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This SS is truly dedicated to all my readers who are constanly supporting me to write more.

This is my first SS giving more space to our little Chahat.
LOST & FOUND
Shot 1

Lalit and Gay3 Juneja were loving couple. Lalit is a big businessman. They had a girl Kulraj. Even though Lalit love to stay with his wife and daughter, his business never allowed to spend much time with them. When Kulraj was 10 years, Gaya3 became pregnant again.

After delivering a cute boy, gaya3 died without seeing her own son. Lalit shattered by his wife's death, spend most of the time in business. He forgot he has a daughter and son. Kulraj with the help of a caretaker, brought up her little brother Prem. In her love, Prem never missed his parents.

When Prem was around 12 years, Kulraj got married to Kiran. He is not a rich man. He helped Lalit in his business. He too loved Prem like his own son. Lalit too died leaving the whole burden of business on Kiran's shoulder . Until Prem finish his studies, Kiran ran the business successfully. After finishing his studies Prem joined Kiran in business.

Kulraj brought up Prem with values of relationship. She never wanted his brother to follow his father's foot step. She always encouraged Prem to participate various social activities. Prem enjoyed supporting several organizations not only through money, he spend his times with needy people. Even after stepping into business, he actively participated in several activities.

A NGO called out volunteers to help people in India, after a huge earthquake. Prem decided to take break to join in that mission. Youngsters from several countries landed in Mumbai. From there they travelled to a near by village which is completely destroyed in disaster. Several people lost their dear ones and belongings. Prem with other volunteers helped to build house and lending medical aids.

Prem is about to fall down from the ladder when he is trying to put roof over the temporary house. A girl, saved him from hitting very badly on the ground. She smiled. Prem felt a jump in his heart. 'thanks' girl 'no thanks here. All are working for one mission, sharing love. There is no thanks and sorry in love.' Long truth became more beautiful and meaning when it came out of her beautiful lips. Prem stretched his hands 'I'm Prem, from Canada.' Girl joined her hands 'namastae, my name is Heer.'

They started doing things together. He came to know that she belongs to that village. She lost all his family members in that disaster. Forgetting her pain she is actively helping others. This attracted Prem very much. When Volunteers separated in groups to do their work Heer was in Prem's group. This gave time to know more about each other. Prem and Heer became more than friends, shared their thoughts and took care of each other.

After finishing their work, Prem decided to go to Ambala. It is his father's birth place. His father always wanted to visit India with his family but it never happened. So he decided to go for a day. He went to Heer to say good bye.

Heer is sitting alone in her house staring her parents picture. Prem felt weak when he saw her tears. Suddenly a thought strikes his mind. 'Heer, I'm going to Ambala. Do you want to accompany me?' Heer wiping her tears agreed.

They went to Delhi and from there they travelled to Ambala in car. On the way they had fun. They roamed around in Ambala for a day and decided to return to Delhi. From their Prem decided to return to Canada and Heer to her place. They heard some people talking about Shiv mandir. So Prem and Heer decided to go there.

Removing their sandals they went to shiv mandir. They silently prayed and turn to return to their car. Prem suddenly stopped when he felt a heavy pain in his heart. He looked at Heer who is looking around the mandir. Prem gathering his strength went to her. He took her hand in his. 'Heer, I love you. Will you marry me?' Heer shocked by his sudden question went blank for a second. Then she saw his eyes which showed love for her. She shook her head in acceptance without second thought.

Prem immediately called Kulraj and informed about Heer. Kulraj and Kiran are also happy. Prem stayed for few more days in Delhi to get Visa for Heer. Prem took Heer to Canada and married her.

Heer had very strong traditional values. She loved Prem as her life and respected Kulraj and Kiran like her parents. Premeer were happy. Prem's happiness is boundless when Heer got pregnant.

