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#599

di three months are over..plz update soon di...

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#600

.Suhasini. story is so cute & tragic concept wow.

I think of all the stories (I haven't read many) your story has the cutest & most adorable description for Heer 😆 I find this is the most attractive part in your story at the beginning & it definitely grabbed attention from me 😛

When Heer was bachcha or later we find she was pretending out of bet she made, those moments were really v. pure and innocent. Family time with the Junejas were v. entertaining.

Heer & G3 are nice bec. G3 wasn't keen on spoiling her but was interested in taking care of her so she stays healthy & gets better if she was really mentally unstable.

Heer & Bauji so beautiful. I like their friendship

Heer & Prem v. adorable & passionate

Heer & parents & her sis are interesting

I liked how you moved the story on each chapter. Twists go with the story, except the last chapter.

Prem scheming with Ash so Heer would accept a bet 😲

Prem Meher are best friends 🤗 Yay I love that. They always care for each other even in the show.

But what shocked me is Meher helped Prem and a master mind behind all what's happening 😲

This confused me a lot 🤔 How can Prem scheme - this will make him a liar as he says on the day of supposed engagement with Sanju, he was mad at Heer for lying to him & family 🤔

This is kind of like TV serial, suddenly CV brings in a twist which doesn't make sense, if we were to follow the story from the beginning. Hmmm

Well I'll read on the story, if you will continue because Heer as bachcha is just too sweet. Even on the last chapter she was cute aww

All the best for future updates. Keep up the writing!