Heer wanted to visit the place where she got Prem as her life. Prem too agreed to fulfill his pregnant wife's wish. They came to Delhi. They took train to Ambala. A tragedy struck. Accident occurred when it was moving over bridge and the few compartments of train fell into river. Prem survived. But Heer died in that accident.

Prem shattered after Heer's death return to Canada. In last six years hardly he smiled. Kulraj and Kiran made effort to bring Prem out of shock. But Prem smiled only for Kulraj, Kiran and their daughter Kushi. He spent his time in concentrating business and some social work.
He Lost his love.
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Shot 2

6 years after

In Ambala, Prem stepped out of his car. He inhaled the fragrance which brought love into his life six years before. This town has very strong place in his heart. Here in this place he confessed his love to Heer. After opening chain of hotels in every important city of India, Prem came to Ambala to keep himself alive with Heer's memory. He entered the restaurant he built exclusively for kids. Today is the opening day for the restaurant. He stood before the restaurant putting his hands inside his trouser. Tears came out of his eyes as he read the name. 'Chahat Restaurant.'

When he expressed his wish wanting a girl, Heer selected this name for their daughter. Prem whispered 'papa didn't get a chance to see you beta.' He looked down to hide his tears from the staff. Manager welcomed him to cut the ribbon. Prem felt Heer's presence when he cut the ribbon.

Others clapped. Prem imagined Heer kissing his cheek. He stepped in and checked the restaurant facilities. Everything is done as per Prem's instructions. An orphanage kids were invited to celebrate the opening. Meals were given free to them. Prem imagined him with Heer having nice time with kids. With a smile he went out to the temple where he confessed his love to his Heer.

Prem stepped the stairs of shiv mandir thinking his Heer. He stopped when he flet a little hand pulleing his trouser. He looked down and saw a cute girl of around 5 years standing with a flower basket. 'sir, buy flower for pooja.' Prem smiled looking at her cute face. She has chocolate brown eyes, her hair silky. He felt her face very attractive for him. Her smile bought unknown joy to him. Prem smiled 'give me one beta.' Girl gave him one flower. 'only five rupees sir.' Prem gave her 10 rupees. Girl 'I don't have change sir.'

Prem 'you keep the rest.' Girl 'no my mamma says we should not get extra money.' Prem touched her head 'is it? Okay give me one more flower.' Girl happily handed another flower to him. Prem 'are you not going to school?' girl 'for that only I'm selling flower.' Prem confused 'what is the connection between this and going to school.'

Girl 'I'm studying in nearby school. My mother does work for our daily life. I'm selling this flower in my free time to support her.' in her baby voice 'today Sunday.' She turned her palm 'so No school'. She smiled. Prem 'where is your father?' girl sadly 'he died in an accident.' She looked down with a sad face. Prem knelt down and hugged her 'I too don't have father.' Girl looked at him sadly. He kissed her cheek. She gave a kiss on his cheek back. both smiled.

Prem stretched his hand 'friends.' Girl happily shook hands with him 'friends' she smiled 'thanks sir.' Prem with a sad face 'sir?' girl kept the basket down and holding her ears 'sorry.' Prem smiled and removed her hands from her ears. Girl 'can I call you friend?' Prem 'okay friend.' He hugged her and placed a kiss on her forehead.

Prem handed 100 rupees to her. 'give me all the flowers.' She happily handed the flowers to him. Girl 'mamma will be waiting for me.' She waved 'bye friend.' She stopped and turned to look at him 'will you come here next week.' Prem shook his head in agreement. She flew away like a butterfly. Prem looked at the basket in his hand. He smiled.

Girl ran into her house shouting 'mamma. I'm back.' lady inside house 'how come you are so early today?' girl 'a friend bought the entire basket of flower and gave me 110 rupees.' She ran inside. In the corner of the house on the floor, a lady sitting in front of a little stove 'keep the money inside your saving box and study.' Girl put the money into a box. She went to the lady putting her hand around lady's neck and leaned on to lady's back 'mamma, my friend too don't have father.'

Lady hiding her sorrow 'okay, now you sit and study.' Girl 'mamma. I'm hungry.' Lady 'one second.' Girl sat near to the lady on the floor. Lady gave her a plate. Girl shouted 'wow, paratha. I love you mamma.' Lady smiled 'exactly like your father.' Girl 'did papa likes pratha?' Lady 'ha he loves to eat it from my hand.'

Girl started eating the paratha. Lady 'did you washed your hand? Girl shook her head 'no.' lady 'like your papa you too don't have the habit of washing your hands before eating.' strickly 'Go and wash your hand first.' Girl ran to wash her hand. She return wiping her hand on the towel. She threw the towel on lady's shoulder and sat down. Lady 'OMg, I don't know how you learnt all this things without looking at your father.' Girl 'I don't have to learn it.' Lady gave a confused look. Girl 'I'm papa's daughter. Prem's Chahat.' She smiled. Lady looked at her daughter's cuteness. She whispered 'Prem, we miss you. Heer and Chahat miss you.' tears came out her eyes. Hiding her tears from her Chahat, Heer admired the way her daughter is eating. She remembered her Prem in her daughter's every movement.

Staff saw Prem entering the restaurant with basket full of flowers. A staff whispered to his collegue 'did Mr. Prem started flower business too?' Prem handed the basket to one person 'give one to first few little girls who visit the restaurant. Staff 'another technique to attract kids.'

Prem went to his cabin. He leaned his head back on the chair. He recollected his meeting with the little girl. 'I forgot to ask her name.' he smiled 'no problem. I can ask next weak.' He again smiled thinking the way she said sorry holding her ears. Suddenly he remembered Heer. His eyes became moist. 'How much we expected a girl baby. She even named her Chahat.' He closed his eyes. He saw Heer in front of him. 'you left me alone.' Heer smiled. 'you made me cry. Why Heer?'

His mobile rang. Kulraj asked about new restaurant and his plan of returning. Prem 'Kuldi, I'm planning to stay here for one more week.' Kulraj 'okay. Take care of your health.' Prem got up and through his cabin glass door watched the kids having fun in the restaurant.

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Next day Evening, Chahat is carrying her school bag returning home. She stopped when she saw the restaurant. She looked at the name board. 'it was not there when I came here on Friday.' She spelled the name written on the top. 'c' 'h' 'a' 'h' 'a' 't' Her face showed surprised 'exactly my name.' Through the glass she saw little kids eating happily with their parents. She pressed her face on the glass. She made noise 'shhhhhhh' when she saw a little girl sucking single strand of noodle into her mouth. Chahat licked her lips when she saw a boy eating ice cream.

She saw Prem hands in his pocket coming out of a cabin looking at his mobile. Her face lighten up 'arrey my friend.' She searched for the entrance. She touched the glass. She ran here and there unable to find the door to enter the restaurant. Prem lifted his head from mobile and saw girl searching something. He indentified her. He walked towards the entrance. Chahat got happy and jumped. Unable to jump with the weight on her shoulder she dropped the bag. She picked up the bag. Again he ran towards Prem. 'Friend, I'm searching for the door.'

Prem opened the door with a smile 'come in beta.' She ran in and fearfully looked around. Prem removed her bag from her and placed on the table. He picked her up in his hand. He felt completeness when she put her hand around his neck 'good evening friend.' Prem 'good evening beta.' He kissed her cheek 'coming from school.' Chahat 'ha' still her eyes are roaming around the hall looking at each kid and food. Prem 'hungry.' Chahat cutely 'ha. Looking at the food.' She made puppy face 'I'm feeling hungry.' Prem kissed her cheek again. He took her to a table. He sat keeping her on his lap. 'what do you want?'

Chahat sadly 'friend, I don't have money.' Prem pressed his forehead on hers 'no need to pay. This is my restaurant. So its yours too.' Chahat 'is it?' Prem nodded 'you can come here and eat at any time.' She happily kissed his cheek 'thanks friend.'

Chahat 'can I get what ever I want.' Prem 'ha any thing. If it is not there I'll tell them to prepare for you.' staff were staring at them with a wide open mouth. Prem 'first tell me what you want now.' Chahat looked a round and pointed finger to table. A boy is eating noodles. Chahat 'what is it?' Prem 'noodles.' Chahat 'that one' Premis it enough? chahat shook her head negatively and smiled 'chocolate ice cream.' Prem cuooing her head kissed her. He ordered 'bring noodles and chocolate ice cream'.

Prem 'you didn't tell your name.' Chahat 'you know my name.' Prem confusingly 'me. No I don't know.' Chahat 'its written in the front.' Prem thought 'front' his face showed happiness 'Chahat?' Chahat 'ha my name is Chahat.' Prem heart jumped in joy. He kissed her cheeks lovingly.

Chahat 'why you wrote my name in the front?' Prem 'it my daughter's name.' chahat 'is it? I want to meet her. where is she?' Prem 'you can't.' Chahat 'why?' Prem in tears 'she is with God.' Chahat 'when will she come to you?' Prem 'she won't.' Chahat 'don't worry friend. I'm with you.' she wiped his tears. Prem smiled. Waiter brought noodles and ice cream. Prem fed her. Chahat ate with a happy smile.

After finishing the ice cream, she hit her head with her little palm 'oh no mamma will scold me. I'm late.' She jumped out of Prem's lap. She pulled her bag from the table. She ran to the door 'bye friend.' She came back again. She signed him to bent down. He lowered his face near her. She kissed his cheek. She ran to the door and stood again near the door in confusion. Prem opened the door for her. She ran waving bye. Prem 'take care beta.' He just stared at her running towards her home.

Prem went to his room. He somehow felt unknown joy in his heart. Through the glass he looked at the place where Chahat ate with him. He didn't understand the feeling he is getting towards her from first time he met her. Her thought gave joy to him. He wanted to recollect again and again.

Prem came out of the room. He went to the entrance. He called the manager to paste some picture on it to distinguish it as door. Manager 'sir, that will spoil the look.' Prem 'put dolls picture around the edge of the door. Make the handle visible to kids.' Prem went out of the restaurant.

Chahat ran into her house shouting 'mamma.' Heer 'stay there.' Chahat stopped in her spot with a sorry face. lady 'why are you late?' Chahat holding her ears 'sorry mamma.' Lady forgetting her anger knelt down and hugged Chahat 'like your papa you are also asking sorry.' Chahat giggled 'papa too gets scolding from you.' Heer smiled 'your papa too ask sorry like this when he returns late from office.'

Chahat 'mamma all my friends has papa. next week I have competition in my school. My friends will bring their papa.' she looked down 'my papa won't come to see me.' Heer wiped her tears. Pointed up 'papa is there. He is always looking at you.' she kissed Chahat cheek. Chahat with a sad face 'mama, atleast show me my papa's picture. I have never seen his face.' Heer with tears 'I don't have your papa's picture beta. I lost everything in that accident.' With tears rolling down her cheek 'I have only you as his love. His image is in my heart. '

Chahat didn't understand but she understood that her mother is sad now. Chahat 'papa's name also sweet like mine.' proudly 'papa's name Prem. Mamma's name Heer. I'm Chahat. How sweet.' Heer kissed her cheek 'ha. He is sweet like his name.' wiping her tears 'okay you change your uniform. I'll bring roti for you.'

Chahat slowly 'mamma, I ate noodles and ice cream.' Heer angrily 'ice cream? Where did you got money for that?' Chahat 'I told you about my friend. That day he bought all my flowers.' Heer 'ha' Chahat 'he gave me.' Heer 'why you asked him?' Chahat 'I didn't ask him. I saw him in a shop. That is his shop. Mamma do you know the shop name.' proudly 'chahat.' Heer 'Chahat?' Chahat 'ha ma. he told me it is his daughter name. but she is not with him.' Heer 'why?' Chahat 'like our papa she is also with God.' Heer heart did something. 'what is your friends name?' Chahat hit her palm on her head 'oh no I forgot to ask him.' confidently 'don't worry mamma. I'll ask when I meet him next time.'

Heer pushing the conversation 'okay change your uniform.' Chahat happily dumped her bag in a corner and jumped and pulled her dress from a shelf. Heer lost in her thought. Chahat changed and came to her 'mamma. For my school program can I invite my friend.' Heer 'don't disturb him. He must be having his family.'

Chahat 'I'll just inform him if he comes I'll be happy.' Heer unconsciously agreed. Somehow she felt She has to meet him. She felt some unknown connection with him.'

~~FLASHBACK~~

After the accident, Heer was unconscious and pushed to the one side of the river. An old couple who saw her in unconscious state took her to their home. It is a small village. Heer came to conscious after one month. By now all the survivors list are releases. Old man took her to near by office and checked Prem name in the survivors list.

Prem name was not in the list. Heer got shattered. Officer was ready to help Heer to move back to Canada to her husband's sister. Heer refused to go back without Prem. She lost all hopes and went to Ambala. She decided to live there with Prem's memory.

After few months, she delivered Chahat. She is exact replica of her father reminded Prem in every way. Heer did some small work to lead her normal life. Chahat sold flowers in shiv mandir during holidays. Chahat is a very understanding girl. Heer always felt proud about Chahat because she resembled Her Prem in everyway.

~~END~~

Heer rolled in her bed thinking Chahat telling about her friend. Sequence of thoughts disturbed her sleep. 'his daughter name is Chahat. Prem didn't know that I delivered girl. But he know I'm pregnant. Prem died in that accident. Chahat friend can't be Prem.' thousand question runing into her heart. But her heart wanted to meet that person. Her heart somehow wanted that person to be her Prem.

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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Next morning, Heer rushed to the Chahat restaurant to clear her confusion. She opened the door of the restaurant and stepped in. waiter 'what do you want?' he looked at her confusingly. Her look and her dress made him suspect that may be she is here in search of a job. Heer 'I want to meet the owner.' Waiter 'he is not here.' Heer 'when will he come?' waiter 'don't know. He won't meet person like you. if you want job you meet the supervisor.' Heer 'what is your owners name?' waiter 'why are you asking about him? go away.' He chased her out of the shop. Heer walked out with a sad face.

In the evening, Chahat happily went to restaurant in search of her friend. She didn't find any difficult in opening the door today. As per Prem's instruction the design changed on the door to enable the kids to open the door. Chahat scanned the room. kids are eating with their parents. Some are eating alone. There is no sign of her friend. She stopped a person crossed her 'where is my friend?' waiter looked at her confusingly. friend? no. you have money eat otherwise go out.' Chahat angrily putting one hand into her pocket raised her fingers up in warning 'careful. I'll tell my friend to chase you out of this place.' She gave angry look.

Hearing the sound manager came and saw Chahat giving angry look to a waiter. Sensing the situation 'you sit.' He helped Chahat to sit in a chair. 'sir is not here beta.' Chahat 'I'm not beta to you. only my friend and mamma can call me beta. Call me Chahat. My name Chahat.' Manager and others are surprised. Waiter 'sir gave too much space for this little girl.'

Manager signed the waiter to be quiet. Manager turned to Chahat 'your friend is not here. He has gone to Delhi. He will be here t'row. He told me to give all your favorite items.' Chahat jumped out of the chair 'I don't want anything. I came here to see my friend.' Waiter whispered to another 'within a day she started imitating Prem sir's style.'

Chahat is about to open the door to move out, but the door opened. Chahat got excited to see Prem standing there. She dropped her bag down and stretched her hands up. Prem picked her up in his hands and kissed her. manager 'you are suppose to be.' Prem cut in 'work was over earlier so I came early to see my Chahat.' Chahat kissed his cheek 'you came to see me.' Prem nodded his head. Chahat 'friend, I forgot.' Prem gave a questiong look. Chahat 'I forgot to ask your name.'

Prem smiled 'Prem. My name is Prem Juneja.' He kissed her again. Chahat happily 'my papa's name also Prem. Prem Juneja.' Sadly looking down her fingers 'but he is with God.' Prem confused and his heart started beating fast. 'What is your mamma's name.' Chahat 'Heer. Heer Juneja. Nice names isn't it?' Chahat smiled. Prem got a shock of joy. 'what you said? Your mamma's name' Chahat repeated 'Heer. Heer Juneja.'

Prem 'where is you mamma now?' Chahat 'want to see mamma. She will be at home only.' Prem turned to leave but stopped when he saw the image on the other side of the glass door. Chahat 'mamma, friend my mamma.' Prem looked at Chahat then Heer who is standing on the other side. Waiter opened the door and Heer stepped in. she freezed to her place in shock. She whispered 'Prem.' Tears came out of her eyes. Prem with tears ran to her and pulled her into his hands.

Manager know Prem's past. He understood the situation and took Chahat from Prem's hand. Chahat with confusion watched them. Prem cupped Heer's face in his palms. 'Heer, you are alive.' Heer with tears touched his face 'Prem' Prem kissed her face. She kissed his face. Both hugged tightly. Prem 'its my fault I should have searched for you properly. when I didn't find your name in the survivors list I thought you are dead.' Heer 'I gained conscious after one month in a village. I thought the same when I didn't find your name in the list.' Prem kissed her forehead and hugged her.

Heer lifted her head from his chest and looked at Chahat who is looking at them with confusion. Prem turned and took Chahat from manager's hand. Heer 'your papa. he is your papa Prem.' Prem kissed Chahat on her cheeks several times.

Chahat is happy. She touched his face. 'I too have papa.' Prem 'ha beta. I'm your papa.' Chahat 'but why you didn't' Prem kissed his cheek 'I'm seeing you for the first time beta. I was not able to identify my own daughter.' Prem hugged them both and cried.

All the staff members and the customers in the restaurant clapped happily congratulating the reunion of a lovely family.

Prem took Heer and Chahat to his car. Heer got into the front passenger seat. Chahat in the back stood peeping her head between her parents. 'papa, is it your car?' Prem shook his head negatively. Chahat became sad. Prem smiled placing his left plam on her cheek without looking back 'our car beta.' Chahat happily 'it big papa.' Prem 'do you like it?' Chahat 'ha papa.'

Prem parked the car infront of a shop. 'Heer, you both sit here. I'll be back.' Heer nodded. Prem went to the shop. Chahat moved to the side glass and saw her father entering a shop. 'Mamma, where is papa going?' Heer 'papa is going there to get dress for you.' Chahat sat in the seat then jumped. She is busy admiring the car. Chahat coming back to her old spot tried to touch something in the front. Heer 'beta, keep quiet. You became naughty. You are talking too much.'

Prem opened the door 'our Chahat is not a naughty girl. Let her talk.' He handed the shopping bags to Heer. 'I missed her baby talks. I love to hear from my Chahat.' He pressed his cheek on hers 'you talk beta. Papa will listen to you.' Chahat kissed Prem's cheek 'I love you papa.' he kissed her back 'I love you too beta.' Heer smiled looking at father and daughter. Prem leaned to Heer and kissed her cheek 'I love you Heer.' Heer blushed and gave a quick peck on his cheek whispering 'I love you too.' Chahat jumped clapping.

Prem parked the vehicle in front of his hotel. Heer 'Prem, why are we here?' Prem 'I came to India only for few weeks Heer.' Prem got out of the car. Chahat restlessly jumped inside until Prem opens the door for her. Prem opened the door. With a wide smile Chahat streaching her hands out high waited for Prem to pick her up in his hand. Heer with bags joined him. As they walked in 'papa, where are we Papa?

why so many people are here?' Prem putting one hand around Heer 'its our hotel beta.' Chahat 'don't we have house? Papa you come we'll go to our house.' Prem smiled 'Our home is in Canada.' Chahat 'Canada?'

Prem 'ha. I'll take you there. Until then we'll stay here.' Chahat 'but school.' Prem 'papa put you in a big school there.' Chahat 'but I didn't say bye to my friends.' Prem 'before leaving you can say bye to your friends.'

Hotel Manager already got the information from the restaurant manager rushed out to invite Heer and Chahat. Staff members are confused to see their millionare owner coming with a lady and a kid. Manager has seen Heer's picture in Prem's cabin. He rushed to them 'welcome Mrs. Juneja.' He looked at Chahat thinking she must be his daughter 'welcome Ms. Princess.' Chahat seriously 'my name is Chahat not princess.' Prem smiled 'princess means.' Chahat cut in 'I know papa but only you and mamma can call me princess.' Manager smiled 'sorry Ms. Chahat Juneja.' Chahat 'that's right.'

Meanger 'sir your daughter is very clever.' He touched her head 'exactly look like you.' Chahat 'ha I'm Papa's daughter.' Putting her hand around Prem's neck she pressed her cheek on him. Staff members handed flowers to Heer and Chahat.

Prem took Heer and Chahat to his private room. Prem 'you both change. I'll order food for you.' he looked at Chahat who is looking around the room. Chahat ran around the room and looked out through the big window. Heer 'beta first you take shower then you can play.' She took her to the washroom. Chahat opening her hands wide 'wow its so big.' Point the bathtub 'mamma what is that.' Heer 'its bathtub.' She opend the water to fill the tub. She let Chahat inside the tub. Chahat started splashing water 'mamma I want to play in this.' Heer let her play and came out 'call me when you finished.'

Heer bumped on to Prem when she turned away from Chahat closing the washroom door. Prem caught her by waist pulled her closer. Without wasting a second he pressed his lips on hers. Her hands move to his back to balance herself. Both melting in each other love started enjoy the passionate kiss. They went deep in their kiss to forget the pain they carried in past six years. They broke to suck air. She buried her face into his chest and cried. Prem with tears held her close to his heart. Both were silent. He brushed his nose on her cheek 'I love you Heer.' Heer with tears 'I never thought I'll meet you. I love you Prem.' She kissed his face lovingly.

Chahat shouted from washroom 'mamma.' Prem and Heer came out of their hug. He smiled 'get ready.' Heer went to Chahat. Prem ordered food. He saw Chahat coming out of the washroom wrapping towel around her. Prem picked up in his hand 'my baby.' He brushed his nose on her stomach and tickled her. she giggled 'papa. papa.'

Prem made her sit on the bed. He picked up the dresses. 'which one you want to wear now?' Chahat thought for a while looking at the dress. She pointed a green dress 'this one.' Prem 'like mamma you also like green.' Chahat nodded. Prem helped her to wear the dress. He made her sit on the bed and dried her hair and combed her hair.

Heer from the washroom 'Preemmm. I forgot to bring my dress.' Prem picked up one salwar and handed to her. She got ready and came out. drying her hair she sat in fornt of the dresser. Chahat who is busy exploring the doll which Prem has brought for her looked up and saw Heer. 'mamma, you looks beautiful in this dress.' Heer 'thanks beta.'

They heard door knock. Prem opened the door. A waiter pushing the tray came inside. Chahat with a wide open mouth looked at the varieties. As Heer fed Chahat, Prem too joined to eat from her hand. Prem started giving to Heer from his hand. They finished their food.

Chahat 'papa, Next week , I have competition in my school. During that I want to introduce you to everyone.' Prem 'okay. Now you sleep t'row you have to go to school.' Chahat shook her head and lyed on the bed. Prem phone rang. Its from Kulraj. She sensed happiness in Prem's voice. Prem 'kuldi, you come online. I want to give you surprise.'

Kulraj came online sensing his happiness. With a wide open mouth she screamed when she saw Heer face in the screen she shouted 'Heeeer, Kiran come here.' Hearing Kulraj's voice Kiran came rushing with Kushi.

Kiran 'Heer, are you Heer.' Heer shook her head with tears.' Prem with tears 'I found my Heer Kuldi.' She turned the camera to Chahat who is anxiously watching some new faces on the screen. 'Kuldi, my daughter Chahat.' Kulraj covering her mouth in surprise with her palm cried. Kiran in tears 'we are happy Prem. We are happy. you got your life back.'

Chahat looking at her parents then the strangers in the screen 'papa, who are they?' Prem pointing one by one 'your badi ma Kulraj. Badi papa Kiran and Kushi di.' Chahat 'namastae badi ma. badi papa and di.' Kulraj 'so sweet. Namstae beta.' Kiran 'Prem, when are you bringing them here?' Prem 'jiju, Chahat has only one more month school to finish thism year. Until then I want to be here with the.' Kiran 'that's good. Meanwhile, I sent all the required documents for their passport and visa.' All said bye with heartful of joy.

Chahat jumped on the bed 'its nice bed.' Heer made Chahat lay down properly on the bed. With a sweet smile on her face Chahat slept as soon as she closed her eyes. Prem leaned his head on the board. Heer snuggled into his hands. They silently enjoyed the reunion. Wrapping his hand around her waist he pulled her closer and kissed her forehead.

He whispered a Prayer of thanks to God 'thank you God helping me to my Heer and Chahat.'
Prem, Heer and Chahat Found their lost love.
~~ END ~~
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Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago
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to gud selvy luved it.....

all parts were jst mindblowin....

shot 1:-
luved the way prem confessed...by sad bout heer...

shot 2:-
luved prem n chahat's scenes...

shot 3/4:-
at last both r bck.....wow....
their scenes wer awsum...
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 15 years ago
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i just luved ur SS..

it was AWESUM..
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hii selvyy...woww another ss.....lovely...just luvd it......felt good to read chahats part.....was soo sad too.....luvd chahat prem scenes.....she is sooooo cute...and her talks...awww lovely.....and scolding manager tht only her mama and papa can call her princess....clever girl....and prem designing the door so tht children can open it easily....how sweet.....kulraj and kiran wer great....superbb....thanks for pm.....continue to write ss and ffs like this...as i luv to read it when u write...luv u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8

Fantastic ,fabulous SS…..👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

All shots u wrote amazingly with the magical finger tip of pure love that bonds one family from its base to complete structure….😊 in this SS prem got his love base from his parents & loving sister ,her family which leads him to found his love of life to form a cute family of his own…❤️

Chahat –symbol of their love the main character of this SS – portrayel is very nice & superb ⭐️ ⭐️ . Each words & deeds of Chahat - its in a remarkable way u written 👍🏼
"To love mother and father, to cherish with wife and child and to have a simple livelihood – this is the good luck" -Dear u given that good luck to Prem by giving Heer & Chahat as his wife & child and Chahat the cute , sensible, & understanding daughter for her parents – Premeer.❤️ 😊
On this cute family SS – I must say u r wonderful writer & this a "masterpiece" ⭐️ ⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
loved it! all of it was amazing and soo cute! loved the reunion and chahat is too cute! Great story! Loved reading it! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
ahh selvy tht was quite fast reaqding i loved it love traditionallll innocencee ohh god aqnd chah i just luvv the kidddooooo
damn gooddd keep writing more hahahaha tc

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